怎样写好书面表达
怎样写好书面表达
一、命题趋势
中考英语书面表达部分主要考查学生初步的书面表达能力，要求学生能根据所给提示，用英语写一篇语言正确、内容完整、语句连贯的短文。情景一般贴近学生的学习和生活；近几年济南学业水平考试提供的形式主要是以图画（漫画）为主，词数大约在80个。
二、经典句子：作文可分为beginning，middle，ending三部分
1.Beginning：一般现在时，陈述句加一个定语从句。
①Tom is a kind boy who always helps others.
②Mary is a good girl who always cares for the environment.
代替词：（nice，friendly, warm-hearted, helpful…）
2.Middle: 从天气入手，转入一般过去时。
①It was a fine day,
②On a Sunny day,
代替词：(nice, rainy, cloudy, windy, warm, coo l, hot, cold…)
3.Ending:一般现在时，感叹句或建议句。
①What a kind boy he is !
②How good the girl is !
③How important it is to protect our environment !
④Let’s learn from him from now on.
⑤It’s ou r duty to protect the environment .
⑥If we can do these, our world will be more and more beautiful.
⑦The more we do, the better our life will be.
⑧Why not do it right now ?
三、注意事项
1.书写：字迹工整，卷面整洁。
2.字数：80左右（试卷的九行最好写满）
3.时态：①开头：一般现在时②中间：一般过去时③结尾：感叹句、主将从现句、祈使句
4.内容：①词组：选定每幅图所用词组并组句（注意时态和语态）
②连接词或句子：争取过渡自然
③间接引语：尽量不用直接引语
5.经常使用的连接词或句子：为使上下文连贯，过渡自然，需添加适当的连接词或过渡句
①表并列的：and, as well as, or
②表转折的：but, yet, however, although, even if
③表时间的：later, then, when…, while…, before…, after a while, after that, as soon as, just at that time
④表因果的：because, so, therefore, as a result
⑤表目的的：in order to, in order that, so that
⑥表举例的: like…, such as…, for example/instance
⑦表总结的：in general, generally speaking, in a word, in my opinion
⑧常用的副词：suddenly, luckily, to one’s surprise, at last …
祝同学们书面表达拿满分
—优胜教育
One night, Mr and Ms Green was sleeping. So did their cat. The cat dreamed of a fish. At that moment, a burglar came into their room quietly from the window. He wanted to steal something from their house. The cat woke up, he fought with the burglar bravely. Being afraid to wake up the Greens, the burglar had to escape from the window again. The brave cat protected the things from being stolen without waking up its owner.
(书面表达) 评分标准：
1）本大题共10分。
2）卷面书写潦草不工整，可酌情从总得分中扣1分。
3）拼写错误每两个扣0.5分。同样错误不重复计算。
4) 书面表达可分为四个等级:
(1) 9－10分短文内容符合每幅图画情景，语句通顺，情节连贯，书写工整，无语法错误，字数符合要求。
(2) 7－8分短文内容基本符合图画情景，语句通顺，情节较连贯，书写工整，语法错误较少（1－2处），字数基本符合要求。
(3) 5－6分短文内容基本符合图画情景，语句尚通顺，情节较连贯，书写较工整，3－4处语法错误，字数在60词左右。
(4) 5分以下短文内容不能紧扣图画情景，语句不够通顺，语法错误较多，书写一般，字数
在50词以下。