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2013年9月7日雅思写作分析与范文参考

小作文：A类小作文题根据所给的两张图对比a typical Japanese office & a typical American office

答题策略：主体分两段，分别叙述日本和美国；在美国段落加入对比。日本的主要特点是group,而美国特点是individual.

大作文：

nuclear energy is the best source of power in meeting ever-increasing energy needs，to what extent do you agree or disagree.

雅思ENVIRONMENT类写作素材

Growth in air travel harms environment(飞行增多危害环境) Climate change experts from the Tyndall Climate Research Centre in Britain have said urgent action（紧急行动）is needed to curb the rapid growth in air travel（抑制飞行的快速增长）if the government is to meet its commitments（实现承诺）on tackling global warming（处理温室效应）. This report from Stephen Evans: Falling ticket price and rising incomes are leading to rapid growth in global air travel.（导致国际航空业迅速发展的原因是机票价格的下降和收入水平的提升。）According to the British government, the number of British air passengers, for example, will more than double in the next quarter of a century（下一个25年）. Increases of such an order would mean much more aviation fuel（燃油）being burned and aviation fuel may be more harmful to the environment than other fuels because the resulting smoke is emitted at high altitudes（高海拔）. A group of scientists at the environmental research group, the Tyndall Centre, says that if Britain is to meet its overall target for cutting damaging emissions（减少有害气体排放）, other uses of fuel like for heating homes or driving cars would have to be cut dramatically. The British government wants the use of aviation fuel covered by international agreement on the environment. The difficulty for any individual government（任何政府）is that taxing fuel used at its own airports might push airlines to move their operations to competing airports in other countries. https://www.wendangku.net/doc/943084081.html,/worldservice/learningenglish/newsenglish/witn/2005/09/050921_aviation.sh tml Calls to control low-cost flights（限制廉价航空） Cheap flights（廉价航空）on no frills airlines may not be a burden on our wallets but they will dearly cost the UK's environment（严重危害环境）, campaigners believe. Scientists predict that if carbon dioxide emissions continue to increase, global warming will bring higher annual temperatures and heavier rainfall（温室效应会带来更高的气温以及更大的降水）- with all the associated problems（相关的问题）. +将来时）it is . Agencies such as the Sustainable Development Commission (SDC) want our air tickets to reflect "the true cost of flying" to the environment. To green groups, this involves the aviation industry having to pay tax on the fuel（航空业应该为燃油使用赋税）it puts in planes.

雅思G类大作文话题范文：教育话题

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雅思大作文话题之教育类

6分作文的评分标准 ? addresses all parts of the task although some parts may be more fully covered than others ? presents a relevant position although the conclusions may become unclear or repetitive ? presents relevant main ideas but some may be inadequately developed/unclear ? arranges information and ideas coherently and there is a clear overall progression ?uses cohesive devices effectively, but cohesion within and/or between sentences may be faulty or mechanical ? may not always use referencing clearly or appropriately; ? uses paragraphing, but not always logically ? uses an adequate range of vocabulary for the task ? attempts to use less common vocabulary but with some inaccuracy ? makes some errors in spelling and/or word formation, but they do not impede communication ? uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms ? makes some errors in grammar and punctuation but they rarely reduce communication 雅思大作文话题之教育类 Some people think schools should only teach students academic subjects. Others think schools should also teach students how to discriminate between right and wrong. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 3 Some employers think that formal academic qualifications are more important than life experiences and personal qualities when they look for an employee. Why is it the case? Is it a positive or negative development? Schools should concentrate on teaching students the academic subjects that will be useful for their future careers. Subjects such as music and sports are not useful. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 2 Some people think children should obey the rules set by their parents and teachers set, but others think that less control will help children to deal with their future adult life. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 2 Some people think students should go to boarding schools instead of living at home. Do you agree or disagree? 2

雅思写作教学计划

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【小站教育】小站内部雅思写作教材

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雅思作文题目必备地十个雅思话题

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雅思高分范文教育类

1. The main purpose of public libraries is to provide books and they should not waste their limited resources and space on providing expensive hi-tech media such as computer software,videos and DVDs. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 公共图书馆是否应该提供高科技的东西 2. Many parents complain that computer games have no value to their children’s studies.On their mental and physical development. What is your opinion? 电脑对儿童的学习以及身体和智力的发展都没有好处吗 3. Topic: some people think computer and the Internet are important in children’s study ,but others think students can learn more effectively in school and with teachers. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 儿童是和老师一起学习好还是用电脑和网络好？ 4. Computers are increasingly used in education. In which areas do you think are computers more important and in which areas are teachers more important? 在哪些领域电脑更重要，哪些领域老师更重要？ 5 Some people believe that all the children in school are required to learn at least one foreign language. However, others say that those who are not talented do not have to learn. What is your opinion? 所有学生都要求学语言还是只有有天赋的学生才要学、？ 6. In some countries, secondary schools aim to provide a general education across a wide range of subjects. In others, children focus on a narrow range of subjects related to a particular career. For today’s world, which system is appropriate? 中学教育应该更广泛还是针对具体的职业？ 7 Some teachers say students should be organized into groups to study, while others argue that students should be made to study alone Tell the benefits of each study method. Which one do you think is more effective? 单独学习还是分组学？ 8 In modem society, many people think primary schools should teach science and technology rather than history and geography, which are useless and boring.Do you agree or disagree with this statement? 学校不应该教无聊和没用的历史和地理而应该教科学和技术吗？ 9 Some people think intelligent students should be educated together with other students. Do you agree or disagree? 高智商的学生应该和其他普通学生一起学习吗 10 Some people think students should take courses that are decided by the government .others think students should be allowed to focus on subjects that they prefer. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 学生应该自己决定学什么还是按照政府的安排 11 Children who grow up in needy families are better prepared to deal with problems in their adult life than children who are brought up in wealthy parents. Do you agree or disagree? 穷孩子会比富孩子更好的处理问题吗 12 University students should pay all the cost of their studies because university

学校教育与网络教育雅思大作文

Currently there is a growing tendency for many a student who has pleasant associations with studying via internet. Others, however, live under the traditional ideas that studying at school enjoys obvious merits. This assay will analyze the boons from both side and put forward my point of view. It is commonly acknowledged that the reasons why computers and internet keep a favorable position in education are divergent. Firstly, it can be an enormously convenient way of study. Students are able to acquire what they want only by slipping the mouse. Also the information online is abundance. Consequently, study efficiency can be enhanced. What’s more, studying at home can also alleviate the pressure of congestion. Provided that fewer student are driven to school, the extent to which the traffic is heavy will be decreased.. Inevitably, on the other hand, there are others who strongly advocate that schooling enjoys many merits. Firstly, it contributes to cultivate students the cense of obeying rules. There are diverse rules in schools which help develop them good merits including respecting teachers. More broadly, teachers can arose students’ interest in terms of what they’re leaving and fosters them self-teaching capacity, therefore, they can be lifelong learners. Last but not least, adolescents are able to master some practical

雅思写作素材Technology & media

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