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商务英语是以适应职场生活的语言要求为目的，内容涉及到商务活动的方方面面。接下来为大家整理了商务英语邮件写作范文，希望对你有帮助哦!
商务英语邮件写作范文：商品缺货通知
范文一：
Dear subscribers,
Because of expanding sales, we feel very sorry for having to inform you that Alice in Wonderland has all been sold out.
However, we are replenishing our stock. Please contact us to confirm whether you d like it to be delivered by mail or express if you still want to place an order with us.
I m always looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours,
Taobao
尊敬的订购客户：
因为销售量剧增，我们很抱歉地通知您，您订购的《爱丽丝漫游奇境记》已经脱销了。
不过我们正在抓紧进货。如果您还想要订购，那么请告知我们发货方式，是平邮还是快递?
期待您尽快回复。
淘宝网谨上
范文二：
Dear ,
I feel sorry to hear that Alice in Wonderland has all been sold out, since it has always been one of my favorite works. I still want to place an order with you. Would you mind informing me the moment your new stock has come? Thank you in advance!
I m looking forward to your earliest reply.
Yours,
Leo
亲爱的：
我很遗憾地听说《爱丽丝漫游奇境记》已经售完，这本书一直是我最喜欢的作品之一。我依然愿意从你处订购。请您在有了新的存货时通知我，好吗?提前表示感谢。
期待您的早日回复。
利奥
范文三：
谨上
Dear ,
I am so sorry to be told that my favorite Alice in Wonderland has been sold out. But I can wait for your replenished stock. Please mail one once new books arrive. Thank you in advance!
Yours,
Leo
亲爱的：
听说我最喜欢《爱丽丝漫游奇境记》已经卖完，我很遗憾。但是，我想我能够等到你们重新补充库存。新书到货请为我寄送
一本。提前表示感谢。
利奥
谨上
商务英语邮件写作范文：付款确认通知
范文一：
Dear Joyce,
On March 25, 2011, the amount of ￥100,000,000 as payment for your invoice No.1234567 was transferred into your account. Please check and send us yourconfirmation.
I have faxed a copy of the remittance slip for your reference.
Truly yours,
Edward
尊敬的乔伊斯：
2011年3月25日，我方已经将发票号码为1234567的货款100,000,000元人民币汇入你的账户里。请您查收并确认。
汇款凭单我也已经传真给你，以供参考。
爱德华
谨上
范文二：
Dear Edward,
I have received your mail informing that the amount of ￥100,000,000 as payment for my invoice No.1234567 has been transferred into my account. Thank you for your cooperation.
Yours,
Joyce
亲爱的爱德华:
我收到您的邮件，告知你方已经将发票号码为1234567的货款100,000,000元人民币汇入我的账户。非常感谢您的合作。
乔伊斯
谨上
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