大作文指导

段首句分类指导
1. 你是否同意作者的观点/ 做法？
同意
? I am in favour of the writer’s opinion.
? I agree with the writer’s opinion that…
? i can’t agree more with the author.
? Similarly, I also hold the opinion that…
? Like the writer, I also prefer to …
不同意
? I am against the writer’s opinion, thinking that..
? To be frank, I can’t agree with the author.
? Unlike the writer, I would like to do/ I think that
2. 评价及理由：
你对你对故事中父母的评价/ 看法？为什么？
支持/ 赞成
? Personally speaking, I think highly of (高度评价) what the parents did for the following reasons.
不支持/ 反对
? Personally speaking, I think little of (对…评价低) what the parents did for the following reasons.
? As far as I am concerned, what the parents did is wrong and the reasons are obvious.
? From my point of view, I think it totally wrong that…/ to do… and the reasons can be listed as follows.
? Personally speaking, I am among those who are against the decision/ practice and the reasons are obvious.
3. 谈论某一现象或做法的理由：
学生选择小组学习的原因
? Personally speaking, there are several reasons for studying in groups.
? The reasons why the students choose to study in groups are obvious and can be listed below/ as follows.
4. 启示和感受：
读完…后你的感受是什么？
? After reading the story, I am/ feel deeply/greatly moved/ inspired and I have come to realize that…
? Actually, I am deeply moved after reading the story and I have come to realize the importance of ….
…给你的启示/ 教训是什么？
? the story is very inspiring. It implies that…
? The story is very moving. It teaches us that../ to do
? from the story, I have learned that…/ how to do…
? from the story, I can learn the lesson that…..
5. 用自己或他人的经历来说明… / 举例说明…
（从议论过渡到记叙）
? This reminds me of my personal experience.
? This reminds me of the experience of my friend.
? The passage reminds me of a similar experience of mine/ of my friend.
? This reminds me of an unforgettable experience.
? After reading the passage, I can’t help recalling one of my personal experiences.
? Now I can still remember the day when I …
? Now I still have a vivid memory of the moment when…..
? An example in point is CongFei.
? CongFei’s experience is a case in point.
5. 就…提建议/如何解决/ 如何培养…:
? To help reduce pollution, I think the following suggestions may work out well.
? Undoubtedly, we/ the government/ the school should deal with these things properly in the following ways.
6. …重要性/ 益处/ 弊端等的看法
兼职工作的益处/利
? As far as I am concerned, taking part-time jobs brings college students a lot of advantages/ benefits.
? As far as I

am concerned, there are many advantages/benefits of taking part-time jobs for college students.
? There is no doubt that taking part-time jobs has lots of advantages for college students.
? Undoubtedly, there are many advantages for college students to take part-time jobs.
不足/弊
From my perspective, there are many disadvantages of taking part-time jobs for students.
Undoubtedly, there are many disadvantages for college students to take part-time jobs.
7. 假设身份及做法
如果你是校长，你会如何怎样做?
? If I were the headmaster, I would act differently/ like this.

例文：
1安全教育的重要性。
There is no doubt that safety education is of vital importance.
2. 中学生在日常安全方面应该注意的事项；
In order to protect ourselves, we ought to pay attention to the following aspects in our daily life…
3. 呼吁中学生提高安全意识。
Therefore, I appeal to all middle school students to arouse their awareness of self-protection

1 你对学校取消音乐课是赞同还是反对，并陈述由；
Personally speaking, I am among those who are against the decision and the reasons are obvious. First, music classes provide us with good chances to reduce our pressure from study. Second, music can cultivate our taste for music as well as promote the mutual understanding between the students.
2 以你自己或他人的感受来说明开设音乐课的利或弊。
Undoubtedly, music can bring us lots of advantages. In music classes, we all feel quite relaxed. Besides, when practising singing happily together, we feel closer to each other. Most importantly, when we are singing in music classes, the charm of music has made us well aware of a fact that life is both colorful and pleasing.
To sum up, having music classes have more advantages than disadvantages. Thus, I sincerely hope that we all can benefit from music classes greatly.
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就“节约资源，爱我校园 Save Resources and Love Our School”的主题发表你的看法，内容包括：
? (1) 您认为校园里存在哪些浪费的现象；
In my opinion, it’s common that some students waste our precious resources on campus. Very often we come across an empty classroom with lights still on. It’s not difficult to find evidence of wasting water. Additionally，some throw away the soft drink bottles, used exercise papers and books, which should be recycled. Worse still, others use non-environmental lunch boxes, causing “White Pollution”.
? (2) 谈谈这些浪费现象带来的危害；
There is no doubt that such behavior does great harm to our school. These phenomena show that many students lack the sense of environmental awareness, which is dangerous. If these continue, like the saying, “The last drops of water will be our tears!”
? (3) 建设“国际生态学校”，您该做点什么？
Therefore, to help build our school an international eco-school, I a

m determined to make my own efforts in the following ways. First I must educate my schoolmates to be more environmentally friendly. Additionally, I can start from doing some small things, such as collecting used items for recycling, turning off the lights, saving water.
In a word, always remember our responsibilities, and “Every little counts!”


(1)以你自己或他人成长的某次经历，说明父母过度照顾 over-parenting 对子女的影响；
The passage reminds me of the story of my friend, which helps me have a better understanding of the harm of over-parenting. My friend, Peter, is very dependent on his parents because they do everything for him. As a result, when Peter was once on a trip without his parents accompanying him, he didn’t know what to do and couldn’t take care of himself, which resulted in his sickness after the trip.
(2) 你自己或他人的某次经历给了你什么启示；
Undoubtedly, the experience has made me realize the great harm of over-parenting.
To start with, Over-parenting will deprive children of their opportunities to face challenges and cultivate their character. What’s worse, they won’t be able to look after themselves in the future.
(3) 表达你在此方面对父母的希望或建议。
To help get rid of the problems of over-parenting, I think the following suggestions may count. First, don’t prepare everything for your child. Instead, encourage him to learn to do some housework. Second, it’s advisable to encourage him to solve problems on his own.
In brief, over-parenting does more harm than good and it should be avoided. (结论)

展开部分
列举法
谈双休日的好处
.Since the carrying out of the two-day weekend, we have benefited a lot from it. First, / firstly, we can use the weekend to have a good rest. Second,/ secondly, the two-day weekend provides us more chances to contact with our relatives and friends. Third,/ thirdly, / lastly, we can use it to review the lessons and preview what we will learn next week.

列举法
谈双休日的好处
. Since the carrying out of the two-day weekend, we have benefited a lot from it. First, / first of all, / To start with, we can use the weekend to have a good rest. Besides,/ What’s more,/ in addition /Furthermore, /Moreover/ what’s more,/additionally, the two-day weekend provides us more chances to contact with our relatives and friends. Most important of all, / last but not least, we can use it to review the lessons and preview what we will learn next week.
Taking part-time jobs has many disadvantages. Firstly, if they have part-time jobs, students may have to reduce their time for sleep, rest, study and activities. Worse still, what’s worse, taking part-time jobs may affect their studies. As a result , they may fall behind or fail in the exams. Worse of all, Working several hours a day consumes a lot of time and energy, whi

ch may damage/ impair their health greatly.

列举法
谈双休日的好处
Since the carrying out of the two-day weekend, we have benefited a lot from it. For one thing, we can use the weekend to have a good rest. For another, the two-day weekend provides us more chances to contact with our relatives and friends.

举例法
举例说明发明电话的好处
The world has enjoyed many benefits from the invention of the telephone. For example/ for instance, people can contact with families and friends who live far away through telephones. In addition, telephone has also contributes greatly to efficient communication in the world of business.

因果法
谈吸烟的危害, 因此人们必须戒烟。
Smoking can result in many bad effects. First, it is harmful to the smoker’s health. It may cause serious disease such as heart trouble or lung cancer. What’s still, cigarette smoke will pollute the air and affect others’ health, too. Additionally, cigarettes are usually very expensive and smokers have to spend a lot of money on them. Therefore,/ Accordingly/ Consequently, people must give up smoking.
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因果法
谈吸烟的危害, 因此人们必须戒烟。
Smoking can result in many bad effects. First, it is harmful to the smoker’s health. It may cause serious disease such as heart trouble or lung cancer. What’s still, cigarette smoke will pollute the air and affect others’ health, too. Additionally, cigarettes are usually very expensive and smokers have to spend a lot of money on them. So people must give up smoking.

对比法
列举人们对机会的不同看法, 列举你自己的看法
Different people have different opinions about opportunities. Some people argue that opportunities are rare, and only the luckiest persons can obtain them, while other people think that everyone has opportunity from time to time. As for me, I agree with the latter to some extent.
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对比法
列举人们对机会的不同看法
Different people have different opinions about opportunities. Some people argue that opportunities are rare, and only the luckiest persons can obtain them. However, / on the contrary, / conversely, / in/by contrast/ in comparison, other people think that everyone has opportunity from time to time. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter to some extent.

Email 的利和弊
Just as every coin has two sides, e-mail has both advantages and disadvantages. On one hand, e-mail is fast and convenient. On the other hand, if one often writes e-mail, his handwriting will become worse and worse.

时间顺序法: 叙述事件或经历
题目：尊敬老师
用一次具体经历来描述老师的教诲和无私奉献。
I still remember how my teachers pulled me through a critical moment. At first/ At the very beginning, I did a bad job in the first English test and I was very depressed. Then my English teacher came to my rescue. After analyzing the paper word and word, she

encouraged me to carry on. Finally/ at last, I did a good job in the next test. Her help and selfish devotion benefits me a lot.

记叙文千万不要用lastly

记叙文的连接词：
once, one day, at the beginning, after that, afterwards, three days later, at the very moment, finally, at last, all of a sudden, no sooner…than, hardly…when…., from then on, it was not until …that….,
I was about to do when….


结尾
要求读者参与行动，号召性结尾
? So let us make our joint effort to protect our environment.
? It is high time that we made our joint effort to protect our environment.
? To achieve this goal, I appeal to all of us to make our joint effort to protect our environment.
归纳总结性, 得出结论
? In a word, / In summary, To sum up, In brief, In short, water is one of the most valuable natural resources of the country. Every citizen has responsibility to save it or to use it in effective ways.


? My view on college students’ part-time jobs
1. 有人认为大学生做兼职有很多好处
nowadays, an increasing number of college students are doing part-time jobs. People hold different opinions on it. Some people think that there are many advantages for college students to have part-time jobs. Firstly, part-time jobs offer them opportunities to apply what they have learned in school. Secondly, it enables them to be more independent of their family and builds up their confidence. Thirdly, part-time jobs can broaden their school lives and help them know more of society.
2. 然而，有人认为大学生做兼职工作不好
However, other people hold that doing part-time jobs has more disadvantages. For example, if they have part-time jobs, they may have to reduce their time for sleep, rest, study and activities. Working several hours a day consumes a lot of time and energy and may affect their studies. As a result, they may fall behind or fail in the exams.
3. 我的看法
In my opinion, students can choose to take up a part-time job according to their own situation. The most important thing is for him to keep a good balance between both part-time jobs and his study.