2005-2015年深圳中考英语作文题汇总

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71. 假如你是深圳的一名导游, 刚接了一个从英国来深圳的旅游团。请你以口头通

知的方式向游客介绍两天的行程，所去参观的景点作一简单的介绍。通知的开头和结尾

已给出。( 要求: 必须写在答题卷上，字数60 –80, 不包括已给的句子。)以下景点仅

供参考:

Happy Valley Splendid China ( mini landscape 微缩景观)

Shenzhen Underground Window to the World DameishaDongmenYantian Port ( 盐田港) ,

Hello, everyone! Welcome to Shenzhen. I’m your tour guide. Let me tell you our plan for your stay here.

___________________________________________________________________________

2006年深圳书面表达（共1小题，10分）

76. 假如你是学生Jacky, 为了改进学校的工作，请根据一下提示给校报英语

版的编辑（editor）写一封信。（要求：必须写在答案卷上，不要逐句翻译，

80-100词）

参考词汇：suggestions, more rest, homework, sleep, after-class, activities, rich

and colourful, food, dishes

主要方面满意程度具体内容建议

教师工作有爱心，工作认真教师要多休息

作业负担作业太多，睡眠不足减少作业量

课外活动丰富多彩，但时间短延长时间

学校膳食种类少品种丰富

Dear editor

Best wishes

Sincerely yours

Jacky

2007年深圳书面表达（共1小题，10分）

71.新闻：6月5日是联合国世界环境日，今年的主题是“冰川消融，后果堪忧！”。为了避免

可能造成巨大灾难的气候改变，联合国环境规划署组织了“Planting Trees for the Earth”大型

活动。许多国家和地区积极响应,,

以上新闻播出后，你学校决定组织一次植树活动。假设你是班长，你要动员你班同学参加这

次活动，请完成你的发言稿。（要求：写在答题卷上，从一个或几个方面说明数对环境的影

响，不用翻译上面的新闻，60——80字。）

参考词汇：

1.take ,from,从,,吸收

2. release v. 释放

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