小新写作雅思笔记(10.0学生版)

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make one’s debut

10 taboos

Flow chart

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雅思写作互动及欣赏区

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雅思回家复习计划ppt——置顶的最后一个贴雅思论据大汇总(2 句)

be scattered with

雅思必备200句（保6分）

It is acknowledged that （5 句）

Routine Rubric 常项题型

Seldom Rubric 偷袭题型

Insight Into IELTS

make one’s debut

Process=Flow chart Compare—summarize 共性Contrast—analyze 个性

sterilize deshape

rocket plummet

soar slump

surge subside

boom ebb

creep up creep down

accrue abate

leap dip

rally retrieve

dormant

整数单位

程度副词每栏掌握两个

Task 1的3种基本句型

mildly

surge= rise moderately

soar=rise sharply

绝对描述系统verb（天龙八部）

相对描述系统junk verb +adverb

A: rise sharply/maximally

B: rise comparatively gently

D: rise gently/minimally

C: rise comparatively sharply

B2: rise sharply

A2: rise comparatively sharply

more less 绝对性副词

perfect

10，100，1000，

accrue=rise gradually and gently

leap=rise smoothly and sharply

起落同幅rise and fall evenly

60%= three-fifths// three out of five

= a/the majority of

= a large/striking/dominant/leading portion/part/share/proportion/percentage/margin of

>80% （93%）= a lion’s share

5%= a minority of, a marginal/micro/slim/tiny/small-scaled/meagre portion

37.8%= maximum/comparatively a majority of （<50%的最大值）

comparatively a minority of WRONG

7.3%

87%/76%/53%

饼图的三句万能句型

1）数据+抄题+导入宾语Band 5

2）主语+“占据”（先特征，后数据）Band 6

3）剩余数据Band 7(Combo)

“占据”的讲法：

a)constitute

b)make up

c)be the factor(s)/instrument(s) of 致成物

the remaining a.

the remainder n.

the remnant n.

in the charge of – sb

due to//owing to//attributed/ascribed to//for//oriented to—sth

Pie Chart的审题过程：

1.看文字信息

2.标题审题标1\2\3

2>1>3

2:极端数据及其周围（与之接近）数据

1:一般数据

3:落单数据

例4:

Food and drink, Other items cover ed comparatively a majority of the Average weekly expenditure, with 26% and 24% respectively.

Task 1的时态：

1）现在时——无时间

2）过去时——过去时间

3）将来时——将来时间

●从过去到将来——现在时

两种禁忌时态：

1）现在完成时（描述阶段）

Since 1970, there has been a large increase.

2）现在进行时

On the other hand, Recreation and education, Clothing accounted for a small portion of the expenditure, with 17% altogether.

●“累加”的写法：

totaling 17%//amounting to 17%//adding up to 17%//with a total of 17%//equaling 17%

When added up, they amount to ___

19% of the expenditure was shared by Housing and power. Furthermore, the remaining 14% was due to Transport and communication.

两个图写作顺序：

1）先写一个，另一个再比

2）直接联动

红书P78:

for a tiny share, with only 1%. Furthermore, 28% altogether of the energy was shared by Oil and Hydro. The remaining 24% was due to Natural Gas.

1）In 1980, the percentage of Coal increased/crept up by 4%//to 51%.

2）There was an increase/creeping-up of 4% in the percentage of Coal.

3）We can witness…

4）The year of 1980 witness ed/reflected…

5） A outnumber/ outpercentage B by…

A比B大3000.

A outnumbers

B by 3000.

A: Coal in/of 1980

B: that in 1970=its counterpart对等物

eg. Coal in 1980 outpercentaged its counterpart by 4 percent.

Coal was the biggest/leading//predominant/outstanding/striking instrument among its counterpart s.

while Nuclear rocketed by 10 times.

the percentage of Nuclear was 11 times//eleven-fold that of its counterpart

“倍数的讲法”参考红书P58-60

There was an increase of 10 times in Nuclear.

We can witness…

The year of 1980 witnessed…

Coal in 1980 outpercentaged its counterpart by 10 times

Oil almost remained stable.

There was a decrease of 4% in the percentage of Hydro. In addition, the year of 1980 witnessed a slump of 9% in Natural Gas. What is worth mentioning is Oil was almost morose during the decade.

Through the charts, we can easily draw the conclusion that the new source of energy, particularly Nuclear was given full play while the traditional ones, though still dominant, reached their bottleneck/ceiling to some extent.

两个图的写作原则：3+5

第一张图——3句万能句型

第二张图——涨/跌/平的比较，5个数据

2涨+2跌+（1平）

数据很多的时候：

第一张图分三种情况：

最大的——2号句型

最小的——1号句型

中间的——3号句型

破纸P2

1.84% and

2.10% are shared by... The remaining percentages are in moderation, with 5.53% for , 7.4% and 9.35% respectively.

increase max:

min Social Science

●三个以上图的写作原则

直接联动（曲线图写作模式）

line chart

连词、副词连接

顺接：furthermore, moreover, in addition, additionally, next, in the following, what is worth mentioning（值得一提的是）, what is interesting, what should not be neglected(不能忽略的是), last, on the other hand, meanwhile

转折：while, on the other hand, conversely, on the contrary, what is so different is

Line Chart

●形态划分法——最简单的图

●点位划分法——较复杂的图

●水平划分法——极其复杂的图

●比较划分法——两根曲线

Para 2:总分句

All trends(动态)/statistics(静态)/charts(多图) can be categorized/classified into ____ stages(时间)/groups(无时间)/types(多图) with (―general‖ trends or characteristics).

●general=junk words

2 groups with predominance of Humanities in 1990 and 1994 and predominance of Business in 1996, 1998 and 2000. Applied subjects

with fluctuating from Jan to June, rising sharply from June to Aug, falling sharply from Aug to Oct and rising gently from Oct to Dec.

with fluctuating from Jan to Jun, rising from Jun to Aug, Oct to Dec, falling from Aug to Oct.

with fluctuating gently from Jan to Jun and fluctuating sharply from Jun to Dec.

点位划分法：

with fluctuating evenly and gently from Jan to Jun and fluctuating evenly and sharply from Jun to Dec.

●Specific Description:

用天龙八部和句式变换来描述

Version One:

It fluctuated within a small range from Jan to June. Then it soared, reaching a peak at 3000 in Aug and slumped, bottoming out at about 1250 in Oct. Finally, there was a boom/rally till the end of the year.

Version Two:

Harry’s annual sales of hamburgers were volatile slightly during the first half year, followed by leaping till its zenith at 3000 in Aug. We can witness a sudden slump to Oct, echoed by booming till Dec.

Creative Writing

―Band 9‖ Version

图表系统结合文字系统

the

Back to the people watching TV, most of them watched TV from 5 pm to 12 am. The trend almost rose and fell evenly with sharp rise and fall. 8 in the evening was the peak hour for people to watch TV. Furthermore, after 3 am, less than 5% of people would listen to radio or watch TV.

What is worth mentioning is that 8 am and 8 pm are the peak hours for people to listen to radio and watch TV respectively. 单线描写

红书P71

All statistics can be categorized into 2 stages with the popularity of cinema from 1957 to 1960 and the popularity of TV from 1960 to 1974.

As to/As for/In terms of/In respect of/In aspect of/In regard to/Concerning the curve of cinema admissions, it dipped from 1957 to 1960, followed by subsiding in the following/next 6 years. We can witness a trend of ebbing till 1972. In the end, there was an abating to its bottom at about 90 in 1974.

P72

All statistics can be categorized into 3 stages with the equilibrium均势of/in the birth and death rates in the first decade of the 20th century, the predominance of birth rate in the following two decades, and the predominance of death rate from 1930 to 1970(in the consecutive 40 years).

As to the birth rate, stabilization in the first ten years was followed by leaping to its zenith at 60 per thousand in 1920. We can witness a clear slump to almost one-third of the zenith in 1940. The next 20 years reflected an even rise and fall. Finally it abated to the trough in 1970.

Contrary to the birth rate, the death one continued to creep down after the overlapping period till 1930, when a rally was shown between 1930 and 1940. Fortunately, fewer people died in the rest years, with ebbing to the nadir in 1970. What is worth mentioning is that both birth and death rates reached the bottom level in 1970.

As to death rate, it abated from 1900 to 1930, followed by soaring to its peak at 5% in 1940. We can see an ebbing till 1970.

In the respect of birth rate, the first decade witnessed stabilization, followed by leaping to its peak/zenith at nearly 6% in 1920. It slumped to 2% in 1940 and rose and fell evenly in the next two decades. Finally it had the similar trend with its counterpart, death rate.

Sample Topic 13

All charts can be categorized into 2 types with absoluteness type for Full-time males and Part-time females and alternation type for Full-time females and Part-time males.

概括描写（不同趋势、句型导入）

The trend of 1973 fluctuated within a large range.

So did the trend of 1993

作业：

1）红书P78 3+5

2）破纸P2 3+5

3）破纸P3 分线描写

4）红书P72 分线描写

5）复习“天龙八部”

TABLE

表格的描述顺序是以时间（趋势）作为主线，非时间作为辅线（一句话）

极端数字举例法

范围法

平均值举例法

类比法

反比法

basically soar except in 1995

crept down to 1995 and rallied till 1998

All trends can be categorized into 2 groups with fluctuating in Holiday, Visits to friends and relatives, Other reasons, TOTAL and rising in Business.

TABLE

23, 37, 41, 57, 63

47，53，42，46，58

Holiday: basically soar Extreme

Business: boom Range

Other reasons: rise and fall evenly Average

TOTAL: Similarity

13, 24, 27, 35, 43

47, 56, 42, 49, 57

4，7，11，16，23

45，56，60，76，86

Omnipotent 万能法①/②

Rare ③

Frequent④/⑤

32，36，46，53，57

33，37，47，54，59

类比的四种句型：

This is the similar/identical case with…

This is true of …

So does…

This can be paralleled with …

反比的三种句型：

This is the opposite with…

This is converse/reverse with …

This is contrary to …

无序（无规律）数据用1/2，甚至不举（看字数需要）

Technical Table (随意选取栏目)

Strategic Table (Screening甄别；筛选)

红书P73

●一定要写的项目：√

●说明公司：

What is worth mentioning is that Other items, not making its debut until 1977, remained constant from 1977 to 1996.

Sample Topic 11:

趋势编号：

1，2，2，2

All trends can be categorized into 3 groups with rising in Agriculture of Britain, Computer Industry and Finance of China, fluctuating in Computer Industry, Finance, Manual Labour of Britain and Manual Labour of China, and falling in Agriculture of China.

1980, Others and Housing accounted for the comparatively a majority of the expenses, with 35% and 25% respectively. 28% altogether was shared by Food and Medical. Furthermore, the remaining 12% was a tiny portion occupied by Entertainment and Savings. In the aspect of 1985,

表格题的类型：

Dynamic Table（有趋势）

Static Table（无趋势）

纯比较——用多种语法形式来变换

BAR CHART

柱状图的本质——其它三种题型用柱子来表示。

Sample Topic 2

本质：

1）三张饼图

2）四根曲线图

All trends can be categorized into 3 groups with fluctuating in bus, rising in car and falling in bike and foot.

3）3X4 的表格题

This was the similar case with the trend of foot.

总结：

题型本质上分为两种——动态图和静态图

动态图最好用曲线图（All trends +天龙八部）的整体写作模式

静态图则是静态表格（纯比较）的写作模式

柱状图的要求：

1）充分的比较（共性）和对比（差异），文字性的部分可以多一点，不必局限在每一种题型的要求上。2）语法要求较高：对于主语的要求和句式的多样性（60%的柱状图为静态图）

柱状图是静态图比例最高的题型

静态图的分类：

一个饼图

表格题（30%）

柱状图（60%）

●是

●多/差…

●倍数

3）对于隐藏特征的开发（适用于所有类型的图）

Task 1高分的关键：

变换多端的wording和句式、体系

清晰宏观的分类(ALL TRENDS)

有力得体的隐藏特征(HC)

隐藏特征：隐藏在数据背后的客观性事实。

隐藏——不明显，有别于主体段(body)的内容

客观性事实——有数据支持的现象，不同于个人观点

结尾段：

How to seek HC?

1)issue of ―percentage‖

>100% Some people choose several reasons for study.

<100% There exist some other factors/reasons unlisted/unmentioned.

avocations副业moonlight兼职

Some people were engaged in several industries//Some people had their avocations while others were engaged in other industries unmentioned.

2)―abnormal‖ statistics（图表文字中出现一/几组反义词）

compare and contrast to locate the facts contrary to social belief and common sense

Ordinary:

1.Men earn more than women

2.Graduates earn more than non-graduates

3.Different trends and peaks for different genders

1）Men: leap till the end of 40s and boom with the peak at ￡650 in 50s

2）Women: basically volatile slightly after a sharp increase after 24 years old. The peak salary is nearly half of their counterpart

HC:

1.Men non-graduates basically earn more than those women graduates.

2.Since the gap of salary between graduates and non-graduates becomes wider and wider upon age, it

indicates the fact that qualifications are important for people’s salary.

3)―debut‖ statistics(Bar & Table)

not make its debut until (year)

Other items didn’t make its debut until 1977.

4)Fixed future trends or characteristics

people’s living standard has been greatly improved

people lived a better-off life

红书P78:

The new source of energy, especially nuclear was given full play while the traditional ones, though still dominant, reached the bottleneck/ceiling to some extent.

万能Opening:

Opening的四要素：

As is shown/displayed/revealed/ in the （1）图的类型（图与图之间没有联系的加respectively）, the （2）图的单位

1）fluctuate/rise/fall—趋势种类=1

2）vary—趋势种类〉=2(Table)

3）differ—静态图，无趋势

（4）(图的时间)

1）from…to…

2）during…and…

3）in …

不用写总分句的情况：

1）所有饼图

2）静态图（没有特征）

commuter

白书P7:

All statistics can be categorized into 3 groups with majority, minority and moderation.

红书P82

The number of employees with different degrees

the changes of educational backgrounds of the employees of a company

红书P72

As is revealed in the line chart, the number of birth and death rates per thousand population in a developing country varied dramatically from 1900 to 1970.

What is obvious is that（明显特征）

As is displayed in the table, the figure of Underground Railway Systems including Date opened, Kilometers of route and Passengers per year in six cities differed.

不用写总分句的情况：

1）所有饼图

2）曲线既没有相交且趋势相同

3）所有静态图且没有特征变化

主体段大致段落要求：

1）一般有几个图写几段，不同类型一定要分段。

2）流程图一张图写一段。

多图之间没有联系不用写总结段。

What is obvious is that

小作文段落数

Min=3

Max=4

1-2month 10 pieces

2-3months 15 pieces

>3 months 20 pieces。

白书&破纸&红书>剑桥>博客

Task 1 *40%+Task 2 *60%~

77

6.5 7 6.8 7

7 6.5 6.5

6 7 =6.6 6.5

7 6.5 =6.7 6.5

7 6 =6.4 6.5

6.5 6 6

7 7 6.5 6.5 25

出题部分最后一句话为写作指令句

Rubrics:

1)Discursive 50%

2)Agree or Disagree 20%

3)PRR(Why + What) 25%

4)A&D 5%

5)Combo

What are the reasons for moonlight of teenagers? Is it a positive or negative trend?

What ways could mobile phone and the Internet be useful to old people? How do old people be encouraged to use this new technology?

Discursive:

1)To what extent do you agree (or disagree)

2)How far do you agree (or disagree)

3)What’s your opinion towards the statement

4)Discuss both opinions/statements (and give your own one)

5)Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Discursive的写法：

1.单边同意一个观点

2.单边反驳一个观点

3.两个观点一起论述，在开始就给出自己支持的观点，支持观点可以多写一点（有倾向性7:3）。

4.同时论证两个观点，表示中立。（无倾向性5:5）

Discursive段落数：

1+2(A)+1(B)+1=5 双边写法（有侧重点）

*A表示你支持的观点

*B表示你不重点支持的观点

1+1(A)+1(B)+1=4 中立写法

Agree or Disagree

Which opinion do you prefer to?

段落数：

1+2(3)+1=4(5) 单边写法

Agree

Disagree

Impartial/ neutral towards

1）Argumentative论证型

argument, logic, reasoning

Argumentation depth

Reason : Recom=6:4 or 5:5

PRR段落数

1opening+2 reasons+ 1recom+1ending=5para

A&D 中立文章的写法

1+2(A)+2(D)+1=6

A: Advantage

D: Disadvantage

Illustrative 说明型

detailization

paraphrasing supporting width

2)Topic sentence (simple and potent)

3)Supporting sentences (>3)

4)Minor example or evidence(<=2)

5)Flow-back sentence

P36

变化多端的词汇和句型

宏观清晰的分类

掷地有声的隐藏特征

从句至少两句以上，词汇永远不重复

合情合理的情节加拿捏分寸的语气

清晰的格式再加上具体的解决方案，减少套话Task 1x40% + Task 2x60%=6

6+5=5.5

6+7

7+7

7+6

6+8

8+6

1. Discursive/Agree or disagree

The progress of ______ is irresistible and irrefutable. What acts as the Pandora’s box is whether ________________. From my point of view, _____________________.

educational proficiency.

2.PRR

The progress of ______ is irresistible and irrefutable. Despite the versatility 多样性and complexity 复杂性of the reasons, I would pore over分析the most significant ones and (offer the alternatives 解决方案in the following).

3.A&D

Since ______ is a double-edged sword 双刃剑, I would highlight 强调the co-existence 共存of the pros 好处and cons坏处of _______. In my opinion, both sides can hold water站得住脚.

Remarking Criteria:评分标准

AIE 4 5 6

C Q 5 67

VSS 6 7 8

达到6分的基本条件：

1）审题不偏题——观点必须切中细分主题(specific topic)

Idea:必须切中文章的Specific Topic

Topic: 1st sentence

Specific Topic: 2nd sentence

Broad Topic:球

Topic—computer

Specific topic—personal communication, socializing

Broad topic—Science and Technology

Topic——television

Specific topic—education for children

Broad topic—Science and Technology & Education

Topic——Littering

Specific topic—Waste disposal

Broad topic—Infrastructure

Arguments三宗罪

1)redundancy 累赘，冗余

2)sequence disorder(lack coherency)

From physical to mental

Body

Material

3)parallelism 平行架构

如何做OUTLINE？

solution 3 minutes

1)brainstorming 1.5min >5

2)combination 0.5 min

3)reorganization 0.5min

Benefits of World Expo to uni-students:

1) increase opportunities for students to be volunteers

2) know advanced technology from different civilizations

3) motivate us to learn foreign language

4) broaden their horizons

5) experience for career development

6) job opportunities

Benefits of cancelling Long Holiday

1) saving expenses

2) good for business

3) more concentrated to work after holiday

4) frequently moderate oneself

5) beneficial for environment of resorts

6) avoid traffic congestion

The benefits of appreciation of RMB:

1) cheaper to buy things from abroad

2) get profits through speculation on the foreign exchange market

3) beneficial for studying or traveling abroad

4) good for imports

5) build up the image of rising China

Comparative advantage of overseas studiers:

1) broaden your horizons

3) consolidate independence

4) earn more money

5)more diversified culture combination

6) better communicational skill

7) open mind

Benefits of May(Labor Day) Holiday：

1) get relaxation and entertainment

2) more time to travel

3) increase national income

4) more consumption

5) more consistent studying

6) more time to spend with family

Benefits of Valentine’s Day:

1)improve relationship of lovers

2)stimulate domestic needs

3)get relaxed

4)increase chance of marriage

5)emphasize the importance of real love

6)easy to eat chocolate

7)converge into international culture

Benefits of studying abroad under financial crisis:

1)preferential studying policies

2)more bright future for employment

3)release current unemployment

4)learn experience from developed countries

5)low studying expense

6)stimulate the boom of economy

Benefits of being a star:

1) become rich immediately

2) be famous

3) improve social status

4) be more influential

5) more resources attained

6) be adored by fans

7) go travel easily

8) do charity

9) enrich their experience

10) being president

1）prepare IELTS test

2）improve comprehensive English

3）get further study

4）kill time

5）make friends

6）cultivate your endurance

7）complete mission

Benefits of Financial Crisis:

1) low studying expense

2) understand more of the problems existing in economic system

3) strengthen national unity

4)promote international cooperation

5)more comfortable traveling environment

6)more reasonable investment

1) improve economic restructuring

2) save life expense

3) beneficial to environment

4) bridge some loopholes in economy

5) another economic boom

6) low-expenditure need stimulated

Drawbacks of Spring Evening:

1) stay up late

2) programs are traditional, repetitive

3) cannot meet the taste of the audiences

4) too many advertisements

5) clothes are luxurious

6) harmful to digestion

3)有论据和例子，论据比例略大于例子

Pros of studying weekday:

1) systematic study

2) more energetic and efficient

3) more time for reviewing

5) more safety

6) more time for weekends

Pros of studying abroad under the circumstance of global financial crisis:

7)lower studying expense

8)shun competition/dilemma in job application

9)life expenses lessen

10)easier to get offer/visa

11)setback education

Benefits of studying in Songjiang:

1) convenient traffic

2) study with your friends

3) communicate with your peer

4) tranquil and peaceful

5) study with no G

Benefits of studying abroad during economic recession:

1) comparatively low cost

2) avoid employment recession

3) lessen applying competition

4) know the specific economic recovering solutions

5) easy to get visa

6) setback education

AQ

Reasons of studying in Songjiang:

12)relatives are free

13)near the residence

14)cool in Aug

15)parents are boss.

16)suitable for preparation

17)only available in the period

18)convenient for eating

19)balance your life rhythm

Benefits for Olympic Gold Medalists:

1)establish one’s position in the country

2)display the strength of national sport

3)improve self-confidence

4)get a lot of money(bonus)

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