英文记叙文写作模板

英文记叙文写作模板

第一部分记叙文题型作文

写作步骤

要求考生写一篇记叙文，描述事件发生的时间、地点、原因、人物及结果，最后对事件进行简单分析，如：2003年6月四级作文、2003年9月四级作文、2004年6月六级作文。对这类题型，通常分为三个步骤来写：

第一段、总结描述

交代清楚故事涉及的人物、时间、地点：主题句

第二段、具体描述

具体描述事件发生的原因、经过和结果：起因+经过+结果

第三段、对事件的分析

分析句1 +分析句2 +分析3

第二部分、记叙文题型写作练习

［实战演练］

direct ions：for this part, you are allowed thirty minu tes to write a compositi on on the topic the day my classmate fell ill.

1、简单描述一下这位同学生病的情况；

2、同学、老师和我是如何帮助他的；

3、人和人之间的这种相互关爱给我的感受是?…

［写作模板：架构阶段］

第一段：

开篇句：about _________ o'clock one evening in _____________ , _______ .

扩展句：________ .展开描述一下事件）

第二段：主题句：without hesitati on, ________ . it was n't long before _______ .

扩展句：1、one ___________ .

2、another __________ .

3、our teacher ____________ .

第三段：

结尾句：is __________ ? who can tell ? but ___________ .

扩展句：1、when _________ , people showed ____________ s pirit regardless of _______ .

2、this kind of care between persons is the very kind giving, unselfish and priceless devotion or sacrifice.

3、and it is just because of this care that we can have warm families, a happy life and a beautiful world.

［写作模板：填充阶段］

第一段：

开篇句：about nine o'clock one evening in may, my roommate li ming was lying

in bed, trembli ng with cold and hav ing a cough.

扩展句：his head was aching so intensely that he kept groaning. his forehead felt very hot. we took his temperature. it was 38.5D .

第二段：

主题句：without hesitatio n, i dialed "120". it was n't long before an ambula nce arrived.

扩展句：1、one roommate brought a blanket for him.

2、another supported him in the ambulance.

3、our teacher insisted on giving him some money.

第三段：

结尾句：is he a suspedted sars patie nt? who can tell ? but we did't retreat.

扩展句：1、when the savage sars was spreading, people showed fearless spirit regardless of dan gers to their own health.

2、this kind of care between persons is the very kind giving, unselfish and priceless devotion or sacrifice.

3、and it is just because of this care that we can have warm families, a happy life and a beautiful world.

第三部分、范文

about nine o'clock one eve ning in may, my roommate li ming was lying in bed,

trembli ng with cold and hav ing a cough. his head was achi ng so inten sely that he kept groaning. his forehead felt very hot. we took his temperature. it was 38.5 .

without hesitati on, i dialed "120". it was n't long before an ambula nce arrived.

one roommate brought a bla nket for him. ano ther supported him in the ambula nce. our teacher in sisted on giving him some mon ey.

is he a suspedted sars patie nt? who can tell ? but we did't retreat. whe n the

savage sars was spreadi ng, people showed fearless spirit regardless of dan gers to their own health. this kind of care between persons is the very kind giving, unselfish and priceless devotion or sacrifice. and it is just because of this care that we can have warm families, a happy life and a beautiful world.

Unit 14 写作练习

【习作一】

【写作任务】

生活中一定有你难以忘记的人，作为初中即将毕业的你，肯定有某个老师在你的心目中记

忆犹新，你将永远不会忘记他/她.请以“The Teacher I Will Never Forg et'为题，结合自身经历，

写一篇不少于90词的英语短文。

【写作指导】

1.定基调

体裁：记叙文

时态：以一般现在时和一般过去时为主

人称：第一人称和第三人称

2.列提纲、写句子

3.巧衔接

本文中体现了语义搭配这一通过词汇纽带来使上下文紧密连贯的衔接方式。如本文中的

years old, of medium build, has ... hair, likes, is good at, patie nt, is n ever angry with, still

remember, will never forget这些表达都与描写人物相关联，从而使文章成为一个有机统一体。

4.成篇章

The teacher I will n ever forget

答案

2.列提纲、写句子

(1)Ms. Qian is of medium build and has long hair

(2)Ms Qian likes / loves (play ing) sports

(3)Ms Qian is very patie nt and is n ever angry with us

(4)one morning while I was copying my deskmate ' s math homework

(5)she said she could help me if I n eeded help

(6)I decided not to copy anyone ' s homework any more

(7)And with Ms Qi an' s help, I made great / much progress iEnglish 4.成篇章

【高分范文】

The teacher I will n ever forget

The teacher I will n ever forget is Ms Qian, my junior high school En glish teacher. Ms. Qian

is 38 years old . She is of medium build and has long hair . She likes sports and she is good at playing basketball. She is very patient and is never angry with us.

I still remember one morning while I was copying my deskmate English homework, Ms.

Qian came into the classroom. I was so afraid that I didn ' t know what to do at that time. To my surprise, she wasn ' t angry with me. Insteadhe told me copying homework wasn ' t good for me and the n she said he could help me if I n eeded help. I was so moved that I decided not to copy anyone ' s homework any more. From then on, I did my homework by myself. And with h er help, I made great progress in En glish.

I think Ms. Qian is the teacher I will never forget . I will never forget her. I hope she will be happy and healthy in the future.

【写作练习二】

假如你是李华，你的初中生活马上就要结束了，三年的初中生活给你留下了很多美好的

回忆。请给你的英国笔友Susan写一封电子邮件，给她讲一件发生在你和同学之间的难忘的事情。

要求：词数100左右，注意电子邮件的格式。

Dear Susa n,

How is it going these days? I have so many memories of my three years at junior high school.

One of them impresses me very much.