高三英语一轮复习渐进写作训练—— 读后续写
高三英语一轮复习渐进写作训练——读后续写
题型解读
读后续写题型提供一段350词以内的语言材料，要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标注关键词进行续写(150词左右)，将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。
读后续写题型主要关注学生以下四个方面的能力：
1．把握短文关键信息和语言特点的能力
学生需要了解给定短文的主要内容，清楚其关键词和语言结构的使用情况，并通过续写短文表现出来。
2．语言运用的准确性和丰富性
学生能准确、恰当地使用所学词汇和语言结构，还能够根据内容需要使用较多、较复杂的词汇和语言结构。
3．对语篇结构的把控能力
学生需要掌握上下文逻辑关系，所续写的短文语句连贯、有序。
4．创造性思维能力
学生所续写的短文要具有较丰富的内容，包含详细和生动的情景、态度和感情描述。
应试技巧
1．在读懂原文的基础上，紧扣原文中心，以原文的结局为起点，写出故事情节的发展和变化。2．对原文故事没有写出的情节展开合理的推想，打开思路。多角度地想象出几种情况或结局，并从中加以最优选择。
3．要注意前后照应，符合逻辑，防止自相矛盾。必须与上文紧密联系，使上下文融为一体。4．原文的主要角色，续文中都要安排“戏”，但不要引进影响事件结局的新角色。
5．注意确保四个一致：
(1)要与原文的主题或作者的本来意图保持一致。
(2)要与原文的体裁、结构、写作手法保持一致。
(3)要与原文的语言特点和叙事风格保持一致。
(4)主要人物的思想行为、性格特点要与原文保持一致。
写作步骤
1．分析原文
做读后续写题首先要做的就是“读”。“读”的目的是确定文章的主题，明确篇章结构。读的时候要特别关注文中画线的关键词，也就是故事中的时间、地点、人物和事件四要素，特别要标记能描述事件发展过程的词和短语。按照四要素对关键词进行分类可以帮助我们理清
文章脉络，为合理想象故事的发展提供线索。
2．推理情节
先仔细阅读续写部分所给出的两段开头语，明确其中所包含的四要素信息并将其延伸，推断出这段中要写的情节，也就是后面故事的四要素。续写段中的四要素应包含两部分：一部分沿用所给材料中表示四要素的关键词，一部分是自己通过合理想象新发展的关键词。
3．串接要素
把上一步中确定好的四要素加以串接，并增加细节描写(内心情感、态度、表情描述)，从而形成完整的段落。两段加起来要能写出8到15个句子，以满足续写的词数要求。串接时要注意选用合适的衔接词，并保证至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语。
4．升级词句
初稿完成后，要对续写段进行润色，即对其中的用词和句式进行升级。用词升级的三大方向：新颖化、短语优先、善用形容词和副词等修饰词。句式升级可通过使用特殊句式、复合结构、虚拟语气等来完成。
5．检查定稿
学生可通读所给材料和自己续写的内容，既要确保不出现与原材料相矛盾的地方，又要做到内容上前后连贯，语句通顺。此外，还要检查有无拼写错误、标点符号错误、大小写错误等，检查词数和画线词是否符合要求等。
典例剖析
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
My name is John and I must share with you an event which took place on Flight 1533 out of DCA.My wife and I were traveling to Miami to celebrate an achievement for her and as you can imagine，we were looking forward to fun，sun and laughter.
We boarded the aircraft，without a care in the world.It was cold in Washington and we were ready for Florida.Shortly after taking my seat，I began to feel sick.I knew something wasn’t right but I just couldn’t figure out what was happening.Being a doctor and a stubborn man，I resisted efforts by my wife to call for assistance.As the aircraft began its departure roll，I lost consciousness for a short amount of time.As I came around，I quickly realized a few things.Firstly，something very bad had happened to me.Secondly，the aircraft was too heavy with fuel to go back home.Thirdly，my loss of consciousness had been so deep that I found myself out of control.So not only did I have a medical issue to deal with，but I also had to figure out how to deal with an embarrassing experience.
My wife gathered the crew as soon as it was safe to move about and I made my way to the washroom to attempt to clean up.I did my best and the flight crew members were so supportive，checking on me often and reassuring me that there was nothing to be embarrassed about.It was their sympathy and support that helped me so much.During the flight they kept watching over me and I suddenly had a small group of nurses，bringing blankets，food，drinks and caring and smile.I was