writing practise_Workplace Correspondence 5_by Woody Chan

Smart Engineering Consultancy

7/F Smart Tower, 27 Expo Road, Central, Hong Kong

Tel: 23501405

14 March 2012

Mr. Alex Carson

General Manager

Crown Insurance

19/F Kings Centre

9 Continent Road

Central

Hong Kong

Dear Mr. Carson,

Re: Information about the Burgling Alarm System AB23

We are profoundly grateful for your correspondence of 10 March in which you express your interest in our burglary alarm system with AB23 model. Please find enclosed our latestbrochure as well as price list.

With regard to your concern for abruptly suspended operation of the system owing to no power, our advised department has tailored a function for filling this gap. Equipped with “Power-off Protection”to supply exceeded power for 48 hours, this sterling function has been being our pride among our products; you, therefore, could be reassured for this issue. Further niceties of this trait areattached for your glance.

Apropos of the volume for storing information,we supposed to be of indubitable sufficiency to address the average workload daily, with 50000 pictures stored or an equivalent of 300 hours of video saved.

To rectify our system, we colossally appreciate your sentiment that the system could notify your staff via SMS automatically in the course of accidences. On your valid admission, the SMS service could have been motivated prior to being our client.

It is undeniable fact that this system necessitate to be duly controlled and to have a professional after-sale technical support furnished.Thereby, the Training Team and the Service Centrewould respectivelycontribute to the training courses and the technical supports lest the system should perplex users. In addition, no sooner would

you receive our call for appointmentsrelated to the preceding serviceswhen you have purchased our system.

Ultimately, should you have any further queries concerning our products or service, please do not hesitate to contact me at the address or phone number provided above.

Sincerely yours,

Sam Cheung

Sam Cheung

Sales Manager

Encl. Brochure of model AB23

Pricelist of other products

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人物介绍 单词 1.achievement n.成就 6. stronge- minded adj.意志坚强的 2.expert n.专家7. outstanding adj.杰出的 3.research v. / n..研究调查8. donate v.捐赠 4.master v.精通掌握9. character n.性格品质 5.well-educated. adj.受过良好教育的 短语 1.be born on …(date) in …(place) into …(family) 出生于 2.be admitted to 被录取 3.at college / in the university 在大学 4.graduated from …(school) at …(time) 毕业于 5.go abroad for futher study 出国深造 6.get the master’s / doctor’s degee 获得硕士/博士学位 7.majored in 主修 8.starred in 主演 9.success in 成功于 10.win the first place / gold medal 赢得第一名 11.the title of 称号 12.be famous for / be known as 著名于 13.devote oneself to do / n. 献身于 14.be devoted to dong / n. 热衷于 15.be determined to dong / n. 坚决做 16.decide to do 决定做 17.be fond of 喜欢 18.make up one’s mind to do 下定决心做 19.change one’s mind 改变决心 20.be strict with 对…严格 21.hold on to the end 坚持到最后 22.face the challenges / presure 面对挑战/压力 23.overcome difficulties 战胜困难 24.sign up for a match / competition 报名参加比赛 25.lead a …(adj.) life 过着…的生活 26.disease in …(place) on …(date) 病于… 27.passed away 与世长辞 篇章 Fei Xiaotong Born into a rich family on Nov.2,1910 , Fei Xiaotong , a famous Chinese sociologist , passed away due to diseasd in Beijing on Apr.24,2005. In 1930 , he was admitted to Tsinghua University in which he first majored in medicine but changed his mind later. And then , he went to England where he got his doctor’s degee for further study . After 1938 , he once tought in Tsinghua University and Peking University. Fei Xiaotong , who devoted himself to the research on sociology , made great contributions to the development of economy in chinese countryside.

summary writing(原文及范文)

summary writing(原文及范文） Writing Directions: For this part, you are to write a summary of either of two articles that are presented to you in the following. Your summary should be 150-200 words. Remember to write neatly. Science and Humanity The twentieth century saw more momentous change than any previous century: change for better, change for worse; change that brought enormous benefits to human beings, change that threatens the very existence of the human species. Many factors contributed to this change but—in my opinion—the most important factor was the progress in science. Academic research in the physical and biological sciences has vastly broadened our horizons; it has given us a deep insight into the structure of matter and of the universe; it has brought better understanding of the nature of life and of its continuous evolution. Technology—the application of science—has made fantastic advances that have affected us beneficially in nearly every aspect of life: better health, more wealth, less drudgery (单调沉闷的工作), greater access to information. Sadly, however, there is another side to the picture. The creativity of science has been employed to the detriment(损害) of mankind. The application of science and technology to the development and manufacture of weapons of mass destruction has created a real threat to the continued existence of the human race on this planet. We have seen this happen in the case of nuclear weapons. Although their actual use in combat has so far occurred only in 1945—when two Japanese cities were destroyed—during the four decades of the Cold War, obscenely huge arsenals(武器库) of nuclear weapons were accumulated and made ready for use. The arsenals were so large that if the weapons had actually been detonated (爆炸) the result could have been the complete extinction of the human species, as well as of many animal species. William Shakespeare said: "The web of our life is of a mingled (混合的) yarn, good and ill together. " The above brief review of the application of only one strand of human activities— science—seems to bear out this adage (格言). But does it have to be so? Must ill always accompany good deeds? Are we biologically programmed for aggression and war? I am not an authority in genetics, but from my readings and life-long observation I do not see any evidence that we are genetically condemned to commit evil. On the contrary, on very general grounds I would say that genetically we are destined to do things that are of benefit to the human species, and that the negative aspects are mistakes, transient errors in the process of evolution. In other words, I believe in the inherent goodness of Man.