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2011年考研英语作文预测九篇热点范文

2011年考研英语作文预测九篇热点范文
2011年考研英语作文预测九篇热点范文

2011年考研英语作文预测范文一:低碳与环保

考研-低碳漫画

作文地带提示:预测只是对2011年考研方向的一个把控,对往年考研作文的一点见解,并不能证明本文就是2011年考研英语作文。希望您参考的同时能够对考研写作思路有个比较深入的认识。

低碳与环保构思点拨

图片中一个小男孩,早已进入甜蜜的梦乡,电视却依然在播放,这时候妈妈走过来帮他关了电视,还责备他为什么总是忘记关电视。显然,直观看来,这幅图是在告诉我们要节约用电。但是,我们如果从更宏观,更深层次的角度去思考,这幅图正是在告诉我们一个流行的生活理念:低碳生活。所以本文旨在倡导一种低碳环保的生活方式。因此本文的内容和结构可如下:

第一段:描述图画;第二段:列举现象,分析影响;第三段:建议措施,展望未来。

思维拓展

环保话题,例如节约能源、拼车、交通问题等图片都可以与低碳生活的理念相联系,从低碳的角度入手展开写作。

高分范文

As is vividly depicted by the drawing above, a boy is sleeping soundly① and comfortably in the sofa, with the television on, when his mother comes and turns off the television for him, blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again②。

This phenomenon can easily be found anywhere in our daily life. Many people are used to doing③everything with the television on, not actually watching it at all. Such a habit can cause waste of much electricity and energy, and result in the emission of carbon. This deviates from the popular concept of “low carbon life” —to reduce the emission of carbon, especially carbon dioxide, to protect our environment and realize sustainable development. According to statistics, if we can decrease the time for having the television on by one hour each day, we can deduce the amount of carbon emission by 4. 71 kilogram each month。

To serve as responsible stewards of the planet④, we must promote and popularize a low carbon life among the public from every detail in our daily life. We must change the past practice of sacrificing long-term environmental health for short-term rapid economic development, and shift to developing green economy, circular economy and low carbon economy. All these effective

measures can help us to reach harmony between development of the society and health of the nature。

佳作妙译

如上图生动地展示,一个小男孩正在沙发上舒适地睡觉,电视还开着。这时候妈妈走过来帮他关了电视,责怪小男孩又忘了关电视。

这种现象在我们的生活中随处可见。很多人习惯于做什么事情都开着电视,实际上并不看。这种习惯会导致电力和能源的浪费,这会导致碳排放。这偏离了流行的“低碳生活”的理念。低碳生活是指,减少碳,尤其是二氧化碳的排放,以保护环境,实现可持续发展。根据统计数据,如果我们每天把开电视的时间减少一小时,则每个月可以减少4. 17千克的碳排放量。

作为对地球负责任的管理者,我们必须在公众中推广并普及低碳的生活方式,从日常生活中的每个细节开始。我们必须要改变为了获得短期的快速经济发展,牺牲长期的环境健康的做法,转向发展绿色经济、循环经济以及低碳经济。所有这些有效的措施可以帮助我们实现社会发展与自然有序发展之间的和谐。

名师点评

①is sleeping soundly: 熟睡,也可以表达为A boy is fast asleep。“soundly and comfortably”这类副词的加入,使得描述更生动活泼,而不是单调的主谓宾。

②A boy is sleeping soundly and comfortably in the sofa, with the television on, when his mother comes and turns off the television for him, blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again。

该句主干结构是:A boy is sleeping, when his mother comes and turns off the television。

这个句型的含义是:一件事情正在发生(正在睡觉),突然发生了另一件事(妈妈来关电视)。

“with the television on”:with 引导的伴随结构,即A boy is sleeping, while the television is on. 也可以写成伴随状语A boy is sleeping, forgetting to turn off the television。

“blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again”,这句是妈妈关电视的伴随动作,一边关电视,一边责怪孩子忘记关电视。

图画描述这句,写得越精彩越好,这句是先入为主的句子,也是阅卷老师重点看的句子。

③ are used to doing: 习惯于做某事,使用短语表达,地道准确。

④ to serve as responsible stewards of the planet:这是2005年真题阅读中的原句,的文章里面的句型,引用的标准到位。

一般而言,环保类话题,都可以用这句话,引出第三段的个人评论。

作文地带提示您:历年真题是一座巨大的宝库,我们一定要充分利用,举一反三。2011年考研英语作文预测范文二:网络的利与弊

到底听谁的?

思路点拨

本图中,一个女孩正在因一个问题感到困惑,“10牛的水是否产生10牛的浮力?”。于是她上网求助于网友,网友的答案更是五花八门,说对说错的都有。女孩更加困惑。由此可见,这幅图反应了这样一个现实:网络文化有利也有

弊。因此本文可以这样设计:

第一段:描述图画;第二段:网络的利+举例,网络的弊+举例;第三段:提出建议措施——取其精华,去其糟粕。

思路拓展

所有利弊型的文章,均可按照本范文提供的思路进行论述。例如,城市化的利与弊。大学扩招的利与弊等。

作文地带整理高分范文:

Just as what is shown in the picture, a girl is asking a question online. Answers from different netizens differ so greatly that the girl is very confused about whom she should follow①. It is obvious that it is becoming a fashion for people to ask questions online when confronting a dilemma。

The implication implicit in the drawing can be elaborated as follows. On the one hand, the Internet has provided us with great convenience. For example, we can get knowledge about nearly all aspects onthe Internet with only several keyboard commands and a few clicks of the mouse through search engines such as Baidu and so on. On the other hand, with an explosive amount of information on the Internet②, it can be difficult to tell good information from bad③. For example, teenagers and adolescents may mistake the bad information online as good, the result of which can be rather devastating. Some dirty information on the net may exert negative impacts on people。

In conclusion, on the one hand, it is important for us to take full advantage of Internet to enhance our efficiency and save our time. On the other hand, effective steps should be taken to educate people to avoid and elude inappropriate and even wrong data online so as not to be misguided. Only in this way can the net better serve for our life, study and work④。

佳作妙译

如图所示,图片中一个女孩正在网上问一个问题,来自于网友的答案差异太大了,以至于女孩很困惑到底该听谁的。很明显,人们面临困境的时候上网提问的现象已经成为一种时尚。

这幅图所隐含的意义可以阐释如下。一方面,因特网为我们提供了很大便利。例如,通过百度等搜索引擎键入一些命令、点击几下鼠标,我们就可以获得几乎各个领域的知识。另一方面,由于因特网上有海量的信息,很难区分好的信息和坏的信息。例如青少年可能会把错误的信息误认为是正确的,其结果是非常具有毁灭性的。网上的一些不健康信息也可能会给人们带来负面影响。

总之,一方面,充分利用因特网来提高效率,节约时间,这很重要。另一方面,应该采取有效的措施教育人们去排除网上不合适的甚至错误的数据,以免被误导。只有这样,网络才能更好地为我们的生活、学习和工作服务。

名师点评

① so… that 句型:如此……以至于……。

② with an explosive amount of information on the Internet: 这是2004年真题阅读第一篇中的句型。

③it can be difficult to tell good information from bad: 这是2003年真题阅读第一篇中的

句型。可见,充分了解真题阅读,对于提高写作的帮助作用也很大。

④ Only in this way can the net better serve for our life, study and work:倒装句。

倒装句的写法(部分倒装):

原句:The net can better serve for our life, study and work only in this way。

only放在句首,把情态动词can和主语交换一下位置就写成了倒装句。

2011年考研英语作文热点预测范文三:醉酒驾车与安全意识与社会责任问题

醉酒驾车与安全意识、社会责任

思路点拨

图画中一个已经喝得烂醉如泥的司机,车顶上还驮着一瓶巨大的啤酒,汽车却依然在路上飞驰。虽然这幅图有点夸张,但是它却反映了一个触目惊心的安全问题:醉酒驾车。写作时可以按照以下的脉络展开论述:

第一段:描述图画;第二段:分两个分论点进行论述:提高安全意识、提高社会责任感;第三段:建议措施、强调后果。思维拓展

实际上,本文的内容和行文思路,不仅仅适用于醉酒驾车,还适用于所有关于安全事故和社会责任的图片话题。

例如,火灾、漏油事故、施工事故、违反交规等等一系列与安全或社会责任感相关的话题,都可以参考此文。

只需要把第一段中间那句图画描述替换掉即可。

参考下图片:

参考作文-地带整理高分范文

What a scary and sensational scene it is! In the drawing, the driver, as drunken as a fiddler①, is driving fast on the road, with a large bottle of beer on the top of his car. What is conveyed by the picture has both realistic and alarming implications for each member of the country。

The profound meaning of the vivid drawing can be elaborated in terms of both awareness of security and social responsibility. For one thing, consciousness of safety should be one of our top priorities.Life is one-way journey: you cannot experience it twice. So life is to be respected and awed②. It is cruel to and inhumane to spell the end of any life, with a careless driving under the influence (DUI)③.For another, to act as a responsible member of the society, each of us should bear social responsibility. We do not live only for ourselves but also for those whom we love and who love us. It is irresponsible to claim either lives of drivers or lives of other victims are not important, leaving the families and relatives into deep grief and, may be, great living burden④。

In short, it is imperative that legislative measures should be taken by the authority to punish drunk drivers severely such as suspending their driving licenses or even putting them into jail. Besides,the mass media, such as TV, radio and website, should work together to enhance awareness of security and sense of responsibility to reduce the rate of car accident。

佳作妙译

这是一幅多么可怕的触目惊心的场景啊!在这幅图中,烂醉如泥的司机正在马路上飞速行驶,车上还顶着一大瓶啤酒。这幅图所传达的意义,对我们国家的每一位成员,都具有现实和警醒的意义。

这幅栩栩如生的图画的深刻意义可以从安全意识和社会责任感两个角度阐释。一方面,安全意识应该是我首要重视的问题。生命是一次单程旅行:你不能经历两次生命。所以我们应该敬重生命、敬畏生命。由于醉酒驾车的疏忽而宣告任何一条生命的结束是残忍的、不人道的。另一方面,作为这个社会负责任的一员,我们每个人都应该去承担社会责任。我们不仅仅是为了自己活着,我们也为那些我们所爱的和爱我们的人活着。无论是声称司机的、还是受害者的生命不重要,都是不负责任的。因为这会给他们的家人和亲戚带来巨大的悲痛和沉重的生活负担。

简言之,官方应该制定立法措施严厉地惩罚醉酒驾车的司机,例如吊销驾照或进行监禁。立法措施势在必行。此外,电视、收音机、网站等大众传媒应该共同努力来提高公民的安全意识和责任感,以降低交通事故的发生率。

名师点评

① as drunken as a fiddler: 醉得像一个游荡者。实际上是一个比喻,相当于汉语中的烂醉如泥。用语非常形象生动,一个酩酊大醉的司机形象跃然纸上!

② Life is one-way journey: you cannot experience it twice:非常富有哲理性,语言优美、地道。respected and awed: 敬重和敬畏,语言简洁、有力、到位。

③ DUI: 醉酒驾车,也可以写成:drunk driving。

④ leaving…:动词的ing形式作伴随状语。句型经典。

2011年考研英语作文热点预测范文四:大学生就业:放低姿态、平常心做人

大学生就业

思路点拨

在画中,一位正在找工作的年轻女孩,毫不犹豫地拒绝了一份服务岗位的工作,不屑一顾地说:“伺候人的工作我不干”。这幅图表明,很多年轻人找工作时,眼光过高,不切实际,没有用平常心对待就业问题。实际上,可以先就业后择业。所以这篇图画作文可以这样创作:第一段:描述图画;第二段:两个角度分析这种现象的原因:志存高远,不愿意从底层做起;好逸恶劳;第三段:建议措施:教育年轻人要脚踏实地;根除好逸恶劳的思想。

思维拓展

关于平常心态做人、脚踏实地的话题还可以有很多,例如城市选择问题、院校报考问题、专业选择问题、股市问题,均可以从这个角度出发,进行展开论述。请参考下图:

平常心对待就业等问题

高分范文

As is vividly depicted by the drawing above, the job-hunting girl refuses a service post without any hesitation, complaining that she will never take a job of serving others①. At the same time she is wondering why finding a promising job is so difficult in modern society②。

This phenomenon can easily be found anywhere in our daily life③, especially on campus. On the one hand, many job-seekers are reluctant to take jobs that they consider to be humble and trivial, such as being a secretary or an assistant, because they have great ambitions and they only want to ride on the peak of success. What is amazing is that they are not conscious that ambition is to be achieved step by step④. On the other hand, wanting to gain more but pay less, both the jobless and graduating students aspire to seek a job that is well-paid, relaxed and comfortable. This kind of “no work, all play” attitude toward life can be destructive to both personal and social development. We should not look down upon service industry, the third industry, because it does provide us with many employment opportunities and positions⑤。

Therefore, it is high time that we took effective measures to improve the current situation. For one thing, an education campaign should be launched to popularize the idea that “the longest journey starts with a single step” and to cultivate a down-to-earth attitude toward life. For another, the tendency of being lazy must be eradicated from the mind of the young. Only in this way can people realize their value of life better and can unemployment rate be reduced and thus can social harmony be achieved⑥。

佳作妙译

正如上面的漫画所示,这个找工作的女孩毫不犹豫地拒绝了一个服务岗位,她还抱怨一直找不到工作。同时她还纳闷为什么在如今找个有前途的工作这么难。

这种现象在我们的生活中随处可见,尤其在校园里更加明显。一方面,很多求职者不愿意从事秘书或助理等工作,他们认为这些是卑微且无足轻重的。他们有更大的抱负,想直接登上成功的顶峰。可是他们没有意识到理想抱负是需要一步一步实现的。另一方面,很多失业者和毕业生都想少劳多得,想得到一份轻松舒适而且薪水不菲的工作。这种“好逸恶劳”的生活态度对个人和社会的发展都是很不利的。我们不应看不起服务业,第三产业,因为它确实为我们提供了很多工作机会和职位。

因此,采取一些必要措施来改善这种情况已经是当务之急。一方面,应该发起一场教育运动来普及这种“千里之行,始于足下”的理念和脚踏实地的生活态度。另一方面,要把懒惰的思想从青少年的思想中根除。只有这样人们才能更好地实现自己的人生价值,才能让失业率大幅下降,才能实现社会和谐。

名师点评

① complaining that she will never take a job of serving others:伴随状语。

② why finding a promising job is so difficult in modern society: 这个句子充当了整个句子的宾语,叫做宾语从句。

特殊疑问词why, what, when等引导的宾语从句必须使用正常的陈述语序,不得使用主谓倒装的形式。

例如,这句就不能写成:why is finding a promising job so difficult in modern society?finding a promising job是主语。is是系动词。

再如:I don?t kn ow what his name is。

绝对不能写成:I don?t know what is his name。

③ 2008年真题阅读选项中的句子。

原句为:Political compromises are easily found throughout the U. S. history。

稍加改动,变成了一个个性化的句子引入第二段内容的模板,虽然没有华丽的辞藻,但是非常精彩和纯正。

④ be conscious that: 意识到,that后边必须接完整的主谓宾结构。

这个表达等同于be aware that,可以进行同意替换。

此外:be conscious of 和be aware of 在意思上也等同于这两者,表示意识到。

但是:be conscious of 和be aware of后边要接单词或者短语,一般不能加句子。

⑤ the third industry: 第三产业,是service industry(服务业)的同位语。

同位语其实一般都是废话,等同于前面的词。

巧妙地使用同位语,可以把单调的句子变得错落有致、抑扬顿挫。

it does provide us with: does在句中表强调,翻译成“确实”。

⑥ Only in this way can… realize… and can… be… and thus can… be…:排比句,短促有力,气势强大,使得对未来的展望显得信心十足!

普通的被考生用烂了的这个句型:Only in this way can we live in a harmonious society,被本文的作者巧妙地改写成了一个精彩的排比句。

这样的作文,怎么能不得高分呢!

2011年考研英语作文热点预测范文五:节约资源

储蓄水滴,储蓄幸福

思路点拨

本图描述的场景是一副令人喜闻乐见的图画,图画中,一只可爱的小猪造型的储蓄罐,正在接住自来水里滴下来的水滴,像存钱一样,存储水滴。实际上,它储存的不是水,它储存的是幸福。我们可以看出,人们有了节水意识。但是,从正在滴水的水龙头看,还是有人忽略了节约用水这一问题。因此,本文可以这样写作:

第一段:描述图画;第二段:分析有些人浪费水的心理,并阐述水资源的宝贵;第三段:建议措施。

思维拓展

实际上,积极正面的图片写作,和揭示负面现象的文章没有什么本质上的区别,只要我们笔锋一转,就能把它继续按照原来的套路写。

本文也可以从低碳、环保的角度出发进行写作。

关于节约能源的话题,都可以按照这个行文思路和语言模式进行展开。

参考下图:

高分范文

Water used to be mistaken to be an unlimited and renewable resource. Actually, water resource is very limited and precious. It is fortunate that now the public is starting to pay attention①. Just as is depicted in the picture, just like saving money, the lovely and smiling piggy bank is collecting every drop of water falling from the water tap。

However, water shortage is still a serious problem threatening the existence and survival of the whole human being, and yet the phenomenon of wasting water can still easily be found anywhere in our daily life②. For example, water taps are frequently left on by careless users. Someone even assumes that they have the right to waste water because they pay for it so that it has nothing to do with others. In fact, so precious is water that we cannot afford to waste it③. Water resource is indispensable④not only in our daily life but also in the industry and agriculture. And water is the wealth of the whole mankind, and it is hard to imagine what the world would be like⑤when there is no more water。

Even though an increasing number of people have become aware of⑥this emergency, further measures still need to be taken. On the macro level, the whole world should make a joint effort to fight against waste of water. On the micro level, publicizing activities, such as broadcasting wonderful ways on how to save water on TV and other media, should be conducted. To store water means to store happiness and only by saving water can we save a better life for our offspring。

佳作妙译

水资源一度被误认为是一种无限的可再生资源,实际上,水资源是非常有限且宝贵的。有幸的是现在公众开始关注这一问题了。如图所示,一只可爱的快乐小猪存钱罐积攒着水龙头里流出的每一滴水,就像存钱一样。

然而,水资源短缺问题仍然威胁着全人类的生存和发展。浪费水的现象在日常生活中仍然随处可见。例如,经常有粗心大意者忘记关水龙头。更有甚者认为自己缴了水费就有权浪费,与他人无关。事实上,水资源不仅在生活中必不可少,在工农业生产中也是不可或缺的。水资源是全人类共同的财富,很难想象当没有水的时候世界会是什么样子。

虽然越来越多的人已经认识到了这种紧迫性,但是仍然要采取进一步的措施。从宏观层面上讲,全世界应该共同努力反对浪费水。从微观层面上讲,要进行广泛的宣传活动。比如在电视台播出关于如何节水的节目。节约用水就是存储幸福,只有节约用水才能为子孙后代存储更好的生活。

名师点评

① It is fortunate that now the public is starting to pay attention: 来自于2005年阅读真题,原句是这样的:Fortunately, the White House is starting to pay attention。

历年真题是一座巨大的宝库,广大考生一定要学会充分利用这宝贵的资源!

②第二段开头,用了一个转折词,也就是“起承转合”中的所谓的“转”,把这篇作文改造成了一篇社会问题型作文,也就是大家最擅长写的作文。

③ In fact, so precious is water that we cannot afford to waste it: 倒装句,表语提前,句子倒装。

倒装句写法:

第一步:写正常原句:Water is so precious that we cannot afford to waste it。

第二步:表语precious提前。

第三步:主谓倒置,变成So precious is water that we cannot afford to waste it。

普通的so… that… 句型,也能被化腐朽为神奇,成为钻石加分句型!

④ indispensable: 不可或缺的,替换important的一个很好的词汇。

顺便讲一个英译汉的技巧:大家可以看到,在译文中,这句话被翻译两次:必不可少、不可或缺。

因为原文中出现了:not only… but also,所以这个单词被拆开翻译成了两个近义词,以使行文更加通顺。

⑤ what the world would be like:注意宾语从句必须用陈述语序。

⑥ become aware of: 意识到。意思和用法都等同于be conscious of。后边接词语。

⑦非常重要:一般而言,历年真题中谈到的正面话题,或者人生哲理类的文章,有可能题目要求会变成:

Joozone's Directions:

Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should

(1) describe the drawing briefly,

(2) explain its intended meaning, and then

(3) support your view with an example/examples。

也就是第三段并非发表个人评论(建议措施),而是举例,这时候就需要我们去调整一下文章的叙述方法。

这种情况下,我们可以把结尾段调整为:

Examples of people?s increasing awareness on saving water can easily be found anywhere in our life. On the macro level, the whole world is making a joint effort to fight against waste of water. On the micro level, publicizing activities, such as broadcasting wonderful ways on how to save water on TV and other media, can be seen nearly anywhere and every day. In short, to store water means to store happiness and only by saving water can we save a better life for our offspring。

这样的话,结尾段就从建议措施,变成了论证文章的示例。

可见,随机应变,对写好考研作文也很重要。

2011年考研英语作文热点预测范文六:面对人生与社会:乐观与豁达

乐观与豁达

思路点拨

图画中的一只小绵羊,正呆在一块大石头的阴影下面。但是它乐观、豁达地认为,有阴影,那么就说明有阳光。这幅图无疑向我们传达了一种健康的人生哲学:乐观生活、达观处世。由于这是一篇人生哲理类文章,所以文章安排可以相对自由一些:

第一段:描述图画;第二段:利用正反举例论证悲观与乐观的差距+总结句;第三段:倡导一种乐观生活、达观处世的人生态度和人生哲学。思维拓展

本文也可以从世界观、人生观的角度入手。

相反,如果是一幅表明悲观厌世的图片,我们也可以采取同样的手法进行处理。

高分范文

As is apparently revealed in the cartoon above, the sheep lives happily in an optimistic state of mind, ignoring the threat of a dark shade, because he believes that where there is shadow, there is sunshine①. What is conveyed in the picture is both positive and illuminating。

As far as the purpose of the drawer is concerned, I think he intends to remind us of the importance of optimism. If the sheep in the cartoon feels anxious and pessimistic about the dark shade all day long, he can by no means have a comfortable and happy life. Examples like this are numerous, but I think the following one will be convincing enough. If there is half a cup of water, the pessimist may cry over it because they have only a half, while②the optimist may cheer for it because they still have a half. Obviously, they will have different perceptions and feelings③toward the same life。

There is no denying that, most optimists have a high happiness index, which can hardly be experienced by pessimists. Therefore, we must read our life with a positive attitude. What?s more, the optimistic attitude can infect others strongly, meaning that we will find that all the friends around us are optimistic if we observe them in the same perspective. As a result, an atmosphere of optimism and happiness could be naturally set up. Therefore, let?s keep the famous line of Shelley, the well-known poet, in mind for ever, that is, “If winter comes, can spring be far behind?”④佳作妙译

上面的漫画清楚地表现出这只山羊不顾阴影的威胁仍然保持乐观,因为它相信有阴影的地方就一定有阳光。图片中反映的问题是积极的和富有启发性的。

我认为作者要表达的意义是要提醒我们保持乐观心态的重要性。如果漫画中的山羊终日悲观地生活在阴影中,它将永远无法获得舒适和幸福的生活。类似的例子千千万,但是我认

为下面的例子就足够有说服力。如果这里有半杯水,悲观的人会抱怨只剩下半杯了,而乐观的人在庆幸还有半杯可以喝。显然,面对同样的生活,他们会有不同的感受。

毫无疑问,乐观者拥有更高的幸福指数,而悲观者永远也体会不到。因此我们必须以积极的态度面对生活。而且乐观的情绪能强烈地感染他人,这就意味着如果我们以乐观的视角面对周围的朋友们,他们也会同样地乐观。于是,乐观和幸福的气氛自然而然地就建立起来了。因此,让我们把著名诗人雪莱的名句铭记在心吧:冬天来了,春天还会远么?

名师点评

① where there is shadow, there is sunshine: 这句话读起来是不是很熟悉?

没错,它正是仿写了我们非常熟悉的谚语“Where there is a will, there is a way”:有志者,事竟成。

作者将这句话仿写得惟妙惟肖,可见作者对语言驾驭是何等的娴熟。

② while: 表示两种现象的对比、反差,常翻译成“而”。

③ perceptions and feelings: 近义词叠加。

近义词叠加也是一种向阅卷老师展示自己语言能力和词汇量的一种极为有效的手段。

翻译:只翻译出一种意思即可。即,这两个词合译为:感受。

④ Therefore, let?s keep the famous line of shelley, the well-known poet, in mind for ever, that is, “If winter comes, can spring be far behind?”

全文的点睛之笔,堪称经典。

首先:keep sth. in mind 这个词组用得很地道。

其次:引用了雪莱的诗歌,表现出了深厚的文化底蕴。

第三:the famous line=“If winter comes, can spring be far behind?”即后者为前者的同位语。

同位语的介入,使句子结构错落有致,层次分明,朗朗上口。

第四:著名诗句“If winter comes, can spring be far behind?”淋漓尽致地诠释了乐观的生活态度。

实际上,历年真题的阅读中又何曾没有出现过这种模仿呢?广大考生可以去查阅2007年text 3中的最后一句:The financial fallout has begun, and the political fallout may not be far behind。

⑤非常重要:本题题目要求最后一段也可能会变成:

support your view with an example/examples。

这时候,我们可以把文章的结尾改写为:

Examples of optimistic attitude toward life can easily be found anywhere in our world. How would have Zhang Haidi, suffering from the high paraplegia, made such glowing achievements in life, without her strong mind and optimistic attitude? Facing the serious diseases and hardships in life, she did not choose to hold back. Instead, she has been courageous and optimistic enough to defeat them. She has set an excellent example for us。

2011年考研英语作文热点预测范文七:商业行贿

商业行贿

构思点拨

上图表现的是在“尚方宝剑”严惩的威严下,一位从事商业贿赂的人落荒而逃。不言而喻,这幅图反映的是当今一种比较猖獗的社会现象:商业贿赂。深层次来讲,就是道德问题、责任问题。本文的内容和结构安排如下:

第一段:描述图画;第二段:从两个角度分析影响+分析动机;第三段:建议措施。

思维拓展

此类文章可以展开的角度有:金钱观,商业道德建设、职业道德建设,公平竞争。相似的图片比比皆是。请参考下图:

高分范文

There is no doubt that this cartoon vividly depicts a negative but rampant scenario in modern society: commercial bribery. Frightened by the sharp punishment sword, the man, carrying a large pile of money used as bribery①, is trying his best to escape. What is conveyed by the drawing is both realistic and thought-provoking。

The implication of the given picture can be elaborated in terms of the decline of work-moral values and the view on money. For one thing, commercial bribery has a very damaging and destructive②effect on the whole society. Firstly, moral deficiencies as well as the humanity

weakness revealed in the action of bribery③may stain and pollute the atmosphere of professional ethics and cause others to copy. Secondly, fair competition may be threatened because bribery puts honest businessmen at a disadvantaged position. For another, the bad behavior of commercial bribery is largely driven b y “profit”,showing that those people who are involved in bribery do not have a right view on money. It is true that money is indispensable④, but, there is no denying that money should be obtained and spent in a reasonable, wise and legitimate way。

To eliminate the immoral behavior of bribery thoroughly⑤, drastic actions should be taken and severe punishment measures should be adopted. Besides, a positive mental guidance on the right attitude to money should be popularized among the public. Only in this way can we have a fair and sound social environment。

佳作妙译

毫无疑问这幅漫画生动地描述了现代社会一种负面的但是却十分猖獗的现象:商业贿赂。由于惧怕严厉的惩罚,这个人背着一大堆贿赂用的钱落荒而逃。漫画的寓意是十分现实并发人深思的。

上图的寓意可以理解为详细阐述了在金钱冲击下职业道德的沦陷。一方面,商业贿赂对全社会造成恶劣的、毁灭性的影响。首先在贿赂行为中表现出的道德缺陷和人性弱点会破坏和污染职业道德的氛围,不良分子也会效仿。其次,行贿者将破坏公平竞争,诚信经营的商人被置于不利地位。另一方面,商业贿赂行为大多是被利益驱动的,这说明这些人对金钱没有正确的态度。没有金钱的确是万万不能的,但对待金钱,无疑需要取之有道,用之有度。

为了彻底根除贿赂这种道德败坏的行为,应该采取严厉的惩罚措施。另外,应该在公众中逐渐普及正确的金钱观。只有这样,我们才能拥有公平、健全的社会环境。

名师点评

① money used as bribery: 过去分词作定语=定语从句。

写过去分词做定语的步骤:

第一步:写成定语从句:money which is used as bribery;

第二步:省略引导词“which”和be动词“is”变成money used as bribery。

这样,一个定语从句就变成了过去分词做定语。

② damaging and destructive: 近义词叠用,押韵:头韵

③revealed in the action of bribery: 过去分词作定语,修饰前面的moral deficiencies as well as the humanity weakness,写法参考本文点评第①条。

④ It is true that money is indispensable: It作形式主语,真正的主语是that从句。

⑤ To eliminate the immoral behavior of…: 为了……。作目的状语。

2011年考研英语作文热点预测范文八:城市交通

大家可以看下近些日子里北京的城市交通问题,作文地带认为,这是个很热点的问题,希望大家作为重点里的重点参考。

城市交通

思路点拨

此图片描述的是一幅交通堵塞的场景。图片中,车一辆接着一辆地堵在街上,各种抱怨声不断。毫无疑问,这幅图反映的是城市交通的压力问题。同时,汽车过多就意味着尾气排放过多,所以这幅图同时又反映了环保和低碳问题。

第一段:描述图画;第二段:分析交通堵塞给人和环境带来的影响;第三段:建议措施。

思维拓展

建议措施部分,还可以从如下角度提出:

呼吁政府:投资完善基础设施、继续坚持限行的制度。

倡导低碳出行:步行、骑自行车。

倡导理智选择城市:人全部拥挤在大城市带来的负面影响。

高分范文

How horrible the traffic is! The picture depicts a scenario of a terrible traffic jam in the street. In fact, the traffic jam is so heavy that it is more of a parking lot than a crowded street①. Anxious passengers cannot take buses because there are few buses. Instead, the street is filled w ith too many private cars。

Exaggerated as it is, the phenomenon is not uncommon nowadays. With the number of private cars increasing②, traffic jams in metropolitans are bound to happen. Heavy transportation pressure in large cities may bring much inconvenience to people and exert negative impacts on the environment. On the one hand, when traffic jam happens, short distance in the past now seems to become terribly long, and drivers could do nothing but to wait. Therefore, a lot of precious time has been wasted on the road. On the other hand, exhausted gas emitted by cars③has increased the burden of environment and caused carbon emission, which has diverted from the concept of living a low carbon life。

Therefore, effective measures should be taken to alleviate the traffic jam. Firstly, taxes levied on the sales of private cars④should be raised so as to restrict private car ownership rate. Secondly, public transportation such as buses and subways, which are low-carbon transportation means, should be encouraged and promoted so that we can have a smooth transportation。

佳作妙译

交通状况真是一团糟!这幅漫画描述了街上糟糕的交通堵塞的场景。实际上,交通堵塞严重到了一定程度,与其说这是一条拥挤的街道,还不如说这是一个停车场。焦急的乘客等不到数量稀少的公交车,而私家车却到处都是。

虽然这幅图有点夸张,但是当今这种现象并不罕见。私家车的增多必然产生大城市交通堵塞。大城市沉重的交通压力会给人民生活带来不便,也会对环境造成负面影响。一方面,一旦发生堵车,原来很近的路程似乎变得十分漫长,除了等没有别的办法,大量的宝贵时间被浪费在路上。另一方面,汽车排放的尾气更增加了环境的负担、导致了碳排放,这和低碳生活的理念相违背。

因此,应该采取有效措施缓解严重的交通堵塞问题。第一,通过提高税费限制私家车拥有率(保有量)。第二,应该鼓励和推广低碳的公交车、地铁等公共交通工具,以便我们拥有更顺畅的交通。

名师点评

① it is more of a parking lot than a crowded street: more of A than B的结构,通过字面可以理解成:更多的是A而不是B。

翻译的时候,往往翻译成:与其说是B,不如说是A。

反过来,当我们想用英语表达“与其……不如……”的时候,我们可以采用这个结构。

实际上,这个结构在历年真题阅读中曾多次出现。如2000年Text 3中的选项:Futurist poetry is more of a transient phenomenon than literature。

② With the number of private cars increasing: with 短语表伴随,翻译成“随着”。

③ exhausted gas emitted by cars: 其中emitted by cars是过去分词短语作后置定语。

相当于定语从句:gas which is emitted by cars(被汽车排放的尾气)。

写法:请参考《商业行贿》点评第①条。

④ taxes levied on the sales of private cars: 其中levied on the sales of private cars(针对私家车被征的税),为过去分词做定语。写法:请参考《商业行贿》点评第①条。

2011年考研英语作文热点预测范文九:科技与生活

科技与生活

思路点拨

图中描述的是武广高铁的开通,给城际交通带来了极大便利。表面上看,它反映的是城市与城市之间距离被“缩短”的问题,但是更深层次来讲,是科技带来了这一切,所以这幅图可以有两个切入点:城际交通、科技改变生活。本文作者选取了第二个角度为主要论述视角。

第一段:图画描述;第二段:两个角度论述科学技术是第一生产力;第三段:提出建议、展望未来。

思维拓展

科技的话题,实际上是映射热点问题:上海世博。

世博的主题“城市让生活更美好”,其中一个侧面就是城市与科技。

可以反映“科技”主题的图片有很多,如现代通讯、网络等。

例如下图,表面上看是反对迷信,深层含义实际上就是崇尚科学。

高分范文

As is vividly depicted by the picture above, a traveler happily starts his journey by high-speed railway from Guangzhou to Wuhan. In the year of 2009, Wuhan-Guangzhou high-speed railway went into operation, reducing travelling time from 12 hours to 3 hours, bringing much convenience to the transportation between the two cities①. No wonder the caption in the picture says “with the Wu-Guang high-speed railway, cities far away is just like a place nearby”。

Science and technology are the primary productive forces② and have been playing a key role in the national economy development. On the one hand, progress in science and technology has promoted economic and social progress greatly. Take the high-speed railway as an example. Firstly, the railway becomes a new engine③of booming of regional economic. Secondly, the railway helps to attract a lot of tourists, so that tourism in these cities flourishes. Last but not the least, the load of the existing transportation network can be released to a great extent. On the other hand, with the development of science and technology, such as the operation of high-speed transportation, video phone, webcam meeting, the world has become smaller and smaller。

It has long been a tradition for Chinese government to attach great importance to the advances④in science and technology. Science and technology has successfully shaped an entirely new image of China on global stage via the two grand world events, 2008 Olympic Games and 2010 Shanghai World Expo. It is strongly advised that young people should devote themselves into the study of science and technology for “better city, better life”。

佳作妙译

如上图所示,一位旅客从广州踏上了去往武汉的高速铁路。2009年,武广高铁正式建成通车,将两地之间的行程从12小时缩短到3小时,极大地方便了两地的交通。难怪这幅漫画上写道“有了武广高铁,每个城市都在家门口”。

科技是第一生产力,在国民经济发展中扮演着重要角色。一方面,科技的进步促进了经济社会的快速进步。高速铁路就是鲜活的例子。首先这条铁路成为地区经济发展新的引擎。其次铁路吸引了大量游客,这些城市的旅游业随之繁荣起来。再次这条铁路很大程度上缓解了现有线路的运输压力。另一方面,随着科技的发展,高速铁路,视频电话,视频会议等应用会越来越多,世界将变得越来越小。

中国政府一直很重视科技的发展,通过2008北京奥运会和2010上海世博两件盛事,科技成功地重塑了中国在世界舞台上的国际形象。因此青少年要怀着“城市,让生活更美好”的信念,积极投身到对科技文化知识的学习上。

名师点评

① reducing…, bringing…: 并列的两个现在分词短语作状语。

② Science and technology are the primary productive forces:科学技术是第一生产力。这是任何一篇与科技相关的文章都可以用的万能句型。

③a new engine: 一个新的引擎,这是一个形象的比喻,把科技对经济发展的动力表达得非常具体、形象。

涉及到科技、发展、环境等题目时,不可避免的就需要用到发展这个词,本文中“发展”,多次出现,作者采用了多样化的词汇:“development(n。)”,“progress (n。)”,“flourish(v。)”,“boom(v. /n. )”,“advance”。

这类词汇还有:“prosperous(adj。)”,“improve(v。)”等。

近义词的多种替换方式,使得文章在统一中富于变化。广大考生可以把这些词汇积累下来,应用到自己的写作中去,也能起到妙笔生花的效果。

④如果题目要求最后一段举例,则我们可以把文章的结尾改成例子:如手机、因特网等是如何提高了生活效率的。

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思路点拨

图片中共有三个内容:陶瓷花瓶、功夫熊猫、麻将牌。这三种形象都是典型的中国元素。正如图片的名称“欧洲的…中国热?”所说,一种学习中国传统文化和汉语语言的热潮正在欧洲悄然兴起。毫无疑问,本图的主题是:弘扬中国文化,以及中国国际形象、国际地位的上升。全文行思路可如下:

第一段:分别描述图画中体现出的中国元素;第二段:分析外国人对中华文化的兴趣提升的原因+举例;第三段:对待民族文化的正确态度。

思维拓展

保护文物、文明遗产、名胜古迹的图片也可以从捍卫和弘扬民族文化的角度入手加以分析论证。参考下图:

高分范文

In the picture, we can see that there are some vases made of china, which are typical products in China since ancient time. An image of a panda playing Kung Fu① is carved on the surface of the vases, in which both Panda and Kung Fu are the symbols of Chinese elements. Besides, the Chinese mahjong which is growing out of a vase is also a typical Chinese element。

It is obvious that the main purpose of the picture is to reflect the phenomenon of “China fever”,referring to a foreign passion and enthusiasm② on Chinese elements, especially culture.

There are reasons accounting for the growing interest in Chinese elements. For one thing, for the past decades, China has made conspicuous progress in all fields such as economy, science and technology, and comprehensive strength of China has been enhanced greatly. For another, due to the progress, China presents a new image to the world and is becoming increasingly attractive and appealing③to the whole world. Nearly every day news stories are reported and broadcasted④about what is going on in and around China. And By 2010, there are 72 Confucius Institutes in 26 European countries established to spread Chinese language and culture⑤。

Toward this kind of “China craze”,we should hold a right attitude. On the one hand, we should take pride in the “China craze” by foreigners, which originates from the increasing prestige of China. On the other hand, it is the responsibility of each Chinese citizen to popularize and promote excellent traditional Chinese culture and guard a favorable image of our motherland。

佳作妙译

这幅图中我们可以看到一些瓷制的花瓶,这是中国自古以来的典型产品。瓶身上画着一只正在练习中国功夫的熊猫,熊猫和功夫同样是中国文化的代表。此外,花瓶中长出的“麻将”也是典型的中国元素。

这幅漫画的主要目的是反映“中国热”的现象,即国外对中国元素尤其是中华文化的一种追捧和热情。国外对中国元素兴趣上升的这种现象是有原因的。首先,过去的几十年中,中国在经济、科技等各个领域都取得了显著的进步,中国的综合国力已经大幅提升。另一方面,由于这些进步,中国以崭新的形象出现在世人面前,在全世界越来越有吸引力。几乎每天都有很多关于中国及其周边正在发生的新闻报道。截止到2010年,已经有26个欧洲国家建立了72所孔子学院来传播中国语言和文化。

对于这种“中国热”的现象我们应该持有正确的态度。一方面我们应该为外国人的“中国热”感到自豪,这源于中国声望的提高。另一方面,弘扬优秀的中国传统文化和捍卫祖国的形象,是每一位中国公民的责任。

名师点评

① a panda playing Kung Fu: 正在练中国功夫的熊猫。其中playing Kung Fu 是后置定语修饰panda。

现在分词作后置定语的写法:

第一步:写出定语从句:a panda that is playing Kung Fu;

第二步:把引导词“that”和be动词“is”一起省略;

② passion and enthusiasm: 近义词叠加,加强语气和气势。

③ attractive and appealing: 近义词叠加,加强语气和气势。

④ reported and broadcasted: 近义词叠加,加强语气和气势。

⑤ Confucius Institutes in 26 European countries established to spread Chinese language and culture: 其中“established… culture”是Confucius Institutes(孔子学院)的后置定语。写法:请参考《商业行贿》点评第①条。

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