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英语作文讲解指导

英语作文讲解指导
英语作文讲解指导

书面表达指导

写作步骤:

一、审题:审题材(观点建议类、叙事类、写人物、食物介绍类)、人称、时态、要点。

二、词及要点:抓要点,列提纲(关键:平时积累)

三、连词成句:用连词成句的方法将上述要点的词语扩展成句子。

四、连句成文(结构规范化,过渡逻辑化, 词汇短语高级化,句式多样化)

五、检查修改,规范抄写。(书写)

具体细节:

1.结构框架:第一段:引入话题/ 阐述现象

第二至三段:阐述主要要点

最后一段:总结(表达建议、观点、祝愿、号召倡议……)

2.过渡:(段落之间,句子之间)

表列举递进:Firstly, to begin with, to start with, the most important of all….

Secondly, besides, in addition, what’s more (what’s worse), moreover, furthermore….

Finally, last but not least……

列举两个要点:for one thing….for another thing….; on the one hand….. on the other hand….

表个人观点:in my opinion, as far as I am concerned, from my point of view, in my view, personally, as we all know, it is generally believed that….

表达总结归纳:in general, in brief, in short, in conclusion, in a word, all in all….

表因果:so, since, therefore, thus, as a result, because of, as a result of, thanks to……

表转折:but, however, although, after all, in spite of, regardless of, …….

表目的:so that, in order that, in order to, so as to, for the purpose of ……

3. 词汇短语(词组优先原则,地道原则, 避免重复原则, 后、高、长原则—后学到、较高级、较长词汇)

1) A new railway is being built (is under construction) in my hometown.

2) Through traveling, I learned (obtained / gained)a lot of knowledge.

3) I like reading while my brother likes (enjoys) watching television.

4) Adj. 聪明的clever→smart→wise→bright→intelligent / 高兴的happy→ delighted → enjoyable

4. 句式结构:

1)将两个简单句合并为并列句。

You can do it. I can do it. One of us must do it. → (either … or…)

2) 主动句与被动句的互换。

People suggest that the meeting be put off. → (It is suggested that….)

3) 将陈述句改为感叹句。She is a clever girl.→ (how / what 改为感叹句)

4) 将陈述句改为倒装句。We can learn English well only in this way. → (only in this way 提前)

5)将两个简单句合并为复合句。(固定句式,定语从句,状语从句,名词性从句)

The news is true. The president will give our school a speech. → (It is true that….)

I passed the English exam. I was very happy all the day. → (转换成定语从句)

I learned from the story that as long as we are hardworking enough, we can realize our dreams. → (主语

推荐句型:

1.Nothing is more important than to receive education. / This is the best film that I have ever seen. (最

高级的表达)

2.There is no doubt that…. (without doubt) / It goes without saying that…. (毫无疑问的是….)

3.It is believed that……/ It is generally recognized that….

4.The harder you work, the more progress you will get. / Our country is becoming more and more

powerful. (比较级的两种结构)

5.否定副词/ only+ 副词/介词短语/ not only…but also…. 引起的半倒装。

6.It is of great importance to learn English well.

7.… is playing a more and more important role in…..

8. No matter how many difficulties , we should learn to overcome them independently.

9. I was walking along the street when I heard someone calling my name.

10. I find it hard to communicate with …..

11. It has been three years since we last saw our primary classmates.

12. As a saying / proverb goes “……”

13. 主语从句的几个句型:

What surprised\ satisfied\impressed me is that…

What I would like to suggest\ advise\ put forward is that…

What matters most is that …

What I learn\conclude from the story is that…

14. 常用的几句谚语:

Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧God helps those who help themselves. 自助者天助。

It’s never too old to learn. 活到老学到老Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成。

A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情。Every coin has two sides. 凡事都有两面。

15. 比较好用的词汇短语:instead / instead of / rather than ; have trouble/ difficulty in doing sth;

Make a difference to… ; have an influence on… ; pay attention to… ; not only… but also… ; get/have sth done; play an important role in….; unless…. (自己平时积累最重要)

优秀作文要素:1) 要点全面;2) 篇章分段和过渡清晰合理;

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