雅思大作文真题范文及指导

2012.09.15 教育类

Money for postgraduate research is limited. Therefore some people think financial support from governments should be only provided for scientific research rather than research for less useful subjects. Do you agree or disagree?

硕士研究经费有限，有些人因此觉得政府的资助应该只能支持科学调查，而不是那些没有用处的科目。在何种程度上你同意这个观点？

写作指导

传统来说, scientific research包括physics, chemistry, biology, agriculture, cell technology, 这些科目都是和自然世界(physical world)有关的。而其他方面的研究包括语言学，心理学，哲学，历史，社会学等。这种题型在雅思写作中很典型，意思是“只应该做A事情，而B事情完全不应该去做”。这类话题明显都是一种偏激的观点，写法基本上是一样的。第一种写法：先承认A观点的合理性，然后进行驳斥，讲只做A会产生的负面影响，接下来讲B的必要性。第二种写法：先交代B观点的不足之处，然后对其进行驳斥，然后再讲B观点的合理性。

结构与思路：

本文适合写成单边支持型。在“题型解读”中提到的两种方法都能使用。

第一种写法：第一段让步段，先承认科学研究是合理的，因为科学研究可以获得即时利益，可以找到新的资源能源，能让我们富有。然后驳斥，只在科学研究上花钱会产生的一些后果（公民只有物质生活而没有精神生活的负面影响），然后讲对其他领域投资的重要性。投资其他领域会让我们的精神生活更加健康。

第二种写法：第一段让步段，先讲有些人或许会认为投资其他领域并不能创造经济上的利益，因此政府投资其他领域是浪费纳税人的血汗钱。然后说投资其他领域的好处，所以政府对其他领域的投资是完全值得的。正文的第二段再讲投资其他领域的意义。

重点表达式

the findings of research can be translated into profitable ideas immediately.

推荐练习2011年6月11日考题：

Some people think governments should focus the spending only on science rather than wasting money on arts (music, printing, etc.). To what extent do you agree or disagree?一些人认为政府应该把钱花在科学研究上而不是浪费钱在艺术上（音乐，绘画等）。你在多大程度上同意还是不同意？

近期考试趋势

社会类、政府类、教育类、科技类话题为复习的重点。

2012年10月11日

Some people think personal happiness is directly related to economic success, while others believe this depends on other factors. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

雅思题目的范围非常广，其中的题目难易程度梯度相差比较大。不过题目的难易程度也是一个相对的概念。考生只要对于一些题目的素材有些积累，就能比较从容的应付相关的题目。此题就是一个例子。

如果一方的观点过于绝对，出现类似“every”“all”“the only”,等关键字，建议考生在最后个段落中不同意此方观点。此题一方观点中“directly”过于绝对。但即便如此，考生需要用一个段落阐述快乐部分取决于经济上的成就。

可供参考的素材：

既然说是可供参考，就说明只是一家之言。呵呵。期望的高分的同学务必重视“切题”“论述的连贯一直”。另外，对比的句子在雅思考官满分范文中出现的频率非常高，下面的英文刻意多用了些类似的表达。这里给出的英文主要供期望写作7+的同学参考。期望5.5-6分的同学大体上做到不跑题太远，语法错误不能太明显，甚至多用点模板都可以。

第二段：(论述为什么经济上的成功在一些程度上是人快乐。)

人们对生活的满意程度部分取决于一个人的经济上的成就。我们生活在一个世界里，身在其中的绝大部分人将一个人的赚钱能力同一个人的社会地位相等同。当一个人必须经常考虑如何能找到体面的工作来缓解家庭经济压力时，他无法真正享受生活。当一个人能在一天赚的钱比他人一个月转得更多时，他更有可能获得别人的尊重，这种尊重is widely thought to be closely related to one’s sense of fulfillment.被广泛认为是紧密相关的充实感。

People’s contentment with life is partly determined by their economic achievement, which could be explained by the fact that we are living in a world where most people associate one’s ability to ma ke money with one’ social status. An individual, constantly having to consider how to relieve his family of economic burden, is deprived of the chance to enjoy life. And a worker capable of earning within a month what others cannot earn within a year is more likely to gain respect from others，and this sense of being esteemed is widely thought to be related to one’s sense of fulfillment.人民安居乐业的生活一定程度上是取决于其经济成就，这可能原因是，我们生活在一个世界里，大部分人将一个赚钱的能力与一个'社会地位。个人经常不得不考虑如何减轻家庭经济负担，是剥夺了享受生活的机会。和一个工人能赚别人赚不到一个月内在一年内更有可能获得别人的尊重，而且被尊敬这个意义上被广泛认为是相关的充实感。

第三段：(论述其他因素同样影响一个人对生活的满意度。这些因素包括：一个人是否有归属感，工作中的成就感，认同感。)

人们对于生活的看法受经济生成就的影响不尽然意味着他是唯一的因素。一个人的归属人感同样重要。人们都生活在一个社交网中，这个社交网使得人意识到被他人认同，使得他们意识到自己属于哪一个群体。一个抽不出足够时间同家人朋友在一起的人不能被称作是幸福的人，即使它赚取了足够的钱。此外，当人意识到自己所做的工作能给他带来价值，这种快乐同样无法用金钱衡量。

However, economic success is not necessarily the only criterion for measuring how people feel about life. Their sense of identity is also a decisive factor for their happiness. We are living in a social net, which allows us to be approved by others and to have a knowledge of which community we belong to. An individual unable to set aside enough time for family union would fail to feel satisfied, despite the great wealth he could create. Besides, recognition that what one is doing could contribute to others also brings happiness, which could not be acquired by coins.而，经济成功不一定是测量人们如何看待生活的唯一标准。他们的身份还是为他们的幸福的决定性因素。我们生活在一个社

会网络，可以确保被别人认可和有知识的社区属于我们的。个人无法留出足够时间给家人联盟将无法感到满意，尽管他的可以创造巨大的财富。此外，承认某人正在做也有助于他人带来幸福，这无法获得的金币。

2012.10.13文化类

We have a mixture of people from different culture and ethnic groups in a country. Why? Is this a positive or negative development?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.一个国家由来自不同文化和种族的人组成。原因是什么？这是一个积极还是消极的发展趋势？

说出你的道理，并从个人的知识和经验中，举出例子来证明。

1）注意时态，不要出现过去时（除非举过去的例子）2）两种思路：

1. 正面

a. 开场交代论题，交代自己观点，这是一个积极的发展趋势

b. 人口文化与族群多元化的原因（城市化和移民）

c. 这是一个积极的发展趋势（有利于经济发展，带来文化多样性，增进相互理解与交流）

d. 总结，重申论点

2. 反面

a. 开场交代论题，交代自己观点，这是一个消极的发展趋势

b. 人口文化与族群多元化的原因（城市化和移民）

c. 这是一个消极的发展趋势（不利于社会稳定，犯罪率上升）

d. 总结全文，重申观点

重点表达Urbanization, immigration, social stability, crime rate, be detrimental to, play a vital role in, mutual understanding, cultural diversity

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2012年10月13日雅思大作文

The popul说ation of the mix of people from different culture and ethnic group, why, and is it positive and negative.国家里不同文化的积极或者消极影响人口结构不同文化和种族群体的人，为什么，这是积极的和消极的

第一段：介绍目前多元文化的社会现象

第二段：分析原因

1 飞机和通信技术2全球化，人口流动增加3 移民政策的影响

第三段：negative

1 文化冲突

2 文化同化或边缘化，年轻一代的文化认同危机

第四段：positive

1 文化融合，促进经济繁荣与文明

2 促进创新与发展

第五段：结论

词汇拓展：

1. Metropolis 大都市

2. co-existence 共存

3. be attributed to 归因于

4. temporarily 暂时地

5. permanently 长期的

6. beyond the national border 跨越国界

7. facilitate 使…更容易8. without limitation of space and time 没有时间和空间的限制

9. mobility 流动性10. to be specific 具体来说11. involved 相关的12. immigrate 移民13. distinctive = different不同的14. tolerate v.容忍tolerant adj 15. inclusiveness 包容

16. accommodation 容纳17. multi-culture 多元文化，Multiculturalism

18. embodiment 代表19. melting pots 熔炉20. collide 冲突21. dominant 主导的

22. the tendency of 倾向性23. assimilate 同化24. marginalize 边缘化

25. identity 身份认同26. idealistic 理想主义的27. egalitarian 平等的

28. reverse 扭转29. deny 否认30. as …as 和…一样31. adapt to 适应

32. Cultural diversity 文化多元33. stimulate 刺激34. enhance 加强

35. prosperity n.繁荣, prosper v 36. productivity 生产力37. brilliant 灿烂的

38. civilization 文明39. featured with 以…为特征40. exotic 异国的

41. integration 融合42. widen their horizon 扩大视野43. accelerate 加速

44. keep pace with 保持步

In many metropolises around the world, especially in English speaking countries, it is not surprising to see people from different ethnics or cultures living and working together. How this comes into existence and what influence this exerts on our society will be discussed as follow? 在世界各地的许多城市，尤其是在英语国家，你不难看到人们从不同的民族或文化生活和工作在一起。这是怎么开始存在，这对社会的影响将讨论什么？

Such co-existence of races in many major cities can largely be attributed to modern transportation and telecommunication technologies, to be specific, airplanes，computer and the internet. This advancement increases mobility of human and promotes communication and interaction between people without limitation of space and time. The earliest and most obvious representation lies in the globalization of trade and business which expand beyond the national border and facilitate people involved to immigrate permanently or live overseas temporarily. Some countries like USA or Australia have tradition of immigration and they welcome distinctive cultures and ethnics or at least

they tolerate differences well. In these places, multi-culture is the embodiment of a high level of civilization. 这种共存在许多大城市的赛事基本上可归因于现代运输和电讯技术，要具体、飞机、计算机和互联网。这人类进步增加流动性，并促进人们之间的沟通和互动没有时间和空间的限制。在贸易和商业的全球化展开超越国界和促进人民参与的移民永久或临时居住海外的最早和最明显的表现。一些国家，如美国或澳大利亚移民和他们欢迎独特的文化传统与民族或至少他们容忍差异。在这些地方，多元文化是高度文明的体现。

Of course melting pots have caused some concerns or problems. Races with different religions sometimes collide due to misunderstanding of other cultures. The dominant culture may have the tendency of assimilating or marginalizing other minor ethnics, leading to the young immigrated generation being confused with their cultural and political identity. Multiculturalism aimed at establishing an egalitarian society is deemed by some people to be over simplistic and idealistic. 当然熔化锅有引起一些担忧和问题。由于其他文化的误解种族和不同宗教有时发生碰撞。主流文化可能吸收或排斥其他轻微的伦理学的趋势，导致年轻移民一代和他们的文化和政治身份混淆。旨在建立一个平等社会的多元文化是由某些人视为过于简单化和理想。

However, this trend of globalization seems impossible to reverse and trying to deny it would not be as wise as to keep pace with it. Cultural diversity is believed to stimulate open-mind of people and the creativity and innovation of a society due to accommodation and communication of different ideas, therefore enhancing productivity and prosperity of a society in both economic and cultural terms. Looking back human history, brilliant ancient civilizations always featured a high level of inclusiveness of exotic cultures and religions. 然而，全球化这一趋势似乎是不可能的逆转，并试图否认是不明智的，因为跟它。文化多样性是相信以促进人们解放思想和创造力和创新社会由于住宿和通信不同的想法，在经济和文化方面因此提高生产力和社会繁荣。回顾人类历史，灿烂的古代文明总是特色高水平的外来文化和宗教的包容性。

To conclude this essay, the integration of cultures and ethnics in many areas in the world reflects the desire of human beings for widening their horizon and exploring the unknown world and this in turn accelerates more contact between distinctive cultures and ethnic groups. Human society would be more dependent on each other and realizing this sooner would be helpful for us to adapt to the current trend.

人类社会将更加依赖彼此和更快地实现这将有助于我们适应当前的趋

源新东方VIP朱老师的博客

2012年10月13日

原因：

1. 人们为了寻找更好的就业机会；

2. 人们为了寻找更好的教育机会；

3. 很多国家有很好的福利待遇吸引着全球的人们；

好处：

1. 给该国带来更多的人才；

2. 给该国带来更多的财政收入；

坏处:

1. 影响正常的沟通；

2. 治安问题没法确保；

小邓高分范文：

Current nation is no longer composed of single or a few individuals from one race. Instead, nations are inevitably characterized with various cultural backgrounds and diverse minority groups. In my view such a new phenomenon is utterly positive to individuals and society as a whole.目前国家已不再由单个或少数几个人从一个种族。相反，与不同文化背景和不同的少数群体的国家不可避免的特点。我认为这种新的现象是非常积极的个人和整个社会。

One of the possible leading causes to lead to such a picture is that a vast number of common average folks continuously come to one country for more employment and higher education opportunities. Undoubtedly, some financially advantaged nations have more comprehensive job vacancies available for more workers and technicians and advanced educational systems and preeminent professors in the university, which can offer dream-chasers with more chances to earn decent salary and attain a higher social status.一个可能的主要原因导致这样的照片是广大普通的普通人不断来一个国家就业与高等教育的机会。无疑，一些经济弱势国家有更全面的职位空缺，更多的工人和技术人员和先进的教育体系和卓越的大学的教授，能够提供梦辛龙有更多机会赚取薪水，达到更高的社会地位。

Companies and schools can enormously become the beneficiary of such a status quo. International and local companies could hunt for their potential staff who can share their distinctly diverse cultural settings with colleagues and meanwhile devote their wisdom to companies. An American corporation making children clothes, for instance, is renowned for its amazing sales record annually. Owing to designing team consisting of varying ethnic groups, this company succeeds in launching tailor-made styles for many customers.公司和学校能成为这样一个现状的受益者。国际和本地公司可以寻找他们的潜在雇员，他可以分享他们明显不同的文化背景与同事同时公司奉献自己的智慧。美国公司做童装，例如，一向以惊人的销售业绩每年。由于不同民族组成的设计团队，该公司成功推出特别设计的许多客户的样式。

Besides, university will earn a staggering amount of tuition from newly settled residents. After all, these residents’ children will continue learning while living in another nation, with which money schools are capable of renovating previous buildings and adding more equipment.此外，新解决了居民的大学会赚学费的数量惊人。毕竟，这些居民的孩子会继续学习，同时生活在另一个国家，用这钱学校能够修复以前的建筑和添加更多设备。

Overall, my viewpoint is that nations filled with people coming from different cultures are fortunate and this should be promoted to an international scale. 总的来说，我的观点是，国家充满了来自不同文化的人是幸运的，这应该促进国际范围内。

2012.10.20 旅游类

Nowadays, it is more convenient and easier for people to travel to other countries. Is this a positive or negative development?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.现今对于人们来说出国旅行越

来越方便容易。你认为这是一个好的发展还是消极的发展？说出你的道理，并从个人的知识和经验中，举出例子来证明。

1）注意时态，不要出现过去时（除非举过去的例子）2）两种思路：1. 完全偏向性A 完全支持a. 开场交代论题，交代自己观点，这是一个积极的发展趋势b. 旅游有利于经济的发展，创造更多的就业机会c. 旅游会使得当地的公众和政府更注重文化的保护d. 总结，重申论点B 完全反对a. 开场交代论题，交代自己观点，这是一个消极的发展趋势b. 过多的游客会过多的使用当地资源，并且产生非常多的垃圾c. 游客和当地人可能会产生很大的冲突，由于缺乏对彼此之间文化的了解d. 总结，重申论点2. 中立a. 开场交代论题，交代自己观点，有好也有坏b. 参照上文，选取一个好的原因c. 选取一个坏的原因d. 总结全文，重申观点

重点表达：Promote the economic expansion; create more job opportunities; lay more emphasis on; protection/ conservation of the local cultures; overuse of some rare resources; generate the conflicts between... and...

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Never before was travelling to alien countries so convenient and popular as in this century. This phenomenon is partially attributed to improved technology and cheap flight tickets. Facing this travel frenzy, some are concerned that it will bring about too many side effects whilst others insist that is should be supported and maintained.在前往外星人国家之前，从来没有这么方便、受欢迎的世纪。这一现象的部分原因是改进技术和廉价机票。面对这个旅游热潮，有人担心这会带来很多副作用，而另一些人坚持认为，是应该支持和维护。

Admittedly, cross-border travel has more downsides than one. Firstly, the carbon dioxide planes emitted is reported to be disproportionately more than that emitted by other transportation means. The carbon dioxide will lead to ozone layer thinning and thereby increase the probability of people contracting skin cancer. Moreover, being easier and more convenient to travel among countries means that some criminals could flee to other countries after committing hideous crime. This will pose a threat to local security and community stability.不可否认，跨境旅行的缺点比一。首先，飞机排放的二氧化碳是报比例超过其他交通工具所排放。二氧化碳会导致臭氧层变薄，从而增加承包皮肤癌的人的概率。此外，作为在国家中的更容易，更方便旅行意味着有些罪犯在犯下骇人听闻的罪行后，可能逃往其他国家。这会威胁当地安全和社会稳定。

However, the downsides cannot overshadow its upsides. For starters, travelling around the world with more ease could expand individuals’ horizons and stimulate their lov e of life and they will be more productive at work in the future. Moreover, companies could visit foreign markets more conveniently than before and as a result, they could locate potential target market and sell goods there or buy materials from there if the price is competitively enough. If a company could flourish this way, employees will benefit and the society in which companies are operating will be more stable and harmonies. Last but not least, if more and more people are afforded opportunities to go to other

countries, there will be less misunderstanding and more respect among countries. All these will contribute to a diverse but harmonious culture.然而，不利方面不能掩盖其的负面因素。首先，世界各地的旅行更轻松地可以拓展个人视野，激发他们对生活的热爱和他们将来会更有意义的工作。此外，公司比以前更方便的可以去看看国外市场，因此，他们能找到潜在目标市场和销售商品或购买材料从那里如果价格足够有竞争力。如果一个公司可能会兴旺起来这样，员工利益和公司经营的社会将更加稳定与和谐。最后，如果越来越多的人提供机会去其他国家，会减少国家之间的误解和更多的尊重。所有这些将有助于多元化，但和谐文化。

To sum up, despite the numerous drawbacks mentioned above, travelling to other countries with more convenience and ease is, by and large, a positive development综上所述，尽管上述的众多缺点，前往其他国家提供更多的方便和易用性，一般而言，一个积极的发展。.（感谢陆文波老师提供）

2012年10月27日媒体与广告类

Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us all want to do the same and look the same. Do you agree or disagree?广告不让人们成为不同的个人，因为它使得我们大家都想做同样的事情，并且看起来一样。你同意还是不同意？

写作指导：题型没有to what extent，因此不能写成折中式。建议采取Disagree。如今做广告的厂商越来越多，广告的形式也多种多样，从电视广告，平面广告到网络广告，因此广告给消费者提供了更多的选择，因此并没有扼杀个性，相反增加了个性。其次，如今的消费者本身也越来越精明，他们具有辨别好坏的能力，广告并不能完全影响他们的购买决定。

参考范文

Today, many commercial advertisements can be seen everywhere, selling different kinds of products such as cosmetics, toys and clothes. Some people concern that the widespread of advertisements may result in the loss of individuality among people, as they tend to wear the same clothes and use the same makeup. From my perspective, I completely disagree with viewpoint.今天，许多商业广告随处可见，销售不同种类的产品，如化妆品、玩具和衣服。有些人担心广泛的广告可能导致丢失在人民中的个性，他们往往穿同样的衣服，使用相同的化妆。从我的角度来看，我完全不同意这种观点

Admittedly, people from different walks of life have various consumption views. However, most people would budget their disposable income wisely instead of wasting all in a set of clothes without serious consideration. Therefore, despite the proliferation of the commercial advertisements for the same luxury product, people would still make decisions of buying or not according to their limited income.诚然，人们来自不同的阶层有不同的消费意见。然而，大多数人会明智地预算他们的可支配收入，而不是浪费在一套衣服没有认真考虑。因此，尽管同样的奢侈品商业广告的扩散，人们仍决定买还是不按有限的收入。

Also, people are capable of distinguishing whether the clothes in the advertisement suit themselves or not. Being exposed in a sea of advertisements for long, people's immune systems towards advertisements have strengthened. Consequently, fewer people would be swayed by the gorgeous clothes in the advisements as they realize that most clothes on advertisements only suit for models but not for the average.此外，人类能够区分广告的衣服是

否适合自己或者没有。长期暴露在广告的海洋，人的免疫系统对广告有加强。因此，更少的人会受到漂亮的衣服在思考，因为他们意识到大多数衣服上的广告模式只适合，但不平均。Furthermore, so many different advertisements are provided for people's option that it is fairly difficult to be the same with others. Take clothes for example. There are various styles, ranging from classical to modern, childish to mature, conservative to sexy. Therefore, people still could choose their favorite style to meet their demand.此外，很多不同的广告是为人们提供的选项，它是相当难以与他人相同。例如把衣服。有不同的风格，从古典到现代，幼稚到成熟，保守的性感。因此，人们还可以选择自己喜欢的风格来满足他们的需求。

To conclude, due to the multi-choice of advertisement and people's wise budget, people would not lost their individualities under the strong promotion of the same product in the

advertisement.最后，由于笔试的广告和人民智慧的预算，在同一产品的大力推广之下在广告

的人不会失去个性。(261 words)

2012年11月3日犯罪类双边讨论

Many people are afraid to leave their homes because of their fear of crime.Some believe that more action should be taken to prevent crime, but others feel that little can be done. What is your opinion?很多人害怕出门，因为他们害怕有犯罪发生。一些人认为我们应该采取更多的行动来预防犯罪，而另外一些人觉得可以做的事不多。你的观点是什么？

写作指导：

版本一：题型属于不多见的What is your opinion?。该题与Discuss both views and give your opinion 的区别在于，前者可以采纳其中一方观点进行讨论，而后者则必须讨论两种观点。

版本二：有些人认为可以采取行动来防止犯罪，而其他认为没有什么可以做。

抛砖引玉：找解决办法！近年来，犯罪率屡创新高。违法者应该通过为社会多做贡献来接受惩罚。一些人倾向于让犯罪做其他事情作文惩罚。首先，让他们更好地改造。为社会做公益事业就是好办法。对罪犯进行了惩罚，还能够鼓励他们开始新的生活。另外一个原因是：监狱空间有限，可以降低政府开支。最后，对罪犯的监禁丝毫也不会威慑到其他犯罪。到目前为止：没有任何证据表明在监禁罪犯和犯罪率的降低之间存在联系。比如：青少年犯罪、青年女性犯罪的问题。

一方面：政府应该跟多关注犯罪问题并出台相关政策法律予以惩治。

另一方面：应该加强普法知识和教育，提高道德品质，帮助树立正确的世界观。

在这个问题的解决上，政府与社会教育携手采取行动来防止犯罪。

文章结构：

1、单边讨论（一边倒）：正文分三段，每段各写一个预防措施。

2、双边支持。正文第一段支持正方观点，即为了预防犯罪可以采取的措施。可供参考的思路有：安装防盗设施，安装监控摄像头surveillance cameras, 加强法制教育legal education，政府出台严格的法律法规constitute more rigid laws and regulations，等等。正文第二段支持反方观点，即很多预防措施仍然不能解决犯罪问题。可供参考的思路有：防盗设施年久失修，质量堪忧；犯罪是由于社会贫富差距导致，预防措施并不能从根本上防止犯罪的产生。

3、单边支持。正文第一段先交代消极者的观点，也就是这些预防措施无益于预防犯罪，然后再

进行驳斥，交代完善的预防措施和正确的态度可以有效减少犯罪。正文第二段再讲预防犯罪可以做的事情。

题型属于不多见的What is your opinion?。该题与Discuss both views and give your opinion 的区别在于，前者可以采纳其中一方观点进行讨论，而后者则必须讨论两种观点。

参考范文（来自互联网，其中红色标示出的表达值得烤鸭们好好借鉴）

Nowadays, an increasing number of people are scared to leave their homes alone due to crimes（改写换词很恰当）. Some people argue that regardless of what measures have been taken to struggle against thieves or robberies, the crime rate cannot be lowered substantially, while others contend that anti-crime action is capable of preventing people’s lives and properties from being threatened by criminals. Personally, I am in favor of the latter view.如今，越来越多因犯罪而不敢离开家园。一些人认为，无论采取什么措施，以打击小偷或抢劫，罪案率无法大幅下调，而其他人则认为反罪恶行动能够防止威胁市民生命财产的罪犯。个人而言，我较同意后一种观点。

Convincing arguments can be made that taking effective measures brings numerous merits to the protection of properties. To start with, adopting safeguard procedures in advance, such as installing safeguard doors,are conducive to deterring potential criminals.（有助于阻止潜在犯罪发生）Apart from serving as a facility to prevent homes from being stolen and robbed, safeguard measures are more likely to play a practical role in indicating criminals that hosts have taken precautions against crime. Moreover, even if the house is being invaded bylaw offenders（criminals, thieves, robbers, burglars,intruders 的替换词，用词富于变化）, the pre-installed equipment, for instance alarm device, can inform policemen to arrive at the crime scene immediately right after they receive the notification. Lastly,implementing necessary guard action can offer a sense of security to people when they are out of their apartments. It is obvious that people can be easily distracted, if they are always anxious about whether their homes are or have suffered from illegal invasion. （此句虽然支持力度不是特别明显，但确实是大实话，放在这里也不难看）出令人信服的参数属性的保护，采取有效措施带来许多好处。首先，采取保护措施提前，如安装维护的门，有利于防止潜在的罪犯。除了担任设施以防止房子被盗抢，保障措施更有可能发挥实际作用，该值指示主机已采取预防措施，防止犯罪的罪犯。此外，如果房子被入侵，甚至附例罪犯，预装的设备，例如报警装置，可以告知警察到达现场后立即对他们收到通知。最后，实施必要的保护行动可以提供安全感的人在他们时，他们的寓所。很明显，人们可以很容易分心，如果他们总是担心家里是否或受到非法入侵。

However, we cannot deny the fact that the existing measures may carry potential drawbacks.

A reason for this is that a large number of security devices are criticized for the sake of (此短语用在此处意思不妥，该短语意为：为了。。。。。。的利益，此处改为are criticized/reproached for their inferior quality)low quality and they can be broken through readily. It is remarkable that last year, over 200 types of safety anti-thief systems were identified and exposed (此处想表达安保设施不达标，被曝光，可以写成regarded as unqualified by Products Quality Inspection Bureau of China 或者改成their failure to meet safety standards came to light)due to the inferior

quality and their sponsor manufacturers are penalized accordingly.但是，我们不能否认的是，现有的措施可能会带有潜在的缺点。一个原因是，大量安全设备criticizedfor低质量的份上，他们可以打破容易通过。这是了不起的去年，由于质量低劣的安全手机防盗软系统的200多种发现和暴露及其赞助厂商因此受到惩罚。

In summary, I concede that taking action cannot fully guarantee that people’s houses are able to(此处用法错误，be able to 主语一般为人，改成can 更合适）escape from being intruded by criminals. Despite that, the advantages created by the measures far outweigh the adverse impact. Overall, I am convinced that people should strengthen their awareness of security and in the meantime governments should issue relevant laws to supervise the quality of security systems.总之，我承认采取行动，不能完全保证市民housesare能够逃脱被闯入的罪犯。尽管如此，创建措施的优势远远大于负面影响。总体而言，我深信，人们应加强安全意识，同时政府应发行相关法律监管安全系统的质量。(350 words)

2012年11月8日教育教育和科技的结合

We have three important parts of education reading，writting and Math.some people think every child will benefit from a fouth skill added

借助这道考题，给大家介绍两个词汇，两个使我受益匪浅的词汇，一个是“话题万能论点库”，另一个叫做“交叉选择”。它们将成为我们雅思写作的最大利器。今天我们就借助这两个概念来击破这道题目，同时攻破浩如烟海的一系列相关题目。

第一个词条，需要我们做以下三个步骤：

1)将雅思考题(比如08到10年)按照话题进行分类。

2)确定每一类话题当中使用频率最高，实用性最强的论点。

3)将论点按照“正面”和“负面”进行分类。

首先，让我们来做一个话题判定。关键词：education--教育类computer skills--科技类。由此可知，为教育类以及科技类相结合的话题，第二个关键词的作用就体现出来了，我们需要将这两类话题的万能论点库进行一个“交叉选择”，也就是将教育类和科技类合适的论点进行综合。

以下为我在辛辛苦苦写了雅思写作考试近四年所有考试题目之后总结出来的教育类以及科技类的万能论点中的一部分：

Education

Positive：

开拓眼界：expand one's horizon

适应社会：adapt to the society

增加职业竞争力：boost one's competitiveness

营造良好的校园环境：create a favorable school environment

激发学习热情：generate an enthusiasm to learn

缓解压力：relieve stress

Negative：

增加负担：add a heavy burden

可以课下学：engage in …spontaneously

扼杀学习热情：stifle one's thirst for knowledge

抑制创造力发展：hamper development of creativity

Technology

Positive：

提高效率：enhance efficiency

提高生产率：increase productivity

节省时间：time-saving

以指代步：let our fingers do the walking

减少奔波：release people from lengthy commutes

扩大社交圈：expand one's social circles

使人们更加独立：make a transition from interdependence to independence

随时随地保持联系：keep in touch with others much more easily than generations ago Negative：

导致失业：make people redundant

导致社会隔离感和冷漠感：lead to social isolation and indifference

加快生活节奏：quicken the pace of life

使得工作和生活界限模糊：boundary between work and study is blurred

现在让我们来做一个交叉选择。在两个话题万能论点库中，发现以下几条适合本题：Positive：

1) 掌握计算机技术可以使我们更好地适应现代社会要求(教育类positive第二条)

2) 掌握计算机技术可以提高职业竞争力(教育类positive第三条)

3)可以提高学习效率(科技类positive第一条)

Negative：

不一定要成为学校正规课程计划的一部分。由于电脑和网络的普及，计算机技术完全可以在课下学习。(教育类negative第二条)

让我们来试验一下教育类和科技类的其他的题目吧，看看我们的万能论点库是否神奇。你会发现，这两类题目中的90%都可以用我们之前谈到过的论点进行解决。

08.6.5(学习一项科目还是所有科目)

观点：该学习很多科目

Positive：开拓眼界，适应社会多变的要求，增加职业竞争力(复合型人才)

Negative：增加学业负担

09.3.14(出国留学利弊)

观点：利大于弊

Positive：开拓眼界，适应社会，提高职业竞争力

Negative：增加财政负担

04.10.23(是否开设音乐和体育)

观点：应该开设

Positive：开拓眼界，营造良好的校园环境，缓解压力

Negative：可以在课下从事这类活动

10.9.4(24小时接听电话利弊)

观点：利大于弊

Positive：随时随地保持联系，扩大社交圈，使得人们更加独立

Negative：使得工作和生活界限模糊

11.1.8(机器人的利弊)

观点：利大于弊

Positive：提高效率，提高生产率，节省时间

Negative：导致失业

大家可以发现，教育类和科技类话题几乎都可以用相同的论点进行解决。有了万能论点库，在考场上几乎不用当场思考，直接调用已经准备好的观点即可，因为它们是如此的万能实用性如此之强。举个例子，教育类话题只要提前准备好了十个万能论点，上考场只要是碰到教育类话题，你都没问题，都可以从这十句话中挑选出合适的论点来组织文章。

Twelve years into the new millennium, individuals have witnessed the universal utilization of computer in the fields of culture, science, military and so forth. When it comes to the education frontier, computer-related skills as well as their diversified applications，to a large extent，have facilitated students and schools throughout the world. However, whether computer skills should be enlisted in our curriculum, as a forth compulsory component, has sparked heated discussion recently. From my viewpoint, computer skills are important but not necessary in terms of public education. 进入新千年的十二年，个人目睹领域的普遍利用计算机文化、科学、军事等等。在谈到教育时，前沿、计算机相关的技能以及其多元化的应用，很大程度上促进了世界各地的学生和学校。然而，在我们的课程是否应登记的计算机技能，作为强制组件，引发了热烈的讨论最近。从我的角度来看，计算机能力很重要，但没有必要在公众教育方面。

Admittedly, youngsters would , for certain, gain more popularity in the future job market provided that

computer techniques are offered in schools, since computerized products and technologies have penetrated virtually every aspect of every industry. In addition, acquiring the essential knowledge regarding computer or even the internet could, to some degree, help children improve the efficiency and quality of their school learning, which tend to be onerous and monotonous based on the current education system. 诚然，青少年会，肯定获得更多人气，未来的就业市场提供学校提供电脑技术，由于计算机产品和技术已经渗入每一个行业的几乎每个环节。此外，获取有关计算机的基本知识，甚至互联网，一定程度上，帮助孩子们提高他们在学校的学习效率和质量，往往更为沉重和单调，基于当前的教育制度。

On the other hand, it seems pointless to add computer skills into the schooling list just like the other three, namely reading, writing and math. Firstly, the burden of students nowadays is fairly considerable. Adding a forth compulsory subject would undoubtedly frustrate and exhaust them, or even undermine their passion for studying all together. On top of that, computer skills, along with the widespread of personal computers in common household, can be gained in various means besides educational institution. It has been a quite common phenomenon that a major group of adolescents learned how to type by chatting online, how to save files by downloading the very first movie, and how to maintain operation system by installing anti-virus software. 在另一方面，似乎毫无意义的计算机技能添加到列表就像其他三个，即阅读、写作和数学。第一，现在的学生的负担相当可观。添加必修科目无疑会挫伤和排气他们，甚至削弱他们对学习的热情一起。此外，计算机技能，以及普遍在普通的家用个人电脑，可获得各种手段除了教育机构。这是一个相当普遍的现象，主要群体的青少年学会如何键入通过网上聊天，如何保存下载文件的第一部电影，以及如何维护操作系统安装防病毒软件。

Considering all the factors above, I personally reach the conclusion that computer skill should not be added into the current school disciplines, even though it is, indisputably, an essential technique to survive in the modern society. 考虑到上述所有因素，我个人得出的结论，计算机技能应该不会添加到当前学校学科，尽管它是不容置疑的，在现代社会生存的基本技术。

(317 words) 作者：史凯齐

2012年11月17日文化、旅游与全球化类混搭（原因+利弊分析

in the past, people used to travel abroad to look many differences from their home country. Nowadays, the sceneries in places all over the world are more and more similar. What are the causes of the similarities? Do you think the advantages of this similarity outweigh the disadvantages?在过去，人们曾经周游世界来看与本国的不同之处。如今，世界各地的景色变得越来越相似。这种相似的原因是什么？你认为它的好处大于坏处吗？

写作指导：本题看似是旅游话题，实为文化全球化类话题。正文可用5段式写法，正文第一段写这种相似产生的原因，第二段写这种现象的好处，第三段写坏处。结论段交代自己的观点，即这种相似总体上来说是好的，但是各国应当重视保护本国的文化。

参考思路：

Causes:

1. 二战以后世界各国城市的大规模扩张massive urban sprawl使得城市发展空间紧张，因此

需要建设大量现代化的高楼skyscrapers。

2. 文化全球化cultural globalization 导致各国之间的文化同化cultural assimilation.

Pros:

1. 增进了不同文化之间的了解，减少了旅行者的适应时间，减少了“文化休克”cultural shock 的出现。

Cons:

1. 减少了游客对当地的好奇心curiosity，从而减少了一定数量的游客。

2. 减少文化多样性cultural diversity，使得少数民族文化minority cultures 处于濒临灭绝的境地be on the verge of extinction.

写作指导第一段：阐述主题第二段：中心句——造成这种情况的原因是多方面的：分论点：1、广泛的文化交流2、教育方式的改变3、旅游业的发展第三段：中心句——正面和负面都有，但是负面多一些分论点：1、不会让人觉得在异地有陌生感2、传统文化的消失3、不利于城市个性化产业的发展第四段：总结——原因是多方面的，造成负面的影响要大于正面的影响。

重点表达traditional culture and customs; cultural exchange; the development of the tourism; the transformation of educational system; industrial development

2012年11月17日信强哥

Every city has its architectural character, but the similarities between cities are more obvious these days than in the past. In my opinion, one reason for this is the high price of land.个城市都有其建筑特点，但城市之间的相似性比过去更加明显，这些天。在我看来，这是土地价格高企的原因之一。

In most large cities, land is scarce and consequently it is very valuable. This has led to the construction of tall buildings which occupy only a small area of land while providing lots of floor space where people can live or work. Buildings of this type are made of concrete and steel and can be built comparatively quickly using prefabricated materials. They do not use local materials, such as stone, timber or brick. In consequence, many cities now look very much the same and you might not know whether you were inBrisbane,BangkokorBerlinwhen you are on the street.在大多数城市，土地是稀缺的，因此这是非常宝贵的。这导致在高层建筑施工中只占很小的土地，同时提供大量的地板空间，人们可在此居住或工作。这类建筑物的混凝土和钢可以生成相对快速使用预制材料。它们不使用当地材料，如石头、木材或砖。因此，现在许多城市看起来很相同，你可能不知道你是否在inbrisbane，bangkokorberlinwhen你在街上

While I realize that we cannot stand in the way of progress, I believe that cities should try to keep some individuality. For example, inParisit is prohibited to build very tall buildings in the center of the city, as this would spoil the overall appearance of the skyline当我意识到我们不能站在进步的道路，

我认为城市应该尽量保持一些个性。例如，禁止inparisit构建非常高层建筑在城市的中心，因为这会破坏整体外观轮廓。.

Other cities have chosen to design unique buildings to ensure they look different. The twin towers inKuala Lumpuror the Opera House inSydneyare examples of this approach, and I agree with this kind of initiative.其他城市选择了设计独特的建筑物，以确保他们看起来不同。双塔inkuala lumpuror 歌剧院insydneyare这种方法的例子，我同意这样的倡议。

All in all, although it is regrettable that modern cities look similar, I tend to feel that this is unavoidable. However, it can be argued that, even if the buildings are similar, cities will maintain their own character as a result of cultural diversity, the terrain and the climate, which ultimately determine how people live.总而言之，但遗憾的是，现代城市类似，我倾向于认为这是不可避免的。不过，可以说，如果建筑物，甚至是类似的，城市将保持自己的性格由于文化多样性，地形和气候，最终确定人们如何生活。

2012年11月24日科技类议论文（同意与否）

With the increasing use of mobile phones and computers, fewer people are writing letters. Some people think that the traditional skill of writing letters will disappear completely. To what extent do you agree or disagree? How important do you think is letter-writing?随着移动电话和电脑的使用增加，写信的人少了。一些人认为传统的写信技能将彻底消失。你在多大程度上同意或者不同意？你认为写信有多重要？

写作指导：替代类话题大多可以写成不同意，因为即便科技如何发展，传统的方式总是有它存在的价值的，比如上面三道例题中，传统博物馆和美术馆、传统图书馆、传统的课堂，都是有存在价值的，那么书信也不例外。更何况题目中有一问“How important do you think is letter-writing?”自然还是写书信是有价值的比较好。考生不要被本题的第二问吓倒，其实这一问并不改变这道题目议论文的本质。如果写成“单边支持”结构，考生会发现其实第二问本来就应该交代传统书信的重要性。

结构思路：文章建议用四段式的格式，正文分两段。正文第一段驳斥题目中的观点，即科技的发展不仅不会减少人们的写信能力，相反还能促进这种能力。

首先承认：的确现代的科技使得人们写信减少了。因为人们有了更为快捷的联系方式，比如电话，手机短信SMS，社交网站SNS，以及其它即时通信IM软件的出现，人们对于联系方式的追求转向速度，因此更简短，从而减少了传统书信需求。然后进行驳斥：但是，在很多场合下，比如需要字数较多的一对一沟通的时候，人们还是习惯通过电子邮件进行交流，而电子邮件在格式上与书信类似，因此科技的发展其实反而增加了人们写信的机会。正文第二段写书信的重要性。

首先，书信是情感的表达。相比于电话和短信息，书信写的时候更需要耗时间选词选句，思考的过程更有助于作者情感的表达，因此朋友、家人之间的通讯，书信更有分量。其次，相比于电子媒介，传统信函能具备法律效应，更适用于一些正式的场合比如商务谈判、学术交流和法律文书。再次，一些老年人不熟悉计算机操作，因此他们还是习惯于传统书信。总结段：

现代通讯科技Modern telecommunication technology不仅不会削弱人的写信能力，反而会增强人的这种能力。此外，作为一种重要的技能，书信技能仍然是现代人必须具备的技能之一。

类似话题1.Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? (070609)2.Some people think that the government should establish free libraries in each town. Others believe that it is a waste of money since people can access the Internet at home to obtain information. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion. (120112)3.Some people think typical teaching of a teacher and students in the class will not exist by the year 2050. Do you agree or disagree? (101218)一些人认为公共博物馆和美术馆不需要因为人们可以看到，历史文物和艺术作品通过使用计算机。你同意不同意这种看法吗？0706092。有些人认为政府应该设立免费的图书馆在每个城镇。其他人认为这是浪费钱，因为人们可以在家中上网获取信息的访问。双方讨论并给出你自己的观点。1201123。有些人认为到了2050年的老师和学生的典型教学中的类将不存在。来解决吗？101218

2012.12.01科技类

More and more companies are allowing employees to work at home. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? 越来越多的公司允许员工在家工作。你认为这是好的还是坏的发展？

写作指导

1）注意时态，不要出现过去时（除非举过去的例子）

2）写作思路：总体是个消极的发展

A. 开场交代论题，交代自己观点，在家上班不会成为主流的工作方式

B. 有好处：1. 员工可以合理的分配自己的时间，这样容易兼顾家庭和朋友；2. 如果在上班，没有上级的监督监管，员工会感觉到更大的自由程度，不会那么容易遭受心里和身体上的问题。

C. 有坏处：1. 员工之间面对面的交流基本上会减至为零，对于公司的整体凝聚力非常不利，很容易流失员工，不利于企业的长远发展。

D. 有坏处：2. 如果公司的员工都在家上班，不利于管理并且很多公司里面的机密文件档案将得不到很好的保护，甚至公司已有市场会被窃取。

E. 总结，重申论点，建议为了公司的长远利益，在工作场所上班是最合理的方法。

重点表达

Make use of; more effectively and efficiently; without the supervision of managers; suffer greatly psychologically and physically; reduce the opportunity; face-to-face communication; a sense of identity, belonging and loyalty;

推荐练习真题2011年3月

近期考试趋势

近三个月考到的话题为社会类，媒体类，教育类，工作生活类和政府类。

2012年12月6日抽象类

Nowadays, people always throw old things away and buy new things, whereas in the past, old things were repaired and used again. What factors cause this phenomenon? What effects does the phenomenon lead to?现在人们总是扔掉旧东西然后再买新东西。而在过去，人们会把旧东西修好继续用。有那些原因导致这种现象?这种现象会带来什么影响?

写作思路：

生活方式和社会观念类+ 环境类

原因+后果

算是比较好展开写作题型了。“坏了就扔”现象的原因分析“坏了就扔”现象的后果分析

原因分析

时代不同了，经济发展了，人们的生活水平显著提高了，势必导致人们的生活方式、消费理念等发生剧烈的变化。这就是“坏了就扔”现象的最根本原因。

当今社会流行快餐式消费，人们喜欢“喜新厌旧”。他们买了就用，用了或坏了就扔，爱图个新鲜。

攀比心理、面子问题在作祟。同样使用一样的东西，别人用新的，你却用修补过的旧的，那么你就很有可能去买新的，这就是攀比心理、面子问题在作祟。

修补不一定比买新的划算。比如，一部380元Nokia低端手机坏了，若修理费要你200元，你肯定会买一部新的。

后果分析

1)资源浪费2)环境污染3)资金浪费4)助长攀比之风

话题分析：本题属于抽象类话题。抽象类话题看似难以困难，然而这些题目的共同解题策略就是与题库中的具体话题发生联系，从而寻找论据。在本题中，考生既可以从社会观念、人们的生活方式角度去考虑，也可以从环境和资源的角度去构思。此外，本题还可以与广告话题发生联系，从广告的角度来解释这种现象。甚至从科技角度也能想出论点：由于电子产品更新换代日新月异，导致人们不得不更新手中的通讯设备。

类似话题：1. Many people say that we have developed into a “throw-away”culture, because we are filling up our environment with so many plastic bags and rubbish that we cannot fully dispose of. To what extent do you agree with this opinion and what measures can you recommend reducing this problem? (050806) 。很多人说我们已发展成为一个"扔掉"文化，因为我们的填充我们的环境，有这么多塑料袋和垃圾处理的，我们不能完全。你在何种程度上同意这见解和你能推荐什么措施减少这一问题？

2. We have entered a throw-away society and fill the environment with rubbish. What are the causes and what are your solutions? (071201) 我们已经进入了扔掉的社会环境和填充垃圾。原因是什么，你有什么解决方案？

结构思路：

开头：改写话题+文章结构

It is widely acknowledged that we have entered a “throw-away society”, as people no longer attempt to repair old goods such as clothes and electronic devices. Instead, they simply throw them

away and buy new ones. This essay will elaborate on the causes leading to this tendency and examine the effects that it may bring. 人们普遍认为我们已经进入了"扔掉的社会"，因为人们不再尝试修复旧衣服和电子设备等商品。相反，他们只是把它们扔掉买新的。这篇文章将详细说明这一趋势的主要原因，并检查它可能带来的影响。

正文1：交代原因

1. 经济全球化时代，生产力的提高使得消费品更低价。Thanks to econom mic globalization, the industrial output has been raised significantly, which has greatly driven down the price of consumer goods.由于经济全球化，工业产值已大大提高，大大降低消费品价

2. 人们生活水平的提高带来消费观念的变革。Moreover, the ever-increasing living standard of people has revolutionized their traditional consumption concept. 此外，不断提高人们的生活水平彻底改变了传统的消费理念。

这里可以句举衣服、一次性产品disposable products、数码产品的例子。

3. 各种广告的诱惑吸引人们不断购买新产品。Also, a dazzling array of advertisements appear on mass media every day, keeping luring people to purchase new products. 此外，琳琅满目的广告出现在大众媒体上每天保持吸引市民购买新的产品

正文2：交代影响

1. 这种狂热的消费主义加速了自然资源的消耗，加剧了环境的破坏。The rampant consumerism in society has sped up the exhaustion of natural resources, and aggravated serve environmental pollution. 猖獗的消费主义社会加快自然资源的枯竭，加重了环境污染。

2. 助长了非理性消费和拜金主义。Additionally, this trend has also bred irrational consumption and even a money-oriented mentality. 此外，这种趋势亦非理性消费，甚至金钱为导向的心态结论：回顾+解决方法

媒体应当通过公益广告宣传勤俭节约。The mass media should launch more public service advertisement to promote thrift and frugality.大众传媒应推出更多的公益广告，以促进储蓄和节俭。

2012年12月8日

Nowadays men and women in many countries decide to have babies at an older age. What are the reasons? What effects does this trend have on society and family life？如今在许多国家的男性和女性决定要孩子在旧的时代。原因是什么？对社会和家庭生活这一趋势有何影响？

答题思路：

【原因】没有必要全部罗列，更重要的是解释为什么你认为这些理由成立。

1、经济压力

2、现代生活方式，改变传统观念

3、医学的发展，夫妻可以借此进行计划生育

4、男女越发平等，女性也能决定是否早点要孩子

【影响】

1、家庭孩子数量可能变少，可能会导致家长过分溺爱孩子，这不利于孩子成长

2、但也有好处，比如，父母可能能够培养综合素质更高的下一代，毕竟父母经济基础可能更好，受过的教育可能更全面，阅历更丰富。

3、不过，这可能会导致一个比较严重的社会问题的出现：离婚率的攀升。一旦经济基础达不到预期，而年轻夫妻又没有孩子维系感情，则可能导致离婚。

4、还有一个社会问题也可能会变得很尖锐：人口可能走向老龄化。这个问题在一些发达国家，比如，日本，已经十分严重。目前，中国也可能提前步入老龄化社会。这对社会会产生很大的负面影响：经济发展迟缓，因为缺乏劳动力，且年轻人创造的财富很大一部分要用于税收已支付繁重的养老金和其他用于老年人的福利事业。

2012年12月8日

Today both males and females are having babies at an older age . Why does this happen？Is this a positive or negative development on society and family？

今天男女生在旧的时代。为什么会这样？这是对社会和家庭的积极或消极的发展吗？

原因：1. 现在社会竞争激烈，所以人们首先考虑稳定自己的职位而努力；

2.

好处：1.对家庭：①家庭可以积攒足够的钱来养育未来的子女

②当人们打拼完有自己事业后，可以自己亲自教育子女

2.对社会：①人们选择晚育可以集中精力工作，不会因如何照顾小孩子而分神

②社会的人口压力会有时间缓冲，否则社会管理成本会急速上升

坏处：1.对家庭：①晚育可能使父母生完孩子后再就业遇到困难，而早育可以让他们更快的恢复体力投入工作

②家里的长辈可能会被剥夺掉自己尽早照顾孙女孙子享受天伦之乐

小邓高分范文：

It seems that individuals today tend to give birth to babies at a later age and this is really popular in the world. As for me, this phenomenon is not as horrible as many people believe.今天看来，个人倾向于她们的婴儿在稍后的年龄，这是世界上很受欢迎。至于我，这种现象并不像许多人认为的那么可怕。

The culprit behind this phenomenon of people choosing to have babies at older age is the increasingly fierce social competition. To become more qualified for jobs or more challenging assignments, a majority of staff have to keep updated with their professional knowledge and have no time to take into bringing up children into consideration. In most cases, thousands of middle-aged employees opt for training courses such as computer skills and foreign language improvement even during their weekends or holidays to upgrade their knowledge and stay more competitive.这种现象背后的罪魁祸首选择要孩子年纪的人是越来越激烈的社会竞争。更加胜任工作或更具挑战性的任务，大多数员工都能够随时更新其专业知识和没有时间管教子女考虑。在大多数情况下，成千上万的中年雇员选择培训课程包括计算机技能和外语甚至在周末或假期期间，以提升本身的知

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The table below shows changes in the numbers of residents cycling to work in different areas of the UK between 2001 and 2011. The table compares the numbers of people who cycled to work in twelve areas of the UK in the years 2001 and 2011. Overall, the number of UK commuters who travelled to work by bicycle rose considerably over the 10-year period. Inner London had by far the highest number of cycling commuters in both years. In 2001, well over 43 thousand residents of inner London commuted by bicycle, and this figure rose to more than 106 thousand in 2011, an increase of 144%. By contrast, although outer London had the second highest number of cycling commuters in each year, the percentage change, at only 45%, was the lowest of the twelve areas shown in the table. Brighton and Hove saw the second biggest increase (109%) in the number of residents cycling to work, but Bristol was the UK’s second city in terms of total numbers of cycling commuters, with 8,108 in 2001 and 15,768 in 2011. Figures for the other eight areas were below the 10 thousand mark in both years. (172 words, band 9)

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Look at the line graph and complete the text with the correct forms of the verbs in brackets and the correct prepositions. The graph shows (show) how many people visited (visit) three London museums in the summer of 2013. Most visitors went (go) to the British museum between June and September. The number fluctuated (fluctuate) between 500 and 750. By contrast, the Science Museum and the Natural History Museum received (receive) fewer visitors. The number of people who visited the Science Museum dropped(drop) gradually from 400 thousand to 300 from June to August then rose(rise) to 450 thousand in September. We can see (see) that the trend for the Natural History Museum was (be) similar. There was a sharp drop in visitors from June to July. The number remained stable (remain stable) in August and then increased (increase) steadily in September. 102. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the percentage change in the share of international students among university graduates in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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