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1 这幅图片试图告诉我们不同的人在对待生活时有不同的态度。

_____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 2 这幅图片告诉我们无论在生活中我们面对什么样的挑战/困难/麻烦，我们都应该乐观/主动。

_____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 3 这幅图片试图告诉我们成功是由多个方面决定的。

_____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 4 这幅图片试图告诉我们自信的重要性。

_____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 5 这幅图试图告诉我们用正确的方法解决问题。

_____________________________________________________________________ 6 这幅图试图告诉我们，在孩子成长的路上，父母应和孩子进行交流，不要替孩

子做他可以做的事情。

_____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 7 这幅图传递了这样一个信息，孩子应该尊重老人。

_____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 8 这幅图告诉我们读书可以扩大我们的视野，并且能帮助我们了解世界。

_____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 9据图所知，不实际的目标不仅会误导我们，而且使我们远离成功。

_____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 10 这幅图片试图传递给我们这样一个信息，创造力可以为我们的生活打开一道

新的大门。

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Life is short and time is swift. 人生短暂，时光飞逝。

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1 这幅图片想告诉我们现代社会，孩子对电子产品的痴迷/过度依赖。

_____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 2 这幅图片告诉我们不要简单地以貌取人。

_____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 3这幅图片好像在传递这样一个信息，在某方面关注太多会阻止其它方面的发

展。

_____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 4（结论）总之，成功需要正确的目标和切实的计划。只有这样我们才能实现我

们的梦想。

_____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 5（结论）总之，成功需要正确的认识和合适的能力。只有拥有这两者，我们才能成功。

_____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 6 依我看来，选择合适的方法在我们的工作和学习中都是很重要的。

_____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 7 这幅图片想要警告我们不要欺骗自己.

_____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 8 这幅图片想要告诉我们应该在正确的时间/地点做正确的事情。

_____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 9据图所知，盲目学习别人不仅容易引来错误，而且还会阻碍进步.

_____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 10据图所知，盲目自信不仅容易产生错误，而且会带来失败。

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