大连欧联雅思 ——【备考锦囊】3个月攻下雅思写作高分城池
大连欧联雅思——【备考锦囊】3个月攻下雅思写作高分城池
要知道雅思写作考试中最主要考察大家的是什么，肯定很多同学会说是语法，词汇或英语的运用能力等，不可否认，这些知识对雅思写作非常的关键，但通过我这么多年的雅思写作的教学经验来说，我认为最重要的是要写出真正的英语，也就是说尽量少出现中式英语的东西，也就是我们常说的“Chinglish”。那怎样能在短时间内避免出现中式英语的错误呢，最好的方法就是多收集这方面的材料，不要犯类似的错误。下面是一些同学在写作中经常犯的一些错误，希望对大家能有所帮助。
1. 概念的错误
在写作中，有类词语表面上看似乎是对的,但实际上却没有表达出你想要表达的意思,有时恰恰适得其反。用这类词语写成的英语句子常常引起误解。
①(误)When we go into society after graduation, we will encounter many difficulties.
(正)When we start to work after graduation, we will encounter many difficulties.
“go into society”没有汉语“进入社会”的含义。在西方,它是指一个人到一定的年龄可以开始社会交往,如结交异性朋友,进入某些社交或公共场所等。而汉语“进入社会”一般指学生中学或大学毕业后参加工作。
②(误)Left alone in the jungle at night ,she felt very dangerous.
(正)Left alone in the jungle at night, she felt t hat she was in great danger.
“dangerous”与作者要表达的意思完全相反。说某人dangerous,实际上是说他在某一方面对某人构成危胁,而不是处于危险的境地。这个词用错,意思就完全变了。原意是“她”感到处于危险中。
2、搭配不当
用词搭配是我国学生学英语最感棘手的地方,在雅思写作中，这种错误也是经常出现的，所以希望大家引起重视，因为中文里的某些词语在不同的语境里,英语有不同的说法,而这些说法是约定俗成的,完全是习惯用法所致,我们稍有不慎,便会犯错。现举一些考生在考试中常犯的错误:
①(误)At college, we should learn as much knowledge as possible so t hat we can be well prepared for our future career.
(正)At college, we should acquire as much knowledge as possible so t hat we can be well prepared for our future career.
“学习知识”是学生写作时经常用到的词组,但不少学生都写成learn knowledge,实际上knowledge是不能与learn搭配的,只能与acquire,obtain,absorb,accumulate ,develop,advance,gain,broaden ,enlar ge,impart,derive ，deepen, brush up, digest 等词搭配使用。
②(误)In July, they will take part in the final term examinations.
(正)In July, they will take t he final term examinations. “examination”或“test”不能与“take part in”搭配使用,但可以和attend, have, sit for
,conduct, enter for, get through, pass, fail等词语用在一起。
3、用词累赘
由于对某些词和词组的意思缺乏真正的理解或把要表达的意思先用中文想好,然后逐字翻译成英语,造成累赘。例如:
①(误)In my opinion, I think t he production and sale of fake commodities should be
banned.
(正)I think t he production and sale of fake commodities should be banned.
in my opinion与I think意思完全相同,可以删去其中的一个。
②(误)Scientists are trying to find a solution to solve t he problem of energy shortage .
(正)Scientist s are trying to find a solution to t he problem of energy shortage.
一个词与它的派生词一起出现,造成意思重复,给人以累赘的感觉,改正后的句子变得简洁多了。
③(误)Waste gas is t he main cause which leads to air pollution . (正)Waste gas is t he main cause of air pollution.
cause和lead to都表原因,同时使用造成意思重复。
4、逗号连接错误
中国学生在英语写作中常常单独使用逗号而不用句号、分号、冒号或连结词来连接两个或几个独立的分句。例如:
①(误)The weather was fine, we decided to climb t he mountain. (正)As the weather was fine, we decided to climb t he mountain.
②(误)The [wv]prospects[/vw] are bright, the road has twists and turns. (正)While t he prospects are bright, the road has twists and turns.
上面两个标有误的句子在语法上没有错误,它错就错在逗号的使用不当。错误的根源是学生受汉语写作习惯的影响,把汉语逗号的作用等同于英语逗号的作用。在汉语中,逗号可以单独使用在并列分句之间。
(1)变成两个简单句:
The wind was blow ing very hard. They couldn’t go boating on t he lake.
(2)变成并列句,用逗号加并列连接:
The wind was blowing very hard they couldn’t go boating on t he lake.
(3)变成并列句,用分号连接:
The wind was blowing very hard; couldn’t go boating on t he lake. (4)变成并列句,用分号加连接性副连接:
The wind was blowing very hard ,therefore, they couldn’t go boating on
lake.
(5)变成并列句,有时也可以用冒接,这时第二个分句解释说明第一个分句
They couldn’t go boating on the lake; the wind was blowing very hard.
(6)变成复合句:
As the wind was blowing very hard they couldn’t go boating on t he lake.
(7)用独立主格结构改写句子:
The wind blowing very hard, they couldn’t go boating on t he lake.
如果大家在词汇和语法有一定累积的基础上，再避免出现中式英语的东西，加上观点的正确性，我想那些基础差的考生想拿到写作六分，应该可以如愿以偿的。最后祝愿大家在新的一年里，能够顺利通过雅思考试，拿到心中的分数。
雅思备考干货：三周雅思写作备考方案
雅思备考干货：三周雅思写作备考方案 雅思写作一直以来是雅思考试中压分比较严重的一个科目。小伙伴们真是绞尽了脑汁，使出了浑身招数也摆脱不了万年5.5/6的命运。下面就和大家分享雅思备考干货：雅思写作备考方案，来欣赏一下吧。雅思备考干货：雅思写作备考方案一大作文如何最安全快速的确定立场首先，task2的重中之重就是在审题之后，确定文章立场，对于task2的开头段而言，与task1有很大的差异，除了改写以外，还需要给出自己的立场。接下来，我们来讨论下主体部分，在主体段则需按照讨论类几种不同的类型进行。1 To what extent do you agree or disagree观点五选一，既可倒向一边，也可观点中立，主体段根据观点讨论。2 Do you think the advantages outweigh thedisadvantages,主体段必须客观讨论利弊。3 Discuss both views and give you ownopinion.观点自选，主体段客观讨论两类不同的观点。结论段则一般为亮观点加上对于主体段的总结二图表小作文的写作结构模板1 小作文共六种类型，分别为柱状图、线状图、表格、饼状图、流程图、地图。前四者属于数据类小作文，旨在数据的整理和分析，后两者数据非数据类小作文，考察力度较小，需注意。2 小作文写作模板：开头段-全部采用改写即可;主体段，一般分成两段、三段或者四段，结论段一句话总结，最多两句话。3 数据图表的主要关注点：所有的小作文不论哪一种，首先要注意的就是时态，当然流程图的时态是一般现在时。下文重点讨论数据类小作文的主体段常见分段思路，写作要点及结论方法。对于数据类表
顾家北手把手教你雅思写作全文翻译表格
本文档配合《顾家北手把手教你雅思写作（剑10）》版使用使用方法：每句话下面预留两行空格， 第一行写自己的翻译，第二行写顾家北的翻译与批阅。 全文翻译1：遵守规则论述类题目写作要点 Some people think that children should obey the rules or do what their parents and teachers want them to do. Other people think children controlled too much cannot deal with problem themselves in adulthood. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.
全文翻译2：老龄化社会+观点类( advantage/disadvantage ) +段落的数量In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Does this trend have positive or negative effects on society?
全文翻译3：看电视学习+观点类( agree/disagree ) +写作要点
Some people believe that children can learn effectively by watching TV and they should be encouraged to watch TV both at home and at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
雅思ENVIRONMENT类写作素材
Growth in air travel harms environment(飞行增多危害环境) Climate change experts from the Tyndall Climate Research Centre in Britain have said urgent action（紧急行动）is needed to curb the rapid growth in air travel（抑制飞行的快速增长）if the government is to meet its commitments（实现承诺）on tackling global warming（处理温室效应）. This report from Stephen Evans: Falling ticket price and rising incomes are leading to rapid growth in global air travel.（导致国际航空业迅速发展的原因是机票价格的下降和收入水平的提升。）According to the British government, the number of British air passengers, for example, will more than double in the next quarter of a century（下一个25年）. Increases of such an order would mean much more aviation fuel（燃油）being burned and aviation fuel may be more harmful to the environment than other fuels because the resulting smoke is emitted at high altitudes（高海拔）. A group of scientists at the environmental research group, the Tyndall Centre, says that if Britain is to meet its overall target for cutting damaging emissions（减少有害气体排放）, other uses of fuel like for heating homes or driving cars would have to be cut dramatically. The British government wants the use of aviation fuel covered by international agreement on the environment. The difficulty for any individual government（任何政府）is that taxing fuel used at its own airports might push airlines to move their operations to competing airports in other countries. https://www.wendangku.net/doc/68675988.html,/worldservice/learningenglish/newsenglish/witn/2005/09/050921_aviation.sh tml Calls to control low-cost flights（限制廉价航空） Cheap flights（廉价航空）on no frills airlines may not be a burden on our wallets but they will dearly cost the UK's environment（严重危害环境）, campaigners believe. Scientists predict that if carbon dioxide emissions continue to increase, global warming will bring higher annual temperatures and heavier rainfall（温室效应会带来更高的气温以及更大的降水）- with all the associated problems（相关的问题）. +将来时）it is . Agencies such as the Sustainable Development Commission (SDC) want our air tickets to reflect "the true cost of flying" to the environment. To green groups, this involves the aviation industry having to pay tax on the fuel（航空业应该为燃油使用赋税）it puts in planes.
(完整版)雅思写作大作文素材
同意与否文体 There is no denying that the specific issue of srh./ 或接*whetker 从句has become controlersial. Howoer, in spite of those who are against-' for ?“ I approve ■wholeheartedK- of/ 或I strongly object to the idea that ??? Those who hold negach e/ positive aniiude co^ ards ??. "belie1e chsu ... mayexen ad^erse/ significant effect on us. ... isal^\ ays top of the list of their argument. Fnr nampl^...（滴用举洌子的方法*軽）.Rxirlz, rhnw crirics/ ad vncar^^ alm claim that ...（就处写第二个原因〉for the reason dial …. It is often the case lhat…（此处总结上段反方提出的几个观点）。But when it comes to .... .... and…：（此处先总结写你所支持的几个锂由户an increasing number of people inducing me are com-inc ed that.. .For one thing ... ? The ev idence rec ent h presented in research journah av a liable to the public confhmw tha.t ???it 处写谓查结果■通过敎字来证明自己所列举的理由1。Stnulariy.. should also deserve our special attention In other words, ...（^种说法解⑥。If .not ..（S过来在说一o Last but not least.... ObY?u$ly t ir is hard for both sides to coiue to an agreement on this coKuplicaced issue, butl srill commit to the notion that <..（HI申你的立场）。
五个自学雅思写作的备考方法
五个自学雅思写作的备考方法 要知道备考雅思写作是一个漫长的过程，我们需要找到正确并且适合自己的复习方法。今天三立在线教育雅思网为大家带来的是五个自学雅思写作的备考方法的相关资讯，备考的烤鸭们，赶紧来看看吧！ 1.扩大知识面，增加知识积累 近年来，雅思写作考核趋势越发严格，作文写作任务中所涉及到的话题有时候是为考生所不熟悉的。对于很多考生而言，雅思写作最难的部分就是看不懂题目或者看懂了题目却无法理解，于是更不用说写出一篇好作文。 因此平时扩大自身知识面，加大阅读量是提高写作分数的当务之急。在我们的课堂中，训练学生对于写作题目的理解是非常重要的一个环节。 2.写作单词，句型的积累 在教学过程和给学生批改作文的过程中，屡屡发现不少考生的作文就好像是一篇口语稿件。其中原因主要是考生们的词汇量。 写作词汇与日常口语词汇要求不同，同时写作句型也相对于口语句型的要求更高。因此，想要提高雅思写作分数的考生们务必需要大量积累写作词汇和相应的精彩句型，让自己的文章符合正式书面用语的要求。 3.写作观点的构思 近期雅思写作考题时常出现一些较为抽象的话题要求考生们撰写议论文。对于烤鸭们最大的挑战无疑就是论点的剖析、观点的阐述，这是写作的关键也是拿分的关键。 对于写作功底相对薄弱的考生而言，进行观点分析并撰写中心段落、中心句将会是十分有效的训练。
4.范文的学习 学习过程中最忌讳闭门造车，任何一门学科的学习都鼓励大家集百家之所长。平时都写作训练也少不了对于高分范文的学习模仿。其中包括对于范文论点分析学习，句型表达的分析学习，并适当加以记忆消化，在下次自己撰写文章的时候加以学习模仿。久而久之，自身的写作能力也可以得到很大提高。 5.坚持文章撰写练习 写作提高是一个相对来说较为漫长的过程，其间需要考生们坚持写作科目的撰写训练。三天打鱼，两天晒网的复习永远不能满足高分备考的需求。希望烤鸭们可以持之以恒，坚持对于写作科目的训练。 如上就是三立网课教育小编为大家带来的五个自学雅思写作的备考方法的相关资讯，掌握最新雅思资讯，敬请关注（三立在线教育雅思网）更多雅思考试资讯以及备考资料免费领！
雅思写作素材Crime
Crime 类范文 犯罪类 There are an increasing number of juvenile delinquents. What are the causes of this phenomenon? 只分析一个方面（产生原因），写成5段式 开头段（不少于4句） In this day and age, the incidence of juvenile offenses has been growing at an alarming rate. Today, the sheer number of juvenile offenders has reached staggering proportions. A recent survey conducted by the Chinese Academy of Social Sciences revealed that one out of four crimes today was carried out by minors. Hence, it is imperative that we pinpoint the causes of this disturbing phenomenon. 主体段1（不少于4句） In the first place, many instance of juvenile delinquency have been attributed to the violent or pornographic content of some TV shows and video games. Now we are facing a proliferation of blood and guts and nudity on TV, the computer and the Internet. Many youngsters, especially boys, get addicted to such scenes. Lacking the capacity to distinguish between right and wrong, they develop criminal tendencies. 主体段2（不少于4句） In the second place, parental neglect and domestic violence play a pivotal role in the increase of youth crimes. Today there are an ever-growing number of dysfunctional families. The children raised in such families tend to be afflicted with constant fear. In the end, they develop a hatred for society and other individuals. 主体段3（不少于4句） In the third place, there is a definite correlation between the increase of juvenile crime rate and the rise of adult crime rate in society. The more adult crimes, the higher the probability of youngsters falling prey to adult offenders. Many youths are tempted by evil adults into committing crimes. And some others are victims of adult offenses and become criminals themselves to get their revenge on society. 结尾段（不少于2句） In sum, many factors contribute to the surge of juvenile delinquency. It is crucial that we take vigorous measures to tackle these problems and ensure that the future or our nation—that is, the youngsters, have a more promising future ahead of them. Crime 类8分范文 Some people think the media should not report details of crimes to the public. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 一边倒写法=写完全同意或者完全不同意：五段式 开头段（不少于4句） With the crime rate hovering at high level, the print media as well as the electronic media dedicate large proportions of their space or airtime to detailed crime coverage. Whether the media should present detailed accounts of crimes has triggered spirited debate. Many assert that the news media should stop giving details of crimes. Speaking for myself, I totally agree with their views. 表示同意可以替换成approve of /wholeheartedly support/ cannot agree with their view more/ consent to/ am for 不同意可以替换成disagree with/ am against/ am opposed to / object to/ disapprove of/ cannot go along with 主体段1（不少于4句） In the first place, given the mercenary motives behind most detailed crime coverage, it is imperative that we discourage such coverage. The principal purpose of reporter covering criminal acts is to boost newspaper circulations or television ratings; much detailed crime coverage is biased or exaggerated. It only serves to leave a multitude of citizens constantly fearful about crime. 主体段2（不少于4句） In the second place, detailed reports of crimes by the press afford the potential criminals very useful learning materials. Reporting crimes in graphic detail helps those who are in the process of plan some criminal act to perfect their plans. Drawing on the well-documented crime stories in the media, would-be criminals learn how to avoid the mistakes in their crime. And this may aggravate the already soaring crime rate. 主体段3（不少于4句） In the third place, detailed reports of heinous crimes may traumatize the victims of the reported crimes. The reporters rarely consult the victims before they describe details of horrific crimes to the public. Hence, such reports become nothing more than an attempt to satisfy the curiosity of some base minds. Without
雅思写作素材-动物实验
Animal 类 范文 Some people think animal experimentation should be stopped because it is cruel. Others think it is necessary for the development of science. Discuss both view and give your own opinion. Animals were friend of foes of humanity at different times of the human history. In modern times, experiments upon animals have long been a breeding ground for spirited debate. Some animal right activists argue that we should ban animal experiments altogether because putting animals through experimentation is unjustifiable on moral grounds. Yet some other people contend that the advancement of science necessitates animal testing. Personally, I believe both their views have merit and demerit. Granted, empirical evidence suggests that many animal experiments are performed callously without any attention to the discomfort or pain that laboratory mammals endure. First and foremost, improper confinement of test animals such as locking them up in cramped cages is inhumane. It can gravely disrupt natural biological functions of the test animal. Further, the effects of vaccination and vivisection conducted on live mammals can be chilling. They may, in some case, even constitute sheer torture of live animals. However, from a more pragmatic perspective, evidence bounds that animal subjects are still an indispensable part at this point. In the first place, it is manifest that drug experimentation on live mammals is far more effective than experimentation on bacteria or on other lower species in testing drug safety. Drugs that have severe potential side effects on Homo sapiens must be tested by pharmaceutical companies on live mammals first to ascertain their toxicity. In the second place, in space research, live animals are still the only practical alternative to humans in testing living creature reaction to outer-space experience on a flight not considered to be sufficiently safe for human astronauts. Lastly, lab research about the behavioral tendencies of chimpanzees, gorillas and other members of the primate group is also necessary. It produces outcomes consistently advancing anthropological and genetic studies. To conclude, I concede that experiments upon animals may induce suffering to the test animals. However, I am convinced that there are no feasible alternatives to this methodology at the current stage of scientific development. On balance, I think that we should allow animals testing to be continued but at the same time we use techniques such as anesthetic to minimize the pain of the test animal. Animals 类词汇 动物权益保护主义者 animal rights activists 医学研究 medical research ， 残忍的cruel/ merciless/ inhuman/ callous/ brutal 活体解剖 vivisection 麻醉anaesthetic
【16-25天】18个高频雅思写作话题思路分析与素材汇总
最近考试高频的十八个写作话题思路分析与素材汇总！只有7页，共18个话题，中英双语结合给出了关键思路和素材，给出了关键的高分词汇与表达！老是在考试时理不清思路、想不出素材的同学，看了一定会有帮助的！大家加油加油！ ----------------------------------------------我是分割线--------------------------------------------------- 一、跳槽的原因及解决办法 1、相关词汇： fierce competition heavy pressure job-hopping is looked upon to move upward quickly keep skill fresh and up to date acclimatize themselves to the rapidly changing society 2、原因： （1）社会压力大，人们的竞争意识增强，不断改变以适应社会的变化。 （2）处于个人发展的需要，寻求升职，更新知识。 （3）金钱的诱惑，不在乎在哪儿工作，做什么职业，只要挣钱多。 （4）家庭原因，spouse工作地点改变或孩子去其他地方上学。 3、解决方法： （1）要理性看待，一般来说，stability equals success。
（2）chronic job-hopper将被questioned integrity and loyalty ，not reliable。 （3）政府和mass media应该鼓励人们扎根一个地方，扎扎实实干事业，并且尽可能提高welfare，改善城市和community的环境，留住人才。 （4）公司应该提高工资待遇，给employee创造一个良好的工作环境，在保证企业利润的同时要考虑员工个人发展，增加培训，扩充员工的知识。 二、大学是否应该根据就业教授学生知识，大学的主要功能是什么 平衡写： 1、认为应该提供实际知识的： （1）大学生毕业就要找工作，因此要培养学生掌握future job的技能。 （2）有人甚至声称理论没用，不是每个大学生都要做科学家。 2、反对方： （1）It will definitely be shortsighted to…目光短浅理论知识非常重要，理论指导实践，大学的职责不仅是教会学生一门技术，更重要的是教授一种方法。 （2）不学理论只学实际知识，会使学生变成utilitarian，narrow-minded，lack of imagination，如果学生要学的只是生存的技能，那就去vocational school。 3、总结 总之，我认为大学的功能是versatile的，促进学生all-around development，培养学生具有creative mind in some special field，而不只是教授该领域的实际知识，可以通过一些part-time job来获得。 三、个人不能对环境保护做不了什么，同意不同意 This is just an excuse for the ignorance of environmental protection. 1、分析环境恶化原因是缺乏环保意识。 2、给出解决办法。 四、维持博物馆是否是浪费金钱？ 1、提出自己的观点（反对）。 政府应该spend a lot of money to enrich the collection of museums to cater for different tastes or needs of different people．有的人认为是浪费钱，我认为是很有必要的。 2、博物馆很重要（博物馆的作用）。 （1）illuminate the culture，history and arts of the world. 比如，世界上最大的British Museum provide visitors with all-round knowledge about the world culture and arts,collections in it trace the development of civilization throughout the history of mankind. Definitely a heartquake！ （2）shoulder the responsibility to preserve and carry forward a country‘s traditional culture. （3）serve as a significant mean of adolescent education,benefit both the present and future generation. 教育学生什么是美，purify their heart，也可以作为第二课堂，提供教学参考
雅思写作经验与考前复习建
、| !_ 一个人总要走陌生的路，看陌生的风景，听陌生的歌，然后在某个不经意的瞬间，你会发现，原本费尽心机想要忘记的事情真的就这么忘记了.. 雅思写作经验以及考前复习建议 （一）、合理愉快的度过雅思写作的60分钟 经常有学生问起怎样在雅思写作考试的60分钟里游刃有余的写完两篇英文文章。也许正因为中国的学生太注重考试现场，所以形形色色的考前冲刺班，考前串讲纷纷闪亮登场。不论效果怎样，单从给学生以安慰的角度来说，考前的各种“安抚课程”的设计初衷都是善良的。在这里，把怎样完胜60分钟雅思作文拿出来与大家共同分享。 毋庸置疑，“先大后小”，即先写大作文后写小作文可以让我们从时间和得分上都占得先机，在此不做多讲。本文就从翻开试卷那一瞬间开始，告诉您我们应该做什么，怎么做。 第一步：分解题目（1分钟） 这里以task2为例来说明一下。分解标题句的第一个目的就是为了找到该topic中的核心词汇，写作时严格围绕着该核心词（词组）组织文章，以免出现跑题现象。其次是为了将该词（组）在写作前直接进行同义代换（把你想用到的形式罗列出来，通常设置3个即可），以达到用词多样化的目的。用2010年4月10日的雅思写作考题举例说明一下： （2010-4-10 task2）Some people think that cheaper and cheaper travel by air is becoming beneficial, others think it has drawbacks to environment and the resources of the world. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 在拿到这个题目时，第一步就把黑体部分圈出或者用下划线标出。时刻提醒自己，文章中的每句话都要围绕着这几个词展开。然后进行换词行动，如下： Travel by air=air travel=go to…by plane… Beneficial=benefits=advantage=merit, 可以根据平时积累细化成accessible，bring personal mobility to the masses。 make the world smaller 等等，使之后的论述不要尽停留在“好处多”“坏处多”上，而没有更深入更细致的论述。 同理，我们可以把drawbacks，environment，resources等进行同义转换和细化，从而避免在写作的过程中忘记换词或者因为总是想着怎样换词而影响了思路的顺畅。 第二步：对文章结构进行构思（0.5分钟） 根据题目中的“Discuss both views and give your own opinion”确定属于单边还是双边写法，应该通过几段来进行论述。因为关于文章结构的问题，老师会在课堂上反复提及，而且也没有什么技术含量，所以考生一定要在30秒内搞定该部分。 第三步：头脑风暴，搜集论点（3分钟） 把自己积累的优点（在本题中没有限制是哪方面的优点）缺点（在本题目中提到了对环境和
如何从根本上提升雅思写作水平之逻辑篇
如何从根本上提升雅思写作水平之 逻辑篇 写作老师经验分享, 如何从根本上提升雅思写作水平之逻 辑篇，今天给大家带来如何从根本上提升雅思写作水平之逻辑篇,希望可以帮助到大家，下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。 写作老师经验分享如何从根本上提升雅思写作水平之逻辑篇 我们来拿一个真题和一个类似于真题的题进行说明： 20XX0328 Some people say that communication by using computers and phones will have side effects on young people’s writing and reading skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 改编题： Some people say that the use of using computers and phones will have side effects on young people’s communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
请各位同学想一想，这两个问题是一样的么?劳烦各位思考个3分钟，然后继续往下翻~如果你觉得并没有很大差别，那估计真的碰到这个题目的话，6.5分是很勉强的。 ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ 我们先来说改编题： side effects: 1. face-to-face communication减少，感情可能变淡 positive effects: 1. be able to contact people without geographical limitation; in the past, it may be impossible to say Hi to a foreign friend. 2. be able to contact friends or partners quickly, no need to wait for responses; in the past, writing letters really wastes a lot of time and sometimes letters may be lost. 我们再来说真题： side effects: 1. writing abilities会下降，因为写信的频率降低了，handwriting当然变差
雅思大作文专项突破：追随时尚
雅思大作文专项突破：追随时尚 本文收集整理了雅思大作文专项突破：追随时尚。这是目前常见的、高频的雅思写作话题，同学们在备考时可以边写边学，积累写作素材，以便在考试中更胸有成竹。 Topic 24: Fashion is difficult to follow, and some people argue that we should not follow it. They think that we should dress what we like and feel comfortable. Do you agree or disagree? 解析: 支持追随潮流(following fashion)的观点： ? 时装是自我表达( a means of self-expression)的一种休现，表现人的性格和喜好(reflect one's personality or likes)，让人们在生活巾体验不同角色(allow people to try on many roles in life)，同时便世界更加丰富多彩(diversity and variety of the world in which we live); ? 新时代的时尚(fashion in the new era)并不一定意味着高消费，也并非一定穿某种款式的衣服才算时尚;
? 时装源于生活(root in daily life),反映生活趋势(reflect that life)，充分考虑了消费者的需求C consider consumer demand)，不像人们想的那样肤浅(not as superficial as some people think) 反对追随潮流(following fashion )的观点： ? 潮流变化太快，盲目追求潮流(follow fashion blindly)是浪费时间和金钱; ? 失去了自己的喜好和判断(dwell too much on what others think); ? 鼓励人们将衣服和地位、社会阶层还有财富联系在一起(associate clothing with status, social class and wealth),这是一种歧视。 范文 Fashion refers to a style of clothing worn by most people of a country. The growing concern about fashion in recent years comes as no surprise, considering the fact that fashion is very often at odds with the traditional function of clothing, protecting wearers from the extremes of weather. In my opinion, fashion is not a betrayal but an indicative of a principle that wearing clothing is for both functional and social reasons. Fashions are linked to personal style. Fashions allow wearers to express emotion and solidarity with other people. People dress to their mood and according to circumstances. Buying fashionable clothes is a