2020-2021年 中考英语书面表达知识点总结复习及练习测试题1
2020-2021年中考英语书面表达知识点总结复习及练习测试题1
一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）
1．近年来，各大城市雾霾（haze）情况越来越严重，整个国家的空气污染状况令人担忧。请分析空气污染的现象，原因，应对措施，写一份英文的倡议书，呼吁大家保护环境，减少对空气的污染。
要点提示：
（1）我国空气污染的现象。（至少写2点）
（2）空气污染产生的原因。（至少写2点）
（3）减少空气污染的措施。（至少写2点）
要求：
（1） 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
（2）文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
Dear students ,
As we all know , hazy days have been influencing our lives a lot in recent years . That warns us of the serious
airpollution_____________________________________________________________________ _______
【答案】Dear students,
As we all know, hazy days have been influencing our lives a lot in recent years. That warns us of the serious air pollution. Big factories, power plants and cars all can cause air pollution. For example, chemicals in the smoke from power stations cause a lot of damage. Besides, the people's activities are also the sources of air pollution such as throwing the rubbish and smoking. What's more, the more trees are cut down, the less polluted air can absorb. Air pollution is becoming more and more serious, so we should take some measures such as planting more trees and stop factories from sending out waste air, what's more, we had better walk or take a bus. Protecting the environment is our duty. Everyone should play a part in saving the earth.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇材料作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下整个国家的空气污染状况。所提供的材料中列举了近年来，各大城市雾霾（haze）情况越来越严重，主要从空气污染的现象，原因，应对措施三个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【高分句型一】
We had better walk or take a bus. 我们最好步行或乘公共汽车。这里had better表示最好，后面跟动词原形，take a bus表示乘公共汽车。
【高分句型二】
Protecting the environment is our duty. 保护环境是我们的职责。这里Protecting the environment 做主语，用的是动词的ing形式。
2．书面表达
根据以下提示，写一篇介绍我的朋友张阳的短文。
要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；
3）词数：100词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School.
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【答案】Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School. He is in Class 2,Grade 9. He likes reading. He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful. He enjoys watching birds. He counts the number of birds twice a year to study changes in the number of birds. He donated his pocket money to the Hope Project last month. His dream is to be the chief engineer of high-speed railway connecting my hometown to Shanghai. He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the environment. We mustn’t throw rubbish everywhere.
【解析】
【详解】
亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如like reading，more than，all kinds of，spend time doing，enjoy doing，the number of，twice
a year，be the chief engineer of等。而He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful./ He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the environment.等多种复杂从句结构的综合运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。
【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
3．书面表达
社会需要爱，时代呼唤爱。对善行、对爱心的感动，存在于每个人的心中。但很多人缺乏的不是感动，而是一种显示感动的勇气。请为你身边的人或事点赞，让“点赞”成为传递正能量的一种行动吧！是什么行为让你点赞？讲述一件你点赞的事情。你从他/她身上可以学到什么？让我们一起分享吧！请根据以下提示要点，写一篇文章。
注意：1．词数：80左右；2．不要出现真实的人名及校名。
Make a list of the persons that you should give a “like” button
Tell us one of the experiences that you clicked a “like” button
What could you learn from him/her?
【答案】I should give my uncle a “like” button. He is very tall and very strong. He punishes the bad people and protect the good people. He always helps others. He is my hero. He works hard.When I grow up, I want to be a policeman like my uncle. I want to help people and protect them, so they can live a safe life.
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，讲述一件我点赞的事情，我从他/她身上可以学到什么。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I should……，He is……，He always helps……，I want to……，so they can……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我要点赞的人，接下来介绍他的情况，最后指出我从他身上学到的东西。此处give sb sth, work hard, grow up, want to do sth, live a …life 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
4．诚信是中华民族的传统美德，也是社会主义核心价值观内容之一。而你的朋友Daming最近却被诚信危机所困扰。上周末，他本来和Lingling相约一起去电影院看电影，但是他却因为在家复习考试，把这件事忘了，直到第二天才想起来。因此，Lingling很生气，并且不愿接受Daming的道歉。
请你就此事给校报投稿，以“The Importance of Promise”为题，内容要点如下：
1、简述事件；
2、谈谈自己的看法，并给Daming一些建议。
注意：
1、词数80—100；
2、行文连贯，逻辑合理；
3、文中不能出现真实的校名和人名；
4、文章的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
The Importance of Promise
Dear editor,
People always emphasize（强调） the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.
Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it.
Yours,
Tony 【答案】The Importance of Promise
Dear editor,
People always emphasize（强调）the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.
Recently, a thing happened to my friend, and I think it was really his fault. Last weekend, my friend Daming had a date with his friend Lingling to watch a movie. But he totally forgot it that day because of his review for his exam. So Lingling got too angry to forgive him. In my opinion, it was really his fault. Forgetting the date not only led to Lingling’s anger, but also made her lose trust in him. Keeping promises is always the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. What Daming should do now is to ask for forgiveness and promise that he will never do that again. Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it.
Yours,
Tony 【解析】
【分析】
本文为一篇稿件，需要学生通过大明和玲玲之间，大明没有信守承诺的事情，谈自己的看法。信守承诺是中华民族的传统美德，在写作过程中，注意文章结构，先写出大明和玲玲之间的事情，然后再说自己对此的看法。
【详解】
首先，第一句话直接点明作者的观点，大明是犯错了的。然后仔细阐述了事情发生的经过。接下来说出自己对此事件的看法，不信守承诺会导致失去别人的信任，对大明的建议是除了认错之外，还需要再次保证永不再犯。
【点睛】
文章结构清晰，符合逻辑，先表明自己观点，然后阐述事情，提出自己的观点和建议。整篇文章在谋篇布局上，比较严密。除此之外，中间也使用了一些连接词，例如but，so，
because of等，使文章更加通顺。
5．今天手机在我们日常生活中已广泛使用。但中学生在学校是否应该持有手机，一些学生和老师有不同的观点。你们学校的校刊英文版正在就此举行征文活动，请根据下列表格提示的内容，用英语写一篇征文。
要求：
1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；`
2. 必须包含表格所给的提示信息，并作适当发挥；
3. 词数：80-100词左右（征文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Mobile phones have been used widely in our daily life
today.__________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________
【答案】Mobile phones have been used widely in our daily life today. With the development of economy, mobile phones are more and more widely used in our daily life. However, some parents and teachers have different ideas about whether the students should use mobile phones at school.
Some students are for it. They think that it is convenient to contact with parents. Mobile phones will make them more interested in learning so that they can learn more quickly and easily. Some teachers are against it．They think that some students can't control themselves and often play games. What's worse, some students cheat in exams by using mobile phones. Besides, using mobile phones too much does great harm to students' eyes.
In my opinion, I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way. Firstly，students can learn more knowledge using mobile phones. At the same time, parents and teachers should do something to help students. Only in this way can mobile phones be of help to their
studies.
【解析】
【详解】
本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏。需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系，上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。如but, so, then等。可以适当使用高分句型。
【点睛】
高分句型：I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way．我认为正确的方式使用手机对学生是有帮助的。
I think+宾语从句。
It is+形容词 for sb to do sth做某事对某人来说是…的。
6．书面表达
根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。
每年春节，每个孩子都能收到来自长辈的压岁钱（lucky money）。随着生活水平的提高，大部分孩子得到越来越多的压岁钱，有些甚至通过微信（WeChat）或支付宝（Alipay）收压岁钱。同学们该如何管理自己的钱，让自己的钱用得更有意义？请结合自己的实际写一篇文章，词数 80 词以上，文中不能出现真实校名和人名。内容包括如下：
1. 你的压岁钱的来源和用途；
2. 对合理使用压岁钱的建议（至少 3 点）；
3. 呼吁大家节约用钱，把自己的压岁钱用在最需要、最有意义的地方。
【答案】Every Spring Festival I receive a lot of lucky money from my parents and relatives. Now I even get it through WeChat or Alipay. I usually buy some of my favorite books, school things and some fancy clothes. Sometimes I also buy some gifts for my parents.
In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games. Second, it is a good idea to buy something useful for our parents or teachers so that we can show our love to them. What is more, why not donate our lucky money to the poor kids in need? Helping others makes us happy.
All in all, let us manage our lucky money properly. We should use our money in a meaningful way.【解析】
【详解】
每年春节，每个孩子都能收到来自长辈的压岁钱（luckymoney）。随着生活水平的提高，大部分孩子得到越来越多的压岁钱，有些甚至通过微信（WeChat）或支付宝（Alipay）收压岁钱。同学们该如何管理自己的钱，让自己的钱用得更有意义？这是一篇给材料作文，本题所给材料比较详细，写作中注意将所给内容表达出来，不能逐字翻译。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称，时态为一般现在时态，注意谓语动词的变化。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。
【点睛】
文章使用了很好的短语和句子：In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games.这些给文章增色不少。
7．书面表达
初中即将毕业，同学们都感到压力很大。就此问题，老师要求你在英语课上做一个以“Less Pressure Makes Life Better”为题的报告，谈谈你的做法，与同学分享经验。请根据以下要求写一份发言稿，内容包括：
1. 普遍存在的压力：同学关系；考试
2. 我过去的压力：父母的期望；学习
3. 我成功缓解压力的办法及效果；……
要求：1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
2. 词数80左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Less Pressure Makes Better Life
Hello, everyone!
Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure. _____
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【答案】Hello, my classmates!
Pressure is a serious problem in today's world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can't get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.
I was always under pressure, too. My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class. They always sent me to all kinds of after-classes on weekends.
I had a talk with my parents and told them I had done my best. Finally, they understood me. In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies.
Less pressure makes better life. Thank you.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们针对现在同学们普遍感到压力大这种现象，以Less Pressure Makes Life
Better为题，谈谈自己的看法，和同学们分享一下自己的经验。审题可知，文章中应主要包括以下几个内容：首先介绍同学们普遍感到压力这种现象；然后讲述自己过去曾面对的压力；最后介绍自己如何成功缓解压力。题目中只给出了大概的提纲，其中具体的内容应由学生们自己发挥想象力来补充，并用正确的英语表达出来。学生们可以从自身的经历和体会出发，选取生活中常见的场景进行介绍。文章应使用一般现在时和一般过去时，注意根据表达的需要使用正确的时态，并变化谓语动词的正确形式。句式结构可以简单句结构为主，这样的句式表达简洁、明了，易于掌握。但为提升作文档次，应穿插使用并列句和复合句，或使用一些复杂结构，如非谓语动词、被动语态等。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，谈了自己对同学们普遍感到压力大这种现象的看法，并分享了自己的经历。短文有如下几个优点：首先短文内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有信息，且层次清晰，文章分成了四段，每一段的中心话题也很明确。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章主要使用了一般现在时和一般过去时，谓语动词形式准确。句式结构以简单句为主，叙述清晰、简洁。也使用了并列句和复合句的结构，如宾语从句、状语从句等。短文中使用了丰富的句式，如Some students can't get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.、My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class、In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies等等。
8．书面表达
假如你是华,你的英国笔友对中国文化很感兴趣,想到中国旅行感受中国文化。你想请他来你的家乡一安徴一游,请你根据以下提示用英文给他写一封电子邮件。
1位置:中国东部,安做省南部:
2.气候:春暖花开,秋季凉爽
3.景点:山和古村落:
4.文化:茶、黄梅戏
5.建议
提示词:黄梅戏 Huangmei Opera
注意:1.词数80-100
2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
3.文中不得出现自己真实的校名和人名
4.开头和结展己给出,不计入总词数
Dear Dave
I know that you are interested in Chinese culture and Im glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not come to Anhui, my home town, to have fun?
【答案】Dear Dave，
I know you are interested in Chinese culture and I’m glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not come to Anhui, my hometown, to have some fun.
Anhui Province lies in the east of China. The best time to come here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats. There are many famous places to see. For example, Mt. Huangshan, where you will see wonderful plants and special rocks. Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on. As a fan of Chinese culture, don’t forget to try green tea in Anhui which smells good and tastes better. What’s more, come and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!
Welcome to Anhui! I’m looking forward to seeing you here!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份给自己的笔友Dave写信，邀请他来你的家乡—安徽一游，题目中列出了文章的提纲，审题可知，短文应从以下几个内容叙述：首先介绍家乡的位置；然后介绍来这里最好的时候；接下来是介绍家乡的景点和文化，并给出建议。短文应使用一般现在时，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应合理安排几个内容，分清主次，并注意上下文的连贯。另外，英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，因此写作时不能按照汉语思维逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构出发，写完整的句子。如可以使用简单句结构，易于掌握，不容易出错。但为提升文章档次，也应穿插一些并列句结构或复合句，以及使用一些复杂结构，如非谓语动词、被动语态等。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求邀请Dave来自己的家乡旅游，并介绍了家乡的景点和文化。短文有如下几个特点：首先文章内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有内容，并对细节进行补充和修饰，使内容更加充实、丰富。短文先对Dave发出邀请，然后具体介绍了家乡的位置、景点、文化等，并提出了建议。全文叙述清晰，层次清楚，主次分明。第二，短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。短文以一般现在时来叙述，注意了谓语动词第三人称单数形式的变化。句式结构以简单句为主，也使用了并列句、宾语从句、状语从句等复合句，还有一些好的句型，如The best time to come here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats、Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on.、What’s more, come and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!、I’m looking forward to seeing you here!等。
9．书面表达
根据下列表格的提示，写一篇题为Changes in Our Hometown的英语短文．（80词左右）文章内容必须包含所给的所有信息．开头已给出，不计入总词数．
内容要点：
Changes in Our Hometown
In the past ten years，great changes have taken place in our hometown．
【答案】Changes in Our Hometown
In the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past, there used to be old houses. The river was very dirty. The roads were narrow and the living conditions were terrible. People were not rich. They went to work on foot or by bike. But now, there are many tall buildings in our hometown. We can see the clean river and the clear water . Even we can see fish in the water. There are many wide and clean roads. Our life is better and better The environment around us is more and more comfortable. People usually go to work by bus or by car.
I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. But I think it’s still important to remember the past. It tells that we should cherish the present life.
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亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如take place，in our hometown，in the past，used to be，go to do，on foot，by bike，better and better，more and more等。而I think it's still important to remember the past/It tells that we should cherish the present life.等宾语从句结构的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。
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书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
10．朋友是我们生活的组成部分，他们总是在我们最需要帮助的时候陪伴我们。你最好的朋友是谁？你是怎么看待你们的友谊的？请以“My Best Friend ”为题，根据以下提示写一篇英语短文。
1. 简要介绍你最好的朋友的外貌和性格;
2. 介绍和你朋友之间发生的一件令人难忘的事；
3. 你是怎样看待你们之间的友谊的
要求：
1. 语句连贯通顺，文章衔接紧密
2. 词数80-100
3. 文中不得出现真实校名及姓名
Friends are very important in our life. They always help us when we are in need.
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________【答案】My best friend
Friends are very important in our life. They always help us when we are in need. Everyone needs friends to talk with and get confidence from.
My best friend is Jenny. She is a quiet girl. She is always friendly and helpful. She is a tall girl with long hair. She does well in all the subjects and gets on well with others at school.
I was weak in maths. One day, I failed in maths exam. I was so sad that I couldn’t help crying. Jenny encouraged me a lot. From then on, she helped me with my maths, With her help, I got an A in the next maths exam. I was really thankful to her.
I think friendship is a necessary part of our lives. I want to keep our friendship forever.
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试题分析：这是一个提纲作文。题目给出了标题及写作要点。根据题目要求可知，人称以第三人称为主。时态为一般现在时和一般过去时。我们要做的就是用正确的英语句子来组织这些材料，在描写外貌和性格时，会用到系表结构，注意主谓一致关系。介绍发生的一件难忘的事情，要用到一般过去时态。另外在写作时可以适当使用一些连词，使之上下连贯，合乎逻辑。
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人物介绍是记叙文中常见的一种写作类型。内容可以是介绍自己也可以介绍他人，包括姓名、年龄、外貌特征、兴趣爱好，有时也可以包括日常活动。时态为一般现在时态。在介绍长相时用“be+形容词”来描述人物的身高、体重、身材等；用“have/has +
（straight/curly） hair / （big/small）eyes/nose/mouth”来描述头发或五官。用“wear + 某种衣服”来介绍某人的穿戴。用be good at doing sth.来介绍特长，用like sth./doing sth.best或“My/His/her favorite + 名词+ is …”来介绍某人的最爱。当主语是第三人称单数时，注意主谓一致关系。