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命题趋势与应试策略

一、评分原则

1.本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分。

2.评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量,确定

或调整档次,最后综合给分。

3.词数小于100的,从总分中减去2分。

4.评分时,应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的

连贯性及语言的得体性。

5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。没错误书写3个单词从总分中减去1分,原则上

不超过3分,重复的不计。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。标点符号错误,将视其对交际的影响程度酌情减分。

6.如书写较差,以至影响交际,将分数降低一个档次。

二、各档次的给分范围和要求

高考英语作文高分技巧-逆向思维法

逆向思维法是指为实现某一创新或解决某一因常规思路难以解决的问题,而采取反向思维寻求解决问题的方法。在做英语书面表达题时,我们亦可借鉴这种方法,从研究高考对书面表达的要求入手,以

及阅卷者的感受,去迎合他们的要求,从而做到有的放矢,以求短时期内取得对书面表达的突破。

我们可以从高考作文的评分标准及阅卷的角度来审视一下对写作的要求,看看在他们的眼中优秀作文的共同点有哪些,哪些又是主要的失分点。通过研究高考书面表达卷评分标准,我们可清楚地发现,一篇高分书面表达必须具有以下特点:

内容要点齐全,清楚地表达了自己的观点并进行了充分合理的论证;

准确性高,描述恰当,时态、人称符合文章要求,语法、句法准确无误,结构严谨,标点、格式、大小写亦能正确应用;

连贯性好,衔接语使用恰当,全文结构紧凑;

使用了一些较为复杂的词汇,句式,能体现出较强的语言运用能力;

开头、结尾富有特色不落俗套,给人耳目一新的感觉。

通过对高考评分标准的研究,我们可能发现高分作文有着共同的优点。我们在平时就要严格遵循书面表达的要求,认真训练,积极发现自己的问题并做出有针对性地改进。

【典例1】

Live in Harmony

当前我国政府和人民正努力把我国建设成一个社会关系和谐的国家,具体到学生而言,大部分学生与家长成员以及同学关系的处理上总体是好的,但也存在着一些问题,如果容易发火,与同学吵架,不听从家长和老师的教育等。我校正在调查高三学生与家庭成员和同学老师之间的关系处理情况,你作为高三学生请把以上的情况向学校反映并提出一些改进的意见。

要点如下:1.目前的实际情况:好的方面和不好的方面;2.你个人的改进意见。

注意:1.文章的开头已经给出(不计入总词数);2.词数:100左右。

Nowadays the government and people of China are trying to build a country with a harmonious relationship.

【参考范文】

Live in Harmony

Nowadays the government and people of China are trying to build a country with a harmonious relationship. Generally speaking, the relationship between us students and our family members, classmates as well teachers is good. However, there exist some problems. Some students in our grade are easy to lose their temper because of unbearable anxiety and heavy study burden. What’s worse, they sometimes quarr el with others, and even turn a deaf ear to their parents and teachers, which is very disappointing.

In my opinion, we middle school students should make our efforts to improve the situation. First, we should respect our parents and teachers as well as our classmates. Second, when we are not feeling good, we can chat with our friends, teachers and parents. It is likely that they can understand us better and give us some reasonable advice. Third, after a day’s hard work, we can relax ourselves by taking s ome exercise, such as playing basketball, table tennis and so on. The most important is to create a harmonious atmosphere around us in order to realize self-harmony.

专家点评:本篇作者以大见小的写作手法紧密联系实际,清晰的结构,入理的描述,准确的用词,都说明它是一篇不错的范文。

1) 内容要点齐全。作者巧妙地分析了周围环境的不和谐现象,并且提出创造和谐氛围的途径,富有见地,富有哲理。作者首先总结出学生与家庭成员以及班级同学在关系处理上总体是好的,但也存在着一些问题并很自然地引出问题所在,然后话锋一转,提出自己的观点:学生应该如何改变这种状况。作者在写作中适当增加了细节,使文章内容更为充实,表达更为具体,给读者以清晰的印象。最后用一句话总括主题:创造和谐氛围,创建和谐校园。整篇文章读起来要点清晰,归纳有序,让读者一目了然。

2) 语言使用准确性高,较好地使用了英语的各种句型,琅琅上口,英语味道浓厚。作为对当前社会问题的论述,时态的把握特别重要,写作时应以一般现在时为主。另外要能正确地列举事例,有些同学列举时,容易前后不一致,开始时用firstly, secondly,后来就变成了third。还要注意的是标点应用准确,逗号、句号的使用要恰如其分,使名层次结构清晰,句意明了,有效的避免汉语句式的简单罗列、词语堆砌。

3) 语言的连贯性强,非常出现地使用了连接词,使全文的结构紧凑,层次清楚,过渡自然。比如使用了如however, what’s worse, generally speaking, in my opinion等连接词,使文章衔接自然、生动。

4) 这篇范文较好地使用了较为复杂的词汇和高级句型,并运用了同位语,插入语以及非限制性定语从句。As well as, lose their temper, turn a deaf ear to, make our efforts to , chat with, quarrel with, create a harmonious atmosphere等词组应用及It is likely that 句型,which is very disappointing非限制性定语从句,relax ourselves by taking some exercise中非谓语动词的使用无不为文章增添了亮点。

书面表达语篇布局:

1.仔细审题,确定体裁。首先要判断作文是记叙文、说明文还是应用文,是图表形式还是提纲形式是开放式作文还是半开放式作文,并据此选择合适的应对策略。

2.抓住关键信息,梳理文章要点,考生在拿到题并审完题后,应列出提纲,以免遗漏,对需要适当发挥的地方细心确认,不要离题太远。

3.紧扣所列要点,精心挑合适的词句,列出需用的重点短语和句型,注意行文要适合语境及英语的表达习惯。

4.利用所列出的词句组句成文,注意句子结构的完整性及语法的准确性,还要选择合适的连接词把句子联系起来,使上下文行文连贯,成为有机的整体。

5.仔细核对草稿,修正错误,尤其要注意自己经常犯的一些错误,大到人称、时态的选择小到标点、大小写都要注意。

6.注意卷面,规范誊写,誊写时要写得干净工整,清晰易读,千万不能太潦草,试卷一般不能出横格,要靠线书写整齐。

第一讲高考英语作文高分技巧-十句作文法

十句作文法是由有关专家总结出来的一种高分作文方法,考生在经过短期训练之后便可较大幅度地提高成绩。为此有必要向考生加以介绍,目的是使一些对作文没有把握的考生找到一条可行的解决办法。

需要指出的是所谓十句作文并非一定10句,从很多考生的高分来分析,句子数量在8句至12句(依句子长短和结构不同而不同)。如以每个句子平均10—15个单词计算,便能用8—12个句子完成一篇要求10—120的作文。

其基本模式为:

┌─主题句句 1

第一段─┤

开头└─扩展句句 2

┌─主题句句 1

第一段─┤

正文├─扩展句句 2

├─扩展句句3

├─扩展句句4

├─扩展句句5

├─扩展句句6

├─扩展句句7

├─扩展句句8

└─扩展句句9

第三段──结尾句句10

结尾

第一段为开头,包括两句。第一句为主题句,必须提出,通过问题点明全文主题;第二句为扩展句,须进一步说明和支持主题句。或是将关系倒过来,由第一句说明情况,第二句提出问题。

第二段为正文,共七句。第一句(句3)为主题句,提出本段的主题,它应与第一段的主题相关和一致。第二句至第七句(句4一句7)为扩展句,说明和支持本段的主题。句与句之间要注意运用好过渡使段落

逻辑合理,结构得当。

第三段为结尾,简化为一句,也是全文的总结句,它将前面内容总结为一结果,表明自己的论点。

三段之间的连接要灵活运用“启、承、转、合”的连接过渡手段。例如:

Example 1

Television

Television presents a vivid world in front of us. (1)(主题句)Through TV, we can learn what is happening half way across the world. (2)(扩展句)

Television also plays an important educational role in our daily life. (3)(主题句) For one thing, the TV university provides an opportunity for many young men who can not go to formal universities. (4)(扩展句) For another, children can broaden their scope of knowledge by watching such popular programs as "The Animal World", and "The Mickey Mouse and Duck Donald". (5)(扩展句) Besides, women can learn about the latest fashion of dresses and the best recipe for making fruit cakes. (6)(扩展句) Furthermore, we learn many world advanced technologies from TV programs such as computer and telecommunication. (7)(扩展句) And also we can learn singing, dancing and doing physical exercises in some special TV training courses.

(8)(扩展句) In short, the effect of TV's educational role is becoming more and more obvious. (9)(扩展句)

Having viewed these several aspects, and with many more TV program being produced, I believe that our life will become even more significant. (10)(总结句)

1.本文是一篇典型的十句作文,主题句“Television presents a vivid world in front of us”点明

了文章的主题,其他句子均围绕它进行扩展。扩展句(句2—9)内容详实,结束句(句10)总结性和

概括性很强。整篇文章层次清晰,充分体现了十句作文法的特点。

2.较好地使用了大量的连接词,如for one thing, for another, besides, furthermore, and also 等,另外,in short的使用也使结论更加清晰,概括更加明了。

3.最后的总结句富有创意,利用分词短语的形式把上下文连贯起来,体现了作者对英文句式的灵活应用,避免了一般性的概括语,很有特点。

4.使用了较高级的词汇句型,不单调,像宾语从句(what is happening halfway across the world, our life will become more significant),宾语从句(who can not go to formal university),分词短语(by wa tching…,for making fruit cakes, having viewed these aspects),重点短语(plays an important educational role, provide…for…),高级单词(present, broaden, scope)和with 复合结构(with many more TV programs produced)等,这些都极大地提升了文章的档次。

使用十句作文法,首先要仔细审题,确定文章的中心问题。主题句的表达特别重要,然后才能围绕中心进行扩展,使意图明确。扩展句一定要具体详细,不可太空、太泛,不要对与要求无关的内容进行随意发挥,更不可为了表现英语水平而写出文不对题的句子,画蛇添足。

Example 2

Changes in People's Diet

There have been some changes nowadays in the diet of the Chinese.

There have been some changes nowadays in the diet of the Chinese. (1)(主题句) For example, grain, the main food of most people in China, is now playing a less important role, while the consumption of high-nutrition food such as milk, meat has increased. (2) (扩展句)

The changes in diet can be accounted for by a number of factors. (3) (主题句)First, people are much wealthier than before. (4) (扩展句) With a higher income, they can afford to buy good foods which, in the past, were rarely seen on the dinner tables of ordinary families. (5) (扩展句)Another factor is that people have realized the importance of a balanced diet to their health. (6) (扩展句) Lack of certain amount of meat or milk, for example, will result in poor health. (7) (扩展句) Finally, owing to the economic reform, meat and milk, which were scarce in the past, are produced in large quantities. (8) (扩展句) For all those reasons, what was formerly called "the basket of vegetables" has become that of varied foods. (9) (扩展句)

To sum up, insignificant as those changes may seem, they are the signs of the improved economic condition in China, and we believe that as the effort in the modernization movement continues, there will be greater changes in people's diet in the future. (10) (总结句)

书面表达应试步骤:

1.审题确定格式、体裁、时态、人称等写作要点。

2.列出提纲,确定开头句、扩展句和总结句,选择好适宜的句型。

3、利用一些关联词或者过渡句把句子有机地连接起来,必要时可适当增加细节。

4、仔细检查,适当修改,保证句子结构完整,要点齐全,人称时态主谓一致。

5.认真誊写,卷面整洁。

第二讲五种基本句型:

英语句子看上去纷繁庞杂,但仔细观察不外乎五个基本句式。这五个基本句式可以演变出多种复杂

的英语句子。换言之,绝大多数英语句子都是由这五个基本句式生成的。这五个基本句式如下

基本句型一: S十V主谓结构

在这个句型中的动词是不及物的行为动词, 不能带宾语. 这种动词表示主语的行为动作, 意义基本完整, 所以不再需要宾语. 这些动词常见的有:appear, apologize,arrive, come, die, disappear, exist, fall, happen, rise,等等。不及物动词没有被动语态形式. 在这个句型中, 谓语后面有时不再附加任何成分, 而大多数情况下有状语性质的修饰语. 这种修饰语可以由副词, 介词短语, 不定式短语, 分词短语以及从句等来担任. 例如:

1). Tom正在等待_________________________________________________.

2)小Tom正在桌子旁等待_________________________________________________.

3) 他停了下来_________________________________________________.

4) 他停下来看了一下_________________________________________________.

5) 小男孩站在那里,行乞_________________________________________________.

6) 父母已经去世的那个小男孩站在那里行乞

_________________________________________________.

7). 事故是昨天晚上发生的 _________________________________________________.

基本句型二: S十V十P主系表结构在本句型中, 由系动词及表语构成表性状的复合谓语, 说明主语的身份, 特征, 性质, 状态等. 英语中除了最常见的系动词be以外, 还有表示感官的连系动词look, feel, sound, taste, smell等; 表示变化的连系动词get, turn, become, grow, fall, come等; 表示状态的连系动词keep, remain, stay, continue, seem等. 例如:

1)我们是中国人_________________________________________________.

2)他很像他父亲_________________________________________________.

3) 我们在任何时候都应该保持谦虚。_________________________________________________.

4). 这种食物尝起来很糟糕。_________________________________________________.

5). 春天到了,天气变得越来越暖和_________________________________________________

6). 不要吃那种食物,它已经变质了。_________________________________________________.

7). 这个事实证明是正确的。_________________________________________________.

基本句型三: S十V十O主谓宾结构

本句型中的及物动词同样也为行为动词, 表明一个具体实在的动作, 但其本身所表示的意义并不完

整, 需要有一个宾语, 才能表达一个完整的概念. 例如:

We have a TV set. You may use my pen. I will use hers.

He doesn‘t like the first. He likes the third.

这种句型中的动词应为及物动词或者可以后接宾语的动词短语。同时,句子中有时含有与宾语有关的状语。作宾语的成分常是:名词、代词、动词不定式、动名词或从句。如:

1) 我昨天看了一部电影。________________________________________________.

2)这些孩子他们照看得很好。_____________________________________

3)学生们正在操场上打篮球 _____________________________________

4)我刚开始不喜欢英语 _____________________________________

5)他很爱他的父母 _____________________________________

6)我们都应该爱我们的祖国 _____________________________________

基本句型四: S十V十O1十O2主谓双宾结构,O1=间接宾语;O2=直接宾语

有些动词后面, 可以有两个宾语, 这个宾语一个指人, 一个指物, 指人的叫间接宾语, 表示动作的方向和目标; 指物的叫直接宾语, 表示动作的承受者, 间接宾语一般放在直接宾语之前. 并不是所有得动词都能用于此句型。除以上两词外,能用于此句型的动词主要有两大类: (1) bring, give, sell, show, take, tell, throw, write等;(2) buy, find, get, leave, make, save, choose等。例如:

She brought me some fruit. Can you do us a favour?

这两个句子中的间接宾语都可以变成介词短语放在直接宾语后面. 例如:

She brought some fruit to me. Can you do a favour for me?

1) 昨天她父亲给她买了一辆自行车作为生日礼物

__________________________________________________

或者 __________________________________________________

2)请把你的画给我看一下。_____________________________________

3)只要你不失去信心,我会给你提供机会的。_____________________________________

4) 王老师教我们英语 _____________________________________

5) 请告诉我这件事的真相 _____________________________________

基本句型五: S十V十O十C主谓宾补结构

宾语和补足语之间的关系是逻辑上的主谓关系, 即宾语是宾语补足语的逻辑主语。句型中的宾语常用名词或代词宾格. 常用来作宾语补足语的成分有名词, 形容词,动词不定式, 现在分词, 过去分词, 介词短语和副词等. 例如:

She named her baby John. We elected him monitor of our class.

Keep the room clean and tidy, please. His father wished him to be a musician

We consider it a pity that they have given up trying it a second time.

这种句型中的宾语+补语可统称为“复合宾语”, 作补语的常常是名词、形容词、副词、介词短语、分词、动词不定式等。如:

1). 请让孩子们安静下来。________________________________________________________.

2)他把墙漆成白色。________________________________________________________.

3)我们发现他是一个诚实的人。______________________________________________.

4)请保持教室干净 _____________________________________

5)我常常让他帮助我学习英语 ________________________________________________________.

注意:动词have, make, let, see, hear, notice, feel, observe, watch等后面所接的动词不定式作宾补时,不带to。如:

5)他让他的员工整天工作________________________________________________________.

6)不要让水一直流 _____________________________________

第三讲文章的结构:开头、主体和结尾

(一)掌握技巧:

(1)注意篇章结构,合理布局

开始部分(opening paragraph)——说出文中的要点、核心问题。

正文部分(Body paragraphs)——围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。

结尾部分(concluding paragraphs)——对全文的总结和概括。

要做到全文中心突出、段落之间必须是有机地联系,内容完整、连贯。前后呼应,祛除与主题无关的内容.

(2)确定主题句

主题句是对全文的概括,是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“画龙点睛”的作用。通常主题句出现在一篇文章的开头,而后,全文对主题句所提出的内容进行解释,扩展。

写主题句应注意以下几点:

①归纳出你要写的文章的几个要点

②提炼出一句具有概括性的话

③主题句应具有可读性,抓住、吸引读者。

(3) 高考英语写作常用开头和结尾

一开头万能公式:

1.开头万能公式一:名人名言有人问了,―我没有记住名言,怎么办?尤其是英语名言?‖,很好办:编!

原理:我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的,包括我们欣赏的文章也是,所以尽管编,但是一定要听起来很有道理呦!而且没准将来我们就是名人呢!对吧?

经典句型:

A proverb says,―You are only young once.‖(适用于已记住的名言)

It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever.(适用于自编名言)

更多经典句型:

As everyone knows, No one can deny that…

2。开头万能公式二:数字统计原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。

原则上在议论文当中不应该出现虚假数字的,可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一,但编无妨,只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型:

According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.

看起来这个数字文邹邹的,其实都是编造出来的,下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造:Honesty根据最近的一项统计调查显示,大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。

Travel by Bike根据最近的一项统计调查显示,85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。

Youth

根据最近的一项统计调查显示,在某个大学,学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。

Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?

根据最近的一项统计调查显示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。

更多句型:

A recent statistics shows that…

二结尾万能公式:

1.结尾万能公式一:如此结论说完了,毕竟要归纳一番,相信各位都有这样的经历,领导长篇大论,到最后终于冒出个―总而言之‖之类的话,我们马上停止开小差,等待领导说结束语。也就是说,开头很好,也必然要有一个精彩的结尾,让读者眼前一亮,这样,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子:

Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.

如果读者很难―显而见之‖,但说无妨,就当读者的眼光太浅罢了!

更多过渡短语:

to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus

更多句型:

Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…

2.结尾万能公式二:如此建议如果说―如此结论‖是结尾最没用的废话,那么―如此建议‖应该是最有价值的废话了,因为这里虽然也是废话,但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽!

Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.

这里的虚拟语气用得很经典,因为考官本来经常考这个句型,而如果我们自己写出来,你说考官会怎么想呢?

更多句型:

Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.

Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.

二、写作的七项基本原则

一)、长短句原则工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题:As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.

如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记!

强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。

二)、主题句原则国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成―群龙无首‖之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事!

特别提示:隐藏主体句可是要冒险的!

To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam(主题句). Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer allthe questions correctly.

三)、一二三原则领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点…如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的―标签‖来判定你的文章是否结构清楚,条理自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。

1)first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗)

2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推荐,原因:俗)

3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推荐,原因:俗)

4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly(不推荐,原因:俗)

5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐)

6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐)

7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐)

8)most important of all, moreover, finally

9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况)

10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况)

建议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!

四)、短语优先原则

写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。相反,如果发

现亮点—精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如:

I cannot bear it.

可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it.

I want it.

可以用短语表达:I am looking forward to it.

这样字数明显增加,表达也更准确。

五)、多实少虚原则原因很简单,写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候,不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital之类的形象词。再比如:

走出房间,general的词是:walk out of the room

但是小偷走出房间应该说:slip out of the room

小姐走出房间应该说:sail out of the room

小孩走出房间应该说:dance out of the room

老人走出房间应该说:stagger out of the room

所以多用实词,少用虚词,文章将会大放异彩!

六)、多变句式原则

1)加法(串联)

都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句子之间加and,但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说:

I enjoy music and he is fond of playing guitar.

如果是二者并列的,我们可以用一个超级句式:

Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.

其它的短语可以用:

besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover

2)转折(拐弯抹角)

批评某人缺点的时候,我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点,然后转入正题,再说缺点,这种方式虽然阴险了点,可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢,我们说话的时候,只要在要点之前先来点废话,注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。

The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.

The coat was thin, but it was warm.

更多的短语:

despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding

3)因果(so, so, so)

昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩,然后我主动搭讪,然后我们去咖啡厅,然后我们认识了,然后我们成为了朋友…可见,讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序,先什么,后什么,所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系!

The snow began to fall, so we went home.

更多短语:

then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that

4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重)

有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如果真的是这样了,也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你

的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。

举例:This is what I can do.

Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.

同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分:

When to go, Why he goes away…

5)附加(多此一举)

如果有了老婆,总会遇到这样的情况,当你再讲某个人的时候,她会插一句说,我昨天见过他;或者说,就是某某某,如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面,那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。

The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.

I don‘t enjoy that book you are read ing.

Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.

其实很简单,同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成;定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中,但是whom or that关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。

6)排比(排山倒海句)

文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势!

Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.

Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.

We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life.(气势恢宏)

要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可!

七)、挑战极限原则既然十挑战极限,必然是比较难的,但是并非不可攀!

原理:在学生的文章中,很少发现诸如独立主格的句子,其实也很简单,只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会,它就是分词的一种特殊形式,分词要求主语一致,而独立主格则不然。比如:The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.

Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.

如果您可一些出这样的句子,不得高分才怪!

三、文章主体段落的三大杀手锏

一)、举实例思维短路,举实例!提出一个观点,举实例!提出一个方案,举实例!而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式,任何情况下,只要我们无法继续文章,不管三七二十一,尽管举例子!

In order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted every possible simulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance. For instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fime him or her.

更多句型:

To take…as an example, One example is…, Another exampleis…, for example

二)、做比较方法:写完一个要点,比较与之相似的;又写完一个要点,再比较与之相反的;

世界上没有同样的指纹,没有相同的树叶,文章亦同,只有通过比较,你才会发现二者的相同点(through comparison)和不同点(through contrast)。下面是一些短语:

相似的比较:

in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner

相反的比较:

on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead,

nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with

…,…

三)、换言之没话说了,可以换一句话再说,让你的文章在多一些字,或者文邹邹地说,是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。

实际就是重复重复再重复!下面的句子实际上就三个字I love you!

I am enthusiastic about you. That is to say, I love you.

I am wild about you. In other words, I have fallen in love with you.

或者上面我们举过的例子:

I cannot bear it.

可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it.

因此可以这样说:I cannot bear it. That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am fed up with it.

更多短语:

in more difficult language, in simpler words, put it more simply.

2012高考英语高频词组汇【经典100组】

很多同学觉得英语学不会很大程度上有由于词汇量太少所致。。。然而其实不然,有一些词汇很简单,你个个都认识可组合起来就不一定了或者意思就会产生偏差,这就是名曰词组的东西。可恰恰有些词组总是受到高考命题老师们的偏爱,特此整理出来以便同学们整理背诵。【好好记一记,比背单词的效率高多了呢~(*^__^*) 】

1 abandon oneself to sth. 完全屈从于(某种感情或冲动)

2 have a (the )ability to do sth. ( have the ability in doing sth.)有能力做某事

3 to the best of one's ability 尽力

4 be about to do when… 正准备做某事突然。。。

5 above all 首先,最重要;in all 总计after all 毕竟; 终究

6 at home and abroad 在国内外go abroad 出国

7 in sb.'s absence 不在时in the absence of (人)不在时be absent from 缺席

8 be absorbed in 全神贯注于

9 access to 接近;进入

10 by accident 偶然by chance by mistake 由于错误

11 be delayed through an accident 由于事故而耽误

12 be accompanied by 附有;伴随

13 according to (后面不接view,opinion…); in my opinion

14 collect accounts收账;open an account 开账户;keep accounts 记账; account for说明; give

a full account of 做一个完整的说明; on account of=because of 因为

15 accuse sb. of… 控告某人;charge sb. with sth. 起诉某人;Blame sb. for sth. 责备某人

16 be accustomed to sth.( to doing sth.)=be used to sth.(to doing sth.)习惯于干某事

17 have some acquaintance with 熟悉;熟知

18 come (run) across (偶然)碰到; get sth. across 使人理解;领会

19 act as充当,担任act out 表演(对话、故事);act on(upon) 对。。。起作用

20 catch sb. in the act of doing sth. 抓住某人干某事;take action 采取行动

21 be active in 在。。。积极take an active part in 积极参加lead an active life过着积极的生活

22 adapt oneself to 使自己适应adapt sth. to 使某物适应adapt from 根据。。。改写(改编)

23 add in 包括;加进去add to 增加;加强add… to 把。。。加到。。。上

add up to 合加起来

24 be addicted to sth.( doing sth. ) 嗜好。。。的;上了。。。瘾的

25 in addtion/ in addtion to 此外

26 deliver an address to 向。。发表演讲giving a closing address 致闭幕词an address of welcome 欢迎词

27 admit to sth.( doing sth.) 承认

28 in advance=beforehand 提前

29 be of great (no ) advantage to 对。。。大大有利(毫无裨益)gain(have) an advantage over优于;胜过;take advantage of sb. 利用某人;欺骗某人

30 put an advertisement 登广告

31 ask for sb.'s advice 征求某人的建议give sb. advice on how to do sth. 就如何

何干某事提出忠告

32 advise sb. on sth. 就某事对某人提出忠告;advise sb. against( doing) sth.劝某人不干某事

33 be afraid of 害怕;担心be afraid to do 不敢做某事

34 be after 寻求;追求

35 be against one's proposal 反对(意见go against nature违背自然stand against the wall 靠墙而立

36 at the age of 在。。。岁时;be under age 未成年

37 agree with sb.( what 从句); agree with the climate/饮食对气候等的适应

ag ree to +advice/suggestion/ idea/proposal … agree on (upon) 。。。就。。达成一致意见

38 ahead of ( time) 在。。。前面go ahead 继续;前进

39 aid sb. in sth./aid sb. with sth. 帮助某人做某事in aid of 支持;give sb. first aid对某人实施急救

40 aim at 瞄准

41 on the air(用无线电、电视)播送in the air 在空中;by air 乘飞机;put on (give oneself) airs 摆架子

42 all along 一直;始终all over the country(world)遍及全国(世界)all alone 单独;独自地all but 几乎;差一点

43 allow sb. to do sth. 允许某人做某事allow doing sth. 允许做某事

44 let alone 更不用说There is not enough room for us,let alone six dogs.

45 get along (on) with 在。。。方面有进展take along with 随身携带

46 not only…but also

47 make an analysis of 分析

48 in the ancient time 在古代

49 and so on/and so forth 等等

50 be angry about sth.对某事生气be angry at sth.因某事生气

be be angry with sb.生某人的气

51 annoy sb. with sth./annoy sb. by doing sth. 因。。。使某人生气;52 one after another 相继

53 answer for 对。。。负责answer sb.'s call 回电话make no answer 不作回答

54 be anxious about ( for) 为。。。担心be anxious to do 渴望(急于)做某事

55 apologize to sb. for sth./ make an apology to sb. for sth 因某事向某人道歉

56 in appearance 外貌上make one's appearance 登台by/from all appearances 显然

57 apply…to… 将。。应用于apply for 申请apply to 适应于apply oneself to 专心致志于;apply to sb. for sth. 向某人申请某物

58 appoint sb. to a post 派某人任某职; appoint a time for the meeting 约定开会时间

59 approach to 接近make an approach to 对。。。进行探讨

60 approve of 赞同

61 argue with/against sb. about/on sth. 与某人辩论某事;argue sb. into doing 说服某人做某事

62 arm in arm 肩并肩hand in hand 手拉手; shoulder to shoulder 肩并肩take sth. in one's arms 抱be armed to the teeth 全副武装

63 arrange for 安排;准备arrange with sb. about sth. 与某人商定某事

make an arrangement( arrangements) for… 做好准备;安排

64 as a whole 作为总体on the whole 总体上

65 as…as one can 尽力;尽可能

66 as to/with regard to 至于;说到

67 be ashamed at sth. 为某事感到羞愧be ashamed for 为某人感到羞愧

68 ask for sth. 请求ask sb. for sth. 向某人索取某物ask sb. to do sth. 要求某人做某事

69 every aspect of=all the aspects of 各个方面

70 assist sb. with sth./assist sb. in doing sth./assist sb. to do sth. 帮助某人做某事

71 associa te..with… 把。。。和。。联系起来; in association with … 与。。。联手

72 be astonished( surprised) at (the news) 对。。感到惊奇

73 at the latest 最迟

74 e attached to 附属于。。。;依恋;attach sth. to… 把。。贴上把。。系在。。。上

75 attempt/try to do sth.(make an attempt to do sth.) 企图做。。。;attempt at sth. 试图获得

76 attend on/to sb. 照看/护理某人;attend to 关心;照料

77 attract/capture/catch/draw/get one's attention 吸引某人注意

hold one's attention on 将注意力集中于devote one's attention to 专心于

turn one's attention to 将注意力转向pay attention to 注意

78 one's att itude towards… 某人的态度对。

79 on (the ) average按平均;above( below) average 平均以上(下)

80 be aware of 意识到,觉察

81 back and forth 来回地(屋内)

82 at the back of sb./at sb.'s back 支持某人;at the back of 在。。。后

lie on one's back 朝天躺着

83 go from bad to worse 每况愈下

84 go bad(wrong/hungry) 变腐

85 keep(lose) balance 保持(失去)平衡;

be in the balance 悬而未决

86 ban( prohibit) sb.from doing sth. 禁止某人做某事

be under a ban被禁止

87 base sth. on/upon sth. 以。。。为基础;be based on 基于

on…basis=on the basis of 以。。。为根据;在。。。基础上

88 battle against 向。。。开战;battle with 与。。。搏斗;battle for为。。。而战

89 because of + 名词(代词、what 从句)

90 make the bed 整理床铺;in bed/on the bed 在床上

91 beg sb. to do sth.恳求某人干某事;beg for sth. 请求得到beg sth. of sb.恳求某人某事

92 begin with 从。。。开始

93 on behalf of 代表; on sb.'s behalf 以某人的名义

94 believe in 信赖

95 belong to (无被动语态) 属于

96 beyond recognition认不出来beyond belief 难以置信

beyond description 无法用言语表达beyond sb. 对某人来说难以理解

97 by birth 在血统上at birth 诞生;出生give birth to 生(产)

98 bit by bit 一点点地do one's bit 尽一点(份)quite a bit 相当多

比较:not a bit 一点也不not a little 很,非常

99 be black and blue 遍体鳞伤

100 bear the blame 受过lay/ put the blame on/upon sb. for sth. 把责任推到某人身上

(二)巧用连接词

要想使文章有整体性、连贯性,就要学会正确使用连接词

表示罗列增加

First, second, third,

First, then / next, after that / next, finally

For one thing … for another…,

On (the) one hand…on the other hand,

Besides / what’s more / in addition / furthermore / moreover / another / also, Especially / In particular,

表示时间顺序

now, at present, recently,

after, afterwards, after that, after a while, in a few days,

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