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Modern Technology and Human Intimacy

1. 有人认为现代科技拉近了人们的距离;

2. 有人认为现代科技反而把人与人之间的距离拉开了;

3. 我的观点。

With the advancement of technology,some believe that people have become more intimate(亲密的). There are several reasons for this phenomenon. The popularity of cell phones and Internet makes it possible to contact friends or relatives both at home and abroad. What's more, it is more convenient to pay a visit to someone due to the constant improvement in vehicles.

However, there are people with the opposite view. From their viewpoint, modern technology has not narrowed the gap. On the contrary, it helps widen the gap. An important reason is that calls, on-line chat, or short messages lack emotional clue, and they can never replace face-to-face communication. However, with the popularity of modern technology, more and more people tend to ignore real communication, and become addicted to(沉溺于) t he isolated virtual world.

In my opinion, technology does not play a decisive role. It is our attitudes that count. If we value friends and relatives, we should get close to them in person. Otherwise, they will feel emotionally distant.

亲爱的这是议论文,通常是第一段说正方的观点,第二段说反方的观点,第三段总结说自己的观点,通常有正反两种观点的时候,可以说一些人。。。另一些人。。。(some …others…)红色的是句型,橙色的是副词和连接词,蓝色的是短语哦。


My View on the Negative Effects of Some Advertisements There is no denying(毫无疑问,这个句型很常用)the fact that many commercial advertisements carry undesirable messages. They advertise luxury goods, unhealthy foodstuffs and drinks, and sometimes even dangerous or environmentally harmful products such as motor cars. In addition(除此之外,还可以用besides,), they may advertise spiritually harmful publications or entertainment.

Such advertisements are bound to(一定会)generate severe consequences if we keep turning a blind eye to them. First, they encourage people to waste money(encourage sb to do sth 鼓励某人做某事) and resources. Moreover(并且), they set a bad example to youngsters, arousing in them the desire for luxuries instead of teaching them the good habit of leading a simple life-style.(在阐述观点的时候为了使条理清楚通常要用表示顺序的词比如,first,second,third,如果只有两条的话就可以用这段里的。First, Second, Instead, Third, In contrast, Fourth, Consequently, Finally, But)

2) Although, First of all, Furthermore, Once, Second, Sometimes, At other times, Finally, Then 2. for, so, but, and, and, and, however, but, and

In view of(考虑到,最后一段说自己观点的时候可以用in my opinion,in my view)the seriousness of the situation, effective measures should be taken before things get worse. For one

thing, proper laws and regulations should be worked out (解决制定)and enforced to ban these ads. For another, the pubic should be educated to identify these ads and refuse to buy the products recommended by them. With these measures taken(take measures采取措施), it will be a matter of time before these ads to become things of the past.(for one thing,for another一方面,另一方面,避免上下文重复,只有两点的时候可以用这个)




The Importance of Reading Classics

Reading classics plays a vital role(起重要作用) in a person's growth. By reading classic works, either Chinese or foreign(either…or.或者或者), one can learn a great deal about history, geography, politics, wars and customs. Besides, as these classics are the outstanding representatives human language, reading them can enormously improve our ability to read and write and to inherit cultural traditions.

However, a diminishing number of people would like to(更喜欢,比like好)read classics now. A variety of factors may have contributed to(导致,它还有别的意思是贡献,这里是活用)this phenomenon, but the following are the critical one. In the first place, as the pace of life and work quickens, people can find little time to indulge themselves in thick and serious works. They would rather read light and easy magazines or surf the Internet and do online reading. In the second place, most classics depict things far away from our real life, which makes reading them seem irrelevant.(In the first place,. In the second place,首先然后)As college students, we should shoulder the burden of inheriting and developing cultural heritage. Therefore, it is essential that we should make plans to(制定计划,比plan好)read classics regularly. Besides, we should try to influence people around us into reading them.


Haste Makes Waste(欲速则不达)

A famous saying goes(这是经典句型,正如俗语所说,要记的哟)“Haste makes waste”,



“Never give up” is often said by people when they are frustrated or in depression. This phrase means determination and encouragement. In my opinion, the determination to succeed is of great importance. Therefore, I believe that we should never give up.

If we give up too easily, we will rarely achieve anything. It is not unusual for us to fail in our first attempt at something new, so we should not feel discouraged by our failures; instead we should try again. Besides, if we always give up when we fail, we will not be able to develop new skills and grow as we should.

Another reason that we should never give up is because we can learn from our mistakes only if we make a new effort. If we do not try again, the lesson we have learned is of no use.

Finally, as we work to reach our goals, we develop confidence, and this confidence can help us succeed in other areas of life. If we never challenge ourselves, we will begin to doubt our


In short, it is important that we do not give up when working for our goals. Whether we succeed in the end or not, we will learn something, and what we learn will help us do better in our future work. Furthermore, if we give up, we have no chance of attaining our goals; but if we keep trying, there is always a chance that we will succeed one day.