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大连朗阁雅思培训—雅思写作高分写法:开头就要搞定考官

大连朗阁雅思培训—雅思写作高分写法:开头就要搞定考官
大连朗阁雅思培训—雅思写作高分写法:开头就要搞定考官

大连朗阁雅思培训—雅思写作高分写法:开头就要搞定考官

关于雅思考试大作文,多考生担心写不出好的议论文开头,或者担心写出来的内容千篇一律,无法吸引考

官的眼球。

为此,不少同学苦练各种个性化开头或者冥思苦想高级词汇。但真正上了考场,这些都是浮云。要在

考场中写出最实用且又不会雷同又可以顺利引出下文的开头其实很容易,看了笔者接下来的分析,大家就

一定可以掌握。

导入句和主题句,二者缺一不可。而导入句又分为背景导入句和观点导入句。考虑到主题句和观点导

入句都是属于非常简单的环节,笔者接下来将重点讲解背景导入句的写法。我们先来看一个引言段:

Thanks totechnological advances, we have spawned numerous products like the computersand the Internet and thus altered our lifestyles completely. However, somepeople argue that the recent technologies have destroyed the bond betweenfamilies and friends and brought much more negative effects to the society.Personally, I would disagree。

这是一个标准的50字左右的雅思大作文引言段,应该说总体写得还是很流畅的,比如它的导入句意

思衔接合理,观点鲜明且导入题目充分,所以这样一个引言段若是能够在考场中写出来的话应该可以满足

大部分考生的期望。然而,如果我们深入分解了这个引言段后,我们其实不难发现,写法技巧上非常朴实,第一个句子是对于题目的背景描述,第二个句子给出了第三方的立场,而最后一个句子表明了自己的态度。这样一气呵成的写作方式就是笔者马上会给大家详细介绍的。

在拿到一个考题后,首先当然我们必须把它认真仔细得阅读2-3遍,然后在心里默默地翻译给自己听。在充分理解了题目以及写作指令后,接着就要进行立场的选择,这里我要特别强调的是审题结束后马上就

给出一个明确的立场是很必要的,它也在很大程度上决定了引言段一上来的几个句子的意思选择。我们在

引言段最初的1到3个句子里是对考题的背景导入,要做好这一步,我们还是得从2个简单句说起,即主谓宾和主系表。所有接下来的句子,不论长短,都是从这2种简单句发展出来的。我们在创造这2个句子时,主系表通常是从主语的功能、作用和影响这3个方面入手。那主语又是什么呢?一般来说,在主系表

这个结构中的主语,可以是考题中直接涉及的某个名词,也可以是围绕这个核心名词的一些外围名词,举

个例子来讲:

Shoppinghas become a favorite pastime for some young people. Do we need to encourageyoung people to do something more useful in their free time? What is youropinion?

这个题目的核心词汇当然就是“shopping”这一词了,若采用主系表原创背景导入句的话,一般我们是

以这个词作为句子的主语,但是如果我们再思考一下,其实“pastime”或者是它的近义词也是可以作为句

子的主语的。两者的区别在于直接用“shopping”作主语写出来的句子就直接和题目产生了关系,马上就充

分引入了背景;而使用“pastime”或者是近义的名词作为主语的话可能我们还需要再写1到2个句子才能

将题目涉及的背景充分导入到引言段中。但是这2种构思其实都还是非常不错的。我们不妨再来通过另外

一个题目加深对刚才这种主语选择的理解:

People arenow able to perform everyday tasks such as shopping, banking, businesstransactions without meeting others face-to-face. What are the effects on bothindividuals and the society as a whole?

这个考题的核心词汇就不如之前那个题目那么容易找到了,我们需要具备一定的概括能力才能使用诸

如“modern lifestyle”或者“e-commerce”之类的词来作为第一句话的主语。同时,在题目中它涉及的几个例子,像在线银行交易,网购等其实也可以作为主语,2类主语选择的区别我想大家应该可以通过前面一个

例子的分解明白了吧?

会选合适的主语以后,接着我们就来选择恰当的表语,尽管我们无需讲出表语的定义,但是首先有必

要讲一下表语的词性,有3种,名词,形容词和不定式。只有知道其3种词性,我们才能准确地选择词汇。在主语确定后,我们就通过对于主语的功能、作用和影响3方面入手,在名词、形容词和不定式里选择一种来造句。比如:

Televisionis a powerful tool of communication。

在这个句子中,作者通过对电视功能的介绍,使用名词作为表语成功地造出了这个首句。又如:

Computersare now essential in our daily life。

作者在这个句子中利用了形容词作表语解释了电脑在现在生活中的影响。

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