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一、2002中考作文：My Favourite Thing(s)
l Introduce what the thing(s) is (are)
l Say when and or where, and how you got it (them)
l Explain why you like it (them) and why it is (they are ) special to you
(A)
My favourite thing is a special bank not. It was given as my lucky money by my grandma on the eve of the Spring festival three years ago. Soon after that she died. It was the last time I received lucky money from her and I keep it from then on. My grandma couldn’t read and write, but she often asked me to study hard. I know this is her way to show her love to me. The bank note is a sweet memory. I’ll keep the note forever and remember my grandma forever.
(B)
Nowadays, it is a fashion to send cards to each other on different festivals. I have also received more than 60 cards. Most of them were sent by my friends, including some of my primary classmates and relatives. I put them in my drawer carefully. Whenever I see them, they always remind me of something interesting and meaningful that happened in the past. They are so valuable and lovely that I will never throw them away. They are definitely my favourite things.
考题拓展：My favourite subject
l What is your favourite subject?
l Why do you like it best?
l How do you learn it well?
(A)
I like English best. It’s my favourite subject. It’s not only interesting but also very important. It’s the most widely used language in the world. Learning English well will help us to meet the needs of the development of our country. I’m learning English very hard. In classes, I talk with my teacher and classmates in English. After class, we often sing English songs and play games together. So my English improve quickly. I think as teenagers, we should learn English as much as possible.
(B)
To tell you the truth, I like P.E best. We needn’t learn anything by heart like Chinese and English and we don’t have to do our homework. “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”. I agree with it. Sports make me full of energy and help me learn other subjects well. I take an active part in P.E lessons. Sometimes we play games and sometimes we play basketball or football. I even hope to be a P.E. teacher in the future.
二、2003中考作文：To Be a Lovely Shanghainese (做一个可爱的上海人)
l Why should we be lovely Shanghainese?
l What should or shouldn’t a lovely Shanghainese do？
l What are you doing to be a lovely Shanghainese?
(A)
Shanghai is developing quickly. Every day thousands of tourists come to visit it, so we should act well to show that both the city and its people are lovely. In order to be lovely Shanghainese, we should always be ready to help others. We shouldn’t speak loudly in public places or throw litter to the ground. I want to be a lovely Shanghainese. I am now studying hard and getting ready for the future.
(B)
Shanghai is one of the most attractive cities in the world. A lot of foreigners come to Shanghai to further their studies and live here. Shanghainese should have good manners to make their hometown more beautiful. So first of all, Shanghainese should love Shanghai and take good care of it. We should improve ourselves and behave more politely. We should always be kind to others. We should also keep the environment clean. As a member of Shanghainesee, I will devote myself to making Shanghai a better place.
考题拓展：My Wish (我的愿望)
l What is your wish?
l Why is it your wish?
l What will you do to make your wish come true?
(A)
My wish is to become a headmaster in a middle school.
Students today have too much homework to do. They haven’t enough time to take a rest. If I become a
headmaster one day. They only need to do a little homework and they needn;t take countless examinations. They’ll have more time to read books they like and learn more except book knowledge.
To fulfill my wish, I must study harder and harder. I’m quite sure that I will truly become a headmaster. (B)
I want to be an accountant. The reason is very simple. My mother is an accountant. She is a successful career woman. She loves her work very much and works hard. She’s not only my mother, but also my idol in my heart.
In order to make my wish come true. I’ll study harder. I’m not good at maths. So I must do more exercises and be more careful. It will improve my maths. I hope my wish will come true in the future.
三、2004中考作文：Leaving school (毕业时分)
l Old school life
l Teacher(s) and schoolmate(s)
l Future plan
(A)
We will leave our old school soon. Now I feel very sad because I love it so deeply. I love my patient teachers as well as my friendly classmates. My teachers are very kind to me. They often help me with my study. I have made friends with them during three years. They will be remembered forever and I will keep in touch with them in the future. Though old school life was busy, I will felt very happy. I promise that I will study even harder in the future.
(B)
We will leave our old school. Old school life is unforgettable and interesting.
I study in a quite small school, but I like it and enjoy my junior school life there. Our teachers are friendly and kind and full of sense of humor. They not only taught us lessons but also taught us lessons about how to be a man. With their help, I have made much progress in the past few years. My classmates are active and helpful. We often help each other. We are great friends.
I hope I will be a teacher some day. Teaching in my old school is my best wish.
考题拓展：My Junior School Life (我的初中生涯)
l Do you like your school? Why or why not?
l What have learned in your school?
l What do you think of your teachers and classmates?
l Is your school life interesting and meaningful?
(A)
I love my school. I have learned not only a lot there and now I have a better understanding of the world. My teachers are all very kind to us. They often encourage us. They make us feel confident. With their help, I’ve made great progress in the past few years. My classmates are lovely, though sometimes they are very naughty and crazy. In spite of this , I love them very much.
My school life is interesting. We often go to the movies and watch plays. We also have outing twice a year. My junior school life is enjoyable. When I graduate from it, I will keep these colorful days in my heart. (B)
I study in a lovely school. Although it’s very small, it’s the most beautiful school in my heart.
My school life is meaningful. I have learned a lot of useful knowledge and skills to deal with problems in my daily life. My teachers are really great! They taught me how to be independent and face to the society. My classmates are friendly and helpful. We often hold interesting activities during holidays. I enjoyed myself indeed and our friendship will last forever. I will remember my junior school life.
四、2005中考作文：Growing pains and gains (成长的烦恼和快乐)
(A)
I’m growing up quickly and gaining the growing gains happily. I’ve studied in school for nine years. I have learned a lot and got well-prepared for my further study. I have also made many good friends. On our school’s Art Festival, I often played the piano while my friends were singing together. We enjoyed ourselves. Yet, I do hope we would have less schoolwork and more free time to do what we like to. Anyway, I’m happy and I’ll never forget my dear old school.
(B)
I’ve been studying in schools for years and of course I’ve learned something. But I think I’ve got more pains than gains. I used to be a happy boy. When I grow up I became unhappy. Every day I have to do a lot of homework, sometimes I even work till mid-night. I wonder if it’s necessary. I always feel very tired.
I like music, but it’s far away from me. I like playing football with my friends. But now we’ve no time or chance. Study, study, nothing else but study! What a shame!
考题拓展：The teacher I like best (我最喜爱的老师)
(A)
Ms. Jin is our politics teacher. She is a very good teacher. She works very hard. She is full of humor. Her classes are very interesting. As a class teacher, she is fair to every student. Ms. Jin is not only our teacher but also our friend.
Ms. Jin is the teacher I like best and she will be my teacher forever. I am very proud of Ms. Jin and also try to be a teacher like her.
(B)
Mr. Xu is our maths teacher. I didn’t like maths when I was a primary school student. I thought it very difficult to learn. But in the secondary school, Mr. Xu began to teach us maths. His kindness and humor made it easier. His class is so lively and attractive that I gradually found that maths was not so difficult as I thought before and became very interested in it. With the help of Mr. Xu, I have made much progress. 2006 I have a dream
l My dream is to be…/to do…/to go…
l I enjoy/like/prefer…
l To make my dream come true, I …
l If my dream comes true,…
(A)
Like many other people, I also have a dream. I hope to be a famous football star. Why? Because football is played all over the world and I love the flowers and cheers. I think it’s wonderful to have a lot of fans who love you and support you. Besides, if I become a world-famous star like Yao Ming or Liu Xiang, I can let the world know more about China., such as Chinese traditions and culture. From now on, I must study hard and play football better. I am sure to make my dream come true.
(B)
To be a teacher is my dream. Do you know about Helen. She was one of the most greatest women in the world. However, she was both blind and deaf. It was her teacher Anne Sullivan who helped her become a famous learned woman.
That’s why I want to be a teacher. A teacher can be very helpful to the society, and can even change a person greatly. Now I’m working hard to make my dream come true. If my dream comes true, I will try my best to teach my students. I’m sure I’ll be a good teacher.
考题拓展：My favourite subject
l What is your favourite subject?
l Why do you like it best?
l How do you learn it well?
(A)
I like English best. It’s my favourite subject. It’s not only interesting but also very important. It’s the most widely used language in the world. Learning English well will help us to meet the needs of the development of our country. I’m learning English very hard. In classes, I talk with my teacher and classmates in English. After class, we often sing English songs and play games together. So my English improve quickly. I think as teenagers, we should learn English as much as possible.
(B)
To tell you the truth, I like P.E best. We needn’t learn anything by heart like Chinese and English and we don’t have to do our homework. “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”. I agree with it. Sports make me full of energy and help me learn other subjects well. I take an active part in P.E lessons. Sometimes we play games and sometimes we play basketball or football. I even hope to be a P.E. teacher in the future.
2007
Things I hate to do(2007年总分16分)
Necessary points:
What are the things you have to do?
What do you hate doing most? Why ?(Give at least two reasons.)
Answer 1:
I hate to get up early and I hate to listen to the noisy music, but I hate eating vegetables most. Although vegetables are healthy to my body, they really smell bad. And I don’t like the food which is green. More importantl y ,my mother always likes to cook vegetables, but they taste terribly bad. So God, please let the vegetables disappear. I hate to eat them really.
7+7+2=16(full score)
2008
Love around me (2008总分16分)
Necessary points:
Is there any love around me? (Give one or two examples)
How do you feel when you get love from him, her, or them?
What are you going to do to show your love?
Answer 1:
There is a lot of love around me 2009
. For example , my mother cooks food for me every day and always looks after me carefully when I feel sick. In addition, If I am in trouble at school, my friends and teachers often help me to deal with it. Every time, I feel happy and moved by them. I think I am the luckiest person in the world. So I want to give love to them in return. I’m going to do more housework and study hard. I’m going to help my friends as well when they have any question . In all , love is all around us.
I want to do something for my school(2009年总分18分)
Suggested points:
what do you want to do for your school?
Why do you want to do it ?
How are you going to do it ?
How time flies! I have been a student in my school for 4 years. In return, I want to buy much （many ）more new books and magazines for my school. As we all know, books can enrich our knowledge. It’s very important for us to read books. But there are only a little(a few)7+7.5+3=17.5(个别语句出错)
books in our school library. So I am going to buy more books for our school. What’s more, I will share my own books with others. I think our school library will become more and more helpful.
2010
Use the flollowing points as a reference.
1) What kind of person are you?
2) What makes you proud of you?
3) Why are you proud of yourself?
例文仅供参考：
I’m proud of myself. I’m not a great person. And I’m not well-known either. I’m very small to the world, but I always tell myself I’m the best. I’m very important to my parents, my grandparents, my teachers, my classmates and my friends. Although I have no money, I can make them happy. I’m sure they all love me and need me. I can do many things for them. In fact, everyone is very important. So we should be proud of ourselves.
I am a boy of less confident. I always hate running .But as we all know, the students of Grade Nine have to take part in the sports exam.
At that moment, I just wanted to give up .But my parents encouraged me ,“Impossible is nothing, ”“You could challenge yourself!”So with their words，I tried my best to run and insisted on running. When I got to the finishing line, I felt proud of myself. Though I didn’t get a good mark, I knew , I won. I created a miracle for myself and I was so proud of myself!
以下同类文章供参考：
I’m proud of my hometown
I’m proud of my hometown, Shanghai, one of the biggest cities in China. Shanghai is located in the east of China. The Oriental Pearl TV Tower is the symbol of Shanghai. So is Jinmao Building. They are both well-known throughout the world. Great changes have taken place in my hometown in recent years. Many highrises have been built in the center of Shanghai. Roads are also widened. The projects on changes show the wisdom of Shanghai people. I’m proud of you, Shanghai.
I’m proud of my mother
Among the greatest people, I’m proud of my mother. Although she is an ordinary person, what she did is so great that I’m proud of her. She works hard, not only at the work place, but also at home. But she never says how tired she is. Instead she keeps her smile on her face. She is also strict with my study. She always encourages me to study harder. She is a great mum. I love her!
I’m proud of Liu Xiang
He is the pride of Shanghai. He is the wonder of Asia. He is the super star of the world. Have a guess who he is. Right, he is Liu Xiang , the man who brought back the gold medal of the 100- meter hurdle. The people in Asia have never done well in that great event, but he behaved beautifully. That is the honor of the whole continent. I’m proud of Liu Xiang. I’m proud of his great success.
I’m proud of being a lucky student
I’m proud of being a lucky student. As I know nowadays in many poor areas in the world, there are a lot of children who are too poor to attend school. Many of them even don’t have enough food to eat. But I’m lucky. I can enjoy delicious food and wear warm clothes. The most important thing is that I am able to go to school. I can get much knowledge from school. And that will help me a lot in the future. So I’m very proud of being a lucky student.
I’m proud of Yao Ming
I’m proud of Yao Ming, who is the center in the NBA now. Yao is a Chinese. When he was a child, he was so tall that he looked like an adult, so he was sent to basketball school. In 2002, he was drafted into Houston Rockets. In the first year, he was chosen in All-star Game. Because of him, Chinese basketball team became the first in Asia. And now everyone says that he is one of the best players in NBA. He has given a lot to China, so I’m proud of Yao Ming.
I’m proud of my present English teacher
I’m proud of my present English teacher. We used to have several English teachers. However, our present English teacher is the best one we have known so far. She helps us a lot in English. She answers our questi patiently. She never looks tired of helping us. She has years of experience in teaching. Having her less is always very interesting. We often talk to each other in spare time. She has made a deep impression on us all. With the help of her, we have made rapid progress. So I’m proud of her.
I’m proud of my father
I’m proud of my father. He is one of the most important people in my life. He told me what I should do and how to do it better. He told me not to give up. I think he is very great because he makes my life colorful and happy. He brings me happiness. He is also good at working. I am so proud of him. He is
always wonderful. I think he will be the best person in our family. I like him very much. I will be proud of him forever.
I’m proud of being a Chinese
I’m proud of being a Chinese. As we all know, China has a history of 5000 years. With such a long history, we Chinese played an important part in the past. Now with the fast development, China is becoming stronger and stronger. Last year, Shenzhou Ⅵwas sent into space successfully. It made the entire Chinese feel proud. In addition, many cities in China have become international cities. Their names are also on foreigners’ lips. So we students should work hard to build a stronger China. I am proud of China. I’m proud of being a Chinese. I believe China will surely have a bright future.
初中阶段英语描写人的形容词汇集
able 有才干的，能干的
active 主动的，活跃的；
aggressive 有进取心的
ambitious 志向远大的有雄心壮志的
brave 勇敢的
capable 有能力的，有才能的
careful 办理仔细的；
childish 幼稚的
cooperative 有合作精神的；
creative 富创造力的
curious 好奇的
determined 坚决的
easygoing 脾气随和的
efficient 有效率的；
energetic 充满活力的精力充沛的
enthusiastic 充满热情的
faithful 守信的，忠诚的
fashionable 时髦的
friendly 友好的
greedy 贪婪的
generous 宽宏大量的
gentle 有礼貌的
honest 诚实的
hospitable 热情好客的
humourous 幽默的
independent 独立的, 有主见的；
diligent 勤奋的；勤劳的
innocent 无知的
intelligent 有才智的；聪颖的理解力强的lazy 懒惰的
lovely 可爱的
mean 吝啬的
modest 谦虚的
obedient 顺从的；服从的
open-minded 思想开放的
optimistic 乐观的
outgoing 好交际的；性格外向的positive 积极的
quick-minded 反应敏捷的
responsible 负责的
self-giving 无私奉献的
sensible 明白事理的；
serious 严肃的
shy 害羞的
smart 聪明的
strong-minded 固执己见的
stubborn 固执的
understanding 有洞察力的
well-educated 受过良好教育的
考前提醒：
1．Think before you write
(2009) Soon I will leave my school. I want to buy a lot of flowers for my school. I am very thankful to my teachers. They always help me when I in trouble . I love my teachers. I love my school. I will give flowers to my teachers. I will put these flowers in our school in order to make our school more beautiful. (条理不清，思路混乱)
Eg: My most unforgettable moment
Suggested outlines:
When and where did this thing happen?
Why was it unforgettable for you?
2008 Olympic took place in Beijing, I didn’t go to Beijing . I felt sad. If I went there, I was happy. So I went to the restaurant to eat delicious food , I watched TV on Nanjing Road. Then I telephoned my friend to come out to play with me. My friends all came. They laughed and played with me. We were all happy. We had a good time.(流水账)
I waited for a long time for the unforgettable moment. It was coming soon. “Five, Four, Three, two,” As soon as I was counting “one ”, the second hand struck eight o’clock. Twenty-nine “feet” were going to every corner of the world at once: The twenty-ninth Olympic Games started in Beijing. Chinese people waited for a century to hold Olympic Games. Now, it was becoming true. All the people and I could not forget this special moment. On the eighth of August, 2008, the Chinese people…..
2.写作文时，务必注意
1）语法（单复数，第三人称后加Ｓ，动词时态，语态）
I’m a citizen of Shanghai. Shanghai is a international city and it will hold the 2010 World Expo so that I can see many changes take place in Shanghai. For example, many building is building now. Also the citizens of Shanghai become friendly and kinder to others. A few months ago, I often see people who were sleeping cloth walking on the street. Bur for the time being, I can’t see these thing any longer. I feel very happy about the changes around me. With these good changes, we can say aloud confidently: We
have got ready for the 2010 World Expo.
2）避免中式英语
我想让学校变得比现在更好
I want let my school will be better than now?
(2009 I Want to Do Something for my School)
(bad example)
I will leave school. So I think I must do something for my school. Because it learn me more and more knowledge. Although I can’t do big thing for my school, I can keep school clean when I live school. I can’t think I can keep school very clean. But, when I see rubbish, I will take it into the rubbish bin. When I leave school , I will remember school. Because I am a member of school
(good example)
I want to make my school more beautiful in the future. The school gave me the sweetest time in my life . It enabled me to study in a warm and charming environment. I’ve learned a lot of knowledge here. Therefore, I’d love to do something for it in return. For example, I’ll keep the classroom tidy when I go back to school. I also want to donate some money for it when I have a job. In one word, I’ll try my best to make my school nice.
3)以语言正确为前提
多用好句型，丰富连接词
表示并列：
表示转折：
表示递进：
表示让步：though, now that, even if
表示因果：
表示条件：if , unless
表示并列：on one hand, on the other hand, in the same way
表示解释：
表示举例：
表示归纳：in short, in a word
表示观点：I think, in my opinion, I’m sure, what I think is that ….. I am afraid , It’s common knowledge
案例：School uniform
School uniform rule has its advantages. First of all, we don’t have to spend time thinking about what to wear every day. In addition, we don’t need to worry about competing with others based on how we look. However, it has some disadvantages. Our individuality can’t be shown if we wear the same clothes every day……What’s more
, sometimes the uniform style is old-fashioned.
学会同义替换
Like=be fond of=enjoy
Be glad/happy/be pleased with/be satisfied with
句式多样
案例：Things I hate to do
There are so many things I hate to do, such as doing my housework, waiting for a long time, talking with a boring friend, getting up too early, etc. But the most thing I hate to do is to help do the housework. I think it’s just a waste of time. The housework is always dirty, difficult and boring. And if I spend too much time on housework, I don’t have time for fun. But a saying changed my mind, “There are certain things we hate to do, we must do. That is responsibility.” In order to be responsible for the family, I must do the things I hate to do: to do the housework.
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