课堂讲评2012高考2卷短文改错及完型填空

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（一）短文改错

Dear Editor,

I’m writing to tell you opinion about water saving. 76.______

Water is important. We, as well as animal, cannot live 77.______

without water and neither agriculture or industry can go 78.______

without it. Yet it seemed water is becoming less and less. 79.______

Many countries in the world find we don’t have enough water. 80.______

To deal with a problem, I think, we should first go all 81.______

out to plant trees though trees will help save water. Next, no 82.______

drinking water should be left running. Third, we should find 83.______

ways to reuse the water using in washing, especially bath 84.______

water for which is quite a lot, and that will save much water. 85.______

Sincerely, Li Hua

评析：

①大意：

高考一卷短文改错内容是节约汽油和节电，此文为节水给编辑写的一封信，提出

水是动物生存和工农业发展之必须。但形势日益严峻，因水资源越来越短缺。所

提建议为：a. 植树 b. 节约饮用水，不能让自来水变成常流水 c. 洗涮用水

和洗澡水的重复利用。

②改错策略：

a.定语从句考察（较难）...especially bath water for which is quite a lot，应该去

掉for 。我们应当找到利用洗衣水和利用消耗量很大的洗澡水的方法。考生

要意识到which前介词for的多余，因which指代洗澡水，是洗澡水“量大”，

因而和for没有任何关系。

b. 指代错误（较难）。Many countries属第三人称，因此代词应为they而非

we，把we 改为they。

C. “used”过去分词作后置定语较难，被修饰词为water,即在洗东西和洗澡中

“被”用掉的水，因此要用used作后置定语。

d. 选择连词（较难）。植树与节水的关系：之所以植树是因为树有助于节水，

因此把though改为because、as或since，但for不合适，因为for表原因时，

前常用逗号分开，起补充说明作用。

e. 时态改错（较易），但seemed容易变为seem,应当根据主语为第三人称变成

seems。

f. 第一人称指代较易，you后加my, opinion可数名词不可单独存在，此处特

指我的意见。

g. 固定搭配neither后的or改为nor（较易）。

i. 冠词考查较易。a problem改为the problem，特指上文水短缺的问题。

j.复数名词表泛指（较易）animal改为animals，可数名词不可单独存在，此处

前面是“We”，所以后面用“animal”的复数形式表泛指。

②答案：76. opinion前加my77.animal---animals78.or—nor79.seemed—seems 80 we--they 81.

a--the/this/that 82. though--because/since/as83. 正确https://www.wendangku.net/doc/5f747972.html,ing--used 85. 去掉for （二）完型填空

Around twenty years ago I was living in York. 21 I had a lot of experience and a Master's degree, I could not find 22 work.

I was 23 a school bus to make ends meet and 24 with a friend of mine, for I had lost my flat．I had 25 five interviews (面试) with a company and one day between bus runs they called to say I did not 26 the job．“Why has my life become so 27 ?” I thought painfully.

As I pulled the bus over to 28 a little girl, she handed me an earning 29 I should keep it 30 somebody claimed (认领) it．The earring was painted black and said “BE HAPPY”.

At first I got angry．Then it 31 me – I had been giving all of my 32 to what was going wrong with my 33 rather than what was right! I decided then and there to make a 34 of fifty things I was happy with．Later, I decided to 35 more things to the list．That night there was a phone call for 36 from a lady who was a director at a larger 37 ．She asked me if I would 38 a one-day lecture on stress (压力) management to 200 medical workers．I said yes.

My 39 there went very well, and before long I got a well-paid job．To this day I know that it was because I changed my way of 40 that I completely changed my life.

21．A．As B．Though C．If D．When

22．A．successful B．extra C．satisfying D．convenient 23．A．driving B．repairing C．taking D．designing

24．A．working B．travelling C．discussing D．living

25．A．prepared for B．attended C．asked for D．held

26．A．lose B．like C．find D．get

27．A．hard B．busy C．serious D．short

28．A．wave at B．drop off C．call on D．look for

29．A．ordering B．promising C．saying D．showing

30．A．in case B．or else C．as if D．now that

31．A．hurt B．hit C．caught D．moved

32．A．feelings B．attention C．strength D．interests

33．A．opinions B．education C．experiences D．life

34．A．list B．book C．check D．copy

35．A．connect B．turn C．keep D．add

36．A．her B．a passenger C．me D．my friend

37．A．hospital B．factory C．restaurant D．hotel

38．A．listen to B．review C．give D．talk about

39．A．plan B．choice C．day D．tour

40．A．operation B．speaking C．employment D．thinking

一、评讲完型填空

①大意：本文通过一位成功人士对20年前自己艰难找工作的经历的回顾，说明怎样在逆境

中找到一个好工作。

⑵他找到好工作成功的经验：a. 放下自己拥有工作经验和硕士学位的优越感，开公交勉强

度日(make ends meet) 。b.放下架子，租不起公寓和朋友一起住。C. 坚持不懈寻找合适的工作。d.调整自己痛苦心态，使自己努力做到快乐和开心。

⑶文章细节分析：作者到一家公司参加(attended)5次面试，可还是没被录用，极其痛苦

（painful）。当一天一位坐他车的小女孩下车时（小女孩下车The girl got off the bus,如果主语为司机，“司机让小女孩下车”则是The driver dropped off the girl.) 交给他捡到的一枚黑色的上面写有“开心生活”的耳环(earing)，他起初很生气，接着突然灵机一动，（An idea hit him.他突然有了主意。如果主语是人的话应该：He hit on a good idea他突然想到一个好办法) ,结果他转变了想法，意识到自己过分关注自己负面而非正面的生活。自己决定把自己感到开心的五十件事情列成一个表，并且不断添加，给自己以快乐的暗示。最后，自己收到了一位大医院的院长(director)给他打来的电话，邀请他给她管理的医院的200名医务工作者作一个压力管理的讲座。那天的讲座（即他去演讲的一天）很顺利，不久也找到了一份好工作。最后他意识到是因为他转变了思维方式（由消极心态改变为积极心态），他才改变了自己的人生。根据他对自己心理剖析（过份关注自己生活的负面忽略正面）以及他做了压力管理的讲座，我们推断此人为从事心理研究的人士。通过claim认领这个词，我们知道，这个上面写着“开心起来”的黑耳环是小女孩在公交车上捡到的。

完型填空答案：21~25BCADB26~30DABCA31~35BBDAD36~40CACCD

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