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英语作文22
英语作文22

何晴

201005910607

March 5, 2012

Shopping Online

Shopping online is a kind of e-commerce. And it is very popular among the young. It retrieves product information thought internet, and issues shopping requests through the electronic purchase order. Then the commodities will be delivered through the courier comps.

Classification of the shopping sites: the channel of shopping online is B2B platform, B2C platform, Independent the online shopping mall, group shopping sites and so on. At present, alibaba, jingdong mall and zhuogou mall are very famous in china, which belong to B2B platform. And 95 mall and tongcheng shopping belong to S2C(Shop to Customer in city).

The benefits of shopping online: in the first place, there are many advantages to the consumers. Firstly, consumers can “go shopping” at home, and the order not subject to the limitations of time and place. Secondly, internet has a relatively large number of product information, you can buy goods that you can not get in the local. Thirdly, when we are buying goods, we need not to come to visit the site, it saves time and effort. Fourthly, goods on the internet are much cheaper than in general mall. In the other place, it has many interests to the trade company. On one hand, it can improve the economic efficiency of enterprises and the ability to participate in international competition. On the other hand, this kind of new shopping mode make the efficiency of resource

allocation higher in a larger context and a broader level.

The weak points of shopping online: first, physical goods and the photos have a large gap. Y ou can only see the photos on the internet, when the goods actually arrive at your hands, you will feel you are deceived. It is better to buy goods at the mall. Second, the clothes should not be tried. Shopping online you want to see the size, Length , Sleeve , long pants , etc., you will think and think. Third, it is not safe pay online. What the most be worried about is that it needed a bank account , there are steal-number horses in someone’s computer, and it causes some dangers.

Shopping online has both advantages and disadvantages. We should make good use of it .

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