大学英语作文参考范文

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A course that has impressed you most in college

There are many courses in each college year. But the course which impressed me mo st in college is Advanced English Audio-Visual & Speaking. The reasons why I like this course are as follows.

The first reason is that I have learnt a lot from this course. My listening ability, spe aking ability as well as translation ability has improved greatly after taking this course. T he second reason is that I like the teacher of this course, Mr. Qin, very much. He is a c harming gentleman with great patience. His oral English is perfect, sounding like America n speakers. He treated us very strict but we still like him extremely.

Just as the proverb goes, “A strict teacher produces outstanding students.”Thanks to Mr. Qin’s guidance and teachings in this course, all my classmates have made great prog ress in English learning.

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大学中给你印象最深的一门课

大学阶段各个年级都有很多课程，但给我印象最深的一门课是“高级视听说”。之所以喜欢这门课，有很多原因，现将原因列举如下。

喜欢这门课的第一个原因是我在这门课上学到了很多东西。我的英语听力水平、口语水平和翻译水平都得到了很大提升。喜欢这个课程的第二个原因是我很喜欢教我们这门课的老师——秦老师。他是一个既有魅力又有耐心的人。他的英语口语很棒。乍一听，完全就是美国本土人在讲英语。他对我们要求很严格，但我们依然很喜欢他。

正如谚语所说：“严师出高徒”。多亏秦老师在这门课上的悉心指导和教诲，我们班同学的英语水平都得到了空前的提升。

The Most Beneficial Activity in My Campus（文都版）

It is well known that university is greatly different from high school mainly due to t hat university will hold a large number of activities, which benefits college students a lot. From my perspective, the most beneficial one is “Long-distance Running for Love” organ ized by the Students Union when I am a freshman. The money collected by this activity is contributed to Project Hope.

It is really my honor to participate the long running, because it benefits me greatly n ot only in body but also in mind. To begin with, the activity reminds me of the great im portance of physical health. Before I go to college, I only focus on academic achievement s while the physical health misses my attention. But, the long-running tells me in time th

at a sound mind lies in a sound body. Additionally, during my participation in this activit y, I am informed well that there are still many children in rural areas who have to drop out of school because of impoverished families. Thus, for one thing, I fully realize the gr eat importance of helping them fulfill their dreams. For another thing, I cherish the opport unity to study in university more, for when compared with those children in poverty-strick en areas, we should harbor a grateful heart.

By and large, although I have taken part in many campus activities, I deem the long running for love most beneficial to me. And I am looking forward to that more wonderf ul and meaningful activities will be held in our campus.

范文译文：

众所周知，大学与高中截然不同，主要原因是大学里会举办很多校园活动，而这些大学活动使大学生受益匪浅。我认为最有益的校园活动是大一时，由学生会举办的“爱心长跑”。这次长跑筹集的善款用于捐助希望工程。

我很荣幸参加了这次长跑，因为这次活动使我的身心都获得了很大裨益。首先，这次活动提醒我身体健康的重要性。在我上大学前，我只关心自己的学习成绩，而忽视了健康。但是，这次长跑及时提醒我——健康的身体孕育健康的灵魂。此外，通过参加此次长跑，我深刻了解到还有许多偏远山区的小孩因为家庭贫困被迫辍学。因此，一方面我充分意识到帮助这些小孩实现梦想是何其重要；另一方面，我更珍惜自己能上大学的机会。因为，和那些贫困地区的小孩相比，我们应该怀有一颗感恩的心。

总体而言，虽然我参加过许多校园活动，但是我认为这次爱心长跑最为有益。我也期待有更多精彩而有意义的校园活动举行。

The Most Impressive Classmate in My College

Without question, Lisa is the person who has influenced my college life most. She is my classmate, who always leaves a deep impression on you by demonstrating her passio n for life and the spirit of never yielding, even in the face of extreme challenges. She is the most courageous person I have ever known.

During my college years, it is Lisa that kept teaching me how to live through setbacks in the life journey. I’ll never forget that when I failed in my English examination and I felt overwhelmed, Lisa taught me that failure teaches success, everyone had to persever e and face up to innumerable setbacks, as long as I face my problems bravely, I would c reate my own wonderful life . With her help , I finally gained the confidence and passed the exam.

Thanks to Lisa, I have learned the importance of courage, which is the indispensable characteristic in my life. She also let me know the importance of confidence. It means a lot to me and still in my head till this day.

范文译文：

毫无疑问，Lisa是大学里对我影响最深的一名同学。她是我同桌，她对生活的激情以及面临极端困境时永不服输的精神永远都能给人留下深刻的印象。她是我见过的最勇敢的女生。

在我的大学生涯中，是Lisa一直教导我如何面对生活中的挫折。我永远都不会忘记，当我没通过英语考试，灰心丧气时，是她教给我，失败是成功之母，每个人都会遇到无数的困难，都应坚持，只要我勇敢面对困难，我肯定能迎来自己美好的生活。在她的帮助下，我最终找回了自信，通过了考试。

多谢Lisa，让我学到了勇气的重要性，这是我性格中不可或缺的一部分。她同时也教会了我自信的重要性。这一切对我意义非凡，至今难忘。

1.On Open Policy

The open policy means that our country is open to investment, trade and technical and economic cooperation with other countries on the basis of equality and mutual benefit. The purpose of open policy is to acquire advanced technology, management skills to serve our socialist construction so as to promote the realization of the four modernizations.

We must adhere to the open policy. Because economic relations between states today have become increasingly close, and no country can possibly advance behind close doors. Only in this way, can we gradually close the gap between our country and the developed countries.

Through the implementation of policy, we can learn advanced technology and managerial expertise from abroad; make full use of the foreign capitals to set up great enterprises; absorb useful and healthy ideas and new knowledge of the modern civilization; and broaden our views and raise our level of competence.

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第一，四级写作再现“反押题”的倾向。

之前我们可能会去了解了宏观的大话题，比如社会生活、两代关系、文化教育、网络科技、伦理道德等等这样的话题，这次的考试题目跟这些所谓的预测和同学们之前的准备出入还是很大的。近来关于大学生中的一门课、一个同学、一项校园活动，这些我们觉得都过于平常，过于普通，跟大学生的思想深度好象没有什么关系，但是我们确实考到了。

我们想一下2014年6月份考的是一个朋友来你的家乡、校园旅游的话，你会带他去哪里玩，并且写出理由。好象是一篇记叙文，又是一篇议论文，这种题目我们之前也是无法预测，或者我们根本不屑于准备，是我们看不上的题目。6月份考了，今年12月份又考的是这样的题目——一门课、一个同学、一项活动，所以这是最新的四级写作方面的命题趋势，那就是反押题。我们之前的预测方向和这些有一些出入。

第二，主题比较开放、自由

我们说的现在的四级作文题目，我们在这个点上，我们可以延伸到六级，还有考研英语写作的命题，那就是主题比较开放、自由，非常自由的主题，基本上不存在跑题的问题。有的人说我作文题目没有读懂，有的说我题目读懂了，但是没有写对方向，这样的情况已经基本上不会发生，它可以推广到六级和考研英语写作，其实都有这样的特点。

我们今天在微博上和新东方在线的互动平台上，看到一些奇葩的评论和互动。有的同学说我的考试题目是《A classmate of yours who has influenced you most in college》“一个影响我最多的同学”，结果这个同学写完发现写的是一个影响我最多的老师，我们觉得这也不算跑题，应该是审题不够仔细，考场过于紧张，可能是考前缺乏听课的训练和素质提升，也没有进行模考，可能紧张了，但是这样的题目会扣分的，明明让你写一位影响最深的同学，你写了影响最深的老师，这个我们可以根据未完成题目指令的要求这一项来进行扣分。我想这方面的错不知道大家有没有去犯？如果没有的话自然是最好的。所以我们现在的题目普遍来说比较简单。

第三，更加注重考生的语言质量

我们结合6月份和12月份的考试得出第三条的结论是作文更加注重同学的语言质量。因为我们已经不存在说题目读不懂，看不明白，大家都是一样的主题，那就代表着大家都有话好说。所以在这个层面上如果不拼你的审题能力和对话题预测准备能力的话，应该考的是同学的语言质量问题。

这么简单的一个主题，好像你会说的很多，又好象什么也不会说；好象你能写的很多，但是语言普通简单也不行。所以现在我们说现在四级作文第三个趋势是重在语言质量。同学们比拼的是驾驭英语语言本身的能力，对词汇、语法、固定句型套用的熟练程度和精彩程度。

第四，题目记叙、描述与议论并重

之前四级、六级，甚至包括我们说的考研考试当中，我们其实更多的是重在考生的思考问题、发表评论、写议论文的能力。这些题目的论据和表达都比较固定、官方、正式，比如我们说推进经济建设、提高学生的心态素质、推进中国传统文化的弘扬还有网络话题，好象都比较正式，甚至我们说的极端一点，有点“假大空”的感觉，但是这样的话题涉及的面比较广、话题比较正式，但是考前好准备。同学们只要稍微背一背，什么“随着现代生活社会的步伐加快”、“随着人们变得越来越富有”、“随着国家提供的便利措施”等等，好象你背一下都有了，但是现在的作文考的是你真正的语言描述和记叙的能力。

作文题目一：

a campus activity that has benefited you most. state the reasons at least 120 No more than180 words

参考范文：（沈阳新东方学校－吴欣慰老师）

Currently, students in mounting numbers pay attention to academic achievement, neglecting campus activities, like speaking contest , song contest and its like. However, from my perspective, we youngsters should take participate in more campus activities.

I hold the notion that campus activities has lots of benefits on various fronts. At the top of the list, social activities, such as song contest could help us make more friends, expanding our acquaintances. In addition, students would widen horizon, increase knowledge during the period

t aking part in campus activities. Last but not list, just as a saying goes, “ all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”; therefore, students’ choice to join in some school activities would ease our mind and relief our burden, which will be beneficial to the study.

In conclusion, youngsters should take part in colorful and meaningful activities at campus. Hence, I suggest schools can hold some activities to cultivate students ability, physically and psychologically.

I have met so many friends in my college life. They have exerted enormous influence on my life. However, one of my most impressive friends is my roommate, Li Ming.

In the class meeting on the first day of school, Li Ming did not impress us at all. We started to notice him because he was always late for classes. We were thus impressed by his laziness. I came to know him and his situation because we were roommates and spent much time together: his mother was seriously ill and sick abed in long-term, his father left him and his mother mercilessly. Hence, it was him that shouldered the heavy burden of taking care of his sick mother supporting the whole family. Finally, under great pressures, he balanced his life and study perfectly: he was no longer always late, took good care of his mother and even won the scholarship many years in a row.

The experience of Li Ming can be one of the most convincing cases of the power of persistence and will. He left a deep impression and imposed a durable influence on me. Indeed, friend such as him can be regarded as asset and property in our life. We have rights to choose our own friends，but we should also be prudent and sensible enough to choose friends who can bring us “positive energy”. (228 words)

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在我的大学生活中，遇到了很多朋友。他们对我的人生产生了重大的影响。然而，我印象最深的朋友是我的室友李明。

在开学第一天的入学班会上，他没有给全班同学留下任何印象。李明让我们开始认识他，是因为他总是上课迟到，同学们都以为是个懒惰的人。因为我们是室友，平时的交往比较多，

后来我才慢慢了解到他的情况：原来他的母亲罹患重病，长期卧床，父亲残忍地离开他们而去，照顾生病的母亲和养家重任只能由他来承担了。令人惊讶的是，在重压之下，他将自己的生活和学业平衡地很好：他不再总是迟到，将妈妈照顾的很好并且连续几年获得奖学金。

李明的经历是坚持和意志的作用的最有说服力的例子之一。他给我留下的印象无法磨灭，他对我造成的影响持续深远。的确，这样的朋友被视为我们生活中的财富和资产。我们有权利选择自己的朋友，然而交友的过程中，我都应该足够理智和谨慎，选择那些能够给我们带来正能量的真正的朋友。

写作题目：你生病住院时，同班同学曾探望过你，假设现在你在给他们写信，以表达感激之情，并告知现状。

参考文章：

A Letter For Gratitude

Dear Classmates，

First of all．please allow me to say“Thank you”to an of you．It is very kind of you to spare your valuable time during the period of final examinations and come to seeme．Your visit has brought me much confidence and power to overcome the illness．During the first several days in hospital．I felt quite lonely,anxious and frightened．I Was almost collapsed by some pessimistic thoughts．But then you shown up，alongwith your smiling faces and warm words．Your appearance has made me feel that I am the luckiest person in this wonderful world．Now I regard the illness as nothing but a chance to harden myself．These days my condition has obviously improved thanks to the careful treatment by the doctors and nurses．1 will probably get recovered in a couple ofweeks．I hope that I Can see you earlier．Again．special thanks go to all of you．

Sincerely Yours，

LiMing

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写作题目：

依照上述图标及如下大纲写一篇以手机为主题的文章，字数不少于120字。

写作大纲：

1. 描述柱形图表示的手机用户数的变化情况

2. 分析原因

3. 评价其现象

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Cell Phones

As is shown in the chart, cell phones are becoming increasingly popular within China. In 1999, the number of cell phones in use was only 2 million, but in 2002, the number reaches 5 million. And in the year 2005, the number has suddenly soared to 9 million.

There are many factors contributing to this development. Firstly, a cell phone has no wires and can be carried everywhere easily. Secondly, a cell phone is something wonderful that we can have fun with news, games, music and chat through sending short messages. Thirdly, the drop in price and the simultaneous improvement in the functions have made it possible for an average person to make use of cell phone.

The wide use of cell phones has make them more and more indispensable in people’s daily life. The many functions of the cell phone have made certain people reluctant to separate themselves from their cell phone.

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写作题目：随着工作压力的负担以及经济来源的压力，现在越来越多的父母成为了”孩奴“。请解释出现这种现象的原因及可能造成的影响。

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Parents’ Being Slaves to Children

Parents’ being slaves to their children or “child’s slave” is nowadays a hot topic in China. It refers to young parents who have to spend a large part of their income on children. These parents feel great strain under the burden of raising a child and struggle hard to make as much money as possible.

The cost of raising a child in China is becoming greater and greater. But economic pressure is not the only reason that makes young parents “child’s slave”. Parents’ competing with each other in trying to provide the best possible living conditions for their children should also be blamed.

If this problem continues, it would affect parents and the development of our country. These parents would suffer from huge economic pressure, which may pose a threat to their marriages or physical and mental health. On the other hand, to avoid being slaves, some couples are unwilling to have children.

The Advantages and Disadvantages of Living in the 21st century(生活在21世纪的优缺点-大学英语四级作文)

Living in the 21st century offers certain advantages,such as a higher standard of living, but it also has some disadvantages, such as a polluted environment.

To begin with, most people now have more money for less hard work. They earn higher salaries than before and enjoy better social security, such as social welfare for laid-off workers and disability insurance.

Secondly, because of the advance in medical technology which leads to better medical care and treatment, people’s life expectancy is longer. Moreover, most people now can afford to buy foods of high nutrition and enjoy their leisure time.

Thirdly, modern conveniences such as radio, TV, internet, various vehicles and labour-saving machines in the home, all greatly facilitate human communication, transportation and housework as well.

Nevertheless, living in the 21st century also has its disadvantages. The most serious one is the increasingly polluted environment; air is filled with smog and water is contaminated by iehemicals from factories.Another main disadvantage is the personalization of human r elattonships which mostly result from people’s ever-increasing contact with machines and numbers. Still one more disadvantage is the weakening of spiritual values. An undeniable fact is that a large number of people are solely interested in materialistic culture,while neglecting spiritual civilization. Limited by space, we have to skip the examples.

In conclusion, although the 21st century has indeed given us a lot of advantages, it may not have made us wiser, because it has also made our earth dirtier, our people less humane, and our spirituali iife poorer, We shpuld continue to enjoy the benefits of technological advancement,however, we must

make a concerted effort to preserve our natural environment for future generations. Moreover, we should take the time now to make our lives more meaningful in anihcreasingly impersonal, computerized world.

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武聪辰回复2楼2013-04-03

二On responsibility .(关于个人责任)

We Chinese place a high value on responsibility. It is traditional deal for us Chinese to take care of our parents. We owe them a great deal for the love they give us while we are growing up. It is right, then, when they are getting older with each passing day, we help them and see that they are well cared for. In this way, we give back some of the love and care they have given to us.

As loyal Chinese citizens, we must have a strong sense of responsibility to our country. I t is our duty to keep China strong in the eyes of the world. Therefore, we should study and work hard for China’s

strongness which also depends on the advanced science and technology. We must be willing to join the Army and defend our country, would we be threatened by an invader(侵入者). In short, to be a responsible citizen ,we must put our country’s welfare above our own needs. Finally, we must remember that we have a responsibility to the world we live in. It is important that we learn to live in peace with the other nations of the world and to protect our environment.If we carry out these responsibilities, we will be respected (受尊敬的)citizens of our country.

钱欣薇回复3楼2013-04-03

三如何看待挑战

For thousands of years, people have accepted challenges in different fields. There are not only physical challenges, but also social andintellectual(聪明的) challenges. Some people risk(冒…险) their lives in playing sports to see how well they can do. Others try to make and invent(发明) something to make life easier. They all enjoy challenges.

Why do people enjoy these challenges? There are probably many reasons. One is curiosity. The other is the personal feeling of success, of achievement, and nowadays, for some people, it is a business.

Today, we still have many challengers before us. Medical science

faces the challenges of conquering many diseases which still attack human beings. Engineers and planners must build new cities, design and produce new kinds of transportation. Scientists must develop new forms of energy. In short, we live in an age of challenges.

蔡彬巧回复4楼2013-04-03

三如何看待挑战

For thousands of years, people have accepted challenges in different fields. There are not only physical challenges, but also social andintellectual(聪明的) challenges. Some people risk(冒…险) their lives in playing sports to see how well they can do. Others try to make and

invent(发明) something to make life easier. They all enjoy challenges.

Why do people enjoy these challenges? There are probably many reasons. One is curiosity. The other is the personal feeling of success, of achievement, and nowadays, for some people, it is a business.

Today, we still have many challengers before us. Medical science faces the challenges of conquering many diseases which still attack human beings. Engineers and planners must build new cities, design and produce new kinds of transportation. Scientists must develop new forms of energy. In short, we live in an age of challenges.

林佳祥回复5楼2013-04-03

四My View on Job-Hopping

1. 有些人喜欢始终从事一种工作，因为……。

2. 有些人喜欢经常更换工作，因为……。

3. 我的看法。

Many people are inclined to do one job in their lives. In their opinions, people who change their jobs frequently are superficial and tactless. They believe that the only way to success is to stick to one job, for constant practice in a professional field helps make an txpert.

But there are still many people who don’t agree. They argue that change means progress. If you are not satisfied with your present job, of course you have the right to replace it with a more challenging and better paid one. Every change is a step to further success. This idea may be. the reason why they change their jobs so often.

For my part, I think it reasonable to change your job if you have a better opportuniry. But once you have found a position where you can fully display your ability, it is advisable to settle down to it and put all your efforts into it. Only in this way, can you get the true joy of achieving your

goal.

我对更换职业的看法

许多人喜好终身从事一种工作。他们看来，经常更换职业的人浅薄，不老练。他们认为成功之道是终守一职，因为在自己的业务领域中反复实践有助于成才。

但是，也有许多人不同意以上观点，他们认为变更就是进步。如果你不满意目前的工作，当然你有权力换一个更具挑战性的，待遇更好的工作。每一次更换就会向着更加成功迈进一步。这种观点也许是他们不断更换职业的原因。

就我而言，我认为若有更好的机会，更换一下职业是合情合理的。但是，一日找到一份你能展示你的才干的职业，就该专心致志把它做好。只有如此，你才能真正享受到取得成就的欢乐。

何媛晓回复6楼2013-04-03

五Environmental pollution

I read a piece of news recently. It says that in Japan marly businessmen ave selling fresh air to customers.and now it is becoming more and more popular. Why? --Fresh air is getting less and less in Japan, and so is it in the U. S. A.

In fact, environmental pollution is a very serious problem the whole world is facing.it is mainly caused by the waste products released from artificial substances, industrial

production and increased consumption of goods. Bedsides, the use of chemical substances in agriculture also causes environmental pollution. Look at the sky, you can see that dense smoke is being released from the high and big chimneys; those dirty and poisonous substances are flowing into the rivers that we use for drinking water and millions of tons of waste products are heaping around us.

How to change this condition? More and more countries are trying to work out some effective means to bring it under control, but no great success has been made.

胡冠震回复7楼2013-04-03

六 1.大学生了解社会的必要性 3.我打算怎么做

2.了解社会的途径(大众媒介，社会服务等)

With the development of our society, the campus no longer is an "Ivory Tower". It is necessary for college students to go outside to get to know the world. They should acquire knowledge not only from books but

also from the society. Thus(因此) they can adapt to society more quickly after they graduate from school. Science and technology are developing rapidly with each passing day. Most students can keep themselves informed by watching TV, listening to the radio, reading newspapers and using computers. It’s a lso good to take a part-time job, such as tutoring(辅导), or working in a restaurant. Any of these methods will enable students to get in touch with society.

Summer vacation will soon be here. I’ve already enrolled(登记) to be a volunteer to help others. I t hink I can do well. Although I won’t be paid, the most important thing is that I can learn a lot about society.

谭龙俊回复8楼2013-04-03

七 1. 面试在求职过程中的作用

2. 取得面试成功的因素：仪表、举止谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是

Nowadays, in an ever tighter job market, great importance has been attached to an interview by both the employer and the applicant. The interview, so to speak, has become indispensable for getting a satisfactory job. On the one hand, the interviewer can take advantage of the occasion to learn about the candidates, such as their work experiences, education

and their personalities, so as to pick out the right person for the company. On the other hand, the interviewee can make use of the opportunity to get to know the job he is going to take up, the salary, the working conditions and many other things about the job he is interested in.

Therefore, the job interview is very important to a job-hunter. But how can one succeed in it? Firstly of all, the interviewee must pay attention to his or her appearance. The first impression is always where we start. Get dressed properly and neatly. Secondly, good manners are equally important. Don’t be too proud, and neither too timid. Just be courteous. Thirdly, the interviewee must demonstrate his aptitude and skills for the job and his knowledge about eh job-related areas. Be confident. Last but not the least, the interviewee ought to be honest about his or her personal as well as academic background,To sum up, the job interview is indeed important, but there is no need to be nervous. As long as the interviewee has the ability for the job, with careful preparation and a fairly confident and honest performance, his or her success can be ensured.

魏雪轮回复9楼2013-04-03

八1、现在网上购物已成为一种时尚

2、网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题

3、我的建议

Online Shopping

Several decades ago, it should be a marvelous wonder to purchase our favorite gifts only by clicking the mouse and then just waiting for the door knock by a smiling expressive delivery courier with the exact package you ordered. While, today, it is no long a rare case. Combined with the fast food, the digital communication , online shopping has been a common part of our life.

Admittedly, on line shopping offers magical convenience. For example, it saves time and offers numerous choices since floods of information can be supplied on Internet. While, every coin has tow sides and online shopping is no different. Have you still remembered the annoying time when you found the commodities you buy on Internet was not the slightest as what you had expected and long time had to be taken for its replace and even compensation. Actually, just with the seemingly beautiful pictures of the products on Internet, it is hard for us to make rational choices. After all, seeing is believing.

Then, what should we do? The foremost is to enforce establish some relevant laws and regulations, with strong supervision over some shopping websites being reinforced as well. Then, the consumers also should be equipped with more alert in case of being trapped once again. Remember,

any fast –and- easy things asks for big prices to be paid.

孔豪嘉回复10楼2013-04-03

九怎样改善学生的心理健康

1. 学生心理健康的重要性

2. 学校应该怎样做

3. 学生自己应该怎样做

How to improve psychological health?

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Of course no psychological health can be obtained without the efforts

from the students themselves. From my perspective, what they can do is trying to stay positive, optimistic and follow the right guidelines from their schools. To be more specific, they can participate in some activities such as voluntary work to cultivate an opening and caring mind. Meanwhile, harmful impacts from the cyber space should definitely be avoided

蔡旭俊回复11楼2013-04-03

十Is Failure a Bad Thing?

1. 失败是常有的事。

2. 人们对失败有各种态度、。

3. 我对失败的态度。

Failure is not a stranger to life. It can happen anywhere, anytime and to anyone. No person succeeds all the time. The more development you want to make, the more failure you might encounter. So, people are faced with failure now and then.

There are different attitudes towards failure. Some people are afraid of failure and they can not bear the blow of failure, so they stay where they are and try to not to mike progress. Some optimists, however, fight against failure bravely and achieve all his aims at last.

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