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【英语】 英语中考英语书面表达20(附带答案解析)

【英语】 英语中考英语书面表达20(附带答案解析)
【英语】 英语中考英语书面表达20(附带答案解析)

【英语】英语中考英语书面表达20(附带答案解析)

一、中考英语书面表达(含答案详细解析)

1.书面表达

地球是我们的家园,我们作为地球的主人,就应该好好保护地球。现在正在倡导“低碳”生活,只要我们不污染地球的环境,不浪费地球的能源,就能够让我们的周围变得更绿,生活变得更美好。作为中学生,我们应该怎样做呢?谈谈你的想法。内容应该包括以下几点:

1. 节约用水、用电;

2. 节约纸张,循环使用旧课本,保护森林;

3. 节约粮食,在更多的土地上种树;

4. 不乱丢杂物,保护环境;

要求:短文中不得出现真实的校名和人名;80词左右

提示词:the greenhouse gases lifestyle 低碳生活方式

How does our earth turn better?

The earth is our home. _______________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________ If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we are living will be better and better.【答案】How does our earth turn better?

The earth is our home. We should protect our earth as the owner. But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle?

I think as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. When you wash, can you close down the water? Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? I think saving paper is necessary. All the used text books should be recycled. Thus, less trees won't be cut down again. If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm. Don't throw litter everywhere, it will pollute our environment.

If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we living will be better and better.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如how to do,live in,around us, such as,as a middle school student,and so on,close down the water,turn off the lights,cut down,make a contribution to our earth,pollute our environment,better and better等。而固定结构But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle?和I think as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. /Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? / If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm.等复杂从句结构的运用,丰富了短文内容,使表达多样化,是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章表达更有逻辑性,也更富有条理。

【点睛】

书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得

到较高的分数。

2.书面表达

在本周班会课上,同学们对“初中生什么时候放学比较合适?”这一问题进行了热烈的讨论。大部分同学认为初中生应该在5点左右放学,下表所列里大家的发言记录。请你写一篇短文介绍大家的想法并阐述你的观点。

注意:(1)短文必须包括表格中所有要点,并适当发挥;

(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;

(3)词数:80-100;

(4)短文开头仅供参考,不计入总词数。

短文开头:“What time should junior high school students leave school?” This week we have held a class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion.

_______________________________________________________________________________ ____________

_______________________________________________________________________________ ____________

【答案】“What time should junior high school students leave school?”This week we have held a class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion.

Most students think that students should leave school at about 5 o 'clock. They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school.

Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to music.

A few think 5 o 'clock is the best time to finish school. After school, they can do part-time jobs, such as collecting discarded plastic bottles to sell for money.

I am in favor of leaving school at five o'clock. Besides having time to play tennis, I can also draw some pictures I like.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如hold a class meeting,talk about,the result of,keep healthy,after school,have more time to do,want to do,such as,listen to music,in favor of,clean the room,play tennis等。而复杂并列结构They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school.和Most students think that students should leave school at about 5 o 'clock./ Some think that students should leave

school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to music.等复杂从句结构的运用,丰富了短文内容,使表达多样化;同时Most students think…/ Some think…/ A few think…使叙述条理,层次分明,是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章表达更有逻辑性,也更富有条理。

【点睛】

书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

3.世界卫生组织的一项研究报告显示,我国青少年近视率居世界第一。2019年全国两会当中“小眼镜”成关注重点,防控青少年近视迫在眉睫。以下表格是学校针对本校学生近视问题做的调查表,假如你是校报编辑Jack,请根据所提供的信息,用英语写一篇调查报告,陈述学校调查结果,并表明你自己的观点和理由。

参考词汇:近视 nearsighted

注意: 1. 内容须包括所提示的信息,可适当发挥;

2. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称;

3. 词数:80-100,开头已经给出,不计入总词数。

According to a survey carried out by WHO, the number of teenagers who are nearsighted is the largest in

China.__________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________

_______

【答案】According to a survey carried out by WHO, the number of teenagers who are nearsighted is the largest in China. As we all know that the eyes are very important for us. So it is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. But do you know how to protect your eyesight?First, don't keep your eyes work for a long time. Don't spend too much time on mobile phones, TV and computers. Secondly, pay attention to the following: Don't read in the sun; don't read in bed or in a moving bus. And when you read you should keep the book away from your eyes for about a foot. And thirdly, do eye-exercises every day. You should eat more carrots and other eye-friendly foods. It will also help you keep good eyesight. I think, you may prevent your eyesight from becoming nearsighted.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇材料作文,根据表格中的相关信息介绍一下如何保护视力。所提供的表格中列举了近视的原因和建议。主要从原因和建议两个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时。注意作文中必须包含表格上的所有信息,并适当发挥。写作时,避免使用汉语式的英语,尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确,表达要符合英语习惯,注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中要注意使用祈使句,使上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系,表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】

So it is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. 所以保持良好的视力对每个人都很重要。

本题运用句型:It is +形容词+for sb. to so sth.

【高分句型二】

And when you read you should keep the book away from your eyes for about a foot. 当你读这本书的时候,你应该把它从你的眼睛里移开一英尺。

when you read是由when引导的时间状语从句。

4.每一次变化都伴随着我们的成长,作为初中生的你,你感觉自已比起小时候有了哪些变化?请写一篇文章描述一下你认为最明显的变化。

要点包括: 1. 变化是什么?

2. 变化是如何发生的?

3. 变化后有什么感受?

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________

【答案】The biggest personal change I’ve ever made is falling in love with rending.

When I was a child, I didn’t enjoy reading books at all. Later, my mother always read stories for me and bought me a lot of books. Gradually I began to love reading. While reading, I feel like I am

talking with a wise man. Reading is also a fantastic way to pass my free time.

Books are my friends. They will continue to benefit me even more.

【解析】

【分析】

这是一篇给材料作文,介绍我比起小时候有了哪些变化。

【详解】

结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去时,人称为第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:When I was……,my mother always read……,Gradually I began to……,Books are……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。

【点睛】

本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头介绍了我最大的个人变化是喜欢上读书,接下来介绍我小时候不喜欢读书,最后指出现在书籍是我的朋友。此处fall in love in, at all, buy sb sth, begin to do sth, love doing sth, feel like, talk with, continue to do sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

5.书面表达

暑假即将来临,对于如何安排孩子初中毕业后的第一个假期,家长们和孩子自己有着各自的想法。根据下表提示,写一篇英语短文,描述他们的不同看法,同时发表你自己对暑假安排的观点。

注意]

(1)表格中的观点仅供参考,允许适当发挥;

(2)开头已给出,不计入总词数;

(3)文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等信息;

(4)词数:不少于80。

How will you spend the coming summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions.

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________

【答案】How will you spend the coming summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions.

Some parents think kids should get ready for high school in the sum?mer so it's important to take summer courses. They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it's time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.

In my opinion we can have a talk with our parents. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. We need to relax ourselves after working so hard at school. It's good for us to do some sports.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇给材料作文,本文已经给出了主要写作要点,动笔前要先认真阅读要点,然后围绕要点适当发挥.写作中,应注意描述的全面性,尽量将提示的内容利用上;结合材料内容,可知本文主要是第三人称,一般现在时态进行叙述.语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯.适当使用连词,做到上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系.

【点睛】

这篇短文用到了一些好的句型:They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it's time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.这些给文章增色不少。

6.书面表达

假如你是李华,你们学校正在进行课堂教学改革,经过一段时间的适应,同学们发现现在的课堂跟以前比较发生了一些变化,请你根据所给提示以“The Changes in Class”为题目,用英语写一篇100词左右的文章,谈谈你的感受和想法,开头和结尾已给出(不计入总词数)。

要求:1.短文应行文连贯、条理清晰、段落分明、书写工整;

2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名等信息;

3.文章必须包括所提供的全部主要信息,并作适当发挥。

The Changes in Class

Thanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study in

class.___________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________

【答案】 The Changes in Class

Thanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study in class. I like the class like this.I think it is very interesting and lively. We can tell stories, play games and listen to music.

I think it is open and free. We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this class. The changes in Class are good for us.【解析】

【详解】

假如你是李华,你们学校正在进行课堂教学改革,经过一段时间的适应,同学们发现现在的课堂跟以前比较发生了一些变化,请你根据所给提示以“The Changes in Class”为题目,用英语写一篇100词左右的文章,谈谈你的感受和想法,开头和结尾已给出(不计入总词数)。

结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时,人称为单数第一人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。

【点睛】

本文结构紧凑,语言简练文中运用了一些好的句型:We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this class.等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

7.环保话题是人们最关心的话题之一,请以Change for a better China为主题,结合自己家乡的变化写一篇英语短文。

注意事项:

1.短文应包括表格中的所有提示内容,条理清楚,作适当发挥。

2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名,词数不少于80。

Change for a better China

____________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________【答案】We all know it is becoming more and more important to protect our environment well. But some people don’t care about it .They throw litter into the river and even worse factories also put waste into the river, the river is full of rubbish. The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days. Factories that burn coal also pollute the air with a lot of black smoke. We hardly ever see blue skies anymore.

I think everyone in our hometown should play a part in cleaning it up. We should write to the government ,they should close down the factories. Trees are very helpful and important for the environment .We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more

healthy .Now, Our hometown has started to face the problem, I believe we can make our country a better place if we keep trying.

【解析】

【详解】

环保话题是人们最关心的话题之一,请以Change for a better China为主题,结合自己家乡的变化写一篇英语短文。要求中已经给出了部分提示,动笔先应先认真阅读提示,确定写作内容。写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式,注意在表达不同观点时,连词的使用。内容上应注意描述的全面性;语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。

【点睛】

本文紧扣要求对家乡做了简单介绍,内容完整,用了表格中的信息。2. 句式丰富。表述灵活。衔接自然,顺畅。文中用到了一些好的句型:The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days.;We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more healthy.给文中增色不少。

8.自信赋予人力量,带给人快乐。拥有自信,人生处处是舞台,生活越来越精彩。

假如你是李华,请你为校刊英语园地“自信助我成长”专栏写一篇短文,谈谈自信的重要性,分享一次使你更加自信的经历,并说说我们如何更加自信。

提示词语:powerful,happy,believe in,keep doing

提示问题:

Why is it important to be confident?

What experience made you more confident?

How can we become more confident?

It's very important to be confident

【答案】It’s very important to be confident. Self-confidence can bring us courage to stick to what we do. So it’s valuable to us.

When I was in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class. Although I practiced it for many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot thewords at the beginning of it. Then I breathed deeply and relaxed myself. You can’t believe how happy I was when I recalled the speech and finished it successfully.My teacher thought highly of my performance and I got much encouragement from my classmates. From then on, I have become more and more confident.

To build confidence, firstly we need to clearly know about our own advantages and try to develop them. It is the most important that we should put in enough effort to what we do. Then we can finally make it and gain more confidence.

【解析】

本文内容应包含表格中所提供的所有信息。灵活运用各种句式,采用不同的表达方式将各个要点完整地表述出来,注意主次分明,详略得当。语言力求准确,简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

点睛:这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如at the beginning of;know about;make a speech等;When ;Although ;Then ;From then on,等的运用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理;同时语言流畅,内容完整,是一篇不错的范文。

9.随着网络的发展、人们消费观念的转变,购物方式也在悄然的发生变化。“网购”已成为一种时尚,越来越多的学生也加入到网购群体中。请你根据以下表格的提示,写一篇网上购物的文章。

提示词汇:网购shopping online; 商品 goods; 导致 cause

注意:1.所表述的内容必须包含表格中的所有方面,可适当发挥;

2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称;

3.词数:100词左右,文章开头已给出,但不计入总数。

With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online.

【答案】With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has

become fashionable. Some of us students also join the group.

Shopping online has many advantages. Just with the click of a mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowds and save a lot of time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.

Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods that aren’t like the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money.

All in all, I love shopping online.

【解析】

本文属于材料作文,主要讲述网购的优点和缺点。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。

【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别适用一些亮点词句,如convenient,disadvantage,in good quality,figure out,have the chance to do,be attacked by,of course,take care of

等。增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。

点睛:写作时可以从以下几个方面做起:

认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求,抓住要点,词数符合要求。

构思提纲。有了提纲,我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的,而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥,因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。一切都准备就绪,就可以动笔写作了,在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词,使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外,还要检查语法结构是否合理,有无重复、啰嗦的语言,大小写是否正确,格式是否正确,词数是否符合要求等。

10.假如你是李华,请你根据以下提示用英语写一封保护大象的倡议书。

提示:陆地上最大的哺乳动物,可以活到80岁。目前数量在减少,因为:

1)人们砍伐森林,大象渐渐失去家园;

2)人们捕杀大象,获取象牙。

3)应如何保护它们(不少于三条)。

要求:1)恰当运用比较级和最高级;2)80词左右。倡议书的结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

参考词汇:哺乳动物mammal; 象牙ivory

Dear classmates

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I believe everyone's contribution (贡献) can make a big difference.

Yours,

Lihua 【答案】Dear classmates,

Elephants are the largest mammals on the land and they can live up to be eighty years. But now the number of the elephants is decreasing because of the following reasons. Firstly, people cut down trees in the forest, so elephants are losing their homes. Secondly, people also kill elephants for their ivory.

As a result, we need to do something to help them. First, we should plant more trees to build the homes for elephants. Second, we can put up post on the street to tell people that it is against the law to kill elephants. Or we can also hold some activities in some public places to spread the idea of protecting the elephants.

I believe everyone's contribution (贡献) can make a big difference.

Yours,

Lihua 【解析】

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