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雅思《肖申克的救赎解析》超详细学习笔记

雅思《肖申克的救赎解析》超详细学习笔记
雅思《肖申克的救赎解析》超详细学习笔记

【看电影学雅思】《肖申克的救赎解析》超详细学习笔记

这个故事发生在1947年,银行家安迪(在屏幕左边的那位帅哥)被指控枪杀了妻子及其情人,安迪被判无期徒刑,这意味着他将在肖恩克监狱中渡过余生。瑞德(屏幕右边的那位帅哥)1927年因谋杀罪被判无期徙刑,数次假释都未获成功。他成为了肖恩克监狱中的“权威人物”,只要你付得起钱,他几乎有办法搞到任何你想要的东西。以上对白发生在Andy刚入狱不久,而结尾处的 Get busy living... or get busy dying (忙着活,忙着死)这两种生活态度也引发了观影者们无限地深思。此段对话发生在Andy越狱之前......

肖申克的救赎电影经典对白解析:(红色划线词语or句子会有B老师的详细解析哦!)Andy: No. I didn’t. Somebody else did, and I wound up in here. Bad luck, I guess.

安迪:是的,我没有开枪。别人开的枪,可结果是我进了监狱。我想可能是运气太差了吧。

Red: Yeah.

瑞德:是啊。

Andy: It floats around. Has to land on somebody. It was my turn, that’s as I was in the path of the tornado①. I didn’t expect the storm would last as long as it has. You think you ‘II ever get out of here?

安迪:那晦气到处闲逛,总会落到某人的头上。结果那个人是我,就这样。我在这旋涡的中心,只是没有想到倒霉会持续这么长时间。你有没有想过离开这里的?

Red: Me? Yeah. One day when I got a long, white beard and two or three marbles rolling around upstairs②. They ‘II let me out.

瑞德:我?有啊,当我老得满脸胡须、脑子不正常的时候,他们就该让我出去了。

Andy: Tell you where l’d go. Zihuatanejo.

安迪:告诉你我如果出去会去哪里,芝华塔尼欧。

Red: Zihua...?

瑞德:芝什么t?

Andy: Zihuatanejo. lt’s in Mexico. A little place on the Pacific Ocean. You know what the Mexicans say about the Pacific? They say it has no memory. That’s where

t want to live the rest of my life. A warm place with no memory. Op8n up a little hotel right on the beach. Buy some worthless old boat and fix it up new. Take my guests out charter③ fishing.

安迪:芝华塔尼欧。在墨西哥。太平洋上的一个小地方。你知道墨西哥人怎么说太平洋吗’他们说那是没有记忆的海洋。我要在那里度过余生。没有回忆的温暖所在。在海边开个小旅馆,买条破船整饬一新。载客出海,包船海钓。

Red : Zihuatanejo ?

瑞德:芝华塔尼欧?

Andy: in a place like that, i could use a man that knows how to get things.

安迪:你在这种地方也大有可为,因为你有办法搞到各种玩意儿。

Red: I don’t think I could make it on the outside, Andy. l’ve been in here most of my life. l’m an institutional man now. Just like Brooks was.

瑞德:我在外头吃不开了。我一生大部分时间都耗在这儿了。我现在也被体制化了,跟老布一样。(老布是曾经监狱图书管理员)

Andy: Well, you underestimate yourself.

安迪:别小看自己。

Red: I don’t think so. In here l’m the guy who can get things for Vou, sure but outside all you need is the Yellow Pages④. Hell, I wouldn’t even know where to begin. Pacific Ocean? Shit! About to scare me to death⑤, somethin’ that big.

瑞德:我不这么看。我在牢里对你有求必应,但是一岁入社会你想要什么查查电话号码簿就行了。其实我连查都不会啊,太平洋?放屁。那么大个玩意儿得把我吓个半死。

Andy: Not me. I didn’t shoot my wife and I didn’t shoot her lover, and whatever mistakes I made l’ve paid for them and then some. That hotel, that boat... I don ‘t think that’s too much to ask.

安迪:我可不。我没有杀死我老婆和她的情夫,即使我犯了铡已经偿清了。一间旅馆,一叶扁舟,这一点儿也不过分。

Red: I don’t think you ought’o be doing this to yourself, Andy This is shitty pipe dreams⑥! I mean Mexico’s in the way the hell down there, and you’re in hera,

and that’s the way it is!

瑞德:你不该这么妄想。这完全是痴人说梦。墨西哥和这里天地北,就这么简单。

Andy: Yeah, right. That’s the way it is. lt’s down there, and l’m in here.

I guess it comes down to a simple choice, really. Get busy living... or get busy dying

安迪:话是如此,天南地北。说到底就是个二选一的问题。要忙于生存,要么赶着去死。

 

 

 

点课台名师解析:

① tornado

龙卷风。这里表示“事情的旋涡”。与这个词一类的词汇有以下几个:

whirlwind 旋风

hurricane 飓风

typhoon 台风

大家不妨把这一组词放在一起比较记忆。

② two or three marbles rolling around upstairs

意思是go crazy in brain/head。英文中有个短语lose one’s marbles,意思就是 go crazy in brain/head。Red这里说two or three marbles rolling around upstairs是活用了lose one’s marbles这个短语。

③ charter

“包租”的意思,既可以做动词,也可以做名词。租船,包机,包车,都可以用这个词。

如:charter flights 包机

a chartered boat 一条租来的船

④ Yellow Pages

a volume or section of a telephone directory that lists business services, or products alphabetically according to field. 黄页(电话)查号簿(美国按行业、职业分类的部分常用黄色纸。)

⑤ scare me to death

“吓得要命”的意思,和中文的表达是不是很相似?动词的过去分词+to death 表示“非常……,……要命”,例如:

I was worried to death. 我担心得要死。

I was scared to death. 我吓得要死。

I was bored to death. 无聊死了。

⑥ pipe dream

非常口语化的表达,意思是:(鸦片鬼的)幻想,白日做梦,想入非非的计划。

pipe有一个意思是“烟斗”,在这个词组里引申为“鸦片”或者“毒品”,这种表达很形象。比如我们可以说 Stop dreaming that pipe dream that you will become a millionaire someday without hard work!(别成天幻想着不费劲将来就能成为百万富翁!)

 

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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. 在审题过程中我们需要特别注意以下几点: 1. 时态:关注时态是小作文能否取得高分的关键,同样对于地图题,我们也应该很好地注意时态,本文的时间是明确的,都是过去的时间,因此全文应当使用一般过去时。 2. 顺序:该图属于动态的地图题,这种类型的地图题一律按照时间顺序来写。在这道题中,也就是按照图的顺序依次来写,不要把元素拆开。如果是静态的地图题(即不涉及时间变化的题型),则按照空间顺序来写。在描述单幅地图时,我们可以采取上北下南的顺序描述,或者从左到右的顺序也可以,但值得注意的是,如果地图上有明显的方向标示,那就要根据这个标示来描述。 下面我们一起来分析文章的写作。 第一段:Introduction 引言段就是把题目进行改写。原文中的diagram,可以替换成figure,原文中的shows,可以改为illustrate, demonstrate, reveal, indicate等词。宾语development,可以替换成transformations,也可以改为宾语从句how the village of Kelsby developed/ changed. 题目中给出的时间比较模糊,可以具体化为in 1780, 1860 and 2000. 【例文】The three maps illustrate how the village of Kelsby changed in 1780, 1860 and 2000. 第二段:描述1780年的地图 1780年的情况只涉及到静态的数据,因此只需要用存在句即可表达,不涉及任何变化的单词。但是,考生非常容易把这些元素全部用there be这个句型来表达,从而导致句式单一。表示存在的句型除了there be之外,还有非常简单的have句型,还有lie/ be located/ be situated这样的结构。另外还有一种倒装句型,比如“桌子上面有一本书”,可以翻译为on the desk is a book. 除此之外,要注意几个元素的顺序问题。这里有四大元素:住宅区homes,树林woods,农场farms,还有一条河流river。理论上只要按照一定的空间顺序(比如顺时针、逆时针,从左到右)都是可以的,但是要考虑家庭数量的变化是导致其它所有变化的根本原因,因此建议先写住宅区homes。 还有就是土地单位的表达,land是不可数名词,因此不能说a land,只能说a piece of land。为了表达更加精确,可以用a plot of land(一小块),a stretch of(一长片),a large expanse of(一大片)。 另外朗阁海外考试研究中心提醒考生们还要注意方位词的表达。地图题中常用的方位词有:in the east/ west/ south/ north of ...; in the eastern/ western/ southern northern part of ...; 如果是在角落,可以用in the southwestern corner of ...; 在河流的上/下游:at the lower/ upper reaches of the river; 在河岸:alongside the riverbank; 在河流的南端:at the southern end of the river.

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Some industrialized countries have serious environmental problems. The damage to the environment is an inevitable result when a country tends to improve the standard of living. To what extent do you agree or disagree. 正文: Nowadays, environmental problems is (are/have been) one of the most serious phenomenon (Chinglish, 改为dangerous issues)that threat almost some(every) industrialized countries are facing. However, whether only countries use the resource in environment to increase the quality of life is a controversial issue. (我觉得应该改为:Thus, it is controversial that many countries have adapted the technics of excessively exploiting natural resources in order to accelerate economic development.)In my opinion, it is unavoidable that countries break the surrounding(破坏环境?不这样搭配) if they want to develop the industry and the level of life. (In my opinion, comparatively damage to the environment in the process of developing comprehensive national strength is an inevitable result.) Nowadays, environmental problems have been one of the most dangerous issues that threat almost every industrialized countries. Thus, it is controversial that many countries have adapted the technics of excessively exploiting natural resources in order to accelerate economic development. In my opinion, comparatively damage to the environment in the process of developing comprehensive national strength is an inevitable result. First, it is obvious that for our life(?), the purpose of long-term human activity is to make industrial development(make development没有这个用法哦)and improve the quality of life. This means that there are more and more rubbishes when we are working.(为什么用这么多there be 句型呢)Therefore, if we want to promote the economic (promote economy), we may damage our environment in the daily life.(in the daily life 很生硬, 改为in unconscious ways) Firstly, the very existence of human beings indeed exerts various influences on the natural environment, such as water pollution, disafforestation and the greenhouse effect. Besides that, human waste pollution has become more and more noteworthy with the fast sprawl of urban districts concerning the unprecedentedly speed of economic development. Moreover, with the population growing by (没这个搭配哈, with the amount of population growing/increasing 差不多), we need a loads of resource(resources)to support our life. For example, it is allowed by government that every family can get child more than one since 2014 in China.(普遍二胎政策不是这样翻译的哈,还是自己要多查资料) So it maybe(may)consume more resources than before. (it consume,it指代的是什么?) Moreover, larger pollution demands greater amounts of resources to support, a phenomenon that consequently adds more man-made pressure to the natural environment. For instance, Chinese government has issued the universal two-child policy which originally aims at optimizing the demographic structure but may simultaneously bring greater demands of natural resources from the environment.

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雅思写作题目解析:年轻人不快乐的原因抽象类: In some countries, young people are not only richer but also safer and healthier than ever before. However, they are less happy. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? 在一些国家,年轻人更加富有,安全,健康,但是,他们还是不快乐,原因何在,如何解决? 思路拓展:幸福的源泉 1. 做自己喜欢的事情 2. 学习的乐趣 3. 朋友带来的乐趣 4. 生活的简单轻松 5. 梦想的实现年轻人不快乐的根源: 客观上: 1. 有些青少年来自单亲家庭,或者是暴力家庭,缺乏温暖和关爱,很难快乐。 2. 应试教育和填鸭教学使很多成长中的年轻人不堪重负,更谈不上发展自己的兴趣爱好,放松休闲,所以,很多年轻人不快乐。 主观上:

1. 幸福感其实和自我的期待值相关,欲望好像是盐水,越喝越渴。有时候,年轻人想要提升自我,但是,又缺乏力量,想要后退,又不甘心,欲求不得的焦虑正是不快乐的根源之一。 2. 罗素在论及快乐的时候提及朋友和爱好能够是快乐的重要源泉,所以,个人爱好很少以及交际圈很小的人,很难获得更多快乐。 解决策略: 1. 父母承担对于子女的责任,为他们营造快乐健康的成长环境。 2. 教育者协助学生们调整心态,同时,缓解学业负担,丰富校园活动。 3. 年轻人积极交友,培养乐观人生态度,发展个人爱好,获得更多快乐源泉。 原创语料库: 1. numerous youngsters = a great many teenagers = a number of young people n 很多年轻人 2. youngsters = teenagers = adolescents = the young = young adults = those who are in the formative years n 年轻人 3. acquire = attai n 二 obtai n v 获得... 4. well-being = pleasure = happiness n 幸福 5. feel cheerful = feel delighted = feel happy v感到快

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题目类别教育与科技提问方式利弊判断 考试题目 Some people say that playing computer games is bad for children in every aspect. Others say that playing computer games can have positive effects on the way children develop. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 分析:教育与科技、教育与媒体可谓是雅思考试的热点,而且这些话题跟广大考生们息息相关。平时对生活多一些思考,备考期间针对话题词汇和句型多写多练,这些都是理想分数的 保障。 文章结构:4段 首段:导入话题,表达立场。 主题段1:玩电脑游戏对孩子的各方面有害。 主题段2:玩电脑游戏对孩子的成长有利。 结尾段:总结上文,重申立场。 In recent years, the prevalence of computer games has exerted a significant effect on children’s life. As to whether they affect children negatively, there is an endless debate. Despite the fact that playing computer games is an effective way to relieve pressure, the problems associated with study and health cannot be neglected. Clearly, playing computer games is regarded as a main factor leading to poor academic performance. With the entertaining nature, computer games will easily distract children from their studious pursuits. With the passage of time, children will probably fall behind their peers in academic development. In addition, when children spend too much time playing computer games, they are less likely to participate in physical activities, which is one reason why many children suffer from obesity. As a result, these overweight children’s confidence may be undermined and their health may be negatively influence as well. Despite these disadvantages, the advantages can still not be ignored. First of all, the latest research shows that game-playing helps children to home their communication and interpersonal skills. In many cases, players work together in teams to achieve goals, competing against other players. Therefore, their social skills and teamwork spirit are put to the test. Also, computer games can have positive and therapeutic effects on players. Games provide an opportunity for children to decompress and tune out of strains and stresses of everyday life. Giving their time to rest is critical for emotional and mental well-being. In conclusion, it is not advisable for children to play computer games, for the reasons that it not only has a negative impact on their study, but also makes them lose confidence, although computer games provide a form of relaxation.

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Topics of Task 2 (2008~2009.11.21) 一、教育(共25题,占%) 1.In countries where there is a high rate of unemployment, most pupils should be offered only primary education. There is no point in offering secondary education to those who have no hope of finding a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? (08.01.26) 不同意: 中学教育是一个重要的德育阶段,如果在这个时候中断,带来的不仅仅是失业这样的问题,还有青少年犯罪等社会问题vital stage for moral education. If it was interrupted, numerous of social problem/headaches may create as juvenile delinquency. (正如马克吐温说:你每关闭一所学校,你就必须开设一座监狱。Every time you stop a school, you will have to build a jail ) 教育能够帮助培养个人素质;提高劳动力的素质,从而提高生产效率,推动社会发展,从根本上解决失业的问题。do a favor to/be beneficial(advantageous, preferable) to personal quality, enhance/boost/promote the quality of the labor force, thereby increase production efficiency, social development, solve the problem of unemployment 从长远来看,如果受过更高的教育,则有更多的机会找到好的工作。In a long run/term, if pupils could receive better education, they may have far more opportunities to find better jobs. 教育的作用不仅仅应当局限在找工作,而是为了将来更好的发展。The function of education should be not only focused on \limited in job hunting, but also for a better development. **失业的原因是综合的comprehensive/complicated,例如经济原因:经济衰退或者不景气economy recession/depression,就业岗位剧减,导致市场对于劳动力的需求整体下降 a fall in the overall demand for labor;社会原因,个人原因等 2.Most countries spend much money on education, as they start to realize the importance of education. In your opinion which subject is the most important for young people and which one is the least important? Subjects: Literature Sports Mathematics Economy Physics History Music Geography (08.03.01) 整个题目可以分为理论科目和实践科目两种: 理论科目的好处:智的角度 实践科目(音乐、体育)的好处:美、体、劳的角度 E.g.: What does sports benefits your academic? Any sport will have a positive effect on academic performance simply because exercise is good for the brain, and teamwork and strategy that are focal to most sports are applicable as well to many academic areas. 理论科目的坏处:枯燥、单调、需要长时间的学习、结合实践时较为困难 体育、音乐的坏处:需要天赋;需要大量时间和金钱的投入;就业范围小,职业生涯短 3.Schoolteachers used to be the source of information, however, some people argue that teachers are not as important as before as the increasing variety of information resources. What is your opinion? (08.0 4.24) 和以前一样重要:(也就是说老师的重要性) 学校教育更加有利于学生的道德培养,尤其对于年龄较小的学生。老师可以帮助学生建立自信心,培养能力,塑造良好的性格最终成为一个有利于社会的人。Teachers could help the students to build up confidence, shape upright character and ultimately grow a full man beneficial to the society. 通过老师的讲解,能够更加容易接受知识。By lectures, students are more easily to receive knowledge.可以根据学生的需要而改变teach students in accordance with their own characteristics and differences 学生在学校里能够参加体育锻炼,有利于身体的健康和成长 学校教育给了学生一个交流、沟通、合作的机会,有利于团队精神team spirit、合作精神cooperation、创新能力innovation的培养foster/cultivation。 其他信息途径的好处(远程教育的好处) 提供了一种更为新颖有效的教育形式an original and effective educational model;增加人们接受教育的机会increase the opportunities of being educated;提高参与者的科技能力develop technology competencies、拓展技术面broaden skill set,从而提高就业机会job opportunity。 为地处偏远和行动不便的人、工作时间不稳定的人提供了受教育的机会those with restricted mobility, such as elderly, disabled, injured, irregular work schedule. 可以同时和全国各地甚至全世界各地的人进行交流和学communicate and interact with students all over the country or even the world 文档和资料容易储存、易提取、打印和阅读documents and materials are easily recorded, retrieved, printed and read 远程教育的缺点: 缺乏和老师面对面的交流lack of in-person contact with faculty members很难及时接受到老师的反馈wait for a long time before receiving feedback about assignments 不能像传统教育那样和同学之间更多地接触,没有机会提高口头交流能力和合作能力等have no chance to enhance oral communication skills and cooperation skills 精力和注意力会被很多东西分散many distractions at home 并不是所有的行业都承认网络教育的学历,缺乏就业认可。not all work industries acknowledge online degrees 4.Schools should teach children some academic subjects, which will be beneficial to their future careers. Therefore, other subjects such as music and sports are not important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? (08.0 5.22)

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