历年高考英语作文范文

2005年上海高考作文及范例

古人云：―天生我材必有用‖（There must be a use for my talent）。通过描述你

生活中一件事，说明人各有所长，无论才能大小都能成为有用的人。

There is an old English saying that there must be use for my talent. I have regarded it as my motto for many years. From my point of view, there is no difference between one person and another. With some useful talent, you will make your contributions to this society.

When I was ten years old, there was an old man living at the corner of xx Road. He didn’t have the opportunity to study in school, but he learned how to make wood furniture. Every time people went to ask him to solve some problems of furniture, he was willing to help them.

To my surprise, in his spare time, he would make some toys with small piece s of wood. Some of them were sold to the toy store and others were given to us. The moment I see the lovely toys made by this old man, I would remember the happy childhood.

From this old man, we can see whatever kind of talent you have, you can find your own method to display your talent. The most important factor is your confidence. If you believe that there must be a use for my talent, you will succeed. (200 words)

2003年上海高考作文及范例

你的好友因家境一般买不起名牌而闷闷不乐。给他写信，谈谈你的看法和建议。

受信人：徐海青寄信人：黄平写信日期：2003年六月八日

June 8, 2003

Dear Xu Haiqing,

Y ou said in your letter that many of your classmates were wearing fashionable clothes, but you couldn’t afford to buy the best brands. So you felt very depressed. There are different views on people’s wear. The following are my ideas about it.

Firstly, you shouldn’t put too much emphasis on physical appearan ce. Y ou must always remember the most important task for you today is to concentrate your attention on your studies. No matter what you wear, you will really look your best when you come out first in your examinations.

A famous saying goes, ―Frugality is the mother of virtue.‖ So, secondly, you must understand that it is a fine virtue to learn live in frugality. Since your family is not able to provide you with enough money to buy clothes of the best brands, it is all the more necessary for you to try every means to lighten the financial burden of your family. Y ou will find the virtue of frugality will benefit you a lot in your later life.

I hope you understand what I mean. I am sure you will take a positive attitude towards life and will be happy again when you read my letter.

2001年上海高考作文及范例

请你谈谈轿车大量进入家庭后，对家庭、环境和经济可能产生的影响。

Nowadays the number of people who own private cars is on the rise. Like everything else, private cars have both favorable and unfavorable aspects. Generally, the favorable aspects can be listed as follows.

First, private cars can bring convenience and mobility to owners. A car allows a person to move comfortably and safely as well as quickly and freely. Because my family owns a car, we are able to make extensive journeys every year. Therefore, I believe the tourist industry in China will develop more quickly with

the increase in the number of private cars. Secondly, if more people buy cars, the automobiles industry will develop dramatically. What’s more, the growth of the automobile industry can trigger the boom of other important and related industries such as iron and steel production, energy and technological application.

Every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. To begin with, too many cars will give rise to a series of problems, such as serious environmental pollution and more traffic accidents. In addition, the driver may have drive around and around looking for available parking spaces.

Through above analysis, we can see that private cars should be restricted rather than encouraged.

2009年高考英语作文（全国卷1）

【试题回放】假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs. Wilson 不在家，你准备外出，请给Mrs. Wilson 写一留言条，内容包括：

1．外出购物

2．替房东还书

3．Tracy 来电话留言：1）咖啡屋（Bolton Coffee）见面取消

2）此事已告知Susan

3) 尽快回电

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Mrs. Wilson,

I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 o’clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change.

Y ours,

Li Hua

09年高考英语作文（全国II卷）

假定你是李华，你的美国朋友打算暑期来北京旅游，来信询问改建后前门大街的情况。请你写信回复，简单介绍以下内容：

1、简况：长800米、600多年历史、300余家商铺；

2、位置：天安门广场南面；

3、交通：公共汽车17、69、59等路，地铁2号线；

4、特色：步行街、当当车、茶馆、剧院等。

参考词汇：

步行街：pedestrian street

当当车：trolley car

地铁：subway

注意：

1、词数100左右，开头语已经为你写好；

2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

作文范文：

Dear Sarah,

Thank you for your letter asking about the rebuilt Qianmen Street. Here is something about it.

Qianmen Street is a famous street of over 600 years old. Along this 800-metre street, there are more than 300 sho ps. As the street is in the center of Beijing, just to the south of Tian’anmen Square, it’s very convenient to get there by bus. Y ou may take Buses No.17, 69 or 59.subway Line 2 has a stop there too. Qianmen Street is a pedestrian street, but there are trolley cars to take you not only to the shops, but also to theaters and teahouses

where you can experience a truly Chinese way of life, I’m sure you’ll like it.

第一节情景作文（20分）

假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为响应绿化祖国的号召，你班四月十二日去郊区植树，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍植树活动的全过程，给某英文杂志的―绿色行动‖专栏写一篇以―Green Action in Our Class‖为题的英文稿件。

注意：词数不少于60

提示词：郊区suburbs

第二节开放作文（15分）

请根据下面提示，写一篇短文，词数不少于50

In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. Y ou are asked to describe the picture an explain how you understand it.

范文：

第一节

Green Action in Our Class

April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day. In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees. talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes, some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering them. After getting work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We fell it's our duty to protect and beautify our environment.

第二节

What a interesting picture. A Western young man sitting at a table, is ready to eat a bowl of noodles. He is holding two forks the same way as we Chinese hold chopsticks. He is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a lot. At first glance, I think it's a big funny ,for we Chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles .The man in the picture is trying to copy us, Obviously he is doing it the hard way. Maybe using one fork will do a better job. In my opinion, we don't need to copy others' ways of thinking. Sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way.

09年高考英语作文山东卷

假设你是李华，曾在美国学校，现现已回国。你想联系你的美国老师Mr.Smith.但没有其联系方式，请根据以下几点给你的美国同学Tom写一封信：

1．感谢Tom对你英语学习的帮助；

2．询问Mr. Smith的近况并索要其联系方式；

3．邀请Tom在春节期间来中国感受中国文化。

注意：1.词数120-150；

2．可适当增加细节。

I am now back China and sound. In this letter I would like to convey my heartfelt appreciation to you for your kind assistance in my English learning when I was in New Y ork. Additionally, your generous help and tender care made me feel warmly welcomed and transformed my first American trip into a unforgettable memory.

I have been missing our English professor, Mr. Smith whose unusual cast of mind, wide and varied knowledge, together with a singular personal charm, combined to exert a strong influence on me. What about him recently? I desire to contact him for some suggestions on improving my listening ability. However, his email address is not available. So would you mind delivering it to me via the online mailbox?

I am more than delighted to invite you to join us to celebrate the Spring Festival -Chinese Lunar New Y ear so that I can repay your friendship. Y ou can partner with me to have a try in lion dances ,which is extremely

exciting. And the grand lantern festival parade will be bound to impress you. I assure you that you would enjoy visiting here as I did at you home.

With my best regards !

08年高考英语作文全国卷I

假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫（panda）,一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫―苏琳‖和她的母亲―白云‖。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信：

1、自我介绍；

2、祝贺苏琳生日；

3、感谢工作人员；

4、索取苏琳三岁生日照。

注意：1、词数100左右；

2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3、开头语已为你写好。

Dear Sir/Madam,

Greetings from China!

范文：

Dear Sir/ Madam,

Greetings from Chian!

I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child. About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website. Now she’s going to be there. I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.

By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.

Y ours truly,

Li Hua

08年高考英语作文全国卷II

假定你是李华, 你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文. 请你根据下列要点写回信.

要点: 1. 参加中文学习班;

2. 看中文书刊、电视；

3. 学唱中文歌曲；

4. 交中国朋友。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头语已为你写好。

June 8, 2008

Dear Peter,

I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.

范文：

Dear Peter,

I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.

Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.

Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. Y ou can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about

China and help you learn Chinese.

Try and write me in Chinese next time.

Best wishes

Li Hua

08年山东高考英语作文

山东卷

第二节：写作（满分30分）

假设你是新华中学的学生张华，班里从外地转来一名同学李明，他一时无法融入到新的班集

体中，感到很苦恼。请根据下列要点用英语(Q吧)给他写封信：

1、帮他分析原因；

2、给他提出建议；

3、陈述你帮助他的具体打算。

注意：词数120 ~150

范文：

Dear LiMing,

I know you are now having trouble communicating with others, and you may often feel lone ly. That’s because you are new here and people don’t know about you. But I think you can make it if only you can follow the advice below.

First, you should take an active part in the discussions and show your own opinions about the matters, and at the sam e time, learn to listen to other people’s views. Second, you should learn about your classmates' likes and dislikes. Then you can have much in common with them. This way, you can get to know more different people and show them that you are just as friendly. Last but not least, I’m always here ready to help. we can take part in some activities together and I can introduce you to others.

With time going on, people will know you better and will like to make friends with you if you can do as the above.

Best regards,

Zhang Hua

08年浙江高考英语作文

浙江卷

第三节：书面表达（满分30分）

人们完成工作的方式通常有两种：独立完成和合作完成。两种方式各有特点。请你以

―Working Individually or Working in a Team‖为题，按照以下要点写一篇英语短文：

1. 独立完成：自行安排、自己解决问题。

2. 合作完成：一起讨论、相互学习

3. 我喜欢的方式和理由

注意：词数100-120，文章的题目和开头已给出（不计词数）。

Working Individually or Working in a Team

There are basically two ways to get work done.

范文：

Working Individually or Working in a Team

There are basically two ways to get work done. One is to work individually. In this way, people can decide for themselves when to start work and how to do it. Wha t’s more, they will be able to learn bow to solve problems on their own.

People may also choose to work in a team, where they can learn from each other and help each other. Besides, they may work out better ways to get work done by discussion.

Personally, I prefer to work in a team, which offers me a chance to learn how to get along with others and to share my experiences with them. As the work can be divided among several people, it can be done efficiently. Teamwork is always important.

08年陕西高考英语作文

陕西卷

（三）书面表达（满分30分）

某天，你班贴出了一张通知，请根据通知、内容要点和要求写一篇英文发言稿。

内容要点：

1、你对―周五读报活动‖的看法；

2、陈述你的理由（可举例说明）；

3、你的具体建议。

要求：

1、短文须写在答题卡的指定区域；

2、短文词数不少于80（不含已写好的部分）；

3、内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯；

4、书写须清晰、工整。

Dear fellow students,

Our monitor suggests that we have ―Friday New Hour‖. I think

____________________________________________ _

范文：

Our monitor suggests that we have ―Friday New Hour‖. I think that it is a good idea.

Everyone knows that we are busy all day. Seldom do we know what is happening both at home and abro ad, let alone what we can do for our country. By reading newspapers we can get more information about the world outside. So I think ―Friday New Hour‖ can broaden our mind and enrich our school life. What’s more, it will help us improve our reading skills.

As for my suggestion, I think it’s better to have it twice a week. And we should make a choice about what we’ll read. I am sure everyone will benefit a lot from this activity.

07年高考英语作文全国卷Ⅰ

假定你是李华，希望通过外籍教师Peter找一个英语笔友。请写一封短信，描述一下你理想中笔友的条件，并说明为什么选这样的笔友。具体条件包括：

年龄；

性别；

爱好（旅游、运动、宠物等）。

注意：1．词数100 左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3．开头语已为你写好。

Dear Peter,

I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.

Best regards,

Li Hua

范文：

Dear Peter,

I’m writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.

I want to have a pen friend, hopefully a girl in her early twenties, and with interests similar to mine. In my mind, she is someone who is interested in traveling, swimming, and playing table tennis. Besides, it would be better

for her to have a pet dog as I have kept one at home for some time. With such a pen friend, I think I can share with her our traveling experiences, taking care of pets, or whatever we have in common. And I believe I will improve my English by doing so and learn more about her country.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

07年高考英语作文全国卷II

一家宾馆新开业，为吸引外国宾客，希望在互联网上进行宣传，请你用英语为其写一篇文字介绍。主要内容应包括：

1.地点：距白山入口处500米；

2.房间及价格：单人间(共20间)，100元/天；

双人间(共15间)，150元/天；

热水淋浴；

3.餐饮：餐厅(中、西餐)，咖啡厅(茶、咖啡)；

4.游泳池：全天免费开放；

5.欢迎预订。

注意：1.词数100左右，开头语已为你写好；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel

Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business范文：

Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel

Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.

Our hotel stands 500 meters away from the entrance to Baishan Mountain. It has 20 single rooms and 15 double rooms, all with hot showers. A single room is 100 Yuan and double room 150 Yuan for one night. You are advised to book in advance. The hotel serves three meals a day and there are Chinese food and western food for you to choose from. Y ou can also enjoy yourself at the café drinking tea or coffee in the evening. We also have a swimming pool, which is open all day and free of charge.

All are welcome!

07年高考英语作文湖南卷

假设你叫王平，李华是你的同窗好友，请根据下列要点，用英文给李华写一篇毕业留言。

要点：1.简要表述李华在你心目中的印象；

2.用一到两个相关事例进行具体描述；

3.对李华表示美好的祝愿。

注意：1.内容积极向上，语意连贯，结构完整。词数120左右。

2.不能写成诗歌形式；不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。

范文：

Dear Li Hua,

It’s time to say goodbye.It’s time to recall those beautiful days we spend together. Y ou are the very person who gives me a hand when necessary. Y ou are the most considerate person who knows exactly what I need.

Still remember that night two years ago? When I suddenly fell ill, it was you who carried me on your back to a nearby hospital. Y ou took good care of me while I was having an injection. Later, you managed to help me with my lessons. Without your help, I would have failed in the examination.

I still have hundreds of stories to share with you. I still have thousands of blessings for you. May all your dreams come true! May our friendship last till the end of the universe!

Y ours,

Wang Ping

07年高考英语作文山东卷

阅读下面的文字，用英语写一篇120-150词的短文。

今年，教育部直属师范大学将招收一批免费师范生，学生毕业后须回生源所在省份的中小学任教十年以上。你愿意成为一名免费师范生吗？请陈述理由。

范文：

Recently I learned From the newspaper that normal universities belonging to the Education Department would recruit some students free. As a return, the students must serve as a primary school teacher for at least 10years in his hometown. I feel that is a good news for me and I will contact the universities to get enrolld.

First of all, ads a farmer's child, my family's living condition is not so good, I can hardly afford the high tuition of regular universities. I am so happy to get this chance to become a college student and coninue my study.

Secondly, serving as a teacher is my dream since I was a child. I was brought up in a mountain village. Many of my little friends got poor education and they had to get to work as a teenager. If I become a teacher, I will devote myself to give them better education.

Lastly, our country is in great need of teachers, especially in rural areas. After I graduate, I will return to my hometown and serve as a good teacher.

高考英语满分作文,高考英语满分作文范文

作文题目

假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。

注意：1．词数：100左右：

2．参考词汇：房租—Tent(n.).

I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here.

I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small flat, and the rent is 500 Yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.

Hope you will come here soon!

All the best!

Y ours,

Li Hua

满分理由

本文格式正确，意思表述完整，行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用，还使用了以‘which，’引导的非限定性定语从句，从而使文章层次分明，富于变化，不愧为考场佳作。

Dear Bob,

Welcome to China! Y ou wrote to me to find a place for you.

I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School. It is on the third floor and there’re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom. There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the

bedroom. The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.

Also from this house you can get to your school easily. Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building. It is only one stop. At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I’U be able to meet you at the airport, see you.

Best wishes !

Y ours,

Li Hua

满分理由

本文格式正确，内容完整，表述清楚，衔接紧密流畅，时态语态使用准确，特别是结尾末段适度的发挥，既充实了内容，又符合逻辑，成为本文与众不同的亮点。

Dear Bob,

How are you these days?

I’m so glad to know that you’ll come to our city to learn Chinese. Y ou asked me to find a place for you. Now I’ve found one which I think is pretty good. The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop. It’s just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.

There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom. Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable. By the way, the rent is 500 Yuan per month. I hope you’ll like it. If not, I’ll try to find another place for you.

Y ours,

Li Hua

满分理由

本文内在逻辑性很强，由远及近。由外及内，层次分明，错落有致。同时让步状语从句运用得恰到好处，很出彩，再则结构完整，从开头的问候语到结尾都很完备。

高考英语作文范文

最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。

60％的同学认为

40％的同学认为

1．不应该收门票

2公园是公众休闲的地方

3l如收门票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象

1．应收门票，但票价不要太高

2．支付园林工人工资

3．购新花木

注意：1．信的开头已为你写好。

2．词数：100左右。

3．参考词汇：门票---entrance fee

Dear editor,

I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. 60% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee d o not meet people’s expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where the public can have a good time when they are not busy either at home or at work. If an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a gat e and surrounding walls. In the end a city will take on a bad look. 40% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive. The money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the park and buying some other kinds of flowers and trees.

With regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protect a park. Do we share the same opinion, dear editor?

Y ours truly,

Li Hua

Dear editor,

I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Sixty students out of one hundred think that an entrance fee should not be bought before one enters a park, for it is a place for the public to go to when they are free. If a ticket must be bought, a gate and walls have to be built for a park, which will make a city look ugly. Forty students out of one hundred think that an entrance fee should be bought before one enters a park, but that the price of the ticket should be reasonable. Money that is got from ticket selling can be used to pay the gardening workers and buy different kinds of flowers and trees. As for myself, I really think parks are good places to go to at weekends and on holidays. At the same time, we, as visitors, should pay the entrance fee when we enter a park. After all, it takes a lot of money to maintain a park in good working order. Do you agree with me, dear editor?

Y ours truly,

Li Hua

Dear editor,

I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Sixty percent of my schoolmates are for the idea that an entrance fee should not be forced on the public. They believe parks are the place where the public enjoy themselves at their leisure. They think that a gate and wails are to be built if an entrance fee is to be charged. The city will not look so beautiful as it sho uld have. Forty percent of my schoolmates are for the idea that an entrance fee is OK, but it shouldn’t be out of control. Entrance fee can be used to pay the gardeners and buy new types of flowers and trees. For myself, I’d like to say that if we all work hard to build our city into a flower garden, who cares about the entrance fee for parks?

Y ours truly,

Li Hua

Dear editor,

I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance f ee should be charged for parks. Those against charging entrance fee for parks take up 60%. They are of one mind that parks are a place for the public’s enjoyment. If tickets are demanded on the visitors of a park, a gate has to be set up and so have the walls on the four sides. If so, city will not look as beautiful as it would. Otherwise, those in favour of charging entrance fee for parks take up 40%. They all think that ticket price should be controlled properly, and that entrance fee can be used to pay the gardeners and buy new sorts of flowers and trees. The truth lies in the hands of the majority. Does my argument stand to reason, dear editor?

Y ours truly,

Li Hua

Dear editor,

I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be

charged for parks. Of all us who have joined in the discussion, 60% share the point of view that an entrance fee should not be charged while 40% share the opposite view. Those wh o don’t agree with the idea think that a park is a place where the public can spend their spare time for pleasure. Those in support of the idea think that entrance fee for parks can’t be beyond control. Those against the idea think that a city’s appearance will be damaged because a gate and wails will be built if an entrance fee is to be collected. Those who agree with the idea think entrance fee can be used to pay the gardeners and buy new kinds of flowers and trees. I think it does more good than harm to charge an entrance fee for parks. Am I right, editor?

Y ours truly,

Li Hua

2009高考英语满分作文

【全国卷I海南、宁夏】

【试题回放】假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs. Wilson 不在家，你准备外出，请给Mrs. Wilson 写一留言条，内容包括：

1.外出购物

2.替房东还书

3.Tracy 来电话留言：1)咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)见面取消

2)此事已告知Susan

3) 尽快回电

注意：1. 词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Mrs. Wilson,

I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 o’clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change.

Y ours,

Li Hua

[名师点评]

本文属于提纲式要点作文，是学生比较熟悉的题材，体现了英语学习应该注意实用性，生活型的原则。行文人称、时态运用恰当、准确，各个要点间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。提纲类书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译，而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的语句，因此要仔细组织语言，合理安排结构。在语言方面，要特别注意简洁明了，开头要开门见山。

【北京卷】

【试题回放】情景作文

假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为响应绿化祖国的号召，你班四月十二日去郊区植树，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍植树活动的全过程，给某英文杂志的―绿色行动‖专栏写一篇以―Green Action in Our Class‖为题的英文稿件。

注意：词数不少于60

提示词：郊区suburbs

April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day. In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering . After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.

【名师点评】

本文是设计巧妙的提纲要点式作文，与环保结合，立意较好。文章思路清晰，要点连贯，在语言的

表达上选词新颖，同时运用了分词短语作状语等较好的句式表达。

【北京卷】

【试题回放】开放作文

请根据下面提示，写一篇短文，词数不少于50

In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. Y ou are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.

What an interesting picture! A western young man, sitting at a table, is ready to eat a bowl of noodles. He is holding two forks the same way as we Chinese hold chopsticks. He is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sw eating a lot. At first glance, I think it’s a bit funny, for we Chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles. The man in the picture is trying to copy us. Obviously he is doing it the hard way. Maybe using one fork will do a be tter job, In my opinion, we don’t need to copy others’ ways of thinking. Sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way.

【名师点评】

本文是开放性作文，要求考生把握好图画内容，发散表达。考生重点要看出这个人是卷发高鼻的外国人，要体会到西式刀叉对中式食物的矛盾性。行文结构十分明晰，同时句式使用得熟练而准确。

【江苏卷】

【试题回放】鼠标是计算机时代最佳的人机交互工具之一。它极大地方便了人们的计算机操作。但是，过分依赖鼠标的习惯也会带来一些不利影响。请你以鼠标为切入点，根据下表所提示的信息，用英语写一篇短文。

鼠标的必要性对多数人来说，操作计算机，上网冲浪……

鼠标的便捷性点击、移动、插入、拷贝、删除……编辑文本，搜索信息……

收发邮件，选购商品……

点播音乐，下载电影……

如果过分依赖鼠标…… (请考生结合自身感受，列举两到三点)

注意：

1.对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

2.词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计人总词数。

3.作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。

The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer.

For most peo ple, it’s almost impossible to operate a computer without a mouse, let alone surf the Internet.

A well-chosen mouse is really handy, flexible and convenient in controlling the screen. With the functions of inserting, deleting, moving and copying, it enables us to edit test, browse web page and download what we want. It can even bring us a flood of music, movies and PC games. Just imagine, all this can be done with a cute mouse.

A convenient tool can certainly make our work easier, but it doesn’t always help in a positive way. Too much ready information on our fingertips leaves little room for knowledge pursuing. Too many ready answers make us less excited in finding truth. Relying too much on mouse clicking makes us lazier and less creative both mentally and physically.

【名师点评】

本文为提纲式说明文体裁，所选内容与我们生活相关，考生只要把所给要点逐条陈述，适度发挥，不要逐条翻译即可。文章说理清楚，语言流畅，句式表达多样，用词恰当、准确。不失为一篇满分作文。2008高考英语满分作文

【全国卷】

【试题回放】假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫(panda),一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫―苏琳‖和她的母亲―白云‖。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信：

1、自我介绍;

2、祝贺苏琳生日;

3、感谢工作人员;

4、索取苏琳三岁生日照。

注意：1、词数100左右;2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3、开头语已为你写好。

例文：

Dear Sir/Madam,

Greetings from China!

I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. I’ve been a p anda lover since I was a child. About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website,. Now she’s going to be three. I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.

By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.

Y ours truly,

Li Hua

【名师点评】本文写作的内容要点如下：

1.自我介绍;

2.信息来源;

3.祝贺生日;

4.感谢照顾;

5.索取照片;

6.合适的结尾。

这封信格式正确，行文规范，描述有条不紊，称呼、正文中的开头及结尾、结束语均表达到位。文章行文活泼，感情真挚，语言表述准确，洋溢着作者因大熊猫得到精心照顾而对美方人员的感激之情，以及希望自己愿望成真，得到照片的希冀之情。长短句运用合理，结合了简单句和复合句，流畅自然，不露痕迹，的确是一篇佳作。

积累卡片英汉互译

好词1.delighted adj.欣喜的，快乐的2.express v.表达 3.give birth to v.产生，生育

好句I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard w ork, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.

我祝福它生日快乐并且对你们的辛勤工作表达我的感激之情，正是你们的努力工作让苏琳和它的父母在美国过着幸福和健康的生活。

评析：定语从句的使用。

【北京卷】

【试题回放】假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为―Our Spring Outing‖ 的英文稿件。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。

注意：词数不少于60.

提示词：游乐园amusement park 垃圾箱bin

Last Thursday, we had a class meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing. We came up with several choices such as going boating, climbing a mountain, and going to an amusement park. Finally, we decided to go mountain climbing.

The next day, we set off early in the morning. While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view . However, when we reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles and banana peels. Then we started to pick up the litter and put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively.

We were tired but happy.

【名师点评】

本情景作文的内容要点如下：1.讨论;2.爬山;3.检拾别人的垃圾;4.投放垃圾。内容要点可用不同方式表达。本文覆盖了所有内容要点，较好地完成了试题规定的任务。其中，写作主题突出，详略得当，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，而且有效的使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文机构紧凑。本文叙述清楚，描写细致，准确运用了很多富有表现力的词和句型，例如：―set off early‖，―enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view‖, ‖were shocked to see litter here and there ―等，将活动的情形很形象地描述了出来。

积累卡片英汉互译

好词1 set off 出发 2. litter n.废弃物 3.respectively adv.分别地

好句1.While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view .

在爬山时，我们享受着温暖的阳光和美丽的风景。

1. However, when we reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles and

banana peels.

然而，当我们登上山顶，被眼前的一幕惊呆了：瓶子和香蕉皮这样的废弃物到处都是。

评析：细节描写，生动形象。―shock‖一词也用得生动传神。

【江苏卷】

【试题回放】实现有效的沟通，建立良好的人际关系，不仅要善于言表，更要学会倾听。请你根据下表中所提供的信息，写一篇题为―Being a Good Listener‖ 的英文演讲稿。

为何倾听表示尊重，增进理解，建立良好的人际关系

谁来倾听家长倾听孩子理解孩子，消除代沟，……

老师倾听学生了解学生，满足需求，……

同学相互倾听增进友谊，互帮互学，……

怎样倾听(请考生联系自己拟定内容，列举两至三点。)

注意：

1、对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

2、词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。

3、演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。

Good afternoon, everyone.

The topic of my speech today is ―Being a Good Listener‖.

Good listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship.

Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap; teachers should listen more to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselves in a good relationship with their students; students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.

What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others. Show your respect and never stop others till they finish their talk; show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile; be open-minded to different opinions even though yo u don’t like them. In a word, good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other.

Thank you for your listening!

【名师点评】

这是一篇感情真挚、热情洋溢的演讲稿，文中大量运用排比句型，不但准确流畅地表达出题目中所提供的信息，而且体现出作者熟练运用英语的能力以及不俗的文采。第三段中所使用的相同结构的复合句式，将倾听的对象及其作用阐述得淋漓尽致;而第四段中用一系列的祈使句议论应如何倾听，则更进一步地增强了这篇演说稿的说服力。

积累卡片英汉互译

好词1.promote v .促进 2. interpersonal adj.人际的3. generation gap. 代沟

4. open-minded adj. 虚心的

好句1. students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.

同学之间应该互相倾听，这样他们可以互相学习和帮助，也会形成友谊。

评析：复杂句的组合，被动句的使用。

2. What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others.

我想强调的是我们每个人都应该更多的倾听他人。

评析：复合句的使用。

【湖北卷】

【试题回放】假设你是卜曼宜，你购买了一部某外国公司生产的手机，因有质量问题，要求该公司更换。请根据下列要点，用英文写一封电子邮件。

要点：1. 问题：手机不响铃，不能发短信;该产品已售完，无法更换;型号新，无配件，无法维修。2. 要求：公司应尽快予以更换。

注意：1. 词数为100左右;

2. 参考词汇：配件—— spare part;

3. 电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好(不计入你所写词数);

4.已给出的电子邮件的开头和结尾不得抄入答题卡。

Dear Sir，

I am writing to you for the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought on 20th Apr.2008 at Tele Mall in Wuhan, P.R. China. Ten days after that, it didn’t ring and send short messages. Then I took it to the seller, but was told that the model had been sold out and I had to wait at least three months for a new one. I had no choice but to go to the repairman. To my disappointment ,he said since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts. I was so desperate on hearing that for I can not wait that long. Therefore, I have to require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month.

Thank you for your consideration.

Sincerely yours,

Bu Manyi

【名师点评】

本文内容要点齐全，语言丰富，结构合理，如头两句说明了购买手机后发现故障的情况，中间部分说明了无法维修而必须让公司更换手机的原委，最后明确提出自己的要求，明白流畅，将题目所提出的要点全部表达清楚，较好的完成了任务。全文以一般过去时为基调，结合主动语态与被动语态，并使用了so, but, therefore 等连接词，使文章结构完整严密。固定短语，如be sold out ,at least, had no choice but to go, to my disappointment, on hearing that 等的使用，使文章的语言显得地道而精炼。

积累卡片英汉互译

好词1. disappointment n.失望2.desperate adj.绝望的3. consideration n.体谅

好句To my disappointment ,he said since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts.

令我失望的是，他说因为在中国是新款手机，所以没有配件来修理。

评析：复杂句的组织; to my disappointment, 常用短语。

2007高考英语满分作文

【全国卷II】

【试题回放】

一家宾馆新开业，为吸引外国宾客，希望在互联网上进行宣传。请你用英语为其写一篇文字介绍。主要内容包括：

1.地点：距白山入口处500米;

2.房间及价格：单人间(共20间)，100元/天;双人间(共15间)，150元/天;热水淋浴;

3.餐饮：餐厅(中、西餐)，咖啡厅(茶、咖啡);

4.游泳池：全天免费开放;

5.欢迎预定。

注意：1.词数100左右，开头语已为你写好;2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!

Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.

500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides single?person room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double? person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day. It also provides hot water bath service. Y ou can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe. The swimming pool is open for free the whole day. All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable. So come to enjoy yourself!

Welcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.

【名师点评】

本文开门见山，首先点明了主旨。本文最大的特点是应用了很多比较复杂的句式，使文章比较出彩。开头使用了独立结构交代宾馆位置。which引导的非限制性定语从句的使用也很正确。总地来说，文章句式精炼，是篇不错的满分作文。

积累卡片英汉互译

好词 1. provide v.提供2. convenience n.便利

好句All these services can bring great convenience to you and are

very enjoyable.所有这些服务都会给你带来便利，并且非常的愉快。

评析：bring great convenience，带来便利。

【安徽卷】

【试题回放】

假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，主要内容如下：l 表示赞成。

l 提出你喜欢的栏目。

l 简要说明理由。

注意：

1. 词数100左右。

2. 新的开头和结尾已为你写好。

3. 适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

4. 参考栏目：栏目—column

Dear Mr. Green,

I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that.

Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say, ―culture express‖ gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, ―blurt out‖ is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English. Last but not least, ―entertainment‖ is so cool! The popular singers, actors and celebrities ar e so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can’t miss it! Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things.

Well, I can’t list more. I really can’t wait to read that magazine!

Y ours faithfully,

Li Hua

【名师点评】

这是一篇满分作文。由于这篇作文的出现，导致了安徽省今年的英语作文分数普遍偏低。仔细分析了这篇文章，写的的确是好，很地道的美式英语，一些词语的大胆使用，让人不得不猜测此人或者是家人可能有过国外生活的经历，否则这么地道标准的英语，可不是一朝一夕所能写出来的。

比如说：my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大胆运用，list, can't wait to 简直是perfect! 况且文章中没有一个错误，不管是书写还是语法。英语能够学到这种程度，不可谓不让人佩服。

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【试题回放】2007年4月29日上午10点到11点，全国亿万学生阳光体育活动在各地大中小学校同时进行，江苏省1，100万学生积极参与了这项活动。

教育部倡导学生：

u 每天锻炼一小时

u 健康工作五十年

u 幸福生活一辈子

请你根据以上提示，用英语准备一份发言稿，向同学们讲述一下阳光体育活动的有关情况，并就高三学生是否需要每天花一小时锻炼，谈谈你的看法及理由。

注意：

1、发言稿应包括以上所有信息，要有适当发挥。

2、词数：120左右。发言稿的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。

3、参考词汇：阳光体育活动——a national student sports program;

教育部——the Ministry of Education

Good afternoon, everyone,

The national student sports program, waged by the Ministry of Education and aimed at improving students health, was held from 10：00a.m.~11:00a.m.on April 29，2007 in many primary and middle schools all over China. Almost 11 million students in Jiangsu province participated in this program.

The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day a nd can work healthily for 50 years. Our whole life will be very enjoyable.

In my opinion, we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is limited. Health is a basic condition for our study. If we did no t do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records. So every one of you, join the program now!

Thank you!

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本文的结构十分明晰，同时句式使用得熟练而准确。本文分为三段，前两段叙述，后一段发表观点，典型的作文结构。在句式使用上，作者用法多样，使用了独立结构和虚拟语气，十分出彩。复杂的句式是本文的特点之一。

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好词1.wage v.发动2.aim v.瞄准3. advocate v.提倡

好句1. The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years.

教育部提倡我们每天做一个小时的运动，能够健康地活50年。

评析：advocate，其后接虚拟语气，可以省略情态动词。

2. If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be abl e to get good study records.

如果我们不进行运动，我们的学习成绩就不会很好。

评析：虚拟语气。

【重庆卷】

【试题回放】

据报道，7岁的美国女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌(lung cancer)后处于极度的痛苦之中，美国抗癌协会(ACS)决定，每当Amy收到一封慰问信，就给她增加3美分的治疗款。

假如你是新华中学的学生李华，请你用英文给Amy写一封慰问信，主要内容包括：

自我介绍

得知的情况

表示鼓励

打算为她做什么

祝她早日康复

注意：

1. 信的格式已为你写好

2. 信中不得出现你的真实情况。

3. 词数100左右。

4. 请在答题卡上作答。

Dear Amy,

I’m Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of China. I’m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brought you great pain. But you should realize that you are young and have a promising great future. So, stand up and fight against the disease! I’m sure you will win. It is reported that the America anti-cancer association will donate three cents upon every comfort letter you receive. So I will tell your situation to all my fr iends and ask them to write to you. In that way, you will get enough money for you to be cured. Hope you can be well soon.

Y ours,

Li Hua

[名师点评]

本文依照要求，涵盖了所有要点。文章使用了高中常见的句式，如I?m sorry to hear that..., It is reported that...等，都比较好。作者对定语从句的使用恰到好处地修饰了文章，行文自然而通顺，值得学习。

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好词1.realize v.意识到2.promise v.允诺3.donate v.捐赠

好句1. I?m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brings you great pain.

我很遗憾地得知你身患肺癌，给你带来了巨大的痛苦。

好处：which引导限制性定语从句。

2. So, stand up and fight against the disease!

因此，坚强地与疾病做斗争吧!

好处：掷地有声，语言准确。

2006高考英语满分作文

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假定你是李华，亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办，现正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封信。内容应包括：1.个人情况：年龄，性别，学历2.个人条件：英语好，爱好体育，善于交际，乐于助人，熟悉本地情况3.承诺：提供最佳服务

注意：词数100左右，开头语已为你写好;可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;生词：申请—apply (v. ), application (n.)，志愿者—volunteer

Dear Sir / Madam:

I was quite excited when I heard the Asian Winter Games will be held in the city I live. My name is Li Hua.

I am an 18-year-old boy student in a senior middle school. And I want to be a volunteer for the games. I like English and sports very much. I like making friends and I am ready to help others. I can be a good interpreter in every sports during the time. Hope the games will be a great success. Hope I will be chosen to be one.

Y ours faithfully,

Li Hua

[名师点评]

这篇文章写得非常流畅，把握了所有要点，同时以―我‖为中心，详细说明了自己对志愿者工作的结合，以此来表达自己的决心。由于用词恰当，这种表现就比较充分，具备一定的说服力。词汇和语句的运用也不错。

[全国卷II]

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假定你是李华。应英国朋友Bob的要求，写一封短信介绍你校图书馆的基本情况。内容须包括下面两幅图中的相关信息。

注意：

1、字数100左右

2、可以适当增减细节，以使行文连贯

3、开头语已为你写好

Dear Bob,

Thank you for your last letter asking about our library. Our library locates between the teaching building and our garden. The shape of it seems to be a book to welcome our students. it’s open from Monday to Friday ,and we can borrow the books from 9:00a.m. to 7:00p.m.

There are many books available in our library ,dealing with almost every subject. Not only the books, but also the magazines can be read here. Y ou may borrow up to five books at a time, and keep them for at most ten days.

Due to the library , we are offered a place to gain as much knowledge as we can. If you are interested in it, welcome to our school, and I’ll show you around.

Y ours sincerely,

Li hua

[名师点评]

本文最大的特点是描绘仔细而生动，意思表达十分契合。文章以短句为主，兼以长句读起来轻快。文章的体系结构也是常用的三段式，作者极力推荐自己的图书馆，这么好的图书馆怎么不打动他的外国朋友呢?

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假设你是李华，作为选派的交流学生在美国某中学学习了一年，寄住在Mr. Brown家里，刚回到国内。回国后，你发现自己的一本英语词典遗忘在他家，因此给他写了一封信，请他帮助寄回词典。信的主要内容如下：

感谢在美国期间他所提供的帮助

一本英语词典忘记带回

词典是美国老师送的，非常珍贵

词典很可能丢在卧室的书架上

邮资自己付

注意：

1、词数100左右;信的开头和结尾已为你写好。

2、可适当增加细节，使行文连贯

2、参考词汇：邮资-postage

Dear Mr. Brown,

I have been back, and write this letter to show my thanks. As the exchange student, you make me feel warm. Welcome to my country ,I’ll show you around in turn.

However , there exists a problem that I have left my dictionary at your home. I like it very much , for it was a precious gift from my teacher who comes from the U.S. I guess that my book may stay on your shelf in the bedroom .

Do you mind if you send my dictionary to me? I will pay for the postage and I’ll be very gratefu l if you show your warmness again.

I’m eager to receive your reply.

Y ours,

Li hua

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本文作为信件，首先其格式是正确的。既然是应用文，那么文章的意图就要明确表示出来，本文在表达作者写作意图的时候，情真意切，用词委婉而合理。文章不但使用了定语从句，还采用了疑问句，让句式变化而不呆板。

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加拿大高中生David在互联网Internet上登出启事notice，希望结识一位中国朋友，以便学习中国的语言，文化culture。

假设你是李华，请在看到这则启事后，用英文给David发一封电子邮件，主要内容包括：

你怎样得知David的愿望

你愿意成为他的朋友

你打算如何帮助他

你盼望他的回复

注意：

1、电子邮件的格式已为你写好

2、字数：100词左右

3、在答题卡上作答

Dear David,

I’m a student from China and have noticed your requirement on line. Y ou would like to search for a Chinese friend to help you get to know China and its culture. Maybe I’m your good choice.

China is a country that has a long history of 5,000 years. Not only our history ,but also our culture is the access to understand us better.

There are so much that I want to know, if you are interested. I’ll be looking forward to your reply. I’ll show you around our great China if you come to China.

Y ours sincerely ,

Li hua

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本文的语言非常流畅，我们可以看到，本文虽没有华丽的辞藻，但是语言的组织和层次感很强。同时连词的使用，如not only, but also ,让文章的重点突出，同时也起到了强调和吸引注意的目的。

2005高考英语满分作文

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假定你是李华，正是英国牛津参加短期语言培训，计划星期天去伦敦旅游。互联网上一则广告引起了你的注意，但一些具体信息不明确(箭头所指内容)。请给该旅行社发一封电子邮件，询问有关情况。

注意：1.词数100左右，信的格式已为你写好。

2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3.参考词汇：牛津——Oxford 费用——fee

Dear Sir/Madame,

I’m writing for more information about the day tour to London.

As a student at Oxford University, I’d like to know if you have any special price for students. As for the money you charge, does it cover the entrance fees for visiting the p laces listed? What about lunch? Is it included? Or do I need to bring along my own food?

How long will the tour last? Since I need to prepare my lessons for the nest day, I’d like to know the time to return. Besides, is there any time for shopping? I really want to have a look at the big stores in London.

Y ours,

Li Hua

[名师点评]

本文是根据画面的提示来写一封电子邮件。作者在文章中首先把握了全部的要点，叙述较为完整;其次，作者运用一些过渡句和衔接词将文章串联，意思连贯。文章中采用了第一人称和一般现在时，这是值得肯定的地方。

[全国卷Ⅲ](四川、云南、陕西等地区用)

【试题回放】假设你是李华，最近国内一家英文报纸正在讨论北京动物园是否应迁出市区。以下是你所在班级讨论的情况。请你给该报写一封信，反映讨论结果。

赞成迁出：反对迁出：

1.游客多，交通堵塞

2.郊区环境好1.建于1906年，中外闻名

2.搬迁易造成动物死亡

注意：1.词数100字左右，信的开头已为你写好。

2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3.参考词汇：郊区—suburb

Dear Editor ,

Recently ,in our class there has been a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city . Some of my classmates are in favor of the move .They say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams .They also say that once moved ,animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs .However ,other students are against the idea ,saying that the Beijing Zoo, built in 1906 ,has a history of 100 years ,and is well –known at home and abroad .So it should remain where it

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