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剑桥雅思6第一套写作Task1真题+考官范文+参考译文+分析

剑桥雅思6第一套写作Task 1真题+考官范文+参考译文+分析:

WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

Water consumption in Brazil and Congo in 2000

TASK 1

考官范文

The graph shows how the amount of water used worldwide changed between 1900 and 2000.

Throughout the century, the largest quantity of water was used for agricultural purposes, and this increased dramatically from about 500 km3 to around 3,000 km3 in the year 2000. Water used in the industrial and domestic sectors also increased, but consumption was minimal until mid-century. From 1950 onwards, industrial use grew steadily to just over 1,000 km3, while domestic use rose more slowly to only 300 km3, both far below the levels of consumption by agriculture.

The table illustrates the differences in agricultural consumption in some areas of the world by contrasting the amount of irrigated land in Brazil (26,500 km2) with that in the D. R. C (100 km2). This means that a huge amount of water is used in agriculture in Brazil, and this is reflected in the figures for water consumption per person: 359 m3 compared with only 8 m3 in Congo. With a population of 176 million,the figures for Brazil indicate how high agricultural water consumption can be in some countries.

参考译文

曲线图显示了1900至2000年间世界范围内水的使用情况。

在这一百年里,农业用水量最大,从最初的500立方米急剧增加到2000年的3000立方米左右。工业和家庭用水量也有增长,但直到20世纪中期消耗量都很低。1950年以后,工业用水逐渐增长到1000立方米左右,而家庭用水增长更慢,只到300立方米。两者都远远低于农业用水量。

表格通过对巴西灌溉地面积(26500平方公里)和民主刚果共和国灌溉地面积(100平方公立)进行对比,描述了世界上一些地区农业消费的差异。这意味着巴西农业用水量很大,这一点从人均耗水量为359立方米可以看出,而民主刚果只有8立方米。巴西人口达1亿7600万,它的相关数据表明在一些国家农业用水量很大。

分析

第一段话简介了曲线图的主要信息(时间段及研究对象)。注意表达上的改写(paraphrase):题目是information about water use worldwide,范文改为how the amount of water used worldwide changed。

第二段描述了曲线图的主要趋势。值得注意的是,范文把变化(changes)和比较(comparisons)结合起来进行描述。三条曲线(农业用水、工业用水、家庭用水)的趋势大体相同,都是不断上升的,区别在于上升的幅度不同。本文按照上升幅度的大小顺序来排列。先描写用水量最大,上升幅度也最大的曲线——农业用水,指出增长的起点和终点。然后描述增长量较少的工业用水和家庭用水。指出1950年之前变化甚微,而之后各自分别增长到的相应用水量。最后简单比较两者和农业用水的区别。

第三段描述了表格。表格体现了巴西和刚果在水的消费方面的差异。

本题由两种不同的图表组成:曲线图(graph)和表格(table)。两个图表之间没有什么内在的关联性,所以不必在文章结尾对这两个图表进行对比分析。

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