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雅思核心作文范文（1）：教师与计算机比较

Someone believes that the role of teachers is getting less important than computer’s.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A Sample Answer

It is imperative for us to acknowledge that the Internet,being almost a paragon of perfection as a medium,is by all means an unprecedented invention transforming the ways in which we have access to knowledge.One of many findings is that more people(in particular those born in and after1960s)find it more appealing to gain academic information from Google or Ask than teaching staff.Nevertheless,the happening,to my way of thinking,does not imply the absolute predomination of the cyber-life and the extinction of teaching positions.

In one respect,teachers,especially those being in charge of science and engineering subjects,are abler to adopt heuristic method to orient their students how to carry out experiments,group study, and research than computers,considering that the instructors-to-students communication is both immediate and interactive.Nevertheless,although being in readiness for kaleidoscopic information,the Internet appears to be inactive in posing questions and enlightening students on deliberating a theme or subject deeply and philosophically.In another,teachers are richer recourses than computers when the trainees dedicated to the vocational subjects like Electronic Device Maintenance or Decoration expect to relate what they have learnt to real workshop operations.

Nonetheless,growing evidences are indeed alerting that teachers’importance in some humanitarian subjects is lessening.For example,a professor in History Studies does not inform his students of much more information concerning the Renaissance Period or Victoria than the Internet.Instead,the professor’s roles,if any,are altered from telling what happened to how to know what happened and how to relate events whereby e-indexes,among which Wikipedia and Answers are often suggested.

Overall,the Internet and teaching staff,in fact,are not extraneous,with the former growing to be a more sought-after information mine and the latter imparting methodology as well as experience. However,it has been noticed and mentioned that many instructors responsible for arts-oriented professions are giving their way to the Internet.(322)

雅思核心作文范文（2）：航空旅行问题

Some people think the cheap air flight gives ordinary people more freedom.However,others think the cheap air flight should be banned because it pollutes the air and brings many other problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A Sample Answer

Air travelling,which used to be a privilege for the prestige,has been an affordable way of transportation for commoners,as Virgin Atlantic Airways as well as United Airlines(also including other companies)try to increase their market share by means of“One Euro Ticket”or“Business Package Contract”since the middle of1980s.It is because of this,the air hubs,such as Heathrow UK,Narita Japan,and Johannesburg the South Africa,provide liner servicers for millions of globetrotters or even more daily at a price much lower than that before the Gulf War.As a result, opposing opinions are shown to this phenomenon.

Someone voices that everyone-is-invited strategy proposed by airliner operators,making it more convenient for people to travel for the purposes of both self-enrichment and business development, is desirable,since the economical transportation services not only save the time that passengers spend on travelling,but also the budget.

Nevertheless,some others spare to efforts to obstruct the development of air travelling and,if possible,prohibit it.One of their arguments is that the ever-increasing number of flights in service, particularly those in gigantic size,such as Airbus and Boeing Series,are leading to even worse air pollution by exhausting noxious gas.Besides,they also claim that the travelling is also a root of threats,among which terroristic attack and air crash are the most obvious two.

It seems to me that the airliner travelling must be kept for the benefits it has brought before any other better alternatives are introduced.Nonetheless,the authorities in charge and businesses,which should not turn their deaf ears to the anxious opinions,are suggested to invest more to non-fossil-fuel-driven planes,anti-terrorism facilities,and airliner maintenance.(285)

Some people think students should learn more practical courses like computer science,but others think they should learn more about theoretical courses like geography and mathematics.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A Sample Answer

The focuses of teaching are mostly concentrated on two aspects:practical and theoretical knowledge.Nevertheless,people have not reached a consensus on the question which regard of education should be given more,if not all,attention.

For one thing,someone claims that the disciplining of practical skills must be given the priority in academic life since an adult,usually from a grass-roots family,has perforce to be economically independent firstly after being funded by his family members for years.Another side of their consideration is that social well-being is immediately accomplished by skillful practitioners instead of the scholars merely interested in mechanical experiments and moralistic seminars.

For another,the foregoing thought,however,is refuted by the proponents to academism.The theory-worship ones,who are often dedicated to the abstract professions like topology,assert it must be nothing but theoretical education that can reveal the very truth of various phenomena and orient human beings to practice the knowledge that we have acquired.An apparent example supporting the idea is that philosophy,mathematics,and linguistics,upon which the modern scholastic life is grounded,are indeed more theoretical than practical.

On balance,it seems to me that the above two perspectives,although being trustworthy to some extent,are overlooking the correlation between practice and theories.In fact,the practical education must be in disorientation if theories are https://www.wendangku.net/doc/6515684109.html,paratively,the theoretical instruction is going to be obscure and senseless when no first-hand practical experience is provided.Therefore, the two elements are both needed and of equal importance in teaching.(256)

Some people think that governments should pay the tuition for those who want to study at university.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A Sample Answer

More youngsters today are enrolled by the institutions of higher education than before. Nevertheless,the situation,although implying the higher level of civility and the faster pace of social development,imposes heavier burden on the governments’investment to education. Therefore,it is my suggestion that authorities should administer a more flexible fiscal policy to higher education,instead of paying for all.

In one respect,officials ought to shake off their responsibilities for those attending private universities for two simple reasons.First of all,the students preferring such universities are mostly born and brought up in the middle-class families or above,which,in most of cases,are able enough to afford tuition and other necessary expenditures.Besides,private universities,as profitable organizations,are not entitled to official fiscal aids to help those outstanding but impoverished applicants,since they are regularly funded by alumni associations.

In another,undergraduates and postgraduates should not be wholly sponsored,since some of them have acquired the employability to earn extra cash by taking some temporary jobs,such as being the part-time staff for enterprises or helping their professors with the teaching work of some fundamental courses.However,an alternative approach ought to be adopted as to the humble ones majoring in some purely-academic subjects,for example mythology,for they are unlikely to make their living before graduation.

Simply put,not all the trainees should be counted in the sponsorship list by governments considering their different abilities to pay.However,it is sensible for administrators to be economically responsible for the grass-roots students unable to make their own bread by their expertise in the short run.(269)

Newspapers have an enormous influence in people’s opinions and ideas.

What are the positive and negative effects of this publication?

A Sample Answer

Newspapers,both in digital and printed forms,are the very media from which readers are informed of the latest news worldwide,ranging from Obama’s inaugural ceremony to the bailout policies of the Economic Slowdown since the first quarter of2009.It is justifiable to assert that all sorts of newspapers have been posing osmoses onto the ways we think or even live our life.

On the bright sides,newspapers,especially those government-funded,are the most valuable sources of information enabling decision-makers,for example businessmen and politicians,to adopt or adjust their plans by following new trends of administration or reformation.Besides,some papers, often tabloids,also add spice to our monotonous life by gossiping the privacies of celebrities,for example“Victoria’s Panther Pants”or“George W.Bush’s Mastiff”.Moreover,some columnists’comments,either sarcastic or moralistic,are also great attractions since the witty words,although not so often,make readers calm,philosophical,and,in some cases,cynical.

On the dark sides,however,newspapers have never been fair enough to get rid of bias as well as partiality,considering that the publications are invariably subsidized or even founded by the interest groups,which hope to sway public opinions for political or economic purposes.It is why we,when reading two rivaling newspapers,frequently feel lost in face of two opposing opinions.

All in all,newspapers,being informative,entertaining,and instructive,are in all ways laudable. However,these characters cannot obscure the fact that publishers of newspapers try all means to persuade readers into given answers or facts instead of encouraging us to think independently.(263)

University students always focus on one specialist subject,but some people think universities should encourage their students to study a range of subjects in addition to their own subject.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

A Sample Answer

Before elaborating my perspective about whether universities should teach students to be vertically or horizontally developed,I feel necessary to categorize higher education into two spans:the one for Associate or Bachelor Degree,and the one for Master as well as Ph.D.

As to the first one,the institutions of higher education,I consider,are more suggested to structure a teaching package covering a wide range of curricula.It is quite common that the generality of students in this stage are not disoriented about the professions they are genuinely curious about or talented in.Therefore,more choices of disciplines should be given to them for comparison and selection.

However,in terms of the second,by mentioning which I mean the postgraduate period,trainees ought to be guided to study limited areas for two reasons.First of all,a trainee in this stage has been academically mature and he,taking a mathematical expert for example,would know which subject is his life-long pursuance,topology or discreet.Thus,it would be a waste of his time and energy if teaching staff still attempt to make him a weird versatile creature arbitrarily.Furthermore,students in this phase are able to have their understanding about certain professions promptly deepened,in that their interests have been fixed precisely,on the precondition that they are provided with selected courses.

In conclusion,intensive and extensive ways of pedagogy do not stand against.Therefore,they must be appropriately intersected for the students in different spans for the purposes of firstly making trainees the men of common sense and then the men learnt afterward.(265)

雅思核心作文范文（7）：电影的社会影响

Movies are now getting popular.Discuss why the phenomenon takes place and how it affects our life.

A Sample Answer

To answer the question why movies are in fashion,we have to realize that the situation is immediately related to a multitude of causes,among which,however,the following three aspects are believed to be the most obvious,at least according to my way of thinking.

A key and indisputable factor is that the trend of watching movies itself,particularly the Hollywood’s,makes people more confident and advantageous when they intend to begin or join in the conversations of a mainstream society or,simply put,people watch movies to enhance their charm in social life.For example,a child knowing Harry Potter a lot is invariably an idol amongst his peers.In fact,the spirit of idolization is leaving children with the misconception that the more movies they watch,the greater they are.As a result,the young are gradually developing the habit of “always watching new movies”.In comparison,those insensitive to movies are always put away like wet mops.

In addition,movies also make people relaxed undisturbed.What is distinctive now is that everyone is in a rat race,so we have stronger desire to get rid of exhaustion.Thus,cinemas become suggested choices since not only can we stay with crowds to avoid feeling lonely but also feel safe in darkness. Nevertheless,I admit that not everyone can get used to the stuffy atmosphere there.

Another aspect deserving our attention is that the modern movies are forcing or alluring people to watch.A salient example associated with my viewpoint is that nearly all the pieces are serials-based, such as The Lord of Rings or the Chronicles of Narnia.Not to exaggerate,spectators are hooked by smart producers and the leading roles of Tom Cruise’s or Angelina Juliet’s styles from the very beginning.

All in all,it involves a complexity of factors to identify why movies are of strong charm.Therefore, the above-mentioned causes,although being of vital importance,are just few of many.(326)

雅思核心作文范文（8）：留学的目的与影响

Many students choose to attend schools or universities outside their home countries.Why do some students study abroad?Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.

A Sample Answer

Initiated in the15th century as a plan of political and cultural communications,the idea of overseas education,as a by-product of globalization,has been progressively common.

As to elites,the experience of studying abroad denotes the international opportunities in their professions.Take the case of a Chinese financial analyst,we can predict that he,after graduating from Stanford,is more likely to serve CITI Bank as an Asian partner or share holder in the States, instead of working for a Chinese bank.More importantly,the chance also enables him to possess wider horizons,observing his field from an all-way angle by getting rid of geographical and cultural restrictions.Furthermore,the full-range and stable social security system of American and European countries is another attraction to him,although not everyone can get the permission of Permanent Resident or Citizen successfully.

In terms of those average or even below-average students,their basic consideration of studying abroad is merely for getting hold of higher degrees from any“foreign education institutions”and makes their“unsatisfactory educational background”completely changed.Under more extreme circumstances,some of them just have the wishful thinking of earning quick dollar or euro by taking the part-time jobs like gardening or even prostitution.

Nevertheless,it is noteworthy that some of students are forced to study abroad by their parents. Generally speaking,such students are either born with silver spoons in their mouths or good-for-nothing.In other words,their parents make the decision for no purpose but to make the selfish, arrogant,and dependent personalities of their offspring whetted.However,many of wealthy youngsters lose their good reputation in the casinos or pubs of foreign metropolises,for they are still too young to abnegate themselves.

To conclude,the intentions of foreign education vary with the social backgrounds of people. Nevertheless,their focuses can be simply put into three factors:seizing better opportunities, making more money,and learning abundant experience.(319)

When people move to another country,some of them decide to follow the customs of the new country.Others prefer to keep their own https://www.wendangku.net/doc/6515684109.html,pare these two choices.Which one do you prefer?Support your answer with specific details.

A Sample Answer

It is against my will to arbitrarily separate local and international customs since the contemporary world is the one featured with multi-culture as well as eclecticism instead of rejecting exotic civilization under the disguise of Chauvinism.

After settling down in an unfamiliar culture,an immigrant may uncritically follow a safer lifestyle or values he used to abide by,usually on the pretext of patriotism.Nevertheless,the true intention for them to do so is to conceal their sense of trepidation into an unacquainted context or the inferiority complex of being marginalized by aboriginals.As a result,this group of exotic residents are naturally excluded and,under quite usual circumstances,keeping integrating into their own sub-cultural circles,like the Dragon City(an area dominated by Chinese)in Toronto.

However,it is noteworthy that some immigrants attach themselves to their local customs for religious purposes.For example,it is impossible for a follower of the Prophet to accept pork,no matter how long he has been in relationship with Chinese culture.And the same logic can also be applied to other religious situations.

Nevertheless,the above assertion about religious factor is just an exception in analyzing whether an immigrant should accept new customs.In fact,the cases of acculturation are often associated with the willingness and unwillingness to do so or not.If possible,an immigrant,I suggest,ought to familiarize himself with the civilization of his adopted country with might and main,since only in this way can he get melted into the mainstream society.Besides,the amalgamation is effective to eliminate his sense of loneliness and emptiness.

In brief,it is my unmovable faith that the effort that an immigrant invests to tying himself up to the culture of his adoptive country should be made.(296)

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Only people who earn a lot of money are https://www.wendangku.net/doc/6515684109.html,e specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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In2004,Jack Welch,the former CEO of GE,published his new book entitled Win,from which I read a line“everyone is thirsty for success.They want higher degrees,positions,and income.In a word,the key question is how to win.”Indeed,one is born with the desire to take the title of champion or,simply put,to be successful.Nevertheless,“success”carries richer connotation than money,although I am not antipathetic to it.

Socially speaking,“success”is a complex concept,no matter how it is evaluated.We may take a billionaire as an example.As to the people worshipping utilitarianism,he must be an achiever since it is effortless for him to consume Hermes,BMW Series7,or,if he wishes,a detached apartment in Hawaii.Nevertheless,to those pursuing inner peace,such as monks and escapists,the billionaire is a slave to extravagant life and a loser.

Individually speaking,the interpretation of“success”is even harder to be made since it varies with ages.In one’s early life,by which I mean the age before30exactly,one of the vital yardsticks to measure whether a person is prominent or not is his accomplishment in his education life,such as A PH.D graduating from Harvard is often believed to be more successful than his counterpart from an unnamed university.Nevertheless,in one’s middle-age,the explanation of success is invariably related to how much fortune he has contributed to social life and,in the meantime,how much he earns.Whereas,when it comes to senior citizens,we can see that their understanding about “success”is whether they are given the chances to see the sunrise of next day.

All in all,the interpretation of success is subject to both social and personal definitions.Therefore, it is too autocratic to regard money as the only criteria.(308)

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