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情景作文延续一贯的看图作文形式，记叙与学生生活息息相关的故事，如拓展训练、献爱心、看望贫困生等，这与近几年高考的命题思路是保持一致的。从这个角度来讲，按照这三个区命题人的思路和推测，高考的情景作文应该变化不大，体裁上还会是叙事类记叙文，而其他类题目如图表、地点、写人甚至议论等等，出题的可能性很小，毕竟高考还要有它的延续性。而且，从历年考生的答题情况来看，记叙文的得分整体并不高，记叙文由于其呈现故事的灵活性和不定性，对考生英语语言的实际运用能力比较高，因此记叙文写作也深得考官的青睐。

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断桥场景：Oneof the activities was jumping across a broken bridge.

逃生墙场景：Whatimpressed me most was cl imbing over a wall to “escape.”

奖状细节：Awardssuch as “Prize for teamwork” and “Prize for courage” were sent to those whostood out.

因此，考生在考场上要保持沉稳的心态，遇到诸如此类比较生僻的场景，描述时可以考虑用其他简单的词汇进行“间接”描述。

西城区：记叙看望资助的贫困生一事，虽然与学生生活有些距离，但也有其关注弱势群体的意义所在。这篇文章的四个场景描述并不难，关键在于图与图之间的过渡上，尤其后三幅图，尤于场景跨度比较大，因此要想流畅得过渡，则要花一些笔墨，考生可以好好学习这篇文章图与图之间的过渡，如：

第一幅图：Earlyin the morning we set off.

第二幅图：Aftera two-hour drive, we arrived at Xiao Ming’s home. At that moment…

第三幅图：Immediately,they invited us to rest in their house. Once inside, .…

第四幅图：W etalked so happily that we didn’t realize it was time to leave.

记叙文非常讲究行文的流畅性，而流畅性有赖于好的过渡词句，考生在平时的写作过程中要注重过渡词句的练习。现总结一些常用的记叙文过渡，希望对考生有所帮助：

东城区：记叙向西藏希望小学献爱心一事，也是学生生活中时常发生的事情。这篇文章的的四个场景都很大，也就是说所需要的解释性语言或者说是细节的添加比较多。在表达流畅的基础上，要想提升分数，一方面是从词汇及句型的丰富化入手，另一方面也可以从细节的添加入手，东城这次的一模在细节的体现上尤为明显，如：

第一幅图场景：Studentswatched CCTV news about Hope Primary School in Tibet.

添加细节：Inthe class meeting, we watched CCTV news about Hope Primary School in Tibet,from which we learned about what the life of the children there was like andall of us were shocked. So we decided to do our bit.

第二幅图场景：Weput up some posters on the school notice board and gave out the handouts tothe schoolmates.

添加细节：Wecollected as many materials about the unfavorable school conditions in Tibet aspossible, reports, pictures, interviews, etc. Then, we put up some posters onthe school notice board and gave out the handouts to the schoolmates to arousesympathy among students.

第三幅图场景：Thenext day, we organized a donation on the playground. And many students attendedit.

添加细节：Thenext day, we organized a donation on the playground, where many studentsattended it, donating their pocket money, spare clothes, stationery or quiltsto show their sincere love towards their poor peers.

第四幅图场景：Afterthat, we went to the post office to mail the donations to Tibet.

添加细节：Afterthat, we went to the post office to mail the donations to Tibet. Having packedall those donat ions, we felt a sense of fulfillment. We couldn’t help imaginingthe happy expressions on the students’ face when they received these distantgifts.

记叙文不是平铺直叙，适当的细节添加能够使文章锦上添花，平时练习也要注意细节的捕捉。

附：下表是近5年高考情景作文与此次海西东一模的对比，可以看出此次一模的难度是明显高于高考的。考生在接下来一个多月的备考中，一定不要觉得时间太短很难提高写作而停笔，光看不练会导致笔钝，会影响最终的考场发挥。这一段时间应该保持每天看一篇（哪怕是原真题模拟题）每周限时写一篇的频度，坚持就是胜利！

开放作文：

此次一模开放作文也出得十分精彩，除了西城的两个萝卜的对比司空见惯立意一目了然外，其他区的都设计得很有特点，现对近5年及此次一模的开放作文的立意归纳如下，考生要理解立意的不同角度，写作时能够自圆其说即可。

开放作文

开放作文有一定的写作框架语言，考生要注意积累与运用，现举一些常用的如下：

其中，析图部分常用的方法是例证法，举现实中的例子说明对与错、好与坏，能对观点起到很好的支撑作用，常用的引出例证的句型有：

Asa matter of fact, in our daily life, there exist many “small fish in a big pond”…

Indaily life, we often meet peop le who…

Thereare many similar phenomena in our life.

Thisis not uncommon in our daily life. When…

Thisidea is especially important nowadays….

Take…forexample…

Forexample/ instance…

总的来说，作文重在多积累与勤下笔，任何阶段任何地方都一样，不放松不气馁，预祝考生发挥出水平，取得理想的成绩！

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