英语四级作文写作
记叙文题型作文
写作步骤
要求考生写一篇记叙文，描述事件发生的时间、地点、原因、人物及结果，最后对事件进行简单分析，如：2003年6月四级作文、2003年9月四级作文、2004年6月六级作文。对这类题型，通常分为三个步骤来写：
第一段、总结描述
交代清楚故事涉及的人物、时间、地点：
主题句
第二段、具体描述
具体描述事件发生的原因、经过和结果
起因＋经过＋结果
第三段、对事件的分析
分析句1+分析句2+分析3
记叙文题型作文写作文练习
Directions：for this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic the day my classmate fell ill.
1、简单描述一下这位同学生病的情况；
2、同学、老师和我是如何帮助他的；
3、人和人之间的这种相互关爱给我的感受是....
［写作模板：架构阶段］
第一段：
开篇句：about _____ o'clock one evening in _______, _____.
扩展句：________. (展开描述一下事件)
第二段：
主题句：without hesitation, _____. it wasn't long before _____.
扩展句：1、one ______.
2、another _______.
3、our teacher _______.
第三段：
结尾句：is _______? who can tell ? but ______.
扩展句：1、when ____ , people showed _____ spirit regardless of ____.
2、this kind of care between persons is the very kind giving, unselfish and priceless devotion or sacrifice.
3、and it is just because of this care that we can have warm families, a happy life and a beautiful world.
［写作模板：填充阶段］
第一段：
开篇句：about nine o'clock one evening in may, my roommate li ming was lying in bed, trembling with cold and having a cough.
扩展句：his head was aching so intensely that he kept groaning. his forehead felt very hot. we took his temperature. it was 38.5℃. (展开描述一下事件) 第二段：
主题句：without hesitation, i dialed "120". it wasn't long before an ambulance arrived.
扩展句：1、one roommate brought a blanket for him.
2、another supported him in the ambulance.
3、our teacher insisted on giving him some money.
第三段：
结尾句：is he a suspedted sars patient? who can tell ? but we did't retreat.
扩展句：1、when the savage sars was spreading, people showed fearless spirit regardless of dangers to their own health.
2、this kind of care between persons is the very kind giving, unselfish and priceless devotion or sacrifice.
3、and it is just because of this care that we can have warm families, a happy life and a beautiful world.
文
About nine o'clock one evening in may, my roommate Li Ming was lying in bed, trembling with cold and having a cough. His head was aching so intensely that he kept groaning. his forehead felt very hot. we took his temperature. it was 38.5℃.
Without hesitation, I dialed "120". It wasn't long before an ambulance arrived. One roommate brought a blanket for him. Another supported him in the ambulance. Our teacher insisted on giving him some money.
Is he a suspected Sars patient? who can tell ? but we did't retreat. when the savage Sars was spreading, people showed fearless spirit regardless of dangers to their own health. This kind of care between persons is the very kind giving, unselfish and priceless devotion or sacrifice. And it is just because of this care that we can have warm families, a happy life and a beautiful world.
（一）现象解释型
Model 1
Para.I: 1.Recently,__; 描述现象，引起话题
2. What amazes us most is ___; 表现较为典型的方面
3. It is true that__; 对于现象做出的评论
Para. II: 4. There are many reasons explaining ___; 承上启下，解释这一现象
5. the main reason is___; 说明原因之一
6. what is more___说明原因之二
7. thirdly, ___; 说明原因之三
8. As a result ____;讲述导致的结果
Para.III: 9. Considering all these, __; 作者的态度
10. For one thing,___; 观点一
11. For another, ___ ; 观点
12. In conclusion, ____;总结全文
Model 2
Para.I: 1.As is known to all,___; 2. People seem to get accustomed to ____; 3. In fact, ____ Para. II: 4. The reason of ____lies in several aspects.; 5. Firstly___. 6. secondly,____;
7. Thirdly,____; 8. Finally, ___
Para.III: 9. As a matter of fact,____; 10. On the one hand,____ 11. On the other hand,___
12. Therefore,____
Model 3
Para.I: 1. Nowadays,___; 2. For one thing,___; 3. for another,___; 4. It is obvious ___;
Para. II: 5. Many remarkable factors contribute to____;
6. First of all, ___;
7. In addition, ____
8. Thirdly,____
Para.III: 9. As to me,___; 10. As we know,____; 11. Besides,____; 12. In a word,____.
College Students’ Job-hunting
⑴Recently, college students’ employment has become a hot topic in China. ⑵What amazes us most is that about 15 percent of college graduates cannot find the right job in the first year. ⑶It is true that the employment situation is no longer as optimistic as before.
⑷There are many reasons explaining the huge unemployment pressure on college graduates. ⑸The main reason is that the supply of graduates is much more than the demand in the market. ⑹What is more, the economy development in recent years is not as fast as before.
⑺Thirdly, many graduates have too high expectations. ⑻As a result, many graduates will stay at home waiting for opportunities.
⑼Considering all these, many measures must be taken to cope with this problem. ⑽For one thing,the employment center should play a vital role.⑾For another,the students should improve themselves actively. ⑿In conclusion, it calls for the joint efforts of the society to help graduates.
二．对比选择型：
Model 1
Para.I: 1. there is a heated debates over____; 两种观点针对的争论焦点
2. It is commonly accepted that ___; 观点一
3. In contrast, others ___; 对立的观点二
Para. II: 4. Those who hold the first opinion suggest___; 观点一的理由
5. In their view,___; 深入阐述观点一的理由
6. However, others think ___;观点二的理由
7. They argue that ___深入阐述观点二的理由
Para.III: 8. Considering one after another, I stand on the side of ____ 我的看法
9. First of all____; 个人看法的依据一
10. Further more,___; 个人看法的依据二
11. Thirdly,___ 个人看法的依据三
12. Therefore,___ 个人结论
Model 2
Para.I: 1. Recently, we may hear quite different opinions ___;
2. Most people take it for granted that ___;
3. However, However, others hold (believe)___;
Para. II: 4. A dominant idea is that ___;
5. They maintain such an idea because ____
6. In contrast, the objectors think ____;
7. They argue that ____
Para.III: 8. As far as I am concerned, I prefer ___; 9. on the one hand, ___;
10. on the other hand, ___;11. Therefore,____; 12. In conclusion, ___.
Should Private Cars Be Encouraged?
⑴ Recently, we may hear quiet different opinions about whether private cars should be
encouraged or not. ⑵Most people take it for granted that the rapid increase of private cars has already caused a series of problems . ⑶However, others hold that cars can provide us with more convenience.
⑷A dominant idea is that cars may cause serious air pollution.⑸In this view, cars indirectly cause many diseases to people. ⑹Nevertheless, objectors think that many people are able to enjoy themselves with a car. ⑺They argue that many new technologies may eliminate pollutions.
⑻ As to me, I prefer the latter idea. ⑼On the one hand, non-pollution energy can be used to minimize pollution. ⑽On the other hand, a fast developed automobile industry can provide jobs for millions of people . ⑾Therefore, private cars should be encouraged further. ⑿In conclusion, each Chinese family should own a car.
(三) 问题解决型
此类作文要求考生从提示性文字或图表、图画入手，解释提示性文字、图表、图画反映出的问题，提出问题的危害性或解决这一问题的紧迫性；然后对问题展开分析，提出解决问题的方案或应对措施；最后一段要求考生表明自己的态度、做法等。
Eg: Air pollution/how to deal with anger
模板一
1. With the development/improvement of ——,——. 空格一处铺垫，空格二处填写某一问题。
2. It is necessary that——. 关注解决现象引出的问题很必要。
3. On the one hand, ——. 解决问题很必要的理由一。
4. On the other hand, ——解决问题很必要的理由二。
5. Therefore, how to —— is worth paying attention. 承上启下，填要解决的问题。
6.Firstly——
7.Secondly——解决办法一；解决办法二。
8.For example,——9. Thirdly, ——. 举例解释解决办法二；9. 解决办法三。
10.In other words,——阐明解决办法三。
11.In fact, ways to —— are countless. 指出解决问题的办法多种多样。
12.It’s time that ——强调解决问题时不可待。
Reduce Waste on Campus
(1) With the improvement of living standard, waste on campus is increasingly serious. (2) It is necessary that something should be done to reduce waste on campus. (3)On the one hand, our waste has already caused a great loss of precious resources, such as water and electricity. (4)On the other hand, our waste adds our parents as well as our society a burden.
(5)Therefore, how to eliminate waste on campus is worth paying attention. (6)Firstly, we should turn off the light when we leave our dorms or classrooms so as to save electricity as much as possible. (7)Secondly, we should stop wasting water when we bath, or wash clothes and dishes.
(8)For example, we should use a basin when we clean faces. (9)Thirdly, we should be economical.(10) In other words, when go shopping, we should buy only what we really need. (11)In fact, the ways to reduce waste on campus are countless.(12) It’s time that we cultivate the habit of thrift in every possible way.
模板二
1. There has been a discussion recently about——. 提出现存的问题
2. It is obvious that——. 解决问题很必要的理由一
3. Additionally, ——. 解决问题很必要的理由二。
4. So it is high time, ——承上启下，说明解决问题的必要性。
5. First of all, ——解决办法一
6.The reason is——解决办法一的理由.。
7.Secondly——解决办法二
8.That is to say,——阐明解决办法二。
9. Thirdly, ——. 解决办法三。
10.In fact, more than three ways can be adopted,——指出解决问题的办法多种多样。
11.As for me, ——小结解决问题的根本途径。
12.All in all, ——总结全文。
Reduce Waste on Campus
There has been a discussion recently about waste on campus. It is obvious that a great loss of precious resources, such as water and electricity have been caused by waste. Additionally, our waste adds our parents and society a burden. So it is high time that we took actions to reduce the waste on campus.
First of all, we should stop wasting water when we bath, or clean faces, or wash clothes and dishes. The reason is that there is a great shortage of water in the word. Secondly, we should be economical. That is to say, when go shopping, we should buy only what we really need. Thirdly, we should turn off the light when we leave dorms or classrooms so as to save electricity as much as possible.
In fact, more than three ways can be adopted. As for me, the cultivation of good habit of thrift is most important for all of us. All in all, every college student should join in the efforts to combat the waste on campus.
(四) 观点论证型
模板一
1. It is true that——. 提出普遍存在地观点。
2. However,——. 谈不同地观点。
3.I think——. 自己地观点，即文章地论点
4.—— can be listed as follow. 过度句，转折到观点地论证，由题目选择具体的词。
5. First of all, ——论证理由一
6. Secondly ——论证理由二。
7.For example——举例具体说明理由二
8.Thirdly,——论证理由三。
9. A case in point is ——. 举例说明理由三
10.It goes without saying that——提出执行该观点时应注意的事项
11.There is no doubt that ——得出结论
12.In conclusion ——总结全文。
It Pays to Be Honest
It is true that most of us value honesty highly. However, nowadays we often confront confidence crisis such as cheating, overcharging, fake commodities, etc. I think that we should be honest because being honest is not only the whole society. The reasons can be listed as follows. First of all, only honest people can be truly respected by the others and can make more friends over a long period of time. Secondly, honesty, which is the traditional virtue of the Chinese people, can make our life easier and more harmonious. For example, consumers will not be afraid of being overcharged if dealers are honest, and on the contrary dealers can win more customers. Thirdly, honesty can make our society. A case in point is that Singapore which is a society of trustworthiness and integrity has a comparatively low criminal rate.
It goes without saying that being honesty is of benefit to both the society and the individual. There is no doubt that we should foster the spirit of honesty. In conclusion, laying stress on honesty will become the public morals in our society.
模板二
1. Some people believe that——. 直接提出本文的观点。
2. The truth is deep and profound. 进一步强度观点的正确性。
3. As we know,——. 论证理由一
4. In addition,——. 论证理由二
5. There are numerous examples ——承上启下。
6. A case in point is——举例一具体论证。
7.This is close to suggest——总结例一。
8.For another example——举例二具体论证
9.Moreover,——. 举例三具体论证。
10.All mentioned above tell us——总结上下，重申论点
11.But one thing we have to notice is that ——指出该论点应注意什么。
12.In a word, ——总结全文。
It Pays to Be Hones
Some people believe that many dishonesties, such as cheating, overcharging, fake commodities, etc. ruin our normal life, and they maintain that being honest is not only beneficial to others but also to oneself. The truth is deep and profound. As we know, if one is honest, other people will deeply respect him or her, and are willing to make friends with him or her. In addition, being honest can make people’s life easier and more harmonious.
There are numerous examples supporting the argument. A case in point is that Singapore which is a society of trustworthiness and integrity has a comparatively low criminal rate. This is close to suggest that honesty can make our society more stable, and all people can live a peaceful life there. For another example, buyers usually like to make a deal with the dealers they trust. Moreover, the dealer, such as Tongrentang Herbal Medicine Shop which runs business honestly is more likely survive the fierce market competition.