英语新东方模板石叔

越来越多的= more and more people an increasing number of individuals people in mounting/large numbers

我认为l think

L am convinced that…

To my understanding

有必要做

it is exceedingly necessary for-to-

It is of great necessity for-to-

年轻人=young people youngsters/teenagers/juniors

非常，很=very

rather/particularly/exceedingly

提升/提高promote

enhance/strengthen/cultivate

on English learning

首段

In contemporary world，English learning has gained great popularity and it is of great significance for youngsters to learn English well。(主题句)Based on a survey，a majority of international organization or firms acknowledge that they prefer recruiting employees who can speak English fluently（调查法表述）

二段

However，English learners may have a variety of difficulties or troubles in their learning（主题句）。For instance，it can be noticed that a large number of students have difficulty memorizing words。Freqeuntly，it is also difficult for them to understand the rules of grammar。In addition，though some are good at reading or writing，they can not express themselves freely in English。

尾段

Then，how to get a good command of（好学）this language？l am convinced that practice makes perfect。Only practice can help one to master the rules of grammar and remember words。And it is also through practice that one can speak way。If we try our utmost to practice English every day，the future of our English

learning will be promising and hopeful。

首段：图画描述

（引入图画）Given is a simple but enlightening cartoon：（图画描述：人/物+动作+文字+环境）a teacher teaches/show her students basic skills in math‘Multiplication Table’，to her expresses his doubt：‘no offence，but by the time we’re in job market，won’t that time stuff be outdated？’

二段：图画主题+现象+意义

（画图联系主题）Apparently，this picture can be naturally associated with the importance of learning basic skills：（图画评论）if students intend to achieve success in job markets，it is advisable for them to start with basic knowledge。

（现象概述）In contemporary society，it has become a trend for a host of youngsters to ignore elementary skills in study。（相关人+感受）Meanwhile，an increasing number of teenagers find /deem it useless/unnecessary to study these skills。（举例）A sase in point is the boy in the picture。

However，（意义）it is these basic skills that enable students to build up adequate ability，experience and confidence for future jobs。As a matter of fact，intelligent learns/people in large numbers have come to realize the significance of mastering basic skills.

尾段：观点+建议+展望

（尾段句首万能）as a collage student，l am convinced that it is of great necessity for youngsters to strengthen ourselves by mastering basic skills。（万能建议）thus，we should educate ,advocate and encourage our friends，classmates and acquaintance to cultivate this awareness。（展望）sparing no efforts to do so，we can witness a hopeful and promising future of our career/jobs and study。