IELTS作文——Gender-discrimination
Gender-discrimination / Workplace fairness
Discrimination against girls and women in the developing world is a devastating reality. It results in millions of individual tragedies, which add up to lost potential for entire countries. Studies show there is a direct link between a country's attitude toward women and its progress socially and economically. The status of women is central to the health of a society. If one part suffers, so does the whole.
Tragically, female children are most defenseless against the trauma of gender discrimination. The following obstacles are stark examples of what girls worldwide face. But the good news is that new generations of girls represent the most promising source of change for women—and men—in the developing world today.
To follow are six of women's choices that contribute to their gender's lower incomes:
(1)The frequent choice to drop out for a few years to raise children obviously lowers women's income statistics for those dropped-out years. But mothering experience also changes many women so that they often do not rejoin the climbing-the-ladder job track.
(2)The Type-A (workaholic) behavior often exhibited by executives who rise to the top is not chosen as often by women.
(3)Women make the gender workplace choice to often avoid physical jobs. For example, large companies such as the major airlines have made significant efforts without much success to attract women to good-paying jobs such as airline baggage handlers.
(4)Women have more often chosen advanced degrees that result in lower-paid people-helper jobs such as therapists than higher-paid business executives with MBAs.
(5)Earning power has been and is much more a cultural goal for men than for women (though this workplace gender preference does seem to be changi ng).
(6)Entrepreneurial women in fields such as private-practice psychotherapist will, on the average, choose to charge less and thus make less than their male counterparts.
Information provided to the inquiry indicated that discrimination on the basis o f pregnancy and the inability to obtain paid maternity leave are significant factors contributing to Australian women and their partners deciding to not
have children or to limit the size of their families. This report details pregnancy discrimination in the workplace and makes recommendations to address these inequities.
Shorter legal working age
There are some acts toward the discrimination on the basis of pregnancy, childbirth, or related medical conditions. For instance, pregnant employees must be permitted to work as long as they are able to perform their jobs. If an employee has been absent from work as a result of a pregnancy-related condition and recovers, her employer may not require her to remain on leave until the baby's birth. An employer also may not have a rule that prohibits an employee from returning to work for a predetermined length of time after childbirth.
Employers must hold open a job for a pregnancy-related absence the same length of time jobs are held open for employees on sick or disability leave. They may have to provide more health insurance and fringe benefit for their woman workers. Those are the main reasons for those employers reluctant to recruit women.
Firstly because they could not mix nearly as freely with businessmen as men do. Most men’s clubs, for instance, do not allow women members;
In addition, it is extremely doubtful if a woman could, year after year, under a variety of conditions, stand the fairly severe strains and stresses, mentally and physically, which are part of the life of such occupation;
(vi) If we engaged single graduates as trainees, most of them would probably marry within five years;
(ix) A woman would take the place of a man and preclude us from giving practical experience to one mail officer. She could marry at any time and be lost to us. she could not be regarded as a long term investment in the same sense as we regard a man.
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Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about the purpose of university education. 现在，越来越多的人关心大学教育的目的。 Explanation: ●Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about the phenomenon that … ●Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about the purposes that university education serves. ●Nowadays, more and more students are concerned about what they will learn in the universities. ●Universities are one of the most important institutions in modern society. 如果很难再短时间内想出第一句内容，就直接表达观点，两句话写完首段。 ●I agree with this opinion. Reasons are as follows. 我赞同的观点是……原因如下。 第2句：交代辩论话题 A. “是否应该……” However, whether universities should mainly provide job-related skills to graduates is a controversial issue. 但是，大学是否应该主要提供给学生工作相关的技能是一个饱受争议的话题。
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广告操纵着人们。它的目标是说服人们去购买产品让他们高兴。 Advertisers focus on selling a brand are encouraged to associate certain brands with a higher status. 广告重在售卖一种品牌印象。我们会不自觉的将一些品牌与社会地位关联在一起。 They use glamorous，successful people. 他们使用迷人的，成功的人（作为形象代言）。 We now live in a consumer are persuaded to follow the latest trend. 我们生活在消费文化里。我们被说服去紧跟潮流。 Advertisers often aim their marketing at can easily be influenced by put pressure on parents to buy them things. 广告商经常把营销目标瞄准儿童。儿童很容易被广告影响。而孩子带给家长购买压力。 Opinions about Advertising 关于广告 Advertising should be aimed at children should be controlled or even banned. 广告应该被监管。将广告瞄准儿童应该受到控制甚至禁止。 Unhealthy foods should not be marketed in a way that Products that can be risk to healthy should display warnings. 垃圾食品不应该以一种吸引人的方式推广。危害到健康的儿童产品应该标示警示文字。
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剑10 1-2 It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children? One important stage in a child’s growth is certainly the development of a conscience, which is linked to the ability to tell right from wrong. This skill comes with time and good parenting, and my firm conviction is that punishment does not have much of a role to play in this. Therefore I have to disagree almost entirely with the given statement. To some extent the question depends on the age of the child. To punish a very young child is both wrong and foolish, as an infant will not understand what is happening or why he or she is being punished. Once the age of reason is reached however, a child can be rewarded for good behavior and discouraged from bad. This kind but firm approach will achieve more than harsh punishments, which might entail many negative consequences unintended by the parents. To help a child learn the difference between right and wrong, teachers and parents should firstly provide good role modelling in their own behavior. After that, if sanctions are needed, the punishment should not be of a physical nature, as that merely sends the message that it is acceptable for larger people to hit smaller ones-an outcome which may well result in the child starting to bully others. Nor should the punishment be in any way cruel.
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