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Topic1

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A job with more vacation time is better than a job with high salary but less vacation time.

Rewritten Sample Writing

The issue whether people should choose a job with a high salary or more vacation time is a topic that is often discussed and there are differing opinions about this issue. Some prefer to have a high salary, because they could buy some things that they like most, while others would choose a job with more vacation time for enjoying themselves. In my view, I prefer to have a job with more vacation time instead of a high salary for several reasons.

Admittedly, earning money is one of the aims of our work. No one could deny the fact that money could not only maintain our daily lives but also could help us to achieve some of our personal goals, such as buying a car, living in a big house or helping those who live in poverty or starvation. Making money will enable us to improve our living environment and quality, and therefore getting a job with a high salary, is significant to us.

However, others go into rapture at mere notion of getting money, however having a job with a high salary, is less useful than many people believe. People, who are addicted to a high income, have to spend more time working or staying in the office, and as a result, it is impossible for them to devote enough time and energy in communicating with family members. Moreover, it is difficult to develop and cultivate their children’s character and interpersonal skills and they may become more solitary and even suffer from certain emotional or psychological problems. Therefore, it is undesirable to hanker for a high salary instead of staying with family members.

Furthermore, the majority of people believe that having more vacation time will provide them additional opportunities to broaden their horizons, which may put them in a favorable position prove their situation. As we know, traveling can allow us to actually meet different cultures, which we could not get from textbooks or classrooms. As an architect, although he could learn about masterpieces

from the internet and magazines, the feeling of touch of the actual buildings, such as the Sydney Opera house, is totally different， We could find abundant information about the plans, sections and elevations, but we could not recognize the size, the space or the material. Having vacation time and traveling could provide us with an opportunity to realize the dream and therefore almost all of us benefit from vacation time.

Therefore, I am firmly convinced that having a job with more vacation time, will bring about a profound impact on families, the person himself and even the society as whole.

Topic2

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should not pay to the public transportation.

Rewritten Sample Essay

The answers vary when people are asked whether they should pay for public transportation. In spite of this very issue having been discussed for decades, people, all around the world, hold that it’s better for people not to be obligated to pay for public transportation. It is my personal view that there is no clear or definite answer to this complex question.

First and foremost, our government might not have sufficient taxes to pay for public transportation for all inhabitants. It is well known that China is still a developing country, unlike the U.S.A . and the U.K., are there are many fields far needier for money than a free public transportation project.

Education is a typical example of this situation. The government plans to invest about 3% of all tax income on education this year, which is much less than the educational allocation of all the developed countries. We are all aware that education is one of the most essential basics of a country’s development, and even though the government would like to make public transportation free, we should call for them to invest this money into education, especially basic education.

In addition, the current cost of public transportation is very low and almost everyone can afford

this, as the elderly and disabled are able to be offered a much lower price.

In Hangzhou, the highest price for taking a bus is 4 yuan person, which even a beggar can afford. On the other hand, more and more people have cars the price of which is decreasing rapidly People, who hate the noise and fumes in buses and taxis, would prefer to drive themselves to the places they want to go. Thus, more and more people buy cars today for their convenience and abandon public transportation. In this situation, it seems that whether the public transportation is free, does not matter much.

Last but also importantly, if public transportation was free, we could take buses, taxis, trains and even planes. What a wonderful situation! We can come and go much easier than before, without having to pay for this service. At the same time, although more and more people can afford a car, they may not be able to afford the fees and costs that come along with the car, such as the price of gasoline that is increasing rapidly and therefore want to go to work by bus or some other public transportation. Not only can this reduce the cost, but also protect the environment as personal vehicles emit large amounts of harmful gases.

In conclusion, I am of the opinion that it is beneficial for both the environment and the population if public transportation is free. However, the government does not have the capacity to fund this totally at present, so we should pay for it temporarily, believing we will not need to pay for it one day, as our country evolves.

Topic3

Do you agree or disagree the following statement? Successful people take new things and take risks rather than the thing that they've done well

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The world today is filled with competition in all areas. Some people who want to be successful, do what they are good at, while others may think they can try something new or take risks to achieve success. Personally, I think those who have the latter opinion have more chances to be successful.

Needless to say, people will face no or few competitors when they do things in new fields, which means that they can occupy the whole market once consumers can accept their products. Bill Gate's success is a good example. He became one of the most successful persons in the world, by developing the products for global customers.

On the other hand, people cannot easily become successful if they continue doing the things that have been done well by themselves and others. One important reason is that there must be a number of competitors in these areas, and the other is that the benefits of older products are lower compared with new and innovative ones.

Meanwhile, as the first person entering in one certain area, he can decide many things about the product, such as the price, types, functions and policies.

As a result, subsequent competitors have to follow these things that he has decided earlier. Microsoft is again a helpful example here. After Microsoft's products came into the market, its competitors had to research their products and produce similar ones. To be the first in one area means more opportunities to be successful, although at the same time, it means more risks.

From these types of success, we can conclude that to produce new products and take risks are good ways for people to be successful. New things mean more opportunities and fewer competitors, so it is indeed a good choice to try something new if people want to gain achievement in their lives.

Attention1.结构不平行例：I was able to raise my TOEFL score by studying hard and I read

lots of books. 当使用连词将一系列的单词联接起来的时候，应当使用词性相同或同一类型的短语。

2.不知所云例：Many companies began using computers mouth.

3.段落过长，不分段，主语与动词一致问题She are a good friend of mine that I has known for a long time. 主语和动词在数方面不一致。

4.句子别扭We heated the soup in the microwave for too long and the shape of the container changed. 措辞过长或不清。换言之，句子显得滑稽可笑。

5.不要使用缩写在正式的写作中不要使用缩写形式(can"t，don"t，it"s，we"ll，they"ve等等) ，而应当使用单词的完整形式(cannot，do not，it is，we will，they have等等)。

6.关联词语重复Since I want to go to a good school，therefore I am trying to raise my test scores. 不能在该句的主要主语和主要动词前使用连词。

7.句子不完整Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college. For example， my friend in high school. 句子没有主要主语或主要动词，因为其实它应是一个从句。这是一个非常常见的错误，修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。

8.不要使用get When I got home， I got tired， so I got a book and got into bed. Get太不正式，意思也过于含糊，不适合用在正式的场合。应将get改为一个更加具体的单词，如become， receive，find， achieve，等等。

9.书写难以辨认，信息不正确I would like to study in America because all modern technology originated there. 传的信息不正确，或者让人听起来觉得可能不正确(如果确实是正确的，应当解释为什么这样，因为读者不认为是正确的)。上述例句中，all的意思是百分之百;我们不能绝对地说每一件新东西都是从美国诞生的。为保险起见，应当使用many或most.非英语单词Computers are very helpful and advantageable. 尽管看起来象个单词，其实不是，至少不是个英文单词。使用这个单词的另一种形式。

10.介词多余I would like to discuss about something important that you mentioned about to me during yesterday. We went to downtown yesterday to buy a watch. When I first came to the US，I did not have a lot of friends in here. In class， my classmate never mentioned about her husband. 在表示这种意思时此单词不能与介词连用。这种情况常见于downtown，home，there，here等词。这些词语在英语中是副词而非名词，因而不能在它们前面添加介词。

11.跑题或不相关There are many reasons to buy a car， preferably a nice car. 这个意思与文章的主题无关。

12.陈词滥调It is okay for children to fail sometimes. 所表达的意思很普通大多数人都已经知道到了，因而就没有必要再说出来。

13.标点问题I love animals. And I like to help them. Because they are helpless. So I want to become a vet. 这是一个非常普遍的问题!许多学生在句子中使用了太多的句号，尤其是当他们用手写的时候。

14.重复冗余Personally，I believe what the newspaper prints. 一种意思的表述不止一次，或者某个词语不必要。

15.单数/复数Many year ago， dinosaur roamed the Earths. 单词需要从单数变为复数，或者由复数变成单数。单数可数名词单数可数名词不能单独使用，应该将其变为复数形式或者加上限定词(a，the，my， his， her， Gary"s， no， any， 1， 3， 50， most，等等)。

16.拼写错误，主语、动词或宾语有问题I want to buy something for my mother that she will like it. There was a terrible accident happen yesterday. 句子的基本结构有问题，缺少主语、动词或宾语，或者这些成分重复。

17.语气与文章不符I was kind of mad at the guy who vociferated angry words at me. I have heard many wonderful things about such cosmopolitan cities as Paris， London， Tokyo， and Hong Kong and I would love to visit these cities to check them out. 语气与文章其他部分不相符，可能是过于正式或者太不正式。

18.代词指代不明If people do not speak the same language， it has a greater chance of miscommunication. I intend to complete my studies in the United States because they have good programs there. 代词所指代的指示词(介词所代替的名词)不清楚。

19.过于笼统We should use our resources on Earth because the Earth is getting worse. 句子或它所表达的意思过于笼统，不能提供多少信息。

20.动词时态错误Yesterday I will go to the store because tomorrow I needed some food. 动词时态不正确检查一下是应该用现在时、过去时、将来时还是完成时等等。

21.选词不恰当I was late getting home because I lost my way. 在这种情况下不应该使用该词可选择更好的词语或者所使用的词语与文章的总体语气不符。

22.单词形式不当I want to creation a great web site so that I can becoming wealth. 所使用的单词的形式不正确检查一下应该使用该词的名词、形容词或副词形式的哪一种。

23.用词错误Even I don‘t speak Spanish， I was able to find a bathroom in the department store.

I gained a lot of pounds during vacation. 用词错误或在此种情况下该词不是最佳用词。

托福作文与雅思作文的区别

托福作文与雅思作文的区别托福写作与雅思写作之间的差异究竟在哪里?对于想要到国外留学的同学来讲，第一步就是参加托福或雅思考试!但是，这两种考试，我们应该如何选呢?托福和雅思的区别又在哪里呢?本文，就从写作部分出发，为同学们好好介绍一下，还请大家一定要仔细阅读哦!提前预祝各位考生能够在新托福考试中取得满意的成绩! 在选择的考生中，有很多考生对于选择托福考试还是雅思考试都存在疑惑。很大一部分原因是考生不了解托福和雅思的区别。其实托福和雅思在四个单项上都存在差异，不过，本文首先和大家介绍托福写作与雅思写作的区别，帮助考生更好地选择适合自己的考试形式。新托福考试和雅思考试最大的区别就是形式，托福写作是一个传统的纸笔作答考试，会有答题纸、铅笔和橡皮。雅思考试顺序是小作文，然后大作文这样安排。按照我们的写作习惯，是先看到题目再进行写作。而托福考试则不一样，首先考生需要在电脑上作答，因此对于考生的打字能力也是很重要的一个要求。另外，值得注意的是托福两篇作文当中，第一篇综合写作会先要求大家阅读一段文字，然后再听一段听力，最后根据你所阅读的材料和听到的听力进行写作;而大作文也就是是写作，在形式上和雅思大作文基本上是保

持一致的，所以雅思写作和托福写作主要的区别，实际上是体现在第一篇作文以及答题方式上。雅思的写作时间一共是60分钟，两篇作文：一篇小作文和一篇大作文。一般来说，小作文的时间是20分钟，大作文的时间是40分钟，但是需要注意的是，这个时间并不是官方公布或者说官方要求的时间，而是建议考生分配的时间。因为官方会给定一个小时，然后让大家自由地分配，但是根据往年的经验，往往是这样的分配相对更科学一些。而托福写作是50分钟的时间，也是两篇文章，一篇综合写作，另外一篇写作，综合写作是20分钟的时间，而写作是30分钟的时间。在这里，两部分写作时间是固定的，考生不能够把50分钟的时间自由分配。首先雅思写作的题目难易程度要大于托福写作。我们会发现一个奇怪的现象，那就是许多的雅思考生的阅读和听力可以获得7分，甚至是8分的高分。但是，同样一个学生这一次考试的写作成绩却会考到5.5分或者是6分相对较低的分数。而造成这种分数差距的一个本质的原因就是雅思写作题目设置的更具难度。大家可以发现，托福写作对于学生的文章字数要求是很高的，它要求学生在这个地方要就是写出一定长度的内容，但是它的题目设置的往往是非常清楚的，所以学生并不会出现看错了题，或者跑题的现象，或者这种情况相对较少一些。

TOEFL-Junior语言形式与含义-语法点分类练习

TJ时态题 1. He ___ one of his other classes on a field trip to the aquarium this Saturday. A. take B. to take C. is taking D. was taken TJ语态题 1. A man’s wristwatch ___ in the lobby of Liugi’s Pizza Restaurant on Tuesday, February 16. A. finds B. finding C. has found D. was found 2. Given new technologies and advanced training techniques, ski jumping records will surely continue ___ A. are broken B. to be broken C. breaking them D. have been breaking 3. They ___ to provide a lot of living spaces, not for long, dangerous voyages. A. build B. are built C. have built D. are building TJ连词/介词/副词 1. _____ you were at basketball practice today, your teacher, Mr. Morris, called on the phone to talk with you. A.So B. While C. Because D. Although 2. _____ the construction , the front entrance to the science building will be closed. ____, all students will have to use the doors on the north side to enter the building. A. At B. On C. Over D. During A. As a result B. Even though C. All of a sudden D. On the other hand 3. Cuckoos, cowbirds, and widowbirds are three examples ___ birds that are brood parasites. A. of B. by C. for D. from 4. My mother asked me if I wanted anyone else to come, __ the first person I thought of was you! A. but B. and C. while D. therefore 5. Known throughout recorded history, they are __- used by people all around the world. A. yet B. still C. ever D. then 6. ____ the way they are made may be different from region to region, houseboats are very similar in many ways. A.It is B.When C. Because D. Although 7. Most of them have flat bottoms, and they are wider ___ normal boats. A. of B. as C. than D. from TJ词汇 1.He said he is___ you the chance first because of the great report you wrote about whale. A. asking B. offering C. deciding D. discussing 2. While this work is being done, most classes will continue as usual inside the building. However, if some classes need to be moved _____ to other rooms, teachers

托福独立写作模版个

托福独立写作模版个 This manuscript was revised by JIEK MA on December 15th, 2012.

托福作文模板 A or B 类型模版一： Depending on personal experience, personality type and emotional concern, we find that some people hold the idea of A meanwhile others prefer to B, from my point of view, it is more advisable to choose A rather than B. My arguments for this point are listed as follows. The main reason for my propensity for A is that___________________________就理由进行解释 instance, ____________________ Another reason can be seen by everyone is that____________________________.就理由进行解释___________________. For example,____________________ The argument I support in the first paragraph is also in a position of advantage because_____________________________ Although I agree that there may be a couple of advantages of B, I feel that the disadvantages are more obvious. Such as________________. In a word, , it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to A. 模版二: 将原题复述___________________________________________When faced with the decision of A of B, quite a few would deem that______________________, but others, in contrast, believe A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point. Among countless factors which influence -A/-B, there are three conspicuous aspects as follows. The main reason for my propensity for _________is that___________________ The second reason can be seen by every person that________. In addition, these reason are also usable when we consider that_________. There are some disadvantages in____________________另一种观点的缺点 __________. In a word, _____________重复观点句并缩写理由 into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that___________. 模版三: In my point of view, A is as important as, if not more important than B. So it is sagacious to choose A. Among countless factors which influence A. there are three conspicuous aspects as follows. The above point is certainly true if A is considered. For example, ___________________ Another reason why I agree with the above statement is that I believe that A is better than B. For instance, ______________ It would probably not be too kindly disposed to the idea that B is not important. B________也好_________.

托福独立写作机经范文5篇

As the economy and technology develop at an incredible speed in today’s society, there are an increasing number of people believing that the most important problems affecting our society today could be solved within our lifetime. In my view, however, this is out of the question and the three most significant problems affecting the society, namely war, environmental destruction and disease, will still influence us and may not be entirely resolved forever. War is a problem afflicting humans since they took into being in the first place. Wars take place when different countries have conflicting benefits, which is unlikely to be eliminated as long as the boundaries between countries still exist. For instance, in the Middle East where water is extremely scarce, many countries are in conflict in contention for water resources. Since every country acts for the sake of its own benefit, it seems that people in the region are incapable of living together in harmony. Eternal world peace, therefore, is unlikely to be achieved in our lifetime. Environmental destruction emerged not long before but it is becoming increasingly severe and can not be ignored. With the large-scale utilization of fossil fuels and rapid development of industry, huge amounts of pollutants are being produced, contaminating the environment to a large degree. The disposal of these pollutants being a tough task, it is hardly possible that we can completely get rid of them within a short period of time. Furthermore, even if we can come up with optimal methods for dealing with these substances, there remains the problem that these methods may cost too much and obstruct the development of economy. Last but not least, the well-being of people around the world is threatened by a variety of diseases, ranging from AIDS to cancer, the cures for which have not been discovered yet. Diseases set off panics among humans, affect their normal life and leave people badly off with the high medical expenses. There are thousands of scientists devoting themselves to finding cure for diseases, but new types of diseases keep emerging and there is no eliminating all of them. In summary, the problems with the most significance today are going to be passed on to our offspring. To eliminate these problems thoroughly, there is still a long way to go.

雅思托福对比之雅思写作和托福写作的区别在哪

雅思托福对比之雅思写作和托福写作的区别在哪？很多同学一直都不是非常清楚雅思和托福究竟有哪些区别，作为出国留学主要的两种考试，他们的区别究竟在哪呢？今天小编给大家带来了雅思写作和托福写作的区别展示。首先，题目形式不同。托福写作包括综合和独立项，分值比例一样。综合项的内容围绕一个学术话题展开，包括阅读和听力部分，主要考察考生用书面语概括和总结学术分歧的能力。对于听力稳定的考生来说，这一项的挑战性很低。独立项通常围绕一个生活话题展开，主要考察学生讲清楚自己个人倾向或给其他利益关系者(比如政府、公司或学校)出谋划策的能力。独立项拿高分比综合项要难不少。雅思写作包括小作文和大作文，前者占据1/3的分值，后者2/3。小作文考察考生对非文字信息(比如数据、地图、流程图)间差异的辨识和概括能力。对不熟悉雅思写作要求的考生来说，这一项比托福的综合项要难不少。雅思大作文和托福独立项有类似之处，但命题范围更窄：雅思大作文只考措施类题目，因此不会出现个人倾向类题目或今昔对比类题目。此外，小编雅思认为雅思大作文涉及的潜在题目更刁钻，需要考生更广更深的背景知识。比如惩罚与犯罪是一类雅思大作文题目，但在托福独立写作里从未出现。其次，主观作文评分标准不同。在托福写作的评分标准里，看不出不同要求占据的比值。考官给的是类似于印象分的holistic assessment。而在雅思写作的评分标准里，可以看到不同要求的比值，四项要求各占据四分之一。与托福写作不同的是，雅思写作对词汇的应用有更高的要求：其评分标准里有一项是lexical resource(词汇丰富度)。第三，拿高分的难易程度不同。ETS官方在对1153个同时考了托福和雅思写作考生的分数进行统计后给出的参考数据。可以看到，托福写作考到29分的考生，雅思写作可能只有7.5分。在现实生活中，这个反差更为极端：托福写作考30分的老师和学生虽然算不上比比皆是，但的确有不少，可是雅思写作考到8分或以上的人极为罕见。第四，小编雅思培训认为，雅思托福都是考察学生的能力。雅思和托福作文都考察这三个方面:文章的结构，内容的完整，和语言的准确。值得注意的是，雅思和托福都是语言考试(雅思写作对语言要求更苛刻)，而不是逻辑考试。因此两项考试都未在评分标准里设立“逻辑”这项环节的评分;事实上logic(逻辑)这个词根本就没出现在评分标准里。这不是说逻辑不重要，而是说逻辑反映在文章结构，内容合理充分，和语言准确这些层面上。

TOEFL Junior语法题小托福语言形式与含义

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