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(完整版)英语作文激励性评语

(完整版)英语作文激励性评语
(完整版)英语作文激励性评语

英语作文激励性评语

一、宏观性评价

1. 整体印象类评语

Super! Excellent! Perfect!

Wonderful. Fantastic. Marvelous.

采用整体印象类评语对于高中起始阶段的学生有较好的激励作用,但若千篇一律德使用此类评语,就会使学生无法正确认识自己的写作水平,最终导致教师的评语失去应有的作用。

2. 规范导知类评语

Beautiful. Clear. Wonderful. Good hand-writing.

You’re careful of using pronunciation.

Glad to see your improvement in handwriting.

I'm expecting clearer/more beautiful hand-writing from you next time.

You’d better pay more attention to word order.

Better be more careful of your spelling.

It's important to compose a draft beforehand.

3. 情感调控类评语

I appreciate your handwriting.

You have a good knowledge of English proverbs.

You are quite aware of making meaningful sentences.

You are richer than others in collecting and using typical sentences an idiom.

I'm expecting greater progress from you in writing. Come on.

If you need my help, never hesitate to come to me.

警句:

Hard work leads to success.

Not to advance is to go back.

No one is without faults.

Keeping is harder than winning. Keep it up.

二、微观写作技能方面的评语

1. 专项点拨类评语

It's proper to use the proverb in Para.2 Quite clever.

You are good at using attributive clauses in your writing.

The "struck" sentence is perfectly used.

You'd better use "third person" in the first Para.

It's good to use the past tense in your writing.

2. 佳句欣赏类评语

教师可以在句尾统一标注赞美性的符号(如E--Excellent)或标识不同星级等。

What a wonderful sentence using "cover".

It's really clever of you to use this beautiful sentence.

The inverted sentence is well written.

3. 谋篇布局类评语

A good beginning. A perfect

ending. Well-organized. Perfectly-expanded.

The first para. makes a good beginning.

The last para. makes a perfect ending.

All the points have been covered.

It's clever of you to u se a topic sentence at the beginning of a para. It's wonderful to use proper conjunctions between sentences.

You are good at developing a Para.

You have made great progress in developing a passage.

I am glad to see the sentence coherence in your last Para.

Better pay more attention to the relationship between sentences.

It's really wonderful to start/end your sentences with adverbials. What is your name? I am very glad to see that your ideas. I think it is a good essay. You are good at developing a Para.T he structure is very clear and you organize your points in a logically way. If there is more detailed information, it will be better. and pay attention to some basic grammar points. Expand your vocabulary! I’m expecting better writing from you next time. What is your name?

在起始年级应侧重对学生写作行为规范的引领,重在对学生进行词句方面的引导;对高年级学生则应侧重对文章的结构、行文的逻辑、句子的变化等方面的指点和引导。

虽然这些评语对我们大部分学生来说不太适合,因为他们连老师评他们什么都看不懂。但我们平时对作文的批改确实没做到这么仔细。有很大启发。

英语作文评语集锦

1, criticism style: For example: "this article does not fluent language,

w riting is not serious, the lack of vivid description, is an unsuccessful essay." Such a comment, for those who are not serious student writing would be appropriate to use a bit but can not be used; otherwise it will discourage the entrepreneurial spirit of students.

2, in recognition of type: "that this is writing new material selection, design sophistication, using a comparison of contrasting a variety of writing style, the characters are detailed image of reading a long time people forget, is a superb masterpiece ... ..." Such comments, suitable for writing with rich experience of those students, teachers willing to work hand in hand assessment of the essay will make them more height and depth.

3, incentive-style: Student's writing skills are not balanced, and some writing is only a partial or individual sentences, words wonderful, then a teacher at the time of writing reviews, it is necessary to seize the students of these bright spot, to stimulate their interest in writing . "Wen's two Bi Yuju very wonderful, unique, reading a immersive feeling, I like the hope that the future can enjoy, the teachers believe that you will not let me

disappointed." Although a few words, but The role of such incentives are inestimable.

4, exhorted formula: writing is that students express their spiritual herb, their emotions and Jin Xian where, so the teacher the time to write reviews, but also pay attention to the ideological trend of students and put them onto a positive track. "People can make their own away from the spirit of a high degree of material poverty, others enjoy the food, you can be immersed in the spiritual food intake, it will give you a lot of fun, so you go beyond the width and depth, they are! "I think, so a few words with advising the type of discourse, so that those who are poor enough to bring troubled students feel relieved.

5 and ask a question type: teachers can sometimes be characterized by the student's essay, some with a depth so as to enable the students themselves to think about to answer, in the continual process of reflection in improving writing skills. For example: Where do you think best describe? Why? ; Text which deep understanding? ; You use and what writing skills? ; You are most dissatisfied with is that of what? ... ...

6, an explicit: "It's like you in this writing, funny, humor, much has been philosophy, writing is smooth, such as Hangyunliushui, if re-writing something beautiful, even more icing on the cake is not it?" Such recognition among the implicit criticism will touched the hearts of the students, arouse their attention.

7, seminar-style: for the writing on some of the issues, teachers may use

to discuss type of tone, and students to explore and improve. For example: "If the reference one and the poem at the beginning of this article, do you feel?" "Narrative of events, using plug Syria is not more interesting?"

1、批评式:例如:“此文语言不流畅,书写不认真,缺少生动形象的描写,是一篇不成功的作文。”如此评语,对于那些写作不认真的学生,可适当采用一下,但不可常用,否则会挫伤学生的进取心。

2、表扬式:“本篇作文选材新颖,构思精巧,动用了对比、反衬等多种写作手法,人物刻画细致形象,读后让人久久难忘,是一篇上乘的佳作……”这样的评语,适于那些写作功底深厚的学生,老师衷肯的评价,会让他们的作文更有高度与深度。

3、激励式:学生的写作水平是不均衡的,有的作文只是局部或个别句子、词语精彩,那么老师在写评语的时候,就要抓住学生的这些闪光点,来激发他们的写作兴趣。“文中的两个比喻句很美妙,独特,读后有身临其境的感觉,我很喜欢,希望以后还能享受到,老师相信你不会让我失望的。”虽然寥寥数语,但这样激励所起的作用是不可估量的。

4、劝勉式:作文是学生抒发心灵的芳草地,他们的喜怒哀乐尽显其中,因此教师在写评语的时候,更要关注学生的思想动态,把他们引到积极向上的轨道。“人可以用精神的高度让自己远离物质的贫困,在别人享受美食的时候,你可以沉浸在精神食粮的摄取中,它将给你带来无穷的乐趣,让你在宽度与深度上超越他们!”我想,这样几句

话带有劝勉式的话语,足可以使那些因贫困带来烦恼的学生感到释然。

5、反问式:教师有时可以根据学生的作文特点,提出一些带有深度的问题,让学生自己去思考、解答,在不断反思中提高写作水平。例如:你认为哪些地方描写最精彩?为什么?;文中有哪些深刻的体悟?;你使用了哪些写作技巧?;你最不满意之处是什么?……

6、暗示式:“很喜欢你这篇作文,风趣、幽默之中不乏哲理,文笔流畅如行云流水,如果书写再漂亮些,不就更锦上添花了吗?”如此表扬之中的含蓄批评,更会触动学生的心灵,引起他们的重视。

7、研讨式:针对写作上的某些问题,教师可采用商量式的口气,和学生共同探讨、改进。例如:“如果引用一首和本文有关的诗开头,你感觉如何?”“叙述的事件,采用插叙的方法是不是更引人入胜?”

一年级作业鼓励性评语

一年级作业鼓励性评语 评语是对学生某一阶段的思想品德和行为所作的全面总结,其目的在于教育指导学生,帮助他们发现优点,改正缺点,鼓励他们不断上进;下面是有一年级作业鼓励性评语,欢迎参阅。 一年级作业鼓励性评语1、平时不爱开口的你,尊敬老师,和睦同学,能按时完成作业,在学校一直给人一种内向胆小的印象,为什么在家会那么固执急噪?呢学习需要一步一个脚印,需要刻苦谦虚,“梅花香自苦寒来”,只要你上课多动脑,作业不马虎,你的成绩一定能够有很大提高。 2、你机灵、调皮,尊敬师长,关心集体,积极参加学校组织的各项活动,但在学习上无进取心,得过且过,课后贪玩少,温习功课,上课有时开小差。希你正视自身缺点,加倍努力,今后定能淋漓尽致地发挥你的聪明才智。 3、你的天真单纯让人喜欢,你的懒散好动又让人心烦。要好起来,作业工整,发言积极,但只是短暂的断续的,为什么不能专心一点持久一点呢?要知道“成功是从来不和懒汉交朋友的”,刻苦学习吧,相信聪明的你一定不会辜负大家的希望! 4、老师真的很佩服你——小不点的你竟然那么的乖巧听话守纪懂事,学习自觉,作业认真,还能和别人一样做好卫生值日工作,这需要多大的毅力呀!在同龄孩子中陷阵是佼佼者!细巧可爱的小精灵,继续加油吧,老师会为你成长道路上每一点进步大声喝彩! 5、大大咧咧的你,尊敬老师,热爱集体,特别欣赏你踏步的样子,真像一个运动员!下学期来,你的字也有了很大进步。希望你进一步严格要求自己,做事所动脑,不毛糙,培养条理性,让好习惯成为你学习生活上的好伙伴。 6、知道吗?开学初你的顽皮好动着实让老师头疼。欣慰的是现在你变了,那么听话守纪,认真专注,那坚持分钟的端坐身姿和以前简直判若两人,真让大家刮目相看!可是,要想取得好成绩,除了要好外,还得会动脑筋,讲究方法,望你新的一年里多和“细心”交朋友,进一步提高学习成绩。 7、你是个文文静静的小姑娘,尊师守纪,学习自觉,团结同学,文明有礼。

(no.1)初中语文教学论文 语文作文批阅中激励性评语的妙用

知识改变命运百度提升自我 本文为自本人珍藏版权所有仅供参考 语文作文批阅中激励性评语的妙用 生活中,人人都渴望得到欣赏。威廉·詹姆斯说过:“人性中最深切的心理动机,是被人赏识的渴望。”学生也不例外。如今的学生多是独生子女,自小娇生惯养,习惯以自我为中心,稍有不顺,就闹情绪发脾气,尤其是处在青春期的高中学生,逆反心理相当严重,基于此,我尝试以激励性评语的形式,激发学生的写作积极性。 激励性评语是一种积极有效的教育手段,它能使学生产生喜悦的情绪和动力,促进学生向着好的方向努力,正如苏霍姆林斯基所说:“成功的快乐是一种巨大的情绪力量,是继续学习的一种动力。”我就想,怎样做才可以把激励变成一种看得见又摸得着的东西呢?让每一个学生时刻能够感受得到老师对他的赏识,并时时督促自己去努力些好每一篇文章呢?于是我就抓住作文评语这一平台,利用写作文评语的机会激发学生的写作兴趣,我相信一句鼓励性的话语,强过一大推空洞的说理。 于是在批阅作文时,我废除了以往的套话、废话,运用富有朝气的、具有亲和力的、带有鼓励性的语言,尽最大的可能调动学生作文的积极性。并且每次作文我都争取全部批阅,为的是能让每一个同学看到我对他的赏识和鼓励。如,赏识性的评语:“读了你的作文,仿佛一股清泉流过我的心田,我烦躁的心情一下子变得开朗多了。”“见字如见人,端正飘逸的字犹如潇洒的你,人见人爱。”“全文语句流利通畅,读着,恰如三伏天喝冰镇饮料,通身爽快。”“你的进步太明显了,老师相信下一次你会更加出色……”“标题具有吸引力,像一块磁铁,一下子就吸引了我的目光。” 而对于学生作文中存在的不得不指出的不足,也是以温和幽默的口吻指出,让学生易于接受。如,“句子难以读通,像河水被石头拦住了去路,你梳理一下好吗?”“字写得大小很不匀称,就像一群大蚂蚁带着小蚂蚁出去觅食一样。你能想办法调整一下 吗?”“文中废话不少,仿佛胖子身上又增加了一堆脂肪,给它减减肥吧。”“别灰心,再来一次好吗?我希望你能把这篇文章修改一下,让它变成一篇美文。” …… 一份份饱含真情的评语,传递着老师对学生的关爱和鼓励,承接着师生之间的浓浓情意,每每发下作文,学生们互相传递着,竞相欣赏着各自的评语,脸上洋溢着满足与快乐的笑容。 一句句简短的评语,就让学生体会到被认可、被赏识的快乐,渐渐地,作文课上少了唉声叹气的声音,更少了抱怨之声。每次作文,大家都能埋着头尽心地写自己的作文。 由此可见,在作文评语中,教师用一颗爱心写评语,会使学生变得自尊、自爱、自信、自强。对教师来说三言两语、信手拈来的作文评语,对学生可是字字重千斤,直接影响到他们的学习心理、道德品质和为人处世。作文评语为教师和学生架起交流的桥梁,精彩的评语为学生捎去点点温情,从而也激发了他们的写作兴趣。 请拿起我们的笔,在学生的作文上,写下欣赏性、鼓励性的评语吧。 用心爱心专心 1

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小学生作业激励性评语集锦 1、你很聪明,再把数字写的漂亮些,会更棒! 2、做错题不要紧,只要以后努力,就一定能取得好成绩。 3、你的作业很秀气,老师很欣赏! 4、这次作业出了点问题,请不要灰心,只要细心,下次一定会很出色。 5、你很会观察生活,留意生活与数学的联系,你是未来的大赢家! 6、只要你认真细心,什么问题也难不倒你。 7、题做错了,找到原因了吗? 8、算得很正确,如果写的再认真会更好。 9、你做题很细心,从不出错。 10、数学会让你变的越来越聪明! 11、今天的作业比以前又认真了许多。 12、有错题不要紧,下次细心就好。 13、你很会动脑筋。 14、再细心一些,准没错! 15、题题正确,非常出色! 16、每次作业你都能认真完成。 17、细心就会进步! 18、你的思维敏捷,解题方法灵活多样,真棒! 19、你真行,一次比一次有进步! 20、你的进步可真大,老师为你感到高兴! 21、每次打开你的作业本就有一种美的享受。 22、你的作业总是令老师很满意。 23、老师相信你,经过努力一定能做的更好。 24、我相信,只要你认真思考,这道题一定能做出来! 25、老师很愿意帮助你。 26、盼望着,你下次做的更好。 27、再细心一些,相信你会做的更好! 28、相信你会一直努力下去! 29、你做题很细心,老师很欣赏你! 30 、你的作业设计的很美观。 31、你若是把字再写工整,会更优秀。 32、你是老师最值得骄傲的学生。 33、你的作业质量有明显提高。 34、你的计算方法很巧妙。 35、思考好,再作对,会更好。 36、只要你再细心一些,就不会把题做错。 37、老师批改你的作业真是一种享受。 38、有点小错不要紧,你已经进步了。 39、你的作业很有创意,老师很佩服你。 40 、你的作业令人耳目一新,老师心里感到很佩服你。 41、如果你努力,相信你有更大的收获。 42、你的解题思路和独特。 43、你要改掉粗心马虎的毛病,就更好了。 44、不要灰心,努力一点,就会很棒。 45、老师认为你是最有发展潜力的学生。 46、你真棒,老师很想很你交朋友。

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