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雅思写作考官范文经典句型鉴赏

雅思写作考官范文经典句型鉴赏
雅思写作考官范文经典句型鉴赏

雅思写作考官范文经典句型鉴赏

Task One

The chart shows that the percentage of British households with a range of consumer durables steadily increased between 1972 and 1983. (Test 1, Cambridge 2)

The greatest increase was in telephone ownership, rising from 42% in 1972 to 77% in 1983. (Test 1, Cambridge 2)

Together with the big increases in the ownership of washing machines and refrigerators, they are evidence of both rising living standards and the trend of lifestyles based on comfort and convenience. (Test 1, Cambridge 2)

The chart shows the number of hours of leisure enjoyed by men and women in a typical week in 1998-9, according to gender and employment status. (Test 2, Cambridge 2)

Here too, men enjoyed more leisure time- over eighty hours, compared with seventy hours for women, perhaps once again reflecting the fact that women spend more time working in the home than men. (Test 2, Cambridge 2)

Overall, the chart demonstrates that in the categories for which statistics on male leisure time were available, men enjoyed at least ten hours of extra leisure time. (Test 2, Cambridge 2)

In fact there is considerable fluctuation from country to country. (Test 4, Cambridge 2)

In Great Britain the numbers in prison have increased steadily from 30,000 in 1930 to 80,000 in 1980. (Test 4, Cambridge 2)

On the other hand in Australia, and particularly in New Zealand, the numbers fell markedly from 193 to 1940. (Test 4, Cambridge 2)

Since then they have increased gradually, apart from in 1980 when the numbers in prison in New Zealand fell by about 30,000 from the 1970 total. (Test 4, Cambridge 2)

Canada is the only country in which the numbers in prison have decreased over the period 1930 to 1980, although there have been fluctuations in this trend. (Test 4, Cambridge 2)

The figures for the United States indicate the greatest number of prisoners compared to the other four countries but population size needs to be taken into account in this analysis. (Test 4, Cambridge 2)

The prison population in the United States increased rapidly from 1970 to 1980 and this must be a worrying trend.

The table gives a breakdown of the different types of family who were living in poverty in Australia in 1999. (Test 1, Cambridge 4)

On average, 11% of all households, comprising almost tow million people, were in this position. (Test 1, Cambridge 4)

However, those comprising of only one parent or a single adult had almost double this proportion of poor people, with 20% and 19% respectively. (Test 1, Cambridge 4)

Couples generally tended to be better off, with lower poverty levels for couples without children (7%) than those with children (20%). (Test 1, Cambridge 4)

Overall, the table suggests that households of single adults and those with children were more likely to be living in poverty than those consisting of couples. (Test 1, Cambridge 4)

The chart gives information about post-school qualification in terms of the different levels of further education reached by men and women in Australia in 1999. (Test 3, Cambridge 4)

We can see immediately that there were substantial differences in the proportion of men and women at different levels. (Test 3, Cambridge 4)

The biggest gender difference is at the lowest post-school level, where 90% of those who held a skilled vocational diploma were men, compared with only 10% of women. (Test 3, Cambridge 4)

By contrast, more women held undergraduate diplomas (70%) and marginally more women reached degree level (55%). (Test 3, Cambridge 4)

Thus we can see that more men than women hold qualifications at the lower and higher levels of education, while more women reach undergraduate diploma level than men. (Test 3, Cambridge 4)

The graph shows how the amount of water used worldwide changed between 1900 and 2000. (Test 1, Cambridge 6)

The table illustrates the differences in agricultural consumption in some areas of the world by contrasting the amount of irrigated land in Brazil (26,500 Km2) with that in the D.R.C (100 Km2). (Test 1, Cambridge 6)

This means that a huge amount of water is used in agriculture in Brazil, and this is reflected in the figures for water consumption per person: 359 m3 in the Congo. (Test 1, Cambridge 6)

The first diagram shows that there are four main stages in the life of the silkworm. (Test 3, Cambridge 6)

First of all, eggs are produced by the moth and it takes ten days for each egg to become a silkworm larva that feeds on mulberry leaves. (Test 3, Cambridge 6)

This stage lasts for up to six weeks until the larva produces a cocoon of silk thread around itself. (Test 3, Cambridge 6)

After a period of about three weeks, the adult moths eventually emerge from these cocoons and the life cycle begins again. (Test 3, Cambridge 6)

Overall, the diagrams show that the cocoon stage of the silkworm can be used to produce silk cloth through a very simple process. (Test 3, Cambridge 6)

The graph illustrates changes in the amounts of beef, lamb, chicken and fish consumed tin a particular European country between 1979 and 2004. (Test 2, Cambridge 7)

Overall, the graph shows how the consumption of chicken increased dramatically while the popularity of these other foods decreased over the period. (Test 2, Cambridge 7)

The charts compare the sources of electricity in Australia and France in the year 1980 and 2000. Between these years electricity production almost doubled, rising from 100 to 170 units in Australia, and from 90 to 180 unites in France. (Test 4, Cambridge 7)

Overall, it is clear that by 2000 these two courtiers relied on different principal fuel sources: Australia relied on coal and France on nuclear power. (Test 4, Cambridge 7)

Task Two

I believe that child-rearing should be the responsibility of both parents and that, whilst the roles within that partnership may be different, they are nevertheless equal in importance. (Test 1, Cambridge 2)

However, this does not mean that the traditional family, with both parents providing emotional support and role-models for their children, is not the most satisfactory way of bringing up children. (Test 1, Cambridge 2)

Of crucial importance, in my opinion, is how we define “responsible for bringing children up”. (Test 1, Cambridge 2)

At its simplest, it could mean giving the financial necessary to provide a home, food and clothes and making sure the child is safe and receives an adequate education. (Test 1, Cambridge 2)

In recent years, there has been a grow2ing body of opinion in favour of putting more resources into health education and preventive measures. (Test 2, Cambridge 2)

Obviously, there is a strong human argument for catching any medical condition as early as possible. (Test 2, Cambridge 2)

Statistics demonstrate the cost-effectiveness of treating a condition in the early stages, rather than delaying until more expensive and prolonged treatment is necessary. (Test 2, Cambridge 2)

It is certainly true that the position of women in society has undergone a dramatic change in the past twenty years but I do not feel that this is a direct cause of the indisputable increases in juvenile-related problems during the period. (Test 4, Cambridge 2)

It is now accepted that young women should find work on leaving school; indeed to rely on their parents’ financial support is no longer an option in many families. Likewise, once they get married, the majority of women continue working since the financial pressures of setting up a house and establishing a reasonable standard of living often require two incomes. (Test 4, Cambridge 2)

Twenty years ago it was common for women to give up work once they had children and devote their time to caring for their children. (Test 4, Cambridge 2)

It is important to establish the correct balance between family life and working life. (Test 4, Cambridge 2)

Happiness is very difficult to define, because it means so many different things to different people. (Test 2, Cambridge 4)

While some people link happiness to wealth and material success, others think it ies in emotions and loving personal relationships. (Test 2, Cambridge 4)

Of course, factors such as loving relationships, good health, the skills to earn a living and a peaceful environment all contribute to our happiness too. (Test 2, Cambridge 4)

Like self-awareness, this is also very difficult to achieve, but I think these ar the two factors that may be the most important for achieving happiness. (Test 2, Cambridge 4)

Poor student behavior seems to be an increasingly widespread problem and I think that modern lifestyles are probably responsible for this. (Test 4, Cambridge 4)

In many countries, the birth rate is decreasing so that families are smaller with fewer children. (Test 4, Cambridge 4)

These children are often spoilt, not in terms of love and attention because working parents do not have the time for

this, but in ore material ways. (Test 4, Cambridge 4)

This means that the children grow up without consideration for others and without any understanding of where their standard of living comes from. (Test 4, Cambridge 4)

Teachers continually complain about this problem and measures should be taken to combat the situation. (Test 4, Cambridge 4)

The government should fund this kind of parental support, because this is no longer a problem for individual families, but for society as a whole. (Test 4, Cambridge 4)

As a result of constant media attention, sports professionals in my country have become stars and celebrities, and those at the top are paid huge salaries. (Test 2, Cambridge 6)

Personally, I think that the amount of money such sports stars make is more justified than the huge earnings of movie stars, but at the same time, it indicates that our society places more value on sport than on more essential professions and achievements. (Test 1, Cambridge 6)

Obviously, education systems are based on the belief that all children can effectively be taught to acquire different skills, including those associated with sport, art or music. (Test 1, Cambridge 7)

So from our own school experience, we can find plenty of evidence to support the view that a child can acquire these skills with continued teaching and guided practice. (Test 1, Cambridge 7)

In conclusion, I agree that any child can be taught particular skills, but to be really good in areas such as music, art or sport, then some natural talent is required. (Test 1, Cambridge 7)

Employees get job satisfaction in a number of ways. (Test 3, Cambridge 7)

Firstly, a person needs to feel that they are doing valued and valuable work, so positive feedback from superiors is very important in this respect. (Test 3, Cambridge 7)

Secondly, when someone feels they are improving or developing their skills through training opportunities, for example, then there is a sense of progression and purpose that rewards a worker. (Test 3, Cambridge 7)

Satisfaction is also increased by a sense of responsibility for and loyalty to a team. (Test 3, Cambridge 7)

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6.this is a cure graph which describes the trend of…… 这个曲线图描述了……的趋势。 7.the figures/statistics show (that)…… 数据(字)表明…… 8.the tree diagram reveals how…… 该树型图向我们揭示了如何…… 9.the data/statistics show (that)…… 该数据(字)可以这样理解…… 10.the data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that…… 这些数据资料令我们得出结论……

11.as is shown/demonstrated/exhibited in the diagram/graph/chart/table…… 如图所示…… 12.aording to the chart/figures…… 根据这些表(数字)…… 13.as is shown in the table…… 如表格所示…… 14.as can be seen from the diagram, great changes have taken place in…… 从图中可以看出,……发生了巨大变化。 15.from the table/chart/diagram/figure, we can see clearly that……or it is clear/apparent from the chart that…… 从图表我们可以很清楚(明显)看到……

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Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about the purpose of university education. 现在,越来越多的人关心大学教育的目的。 Explanation: ●Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about the phenomenon that … ●Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about the purposes that university education serves. ●Nowadays, more and more students are concerned about what they will learn in the universities. ●Universities are one of the most important institutions in modern society. 如果很难再短时间内想出第一句内容,就直接表达观点,两句话写完首段。 ●I agree with this opinion. Reasons are as follows. 我赞同的观点是……原因如下。 第2句:交代辩论话题 A. “是否应该……” However, whether universities should mainly provide job-related skills to graduates is a controversial issue. 但是,大学是否应该主要提供给学生工作相关的技能是一个饱受争议的话题。

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雅思写作Task1饼状图考官范文(4) 本文为大家收集整理了雅思写作Task1饼状图考官范文(4)。认真研读一定的雅思范文及作文模板可以帮助我们检验自己的写作水平,并能很好地吸收和应用优秀范文里的优秀内容。 The table below shows CO2 emissions for different forms of transport in the European Union. The Pie Chart shows the percentage of European Union funds being spent on different forms of transport. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph below.

Sample Answer: The given graphs provide information on the amount of Carbon dioxide emission per person from different vehicles in the European Union and also show the expenditures on different modes of transportations. As is observed from the given illustration, the highest amount of CO2 per person is emitted by the Air transports and European Union spends highest percentage of funds for the road transportation system. According to the bar graph, a single passenger of a personal cars emit around 130 gm of CO2 per kilometer while a passenger in a bus contribute to 65 gm of emission per kilometer. Coaches, maritime and rail passengers emit the lowest amount of CO2which is about 50 grams per passenger in a kilometer. Finally a single passenger of airplane contributes to 370 km of CO2 per kilo which is the highest amount of CO2 emission among the given transportations. Based on the pie chart, the European Union spent the highest amount (52%) on the road transportation system while spent only 1% or 2% on ports, waterway airport

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第一篇 The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph sho ws the trends in consumption of fast foods. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. 柱状图显示的是1970-1990二十年间英国人每周在快餐上花费了多少钱;曲线图展示的是这二十年间快餐消费的趋势。 The bar chart shows how much money was spent on fast foods per week in the UK over a span of 2 0 years from 1970 to 1990 while the graph reveals the trend of fast food consumption over the same period of time. 从柱状图看,各收入阶层在汉堡和鱼煎薯条这两种快餐上的支出相对高于在皮萨上的消费;曲线图反映出汉堡与皮萨的消费呈现上升趋势,鱼煎薯条则呈现出波动趋势。 As we can see from the chart, the weekly expenses of people of different income levels on hamburg ers and fish and chips were relatively higher than that on pizza. The graph indicates that while hamb urger and pizza consumption both revealed a general trend of increase, fish and chips showed a tren d of fluctuation. 首先,高收入阶层和中等收入阶层每周在汉堡上的平均消费分别是每人42便士和33便士,比低收入阶层的14便士搞出了很多。在鱼煎薯条方面,高收入阶层的支出略低,是17便士,但中等及低收入阶层的支出都分别达到了25便士和18便士,相对于在皮萨方面支出

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1. Many people prefer to watch foreign ?lms rather than locally produced ?lms. Why could this be? Should governments give more ?nancial support to local ?lm industries? It is true that foreign ?lms are more popular in many countries than domestically produced ?lms. There could be several reasons why this is the case, and I believe that governments should promote local ?lm-making by subsidising the industry. There are various reasons why many people ?nd foreign ?lms more enjoyable than the ?lms produced in their own countries. Firstly, the established ?lm industries in certain countries have huge budgets for action, special effects and to shoot scenes in spectacular locations. Hollywood blockbusters like ‘Avatar’ or the James Bond ?lms are examples of such productions and the global appeal that they have. Another reason why these big-budget ?lms are so successful is that they often star the most famous actors and actresses, and they are made by the most accomplished producers and directors. The poor quality, low-budget ?lmmaking in many countries suffers in comparison. In my view, governments should support local ?lm industries ?nancially. In every country, there may be talented amateur ?lm-makers who just need to be given the opportunity to prove themselves. To compete with big-budget productions from overseas, these people need money to pay for ?lm crews, actors and a host of other costs related to producing high-quality ?lms. If governments did help with these costs, they would see an increase in employment in the ?lm industry, income from ?lm sales, and perhaps even a rise in tourist numbers. New Zealand, for example, has seen an increase in tourism related to the 'Lord of the Rings' ?lms, which were partly funded by government subsidies. In conclusion, I believe that increased ?nancial support could help to raise the quality of locally made ?lms and allow them to compete with the foreign productions that currently dominate the market. (295 words, band 9)

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译文:没有人能否认 12、To be sure, the topic concerning ……can always attract our eyes 译文:无疑,有关…话题总是能够引起人们的关注 13、Never has …failed to fascinate us in modern society 译文:在当代社会…总是能够引起人们的关注 14、Simply put,… 译文:简而言之, 15、It is no overstatement to say that 译文:可以毫不夸张地说 16、…is a good case in point 译文:…就是一个绝佳的例子 17、People assume different attitudes towards this issue 译文:人们对该问题的观点不一而同。 18、As is widely-accepted,… 译文:众所周知, 19、To conclude,… 译文:总之, 20、Nothing is further from the truth than this opinion 译文:没有任罕菊净种说法比这种观点更加荒唐了。 21、There is an element of truth in both opinions 译文:这两种观点都有其可取之处。 22、Another consideration in this case is that…

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雅思写作Task1曲线图考官范文(1) 这是一篇雅思写作Task1曲线图考官范文。认真研读一定的雅思范文及作文模板可以帮助我们检验自己的写作水平,并能很好地吸收和应用优秀范文里的优秀内容。 The graphs below show the numbers of male and female workers in 1975 and 1995 in several employment sectors of the republic of Freedonia. Write a report for a university teacher describing the information shown.

Sample Answer: The provided line graphs compare the employment history of men and women in 1975 and 1995 dividing in six major sectors namely: manufacturing, communications, finance/ banking, wholesale & retail trade, non-defence public sectors and defence public sectors. As is observed from the given illustration, significant changes have been made in women's employment and women appear to have made remarkable improvements in almost the entire job sectors in Freedonia and in some sectors women went well ahead of men. Initially in 1975, men were notably ahead of women in every sector of employment. For example, in communication sector about 260 men worked against 220 women in every thousand employees. Twenty years later, though the number of men remained unchanged, the number of women rose to over 550 in one thousand. A similar trend can be seen in the wholesale and retail trade sector, where the number of women rose from about 550 to almost 800 in every 1000 employees of this sector two decades later. The number of men in this sector remained stable over the period, at around 700 / thousand.

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