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Write a persuasive message(Thomas)

Write a persuasive message (deadline: Oct. 28, 2012):

As a financial consultant with a major stock and bond brokerage firm, your specialty is making presentations to investor groups. Y our goal, of course, is to persuade the investors through education to i nvest in your company’s programs. Y ou know your work well, and you are good at it.

Recently, you have been disappointed in the attendance at your presentations. Y our procedure involves first selecting an investment group and then sending letter invitations to the members. Typically you make the presentations at hotels, country clubs, or such. Y ou serve drinks, hors d’oeuvres, and sometimes full meals. Y ou try hard to make the meetings both enjoyable and informative.

Y our next meeting is scheduled for the first Wednesday evening of next month at 6:30. It will be at the Green Hills Club, which is located at the Green Hills Resort and Conference Center. Y our audience will be largely modestly wealthy retirees living in the Green Hills area. Y our presentation will revolve around a gourmet meal prepared by the club’s chefs, and beverages will be offered as well. As usual, you will stress financial education, although investing with you is the desired result.

Now you must write the message that will get the prospects to attend. In doing so, you may use your logical imagination t o supply any additional facts you may need. In the end you will produce a message that will make the readers want to attend. Y ou will request RSVP responses by way of an enclosed card or a telephone number.

From:

Thomas Zou

To:

All the friends

Live in or near to the Green Hills area

28th October, 2012

Dear Sir or Madam

Thank you so much for having made such extraordinary contributions to our Green Hill’s Communities all your life. I believe that you all have earned a lot from your diligent but wonderful career, however, can we make the best use of all the money we have acquired and insist on making profits even after retired from our job vocations? In my opinion, if we have full knowledge of financial management and especially the way how to do smart investment, for sure the answer is YES!

In order to give you more information about the ways you can do easy and useful financial management and intellectual investment, we decided to provide you an excellent and free education and communication meeting, which will be held at the first Wednesday evening of next month at 6:30 in our famous Green Hills Club. In this meeting, I will tell you all the basic methods of how to use money to create more values for yourself with some truly interesting stories as well as my own experience. After that meaningful presentation I will listen more to you what your specific questions are and try my best to give you reasonable answers. What’s more, I want to make the meeting enjoyable, the presentation will revolve around a gourmet meal prepared by famous chefs of the Green Hills Club, and beverages will be offered as well, all the people who will join the meeting can easily make friends with each other.

It makes great happiness and pleasure for me to invite you and your family members to our pleasant meeting. As I must have the meeting could make everyone fell happy, if you want to join, please give me a response either by way of an enclosed card or a telephone number, thus I can prepared all the things perfectly.

I look forward to meeting you at the clud.

Best Wishes!

Sincerely Thomas Zou