高考英语每周一卷第十七周 图表作文+Word版含答案
第十七周图表作文
[学审题谋篇]
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(2016·江西赣中南五校重点中学第二次联考)最近，我国教育专家对我国中学生所喜爱的节日进行了一项调查，北京和广州的1 000多名中学生接受了调查。调查结果如下：
请你根据以上内容用英文写一篇100词左右的调查报告，反映调查结果，并分析我国中学生的节日观。
1．审题
图表作文以图表形式给出与题目相关的数据和各种信息，审题时应做到三定：①定体裁；②定人称；③定时态。
如本文为调查报告，属于说明文；以第三人称为主；时态主要用一般现在时。
2．谋篇
图表作文首先要提取关键信息，往往是从最多的写起，进行比较，然后就图表比较的内容进行评论，最后进行总结或提出自己的观点。
如本文首先从大部分中学生喜爱春节开始写，然后进行对比，最后进行总结。
[学增分亮点]
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[满分范文]
①Recently some Chinese educational experts did a survey among more than 1,000 students from Beijing and Guangzhou on their favorite festivals. ②The result shows that about half of the respondents choose the Spring Festival as their most favorite. ③Next come Christmas Day and Mothers’or Fathers’Day, with 20% and 10% respectively. ④However, Mid-Autumn Day accounts for less than 10%.
⑤From the survey, we can see although over 70% of the students are familiar with our traditional festivals, like the Spring Festival, more and more young people favor some foreign festivals.
[满分缘由]
1．结构布局
本文分为三个部分：
(1)首先介绍在中学生之间做了一项调查；
(2)然后从大部分中学生喜爱的春节开始进行对比；
(3)最后对调查结果加以总结。
2．亮点词汇
respectively, account for, be familiar with, favor
3．亮点句式
第②句包含that引导的宾语从句；
第③句为完全倒装句；
第⑤句包含although引导的状语从句。
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1．用被动语态改写句①
Recently_a_survey_was_done_among_more_than_1,000_students_from_Beijin g_and_Guangzhou_on_their_favorite_festivals.
2．用conclusion加同位语从句改写句⑤
From_the_survey,_we_can_draw_a_conclusion_that_although_over_70%_of_t he_students_are_familiar_with_our_traditional_festivals,_like_the_Spring_Festival, _more_and_more_young_people_favor_some_foreign_festivals.
[写满分作文]
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(2016·郑州高三模拟)
现在，学生的零用钱越来越多，但是乱花钱现象很严重。右边是你应某晚报教育在线栏目之约针对学生的零用钱(pocket money)的消费方向，对你市某中学的高中和初中的部分学生进行问卷调查所得出的调查表。
请你用英文写一篇调查报告，反映调查结果，并呼吁中学生应树立正确的消费观。
注意：1.开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.词数100左右。
[要求]
请用宾语从句、while连接的并列句、状语从句、非限制性定语从句及强调句型完成作文。
Dear Editor，
Recently a survey has been carried out to find out how middle school students spend their pocket money.
参考范文：
Dear Editor，
Recently a survey has been carried out to find out how middle school students spend their pocket money.
In this survey, both junior students and senior students spend most their money on books, snacks and playing games, still some money goes to clothes, banks, sports and so on. The survey shows that about 44% of seniors prefer books to snacks (37%) and playing games (31%). On the other hand, only 32% of juniors spend their pocket money buying books, while a half buy snacks and 44% spend it in playing games. Both seniors and juniors would not waste too much money on clothes or put it in banks.
I think a lot of snacks will make us put on weight and do harm to our health. In addition, if we play games without limit, we’ll lose much precious time, which results in low grades. Furthermore, the money is hard-earned. It is our money as well as our time that we students should value.