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最新英语中考英语书面表达及答案

最新英语中考英语书面表达及答案
最新英语中考英语书面表达及答案

最新英语中考英语书面表达及答案

一、中考英语书面表达(含答案详细解析)

1.书面表达

假如你是九年级学生李华,你的美国笔友Billy发来邮件询问你平时锻炼的情况。请你根据以下信息,给Billy回封电子邮件,并建议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。

写作要点:

1. 你最近正忙于为即将到来的体育测试(physical test)做准备。

2. 介绍你平时锻炼的情况:

(1)每天锻炼的时间:不到一个半小时。

(2)偶尔不锻炼的原因:作业多,没时间。

(3)擅长的体育运动:球类运动。

3. 谈谈锻炼给你带来了哪些好处。

写作要求:

1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。

2. 可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。

3. 字迹工整,语言精练,表达准确,条理清晰。

4. 至少80词。

Dear Billy,

It’s my great pleasure to receive your e-mail.

___________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________ ____________

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Billy,

It’s my great pleasure to receive your e-mail. You wanted to know about my usual exercise. I’ll tell it to you.

I am busy preparing for the coming physical test. So I take exercise less than an hour every day. Sometimes I don’t do exercise, because I have so much homework that I have no time to do it. I do well in playing balls.

Doing exercise can help me keep a strong body, and it is good for my health. Besides, I think it can make me relaxed by doing exercise. So I advise you to spend more time doing exercise every week.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】

这是一篇给材料作文,给Billy回封电子邮件,介绍自己平时的锻炼情况,并建议他每周都

要花些时间锻炼身体。

【详解】

结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时态,人称为单数第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:I am busy……,because I have……,Doing exercise can help……,So I advise you to……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。

【点睛】

本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头表示很高兴收到Billy的来信,接下来介绍我平时的锻炼情况,最后指出锻炼给我带来的好处以及我建议Billy要多锻炼。此处be busy doing sth, prepare for, do well in, be good for, advise sb to do sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

2.书面表达

随着电子时代的到来,西方文化如潮水般涌来,中国传统文化的传承面临着巨大的挑战。有人认为学校应当开设传统文化课(set up traditional culture classes),但也有人认为没有必要。假如你是Mike,请你用英语写一封邮件,给你校英文报投稿写一篇短文,词数80左右,谈谈你对开设传统文化课的看法。

Dear editor,

As we all know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development if international technology nowadays. _____________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _____________

Yours,

Mike

【答案】Dear editor,

As we know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development of international technology nowadays. In my opinion, it’s necessary for schools to set up traditional culture classes.

First, traditiona l culture is the root of Chinese. As Chinese, we shouldn’t give up our traditional culture and run after Western culture. Second, traditional culture classes can give students chances to know more about our nation. They can raise their sense of national pride. Last but not least, setting up traditional culture classes can spread and develop our Chinese culture.

All in all, it is of great importance to set up traditional culture classes in schools. Let’s call on more

schools to set up traditional culture classes!

Yours,

Mike

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文,谈谈我对开设传统文化课的看法。结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时态,人称为第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:Chinese traditional culture is facing……,it’s necessary for schools to……,we shouldn’t……,They can raise……,it is of great importance to……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。

点睛:本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头介绍了中国传统文化面对的问题,接下来介绍我认为开设传统文化课的必要性的原因,最后号召更多的学校开设传统文化课。此处because of,in one’s opinion, give up, know about, last but not least, set up, all in all, call on等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

3.临近毕业,学校在学习小组内开展了初中阶段自评和组评活动,假设你是 Moonlight 小组的组长,请根据下面表格中的信息和提示,为你的组员 Tommy 进行综合素质的评价,

写一份素质报告.

要求:1、表达清楚、语法正确、上下文连贯;2、要点必须包括所有相关信息,并作适当发挥;3、词数:100 词左右;4、不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等

Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight.

【答案】Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight. He is clever and he is good at all his lessons. He is so generous that he shares everything with his friends.He likes reading because he thinks he can get much knowledge and learn more about the world by reading. And reading has a good effect on children’s growth. At home, he can help his parents do some housework. At school, he gets on well with his classmates. On the way to school, he obeys the traffic rules. He crosses the road when the light is green. Our school presented him with Award for Best Student this year. However, Tommy is stre ssed when the exam comes. And he doesn’t have enough sleep.

I think he should go over what he has learned before exams. It’s better for him to manage his

time wisely so that he can have enough time to rest.

【解析】

这篇作文要求我们按照表格里的内容介绍一下Tommy的情况,为Tommy写一篇综合素质的评价报告。在表格中有非常详细的关于Tommy各方面的内容,我们需要用正确的英语把这些内容有条理的表达出来。表格中涉及的内容较多,写作时要注意表达的条理性。这篇作文应主要使用第三人称来写。在最后要给Tommy提一些建议,这一部分应该用第一人称。同时注意表达的准确性,尤其是表格中的第五项和第六项内容。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较优秀的范文。这篇作文内容完整,包含了表格中的所有内容,没有遗漏要点。表达准确,注意了被动形式的使用,如He was rewarded by our school this year.。写作时注意了条理性,使文章具有层次感,条理清楚。短文注意到了长短句的结合,并恰当的使用了一些连词,使文章表达的连贯。如He is always ready to help others.、He not only likes reading detective novels but also likes watching programs about sports news.、He is good at running. He won the first place in our school sports meeting this year.等。

4.书面表达

根据要求完成短文写作,请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。

每年春节,每个孩子都能收到来自长辈的压岁钱(lucky money)。随着生活水平的提高,大部分孩子得到越来越多的压岁钱,有些甚至通过微信(WeChat)或支付宝(Alipay)收压岁钱。同学们该如何管理自己的钱,让自己的钱用得更有意义?请结合自己的实际写一篇文章,词数 80 词以上,文中不能出现真实校名和人名。内容包括如下:

1. 你的压岁钱的来源和用途;

2. 对合理使用压岁钱的建议(至少 3 点);

3. 呼吁大家节约用钱,把自己的压岁钱用在最需要、最有意义的地方。

【答案】Every Spring Festival I receive a lot of lucky money from my parents and relatives. Now I even get it through WeChat or Alipay. I usually buy some of my favorite books, school things and some fancy clothes. Sometimes I also buy some gifts for my parents.

In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games. Second, it is a good idea to buy something useful for our parents or teachers so that we can show our love to them. What is more, why not donate our lucky money to the poor kids in need? Helping others makes us happy.

All in all, let us manage our lucky money properly. We should use our money in a meaningful way.【解析】

【详解】

每年春节,每个孩子都能收到来自长辈的压岁钱(luckymoney)。随着生活水平的提高,大部分孩子得到越来越多的压岁钱,有些甚至通过微信(WeChat)或支付宝(Alipay)收压岁钱。同学们该如何管理自己的钱,让自己的钱用得更有意义?这是一篇给材料作文,本题所给材料比较详细,写作中注意将所给内容表达出来,不能逐字翻译。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称,时态为一般现在时态,注意谓语动词的变化。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲,写作中注意语义通顺,符合逻辑关系。上下

文之间可以适当使用连接词。

【点睛】

文章使用了很好的短语和句子:In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games.这些给文章增色不少。

5.书面表达

假如你是李明,你的英国笔友Jack来信询问你的家乡是否有雾霾天气,情况如何。请你按照以下提示给他回一封e-mail。

内容如下:

1. 由于大气污染程度十分严重,去年已发生数次雾霾天气;

2. 人们已经意识到雾霾天气的危害,正在采取各种措施减少其发生;

3. 你在日常生活中打算为此做些什么。

参考词汇:雾霾haze

注意:

1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;

2. 语言通顺,句子连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;

3. 词数80左右,信件的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

Dear Jack,

I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze.

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ Yours,

Li Ming

【答案】Dear Jack,

I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze.

The hazy weather has occurred a lot of times in my hometown since last year. It was bad for our daily life. More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze. A great number of people have to stay at home .

People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway.

As for me, I will go to school by bike or on foot. In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment. Would you like to tell me some good ideas? I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Ming

【解析】

【详解】

这篇作文要求我们以李明的身份给自己的英国笔友写信,告诉他关于家乡雾霾的情况。题目中列出了三个要点,我们应根据这些要点提示,来组织语言,充实内容。首先介绍去年家乡的雾霾情况严重;然后介绍为减少雾霾人们采取了一些措施;最后介绍一下你自己在日常生活中应该怎么做。因此文章应主要分成三段,一个内容一段。文章内容中叙述的情况不一,时态不能统一,根据表达的需要使用正确的时态,注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时,应注意英语句式表达习惯和汉语是不同的,不能逐词翻译,应从句子的整体考虑,写完整的句子,利用简单句的基本句型,使用恰当的词汇和短语。为提升文章档次,可以穿插使用并列句和复合句;语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使文意连贯,表达流畅。【点睛】

这是一篇优秀的作文,短文中作者根据题目要求介绍了自己家乡治理雾霾的情况,并结合自身的实际情况,讲述了自己日常生活中是如何做的。首先短文内容完整,包含了题目中要求的所有信息,没有遗漏要点;且文章结构清晰,分成了三段,每一段的中心明确,意思表达清楚、明了。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称,作者根据表达需要使用了一般过去时、一般将来时态和一般将来时态,动词形式变化准确,语法规范。短文中语言得体,句式表达符合英语的习惯。句子结构以简单句为主,也使用了一些并列句和复合句,长短句结合,使文章富有节奏。短文中较好的句式有More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze、People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. 、The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway、In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment.等。

6.书面表达

某英文报举办“家乡的变化”主题征文活动。请根据下表提示,以“The Changes in My Hometown”为题,用英语写一篇100词左右的短文,不必逐字逐句翻译。

要求:1. 短文的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数;

2. 短文必须包括所有内容要点,并适当发挥,使短文连贯通顺;

3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。

Changes my hometown

My hometown has changed a lot over the years.

In the past, _______________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________ _

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _____________________

【答案】My hometown has changed a lot over the years.

In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow. Houses were small and old. Rubbish was everywhere. Few people would like to come to my hometown. Now the government takes measures to improve the pollution and the city becomes cleaner and cleaner. The houses are big and bright. Many people have moved into new apartments. More and more people have their own cars and live a comfortable life. The new airport has been in use for two years. There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every year.I hope my hometown is becoming more and more beautiful.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇作文要求我们以The Changes in My Hometown为题,介绍一下自己的家乡这些年来发生的变化。题目中用表格的形式,给我们对比的家乡的过去和现在,我们应用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来,并对将来提出两点希望。审题可知,作文的基本框架和大概内容都有了,需要注意的是在描写过去的时候,需要适当发挥一到两点;还有对将来的希望也需要学生自己发挥。这两个地方需要学生们展开想象,合理发挥,注意要与文章的其他部分能够很好的结合起来,内容也要统一,符合题目要求,合情合理。表达时,需要注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的,不能逐词翻译表格中的语句,而应从句子的整体考虑,使用恰当的词汇、短语和句型来表达。注意句式的多变,长短句结合、简单句、并列句或复合句穿插使用,提升文章的档次。语句之间注意使用适当的连接成分,使文意连贯。

【点睛】

这是一篇优秀的作文,短文作者按照题目要求,介绍了自己的家乡这些年来的变化。文章是按照时间的顺序,先介绍了家乡过去的面貌,这一部分使用了过去时态,谓语动词都变成了过去式,形式准确。然后是家乡现在的样子,这里主要以一般现在时态为主。最后对家乡的未来表达了自己的愿望。整篇文章内容充实、完整,叙述清晰、条理,结构合理。文章中语言得体,语句通顺,句式表达符合英语的习惯,语法规范、准确。短文里还使用了一些较好的短语和句型,如In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow.、Now the government takes measures to improve the pollution and the city becomes cleaner and cleaner、More and more people have their own cars and live a

comfortable life、There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every year.等等。

7.随着网络的发展、人们消费观念的转变,购物方式也在悄然的发生变化。“网购”已成为一种时尚,越来越多的学生也加入到网购群体中。请你根据以下表格的提示,写一篇网上购物的文章。

提示词汇:网购shopping online; 商品 goods; 导致 cause

注意:1.所表述的内容必须包含表格中的所有方面,可适当发挥;

2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称;

3.词数:100词左右,文章开头已给出,但不计入总数。

With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online.

【答案】With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has become fashionable. Some of us students also join the group.

Shopping online has many advantages. Just with the cli ck of a mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowds and save a lot of time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.

Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods that aren’t like the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money.

All in all, I love shopping online.

【解析】

本文属于材料作文,主要讲述网购的优点和缺点。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。

【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别适用一些亮点词句,如convenient,disadvantage,in good quality,figure out,have the chance to do,be attacked by,of course,take care of

等。增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。

点睛:写作时可以从以下几个方面做起:

认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求,抓住要点,词数符合要求。

构思提纲。有了提纲,我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的,而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥,因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。一切都准备就绪,就可以动笔写作了,在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词,使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外,还要检查语法结构是否合理,有无重复、啰嗦的语言,大小写是否正确,格式是否正确,词数是否符合要求等。

8.请根据表格内Zhang Ying的一些表现的提示用英语写一篇短文,把她介绍给你的外国朋友Mary。

要求:1、语言要通顺,表达要正确。

2、文章要求包含表格中的所有提示。

3、词数不少于60个英语单词。

4、文章开头结尾已给出,不计入词数。

【答案】One possible version

Dear Mary,

I’m very glad to introduce(介绍) my classmate Zhang Ying to you. She is a 14-year-old girl. She has a lot of good habits. She gets up early every morning. In class she likes to ask her teachers some questions. After school she always exercises (for a long time). After supper she helps her parents with housework. (She is really a good girl. )But she has some bad habits, too. She often eats junk food for breakfast. Sometimes she quarrels with her classmates in class. She doesn’t go home on time and she always watches TV or plays computer games for more than an

hour in the evening. (This makes her parents unhappy. )I think Zhang Ying is a very good girl. Do you think so?

Yours

Huang Deshun

【解析】

试题分析:这是一篇提纲类作文,题目中给出的材料较为齐全。写作中注意将张颖的情况介绍清楚。根据材料可知,本文主要用一般现在时态,第三人称进行叙述,写作中主语时态及主谓一致等问题。注意不要遗漏要点,做到语句通顺。为了使意思更加连贯可适当使用连接词。

【亮点说明】本文在写作中使用了很多固定句式,如:be glad to do sth高兴做某事;a lot of许多;get up起床等。本文中时间词如After supper,Sometimes,in the evening等的巧妙使用,使得本文看起来逻辑清楚,条理分明。在学习中,我们应注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.

考点:考查提纲类作文

9.假如你是李华,你的美国朋友Jack热爱中国的唐诗宋词。最近他对母亲节你在博客里发的《游子吟》(Song of the parting son)很感兴趣,给你写信想了解该诗,请你根据以下提示给他回信:

1.作者:孟郊

2.时间:唐朝

3.内容:母亲为儿子做衣服

4.主题:母爱的伟大

注意:

1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;

2.语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;

3.词数: 80-100词左右,信件的开头与结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。

Dear Jack,

I’m glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son.

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________

Yours,

【答案】Dear Jack,

I’m glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son. Now I’m writing to tell you something about it.

Song of the parting son is one of the most popular Chinese poems. It was written by Meng Jiao, a famous poet in Tang Dynasty. It describes a common matter in daily life—a mother making clothes for her son, which is familiar to most of us. It mainly shows how great a mother’s love can be. In a word, this short poem has touched many people’s hearts.

If you have any other questions about this poem, please tell me.

Yours,

Li Hua 【解析】

【分析】

这是一篇材料作文。

【详解】

根据内容可知,这是一篇书信类文章。时态是一般现在时。人称是第一人称和第三人称。英语作文一般分为三个部分:

第一部分:交代写信目的——朋友Jack热爱中国的唐诗宋词。我将给你介绍《游子吟》(Song of the parting son)这首诗。

第二部分:文章主体部分——具体介绍《游子吟》(Song of the parting son)这首诗。

1.作者:孟郊

2.时间:唐朝

3.内容:母亲为儿子做衣服

4.主题:母爱的伟大

第三部分:信的结语——如果对方有任何问题,可以继续问自己,并期待收到对方的来信。

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注意:(1)短文必须包括表中所有内容,可适当增加细节;

(2)你的观点至少两条;

(3)词数:80—100;

(4)短文首句仅供选择使用,不计入总词数。

参考词汇:尊重respect

短文首句:I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.

【答案】I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.

Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. After all, study plays a key role in their life. They also agree they should respect their parents, who look after them every day. Besides, they’re ready to serve the society and in their opinion it’s really meaningful. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for future.

From my point of view, we need to make some good friends so that we can learn from each other. Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful life.

【解析】

试题分析:英语教育网站开展主题为“How can a teenager have a successful life?”的讨论,采访了一些同学参与讨论,写出他们的观点及自己的观点。因为是叙述同学的现在的观点,所以句子应该用一般现在时,叙述同学的观点用第三人称,叙述自己的观点用第一人称。注意不要遗漏要点,所写的句子应该符合英语语法,不能是汉语式的句子,要使用一些高级词汇及句式。

写作亮点:短文用了一些短语和句式,如:do a survey about sth关于某事做调查;respect their parents,尊敬他们的父母;look after照顾;make a good plan for sth为某事做一个好的计划;make some good friends交一些好朋友;keep healthy保持健康。用了宾语从句,

如:Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for future.用了because引导的原因状语从句,如:Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful life.增加了文章的亮点,也是提分的经典句子。

考点:材料作文。

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