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一、短文改错(不分行)（共1000小题；共1000.0分）

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My parents decided to make a trip to Beijing. When they told me about their decisions, I was so delighted. But my mother became worried with her flower, for nobody would take care of it. Seeing the worrying expression on her face, suddenly I remembered that an article in a magazine I had read earlier. It's suggested in the article that people used a piece of cloth to take care of their plants when you are away. On the day we set off, I found a piece of cloth and put one end of them into the basin, which is full of water, and the other end into the flower pot. Three days after, when we came back from Beijing, flower was still alive.

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I'm very glad to hear you are coming to visit our school the next Thursday. Unfortunate, I won't be able to meet you at the railway station although I have class the whole day. You won't find difficult to get to our school. The station bus left every 30 minutes and will take you right to the Post Office Building. My school are just opposite them. On arrival, you can call me and I will meet you at the school gate. Then I will introduce you with our headmaster and he will tell you about the schedule of your visit. Having a pleasant trip.

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One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend, a trunk came to a stop besides us. The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella because he found we were wet through. I stood there and couldn't believe in that a complete stranger is so thoughtful. The man insisted, so I grateful accepted the offer, thanked him and watched the truck disappear down the road. This man

might need the umbrella himself, and he preferred to give it to everyone else. It was a lesson to us that it was possible give without expect anything in return.

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The temple stands nearby the city. It dated from 1961 and is 50 meters in high. It is one of the most famous temple in the country and about 5,000 tourists come to visit every year. Five years ago, people decided to repair the temple, but this work was completed last year. The ground floor has been complete painted, and the roof, too. All the rooms has been protected from birds by fixed wires across the windows. Trees and flowers have been planted around the temple. We believe, in a few years, the temple will take on new look.

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Last weekend, I helped my grandparents their trip to Dalian. On Saturday morning, together with my grandparents, I search the Internet for the train schedule, the weather in Dalian, and some hotel informations. In the afternoon, we went to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there had a long queue. After the dinner, I packed the things the suitcase, what my grandparents would need, such as clothes, glasses, an umbrella, and a map. The next morning, I went to the station to show them off. Waving goodbye to them on the platform, I felt happily for them and wished them safe journey.

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Online shopping is increasing popular among people in recent years. Some people liked to buy goods online. And I don' t like it, because online shopping is less reliable than the traditional sale. Firstly, some dishonest merchant offer consumers to false information online. Secondly, consumers can't feel the items that is usually presented by means of pictures. This means the items delivering may differ from which consumers expect. As a result, they may risk returning the items at our own expense. Thirdly, the items might be damaged during delivery. In word, online shopping isn't reliable at all.

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Dear Zhou Lu,

I'm writing a letter ask you for some help. As you know, Zhang Fei and I used to be good friend. However, on one day, Zhang Fei read my private letter in secret and tell others what was written in it. Knowing this, I was extreme angry. I told her I would not be his friend any more. Hearing what I said, Zhang felt very surprised and no longer stayed with me. Facing with this, I felt very upset. I am much angry with her improper behaviour, but I can't forget the wonderful time that I stayed with her. I wonder whether I should forgive her. And I'm afraid if I offer to make friends with her, she will refuse me. How should I do?

Your friend,

Li Hua

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Dear Wei Fang,

It's a long time since I heard from you last lime. Now I'd like to tell you an impressive story what happened on the first day of my teaching career. A boy, Li Ming, whose father died a month before, was late for school. He stood outside the classroom silent. I smiled to him and let him in. After a while, he began to cry. Seeing this, I walked to him and asked what has happened. He told me about his mother was ill but he had to get some medicine for her. At same time, he apologized to me for his lateness. Moved by his word, I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song naming "Mother" for the students. From then on, I began to realize we should respect our parents and do their best to

help them. Do you think so? I'm looking forward to your reply.

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Dear John,

I'm very pleasing to know you are coming to study in Beijing. It is really good idea to improve your Chinese before the new term began. And now let me to tell you something about the school. First, it is very conveniently for you to get there by Bus No. 16. Next, the classes are very small. There are 24

teaching hour a week. After class, you can enjoy sports and activities with other students. Stay with a Chinese family will provide you with a chance to practise your Chinese but know more about the Chinese family life. The time will suit you and only 200 yuan are paid per month. I'll get touch with them if you are interested in this school.

Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

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The other day, I was invited my friend Sam's home for dinner. I felt a bit surprising when I saw Bill there. I was embarrassed(尴尬的) and didn't know how to do because two month ago we had a quarrel.

I sat down on the sofa but began to watch TV. Later Sam came to ask I to make peace with Bill. Until then I realize that Sam had arranged the meeting on purpose. I went up to Bill and greeted him warmly, smiled at him. He looked very happily and talked with me excitedly. That night, we had a great fun together.

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Last weekend, I helped my grandparents their trip to Dalian. On Saturday morning, together with

my grandparents, I search the Internet for the train schedule, the weather in Dalian, and some hotel informations. In the afternoon, we went to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there had a long queue. After the supper, I packed into the suitcase the things what my grandparents would need, such as clothes, glasses, an umbrella, and a map. The next morning, I went to the station to show them off. Waved goodbye to them on the platform, I felt happily for them and wished them a safe journey.

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My little cousin is greatly interested on science. And he does some dangerous experiments sometime. Although his parents want to encourage him to be great scientist, at times they worry about

his safety. Last week, when my cousin was doing an experiment, he hurts his thumb. My aunt felt sadly and wanted him to stop from doing that experiment. However, my cousin didn't want to give up. She said, “Many scientists got hurt when they were doing experiments, so they didn't give up.” My aunt had to let him finish the experiments and he finally succeeded in finish it.

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A sports meeting was held in our school several days before. The last event was the 400-meter relay race, that had promised to be an exciting one. And so it was! Teams from every class joined in the race, but the winning team would be the champion of our school! So each player tries hard to win. The big crowd became quite silently and all of them had their eyes were focused as the team took their places. Heard the sound of the gun, the runners shot quickly and passed the relay sticks from one to another. Suddenly a runner from class 4 dropped his stick, but another runner picked them up and ran even faster. At the finishing lines, the runners from our class breasted the tape. Our class took a first place. Everyone cheered wildly and we felt extremely proud.

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This morning my parents took my sister and me to the zoo. At the noon we had a picnic on the grass.

I eat too much, so I couldn't finish my sandwich. As I didn't know what to do with it, I asked my sister for advices. She pointed at the notice, that said, "No litter." And she asked me throw the sandwich into the litter-basket. Just then I saw an elephant coming slow towards us. Suddenly an idea came into her mind. I could feed the elephant by my sandwich and I did so in the end. Seen this, my sister smiled and said, "What clever you are!"

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There are advantage for students to work while studying at school. One of them was that they can earn money. For the mostly part, students working to earn money for their own use. Earning their own money allow them to spend on anything as if they please. They would have to ask their parents for money or for permission to do things by the money. Some students may also to save up for our college or future use.

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My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.

We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.

It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.

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I'm very sorry to have missed the first two lesson this morning. I got up early as usually in the morning, but when I was ready to leave I find my bicycle's front tyre flat. I wanted to take bus or taxi to school, and I didn't have any money with me. I had to look for a place along the street to get my bicycle repairing. Unluckily, there were not any bicycle repair shops was open in the early morning. So I had to walk to school, carrying my bicycle all the way. That's how I was late for school. Please don't worry with my lessons, Mr. Li. I will make up for it and turn to teachers for help if necessary.

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Mr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spends too much time with his work. With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. "He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him." That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon, I paid visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down. Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.

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Today is Sunday. The sky is full of sunshine, so does my life. At abut 9:00 a.m. I went to the bookstore with my friend, Toby and Kate, where there were many books. I didn't know which one to buy because the books were both useful to me. At last, I choose two. At 10:00, we went to cinema. The movie called Titanic was very popular. It took us about 3 hours to see it. Having seen the film, and everyone was deeply moving. Some even burst out tears. From the story, I understand what love is. That's a really wonderful movie, which is very worth seeing again. What a happy day! I hope tomorrow I will be even happy!

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Dear Mr. Green,

We haven't seen for a long time. I'm very much glad to hear that your international shopping center will build non-smoking supermarket.

In my opinion, it is a good idea to do so, for it can only help the smokers to smoke less, but it can also do good to other customers' health. Since you had given up selling cigarettes, the customers don't like smoking are sure to support you. In addition, smoke in the shopping center may cause fire, which is very dangerous to both your possession and the safety of the customers. In a word, the non-smoking supermarket will not effect your business. To the contrary, it will help you attract more customers who want to keep health.

Best wishes!

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I live in a small town. Most people here traveled around by the bike in the past, and I learn how to ride a bike at an early age. Recently, electric bikes have become more and more popular, so they are convenient and can save energy. There is two in my family. One is for my mom and the another is for my dad. They sometimes allow me to riding them when they send me to buy something, but I seldom ride them. It doesn't seem strangely for children to do that. The reason where I refuse to do so is that I can't get used the speed of electric bikes. I prefer walking to riding it.

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Time and tide wait no man. My mother is becoming a middle-age woman quietly. She had been busy running after us all the years. My father is very busy every day outside. But the heavy burden falls on my mother's shoulder. Because my school is far from my home, I have to go to school by the train and my mother sees me off at the station every time. I often choose a seat where is close to the window, so I can see her. However, I always can't help run tears from my eyes. All the buildings and people outside the window disappear. I wave gentle to my mother and I look at her till the view of her back disappears. Up to now, even if he is busy, she still does it as usual. The view of my mother's back will never change in my heart.

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Nowadays more and more people, specially schoolboys and schoolgirls, are giving to video games. Many of them spend all their spare time the games, and some even stay at the game machines all days long. The reason is why they can enrich their lives as well as knowledge by playing video games. But it's a good way of relaxing after a day's work and study, as video games can bring a fun to people's life. However, on the other hand, play video games too much can waste time and money, and has a bad effect on people's eyesight and healthy. So, video games, like coins, have two sides. The key point is that we should make properly use of the games.

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Now in the country area, many children dropped out of school. The reasons for this are different. Some families are very poor to afford to send their children to school. Some parents think useless for girls to go to school, so that their daughter lose the chance. Some children are willing to attend school for lack of interest in studies. On my opinion, every child should have the chance to receive an education, whether boys and girls. Besides, the whole society should pay attention to the education of children, because we will play important parts in develop our country in the future.

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Yesterday, when I visited my cousin, I find he went to the bathroom very often. He didn't look like all right. “What is wrong about you?” I asked him. “I think I had too many milk this morning,” he said.

I asked him how. He said, “My mother went to a supermarket yesterday afternoon. When she saw some milk on sale, she bought three big bottle. We had to finish all milk this morning because it was

no longer fresh.” I knew what she meant. My aunt wanted to save some money through buy the cheap milk. I real don't think she should have done that.

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Dear Mayor,

I'm a resident of the city. I feel there are many problems existed in the trade of taxis in our city.

First of all, there aren't enough stops in the streets. And taxis often run very fast, which caused many traffic accidents. Additional, some taxi drivers refuse to pick some passengers without any reason. Another terrible thing is that deeply at night taxis waiting around entertainment places make too much noise. A friend of mine living in another city once visited to me, and she told me a taxi driver once cheated her by taking a roundabout route. How will a guest think of our city after such bad experience?

I think we must take actions to tighten control over the taxi trade. The last thing to do is raise the taxi drivers' professional morality.

Sincerely yours,

Chris

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One day, I was cooking in the kitchen when the telephone rings. I went to answer them immediately. It was from the one of my close friends, Lisa. When we were talked on the phone, the fire alarm sounded. I ran back to the kitchen. The room was full of smoke but the beef was badly burnt. I quickly turned off the gas, opening all the windows, and then went out the house. To my surprise, two fire engine were outside my house. I was rather worried. I told the firemen it was my careless cooking which caused the heavy smoke and that I would be carefully later.

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Dear Ms. Green,

Now I had been back in China for nearly a month. I am always remembering the days when we spent together in Canada. I would like to thank you of your kindness and hospitality during my staying here. I hope you and your family will come to China to travel when you have time. China is amazed country, which has long history and rich culture. And there are many places of interests. They are sure

to have a wonderful time here. In addition, our group photos have sent to you by email. You can find time to download it from the web. Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

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I'm glad to write to you. It has been near a month since you leave our hospital. I'm still worried

about you. What are you getting along these days? I think you may be much better now. But you'd better to have a good rest and take good care yourself, for you are a sixty-year-old man. I still remember those days that you helped me with my English. With your help, it made a little progress. And to my regret, my English remain very bad though I work hard at it. Can you give me some advices on it?

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Today is Mother's Day. I love mother so much that I've done many things for him. In the morning I buy some flowers with my pocket money and put them in a vase. In the afternoon, I went to buy some vegetable and cooked simple but delicious dinner for my family. After the meal, I gave mother a card what I made myself and said “Happy Mother's Day” to her. Then I told her to pay more attention on

her health and not overwork. I also promised to help her to do some housework from today on. Heard the words, mother was moved to tears. Today is a specially day, warm but meaningful.

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I have noticed that much of the fiction and nonfiction works publishing in Teen Magazine have a happy ending. While these are pleasantly to read, one has to ask how it is possible that there is so

much optimism. I'm all for positive thinking, and readers should also be exposed by the darker side of life. Why publish a story about someone whose experiences a tragedy and gets nothing in return? After all, that's life. Not every story have a happy ending. I think this would benefit from Teen Magazine's readers to see both kinds: happy and real.

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I went to swim was from about 5 years ago. Many friends could swim well and they often laugh at me. So I decided to swim as well as we did. One summer afternoon, the weather was amazed, so I thought it was good for swimming. Thus, I came to the pool but found many boys were already there.

I was afraid and did not know where to do. Just as I was wondering, I felt nobody give me a push and I dropped. Frightened in the water, I wouldn't help crying. “Help, help!” I heard some laughter from the oppositely side. I tried to keep myself balanced, only to find the water was just a little above my knee.

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Many of us have troubles to deal with in life, so do Lin Yijian who is considered to be the top student in his class. He used to getting the highest points in his maths tests. And during last exams, he got low scores. It was a shock but he does not know what happened. As result, he kept feeling nervous and discouraging about math during the following month. Would he just let it be and give up? Finally, he determined to face her problem. He turned to his parents and teacher about help. After some hard works, he now does well in math again. Although he still isn't at his original level, but he doesn't panic any more.

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In England, nobody under 18 are allowed to drink in a bar. Mr. Thompson used to going to a bar near his house, or he never took his son, Tom, because he was too young. Then when Tom had his eighteen birthday, Mr. Thompson took him to his usual bar. After drinking at half an hour, Mr. Thompson said to his son, “Tom, I want to teach you an useful lesson. You must always be careful never drink too much.” “How do you know how you've had enough?” asked Tom. “Do you see those

two lights at the end of the bar? When it seem to have become four, you've had enough and should go

to home.” “But , Dad, I can see only one.” said Tom.

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Dear Katherine,

How exciting I am to hear you are coming to visit me the next Friday. Fortunately, I won't be able

to meet you at the airport although I have classes in the afternoon. You won't find difficult to get to the city center. The bus left the airport every 30 minute and will take you right to the International Hotel. My class will be over by then or I will pick you up there. I will take you to a hot-pot restaurant for dinner and we'll talk with our plan for the weekend over dinner. Having a pleasant trip and see you on Friday.

Sincerely yours,

Zhang Lin

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Worried about the time available, Zhang Pingyu had made a list the sites she wanted to see in London. His first delight is going to the Tower. It was built long before by the Norman invaders of

AD 1066. Fancy! This solid stone, square tower had been remained standing for one thousand year.

As the buildings had expanded around it, it remained part of a royal palace and prison combined. To

her great surprised, Zhang Pingyu found the Queen's jewels guarding by special royal soldiers who, in special occasions, still wore the four-hundred-year-old uniform of the time of Queen Elizabeth I.

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I'd like to tell you what our school had worked out a new program. The purposes of the program is

to make our school more beautiful, and to turn our school into the better place for us to study and live in. According on the program, we will plant different kinds of trees, flower and grass around our school. Beside, we will build a small garden in where we can do some reading and take a rest. What's

more, some statues of famous people will set up to encourage us work harder. Don't you think it a wonderful program?

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I was real sad when I found my bicycle went wrong again. Tired of repairing it again and again, I decided buy a new one. After school, I went to a shop locating in the center of the city with a friend called Jack. The black bicycle attracted my eyes as soon as we went into the store. It looked so cool that I could hardly wait to ride it. The shopkeepers told us that it was the latest bicycle. He wanted to charge me for 800 yuan, that was too high for me. I just couldn't afford such an expensive one. Then I choose another one, which cost him only 200 yuan. It was not expensive so it was much better than the old one.

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I was frightening on my first day of classes at an American university. It was my first time to sit with so many Americans in a classroom. Unlike many other classmate, I sat quietly by myself. My teacher spoke fast and I had a hard time understand him. English, without a doubt, is the hardest thing I experienced so far. Though I'm a Chinese student, communicating fluently with Americans can be really difficulty. Therefore, I have to struggle to understand that is being said in class. Reading and writing is equally as important as listening and speaking. When my classes started to get busy, the readings got longer. The papers also got harder, and that's when real disaster struck.

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I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now. I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.

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As an ancient Chinese saying goes, “He who travels far knows many.” In my opinion, modern life

is impossible without traveling. For me, there are two kinds of traveling attract me a lot. Traveling on foot bring me many benefits, it can make me enjoy my holidays and many different life styles and other culture. In addition to, reading is other kind of traveling. It can bring me to places where I can not go for the time problem. The places I have been to and the places I only travel on books both impress a lot on me. Now would you like to share me with your experience of traveling? Looking forward to your story.

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On the hot afternoon of last Saturday, Li Yue went downtown and walk from one store to another, look for the clothes we would wear in the singing contests. While the rest of us were enjoying our leisure time in cool and comfortably rooms, she spent the whole afternoon searching and selecting. Finally she found the suitable clothes. Deeply moving by what she did, we tried our best but won the first prize in the contest. Li Yue is always cares about the class. She often devotes her spare time in helping others. She has set good example to us. Therefore, she deserves the honor and we should learn from him.

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Our English club was set up two months ago. Now, we have members of 25. We met once a week on Saturday afternoon. So far, we have been conducted a variety of activities on English learning, such as watching English films, including a Christmas party and get together with some foreign students. Last week we held a English story-telling competition. We required that the entries would be original and interesting and be presented in English within five minutes. Every member took an actively part in it. Two foreign English teachers were invited to act as judge. At last, Li Bing won the first place. Many members said that the activity benefited them many ways. Not only did it improve their speaking English, but also it brought them many fun. They hope many such activities can be held.

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Some students think a difficult exam is just like a challenge and the more difficult it is, the more better it will be. They say a difficult exam can help them to find out what they are weak in their studies and improve their learning methods. Though, others were against a difficult exam. In their opinions, if it is very difficult, they may become discourage and feel terrible about their studies. I prefer an exam neither too difficult or too easy. A very easy exam is not good of teachers to learn how we are getting on with our studies, and too difficult an exam will make us lose our heart.

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Mark Twain was asked one day if he can remember the first money he got. He thought for a long time before answered and said, "Yes, it was at school. I can remember nothing about it. Schoolboys in those days never took the care of the things of the school. They often damaged our desks. There was a rule in our school that anybody which damaged his desk with a pencil and a knife would be beaten or have to pay five dollars."

"One day I damaged my desk in some ways. I had to pay five dollars or be beaten. It would be too bad to have our face lose. Before giving me the money my father gave me beating."

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Mrs. Smith was unable to fall sleeping at night and was tired during the day to do anything, even the simple things that she used to enjoy doing. She had headaches more often, it prevented her from reading or watched TV. The more she thought about her conditions, the more worse she felt. At last she went to see her doctor, whom she had known for year. The doctor listened to his heart and said, “There is nothing serious wrong with you, and I accept the fact that you don't feel well. Now, I will give you some pills that will help. Come tomorrow morning and tell me how you felt.”

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One day Mark was walking in a valley with his pet dog, Zorro. All of sudden, Mark slipped and fall to the valley. He was so serious hurt that he lay in the stream, lost consciousness. Zorro hurried down and pulled him out the water. As Mark was wet and cold, the dog lay on top of him, trying to keep it warm. Unluckily, Mark was saved. This shows clearly that animals are our good friend and we should be friendly to them. Instead of killing or eat wild animals, we should do our best to protect them, especially these dying out.

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This morning Wang Hua and I went school on foot together. In the way Wang Hua saw Li Lin riding a bike on the other side of the street. He was too anxious to join Li Lin that he left me in a hurry and ran across the street in the front of a car. Luckily the driver stopped his car quickly. What dangerous! Wang Hua jumped onto Li Lin's bike but they went on. But when they come to the school gate, they were knocked down by a car. We were both injured and sent to hospital immediately. Fortunately, they escaped being killed. We should draw a lesson from this accident and strict obey the traffic rule in everyday life.

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My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere by public transport. We lived in a comfortably room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful, and we enjoyed several local dish. It is such great hotel that I will recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.

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Helen Keller who was born in America in June, 1890. Her birth brought much happiness to her parents. But when she was 19 month old, she became deaf and blind because a serious fever. Living in a world where she could see and hear nothing, she almost lost the hope to live. However, at seven, she met her teacher, calling Anne Sullivan. At first, it was hard for Anne to teach so a disabled girl.

Helen's strong will and cleverness together with Anne's skill and patience finally helped to make a wonder. Helen learned to speak, read and even play piano. Later, she finished his college education and get a degree in English l iterature. Helen wrote many books, of which “The Story of My Life” was the most famous. Helen was also devoted to help other disabled people like herself. She moved both the USA or the world.

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One day, I was walking along the street while a stranger stopped me and asked me the way to the new restaurant. I told him the route and direction carefully. As soon as I finish, the stranger thanked me a lot of and started off. However, to his surprise, he went at a wrong direction. Then I stopped the men at once and told him that he was wrong. Unexpected, he smiled and told me the truth which he didn't really want to ask the way. But instead he was just trying to know whether everyone knew exactly where the new restaurant, for he was the new owner of the restaurant.

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I will share you a true story happened a couple of days ago. One of my classmate bought a bag of snacks from the food stand. A few roommates were then invited to enjoy the food. Unluckily, all of them got poisoned and had stomachaches with our faces pale. They are quickly sent to a nearby hospital. Doctors examined them and gave them some medicine. They were out of danger soon before taking the medicine. This accident should make us to realize the serious of the food safety problem. I strongly suggest that the whole society pays much more attention to the food safety.

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A man was driving on the road. Sudden his car stopped. He got out of the car tried to find out the trouble. “It's the motor.” said voice behind him. He was surprising and turned around. And he saw only an old horse. “Did you say something?” he asked. “I said you should check yours motor,” the horse replied. The man rushed to the nearest house. With a very excited voice, he told the farmer that what had happened. The farmer, however, showed no sign of excitement. He explai ned, “He didn't know anything about cars. He can only repeat what I often say.”

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On my way to home yesterday afternoon, I happened to witness a traffic accident. When an old woman was crossed the road, she was knocked down by a boy riding bike. The boy was such frightened that he stood still at the scene but didn't know what to do. I quickly went up and saw the old woman lie on the ground, crying because of pain. I stopped a taxi and told the driver that had happened. The driver drove them to the nearest hospital at once. In our relief, we were told that the old woman was not injured seriously after she was examined carefully; the boy was deep grateful for our help.

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The day before yesterday, I went to the bookstore which was near our school to buy the reference book. It was Saturday, so there was many people. With the helps of the shop assistants, I quickly got the book I needed. I was about to leave while I found someone trying to steal a man's money. Although I was nervous, but I tried to think of a way to help. Suddenly, a good idea occurred me. I stepped on the man's foot deliberate. As expected, the man's scream gives the thief a fright, who quickly walked out of the shop. After hear my explanation, the man smiled and showed great gratitude to her.

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Nowadays, TV PK Shows (选秀节目) have attracted many young people. As for me, they have both positive and negative effect. Therefore, most important thing is how we see it. Some people think the shows provided grass-root people with a stage to display their talents, but they should catch every opportunity to show off their talents. Some students even give in their studies to attend them in the hope of become famous overnight. But others people hold the shows may destroy young people. Once that they fail in these shows they will suffer a great unbalance. This is real bad for them physically and mentally.

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The zoo had many basket for rubbish(垃圾). People could throw the waste(废品) into it. On Saturday afternoon, there was usually a lot of people around the cages in which the lovely animals were kept, and that day nobody was there. Mr Li was surprised. But he was much surprised to see a few children around basket near the tiger cage. He quickly goes up and looked over their heads and saw a little rat(老鼠) running in the basket and look for food. The rat was afraid and the children were more interesting in the rat than the tiger were.

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Christine was just a girl in one of my class. I never knew much about her except for that she was strange. She didn't talk many. Her hair was black and purple, and she worn black sports shoes and a black sweater although in summer. She was, in fact, rather attractively, and she never seemed care what the rest of us thought about her. Like the rest of my classmate, I didn't really want to get closest to her. It was only when we did their chemistry project together that I begin to understand why Christine dressed the way she did.

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Their friend, Danny Lin was waiting at the airport. He is going to take them and their baggage to catching “The True North”, the cross-Canada train. On the way the station, he chatted about their trip. “You're going to see some greatly scenery. Going t o eastward, you'll pass mountains and thousand of lakes and forests, as well as wide rivers and large cities. Some people have the idea you can cross Canada in less than five days, and they forget the fact that Canada is 5,500 kilometers from coast to coast. Here, in Vancouver, you're in Canada's the warmest part. People say it is Canada's most beautiful city, surrounding by mountains and the Pacific Ocean.”

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Dear Mr. Manager,

I'm writing to express my thank to you and your employer Li Hong who helped me found my handbag while I was shopping in your shop on March 24. I was greatly interesting that day and I lost

me in enjoying a beautiful work of art. After I paid for the pair of silk socks, I left my handbag on the counter. I have already walked out of the shop then Li Hong came up with my handbag. I thanked her and offered her a reward of 20 dollars, she refused to take even a cent. I was deep moved by her spirit.

Li Hong's good qualities are something I'll always keep on in mind.

Yours,

Lucy

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Mr. Black,

We're very gladly to have received your money and some reading materials. Thank you very much. We had been studying hard since we came back to school. Under the help of our teachers and classmates, we have made great progresses in our studies. So we often praised and encouraged by our teachers and parents. We have made up our minds to study hard than before to learn every subject

good in order to be admitted to key universities in the future. We're looking forward to see you, but we have no chance to go to the Hangzhou ourselves. So we hope you can post us a photo of your soon. Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

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My new life in senior high school has began. And I want to tell you something about my new

school and study. My favorite teacher is Mr. Li. She teaches us English. He is very handsome and he's also very strict to us. I think we can make many progress with him. My new classmates came from

over the province and they are very friend to me. We have a lot after-school activities, such as playing basketball, reading books in the library but surfing the Internet. And we also learn Chinese, English, math, physics, chemistry in the class. I hope you can come to visiting our school, so I can introduce

my new friends to you.