八级考试作文评分标准

一．八级考试作文评分标准

在改用网上阅卷的同时，八级考试作文也启用了新的评分标准。为充分发挥计算机的计算功能，新标准采用了分项评分法，具体见下：

TEM8作文评分标准

说明：该项目满分20分。根据考生的思想与表达、语言运用能力和写作规范分别打分。“写作规范”项目可以打0.5分。

“思想与表达”满分为10分，按考生得表现赋分：1---2---3---4---5---6---7---8---9---10

极差较差一般良好优秀

“语言运用能力”满分为8分，按考生得表现赋分：1---2---3---4---5---6---7---8

极差较差一般良好优秀

“写作规范”满分为2分，按考生得表现赋分：0.5------1------1.5------2

较差一般良好优秀

卷速度快，不足是分数信息简单。使用分项评分法可以提供更为丰富的信息，计算机的运算功

能可以确保阅卷速度几乎不受影响，因此是一个很大的进步。

从上述标准中，我们可以看出八级考试希望对大家的内容、表达效果、篇章结构、语言运用、乃至书写规范都给予重视，希望大家的写作能力能有全面的提高和发展。这样的做法对教学也有很好的指导意义。当然在具体评分时，评分员不可能对每一项中的每个条目都给予同样的关注，关键还是内容、结构和语言质量。由于增加了写作规范，希望大家能在拼写、标点符号以及卷面整洁等方面给予注意，毕竟这还是相对容易的。

二．评分样卷分析

每次正式阅卷之前，阅卷组都会从考卷中挑出几篇代表各个水平的典型试卷，供阅卷人员参考。这些样卷是评分标准的最佳体现，研究这些样卷，对于我们提高写作水平、顺利通过考试非常有帮助。下面我们就和大家一起看看至2008年—2010年的评分样卷，相信大家肯定能从中获益良多。为了保持材料的原汁原味，我们保留了样卷中的错误以及阅卷教师做的标记的点评。

2008年

Part VI Writing

In a few months’ time you are going to graduate from university. How do you think your college years have prepared you for your future life? Write an essay of about 400 words on the following topic:

What I have learned from my years at university

样卷1：四档上等

What Ihave learned from my years at university

In a few month’s time, I am going to graduate from my university. During the past three and a half years, I have learned a lot from my university, such as teamwork spirit, sense of responsibility and competitive awareness. However, what I cherish most are some necessary skills to be a good English journalist that I have learned at university, such as good English, broad horizon and communication skills.

For a start, I have acquired good English skills at university that is a requirement to be a good English journalist. Through taking courses of English reading, writing and translation, I have greatly enhanced my proficiency in English. Moreover, I have known much more about English-speaking countries by learning their culture and literature. Obviously, good English skills will assist me a lot in being a good English journalist.

Furthermore, my horizon has been greatly broadened at university through visiting frequently libraries and listening to various lectures. After all, broad horizon is necessary to be a good journalist. On the one hand, I often go to the library of my university and read a great many books in a range of fields, such as politics, economy and culture. On the other hand, Ihave listened to various lectures delivered by famous professors as well as some outstanding people invited to give lectures at my university. For instance, my favorite TV presenter, Chai Jing, once came here and delivered a lecture about how to become a good journalist. I learned a lot from her speech. Reading widely and listening to lectures, I feel, have broadened my horizons and this, undoubtedly, is good for my future career --- being a good journalist.

Last but least, I have learned good communication skills at university. Good communication skills is essential to becoming a good English journalist. On the one hand, my communication skills have been greatly improved by learning from my teachers and classmates. On the other hand, there are many courses on communications skills at my university for me to take. As a matter of fact, these courses do me a great favor in enhancing my communication skills.

In my university days, I have learned some necessary skills to be a good English journalist: good English, broad horizon and communication skills. I believe these skills will help me a lot in my future career. I do thank my university for teaching me all those useful things.

这篇作文得了17分，属四档中最高水平，也基本是所有作文卷中的佼佼者了。阅卷老师给出的评价是“审题、结构、表述、语言均好。用词用句得体妥切恰当，反映出一个四年级英语专业学生的综合素质。”本文围绕着大学学到的主要技巧以及它们与自己将来的工作展开，很好地回答了题目中提出的问题。文章的开头和结尾简洁明了，中间段落均有清楚的主题句，阐述部分均有详实的材料支撑，内容非常充分。文章的语言基本没有错误，而且体现出了一定的词汇和句型的变化，说明作者已有了一定的语言运用能力。

样卷2：四档中等

What I have learned from my college years

Nearly four years ago, when I stepped into this beautiful campus for the first time, I was only an innocent girl who was curious to know everything that seemed brand new and challenging around me. Four years have passed and I have already grown into a mature adult who is welcoming her bright future. I have learned a lot within these four years and I have confidence to say that what I have here, in aspects of knowledge, skills and mentality, cannot be equally obtained elsewhere.

First, the arduous work in Englishlanguage and culture provides me with abundant knowledge in the very area. The systematic training of listening, speaking, writing and reading serves as a good foundation for my future professional development.Besides, the reading of the works in English and American literature gives me the opportunity to explore our society more subtly, finding out the similar social problems and seeking corresponding solutions. In this way, I prepare myself fully as a liable social member.

Besides the abundant knowledge gained, I have learned so many skills both in and out of class. In the class, I was more than once given the chance of giving class speeches or presentations. In doing so, I have practiced my public speaking skill and raised my self-esteem.When out of the class, I have learned how to communicate with other people, such as professors or my learning peers, and how to settle down a problem with the most effective and appropriate solution. Again, I am becoming a self-confident person. Being far away from home, I learned to do many things myself that were done all by my parents before, such as washing clothes, buying fruit, etc. Also, I have to schedule my daily routine myself and learn to be independent in my own studies. These skills may greatly benefit me in my future personal development.

What’s more, my mentality has been improved within these four years. Instead of being self-concerned, I pay much attention to the affairs of others and our community. For example, I once bought the lunch for my sick roommate and I actively participated in class activities. Besides, within this competitive environment, I have learned to be perseverant and always be ready to face any difficulties lie ahead. When I succeeded, I gained enough confidence; when I failed, I learned to forgive myself and never lose my hope.

With the aid of all I have learned from university, I am sure that Iwill be an overally development person in the future.

这份样卷得分是16分，属于四档中等水平。从内容上看，文章审题准确，正确理解题目，集中介绍了自己在大学期间学到的英语知识、其他技巧以及生活态度以及它们与自己的未来的紧密联系。另外，文章结构较好，逻辑思维清楚，各点之间的转化衔接比较清楚自然。从语言上来看，文章行文流畅，基本无语言语法错误。所有这些说明作者已经具备了用英语进行交流的能力。当然与第一篇比起来，这篇文章的内容稍显逊色，尤其是第二点显得有些杂论。

样卷3：三档中等

What I have learned from my four years at university

When I first entered university, I was a na?ve girl who believed what she had seen was everything about the world. Four years in university help me to acquire a lot of knowledge in many fields of humanities and arts. However, if I am asked what the most important thing I have learned is, I would say that four years in the university let me know that there is a much bigger world outside the world I am now living in.

I first learned the fact form my classmates. Back to my high school years, I was one of the so called top students in my class. So after entered university, I thought that I could easily achieve high

grades in class. However, things turned out to be the opposite. It became two or even three times difficult for me to perform better in class participation and exams, because all my classmates had also been top students in high school. They always had fresh ideas and worked hard. They were all intelligent students that I had not seen before entering university. Thus, I have learned that I should always remember that there is a bigger world outside and no matter how excellent I am in my own society, there are always people more excellent than I am.

I also learned the bigger world from my professors. Most of my professors have experience of studying or teaching abroad. They talked about the difference of China and foreign countries from time to time. In their classes, I learned about cultures that were totally different from China; Ilearned the subtle relationship between Europeans and Americans and that between England and France. Those developed countries were no more a symbol of economic boom. They were no more a symbol of pioneers. Instead, they all had different characteristics. They all had some bad habits just like we Chinese did.During these four years in department of English, I have learned how to evaluate every cultural in its distinctive way. And that is what our professors have taught us. The world is much bigger than I thought. I have to look at every different part in a proper way.

Thanks to my four years in the university, I have become more mature than before, because I have learned that there is a bigger world outside. In order to succeed, I have to read more and work harder.

这篇文章可得13分。看完后我们会发现，整篇文章基本切题，主题比较清楚，较好地回答了我在学校里学到了什么，而且很有条理地解释了如何学到这一内容。文章的结构较清楚，语言比较流畅，无大语法错误，所以在文章的结构和语言方面，作者的水平也基本上达到了要求。但是文章内容上有一个缺陷，那就是叙述与future联系不够，这说明作者对作文的把握还稍待提高。

样卷4：三档下等

What I have learned from my years at university

Time flies. I have lived my life in the campus for nearly four years. In these years, I have learned many things, such as the knowledge, the culture and the interpersonal skills and so on. Among those achievements, the most important lesson I have learned from my years at university is how to live my life.

First, I have learned independence. As a student from other regions, I have to take care of myself both in my study and daily life. I am far away from home, and couldn’t live with my parents and under their protection. I began to learn to wash my clothes and socks, arrange my meals and clan up my desk. What is more, I have to learn to face some problems and solve them. When I came across any failure, I would calm down and try to figure out the reasons which led to my failure, then I would try my best to pick up myself and start my way again, instead of crying helplessly as I was with my parents. That would help me grow up quickly.

Secondly, I have learned cooperation. As a stranger here, I needed helps from others to start my life. Fortunately, I got a lot of kind-hearted classmates and friends here, as well as may good teachers, who help me out of my problem. I learned that every singe person is not isolated in the world, and we have to make good use of our friends as friends. Also, I should help others with the same problems. We should take care of others just like ourselves.

Thanks for my cherish experience in my years at university, I grow up. What I have learned from my years at university would benefits me in the future, just as it did in the past and is doing to my life now.

这篇作文得分为12分，属三档最低，刚刚及格。读完后可以发现，文章的主体还是比较清楚地，内容的阐述基本上到位，而且作者也按要求运用了三段论的格式，从这些方面看，作者的已经具备了基本的写作能力。但是文章的语言相对较差，比如上面的划线部分要么有明显的语言错误，要么就是不知所云，所以才会得到这个分数。

样卷5：二档中等

What I have learned from my years at university

There are a few month s’ time I will graduate from university. My college-school ages will end. Indeed, Itruely feel sad when I was reading the topic given, moreover, it makes me looking back of my former days at university. Turely, it’s a wonderful experience of my life.

To begin with, as an English major, I learned many professional knowledge. My department is the most hardworking part in our school. Students here are all pay more times and work to study Englishlanguage. So do I. But during these times, I learned more. I also have great confidence to enter the firce competitive society.

What’s more, I watched many movies during the past years. Different movies from different countries and areas, such as the values that different people hold, and different complexion, race and religions that different nationalities have.It made me know more things out of the school’s living, even out of my country. I also experience different life from different people, their joy, their sufferness and their live. Moviesgiven me a window to know the world and to understand what is life.

In addition, I made more friends from my college and another colleges. They came from different universities and majors. They helped me when I was in trouble. The more important things are I learned how to communicate with others: how to show my careness and kind-hearted to other people; how to learn their merits and avoid the shortcomings. My friends like a mirror, once I look at it, I were learned more.

Last but not least, I learned that as a college student, I must take the responsiblieis of this society and my country. When I graduate from my school, I should be the summer sun with an hot core to help others and make our society more peaceful, more better than before.

My writing will ending with my willful heart for my fatanstic life.

这篇文章值得到10分，属二档中间水平，即有问题的作文（problematic communication）。可以看出，作者基本上明白了题目的要求，但是在内容的准备上尚待提高，像第二段中关于看电影的叙述显得思想比较贫乏。另外文章基本上符合三段论的格式，可以看出三个部分，但是中间部分没有主题句，说明作者的结构控制能力仍然需要加强。

样卷6：一档

What I have learned from my years at university

At the high school, many students made a rosy picture for their college life. After stepping the college, they found some problems that how to survive in the campus life. At the same time it is what Ihave learned from my years at university.

As freshman, we felt a little alone under the new environment. Everything was arranged by parents and teachers before, but in college all of it was changed. We had a homesick, too. That we have to make friends with others without roomates.During this period, we had a lot of time to stay at school and study.

As phomore, some of us made girlfriend or boyfriend, and had a deare outside. The limit of money is from the parents that some of us took advantage of spair time to take part-time job, such as McDona, Net-bar… It made us learn how difficult to make money and understand parents’ meaning. Besides that we also enlarged our net of friendship.

Next year at university, we learned that knowledge was important for us. During the part-time job, we didn’t put it away. And made it use in the life.

According to a few years practice, we learned how to survive in the life. Although we are studentsnot a free social men, we get that work hard, everything we can do and get a success.

University is a small society, however, we not only learn knowledge, also learn the experience of job.

As old saying goes: No pains no gains. We totally get new meaning of it. That is how the survive the life.

这份样卷得到了6分，即一档卷，属于几乎没有交流内容（almost no communication）。阅卷组的评论是文章内容贫乏，展开不充分结构；思路不清，结构条理性差；语法有错，用词有问题，文字较差。就是说，从内容、结构和语言上看，文章都不够好。另外，这篇文章只有266字，没有达到题目要求的400字，这也是得分低的理由之一。

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