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中考英语冲刺：写作技巧(提高)

中考冲刺七：写作技巧(提高)

I. 书面表达真题演练。

(2014 南京)

假如你是来自英国某中学的交换生Daniel, 你想参加英文报纸Jinling Daily 广告中

请根据该广告内容，用英语写一封电子邮件，询问与该班相关的具体信息，邮件内容应包括：

1．培训班的起止时间以及周末是否上课；

2．参观机器人公司的具体安排

3．你还想了解到该培训班其他信息。

注意：

1．文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；

2．语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；

3．词数：80左右，邮件的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Sir/ Madam

I'm writing to ask for information about the robot course for beginners at Starlight School.

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Thank you for your time and I look forward to hearing from you soon.

(2014 河北)

请阅读Tony从美国发来的电子邮件，并根据所给提示和要求，以李华的名义回复。

提示：（1）Ask Tony something about his Chinese cooking.

（2）Answer his question about Mid-Autumn Festival.

要求：（1）邮件包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。

（2）邮件中不得涉及真实的人名、校名和地名。开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

（3）词数：60~80

参考词汇：the lunar calendar(阴历), moon cake, watch the moon, the symbol of reunion(团圆的象征)

(2015 泰安)

假如你是某中学初三（1）班班长李华，请你为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文；记述前天主题班会“To be sent to school or not”的讨论情况。

内容要点：

1．部分同学认为上学应该接送，省时又安全。

2．部分学生认为步行或骑自行车是最好的方式，环保又健身。

3．你的看法和建议。

注意：1．词数：80-100；

2．可是当发挥，以使行文连贯；

3．文中不要出现真实校名和人名。

To Be Sent To School Or Not

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(2015 福州)

假设你是李杰，正通过 e-mail 和美国友好姐妹校的朋友 Tom 交流校纪班规，请你用英语向他介绍下面的“班级公约”。

要求：

1、内容完整，书写清楚，

表达通顺，书写规范；

2、请勿逐字翻译，词数90左右，

不包含已给出的句子的词数。

参考词汇：school uniform; be active in thinking

Dear Tom,

I’d like to introduce my class rules made by us all. First, we should …

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It’s our duty to follow all the rules above. What about yours? Please write soon.

Yours,

Li Jie

II. 书面表达综合演练。

作文一：

在和谐社会里，人与人之间的互帮互助已构成我们生活中的重要组成部分。下周英国友好学校将来你校访问，你校英语俱乐部将举行一次以“Helping Each Other Makes the World Wonderful”为主题的英语演讲比赛。假如李智要参加演讲比赛，请你以“李智”的名义用英语写一篇讲稿。内容要点提示：

1．帮助同学——友谊;

2．帮助老人——幸福;

3．帮助病人——快乐;

4．帮助别人体会……

要求：

1．词数：80词左右。正文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数;

2．文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。

Helping Each Other Makes the World Wonderful Hello, everyone. I’m Li Zhi. It’s nice to speak about help

here．___________________________

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__________________________________________________________Thank you for your listening.

作文二：

在今年的“地球一小时(Earth Hour)”活动中，中国很多城市的人们都自觉熄灯一小时，体现了低碳生活的新理念。假定你是CCTV9的记者，请你根据以下采访信息用英语写一篇80词左右的新闻稿。

注意：部分内容已为你写好，不计入总词数。

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Many people share with us their plans.

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参考词汇：小组讨论 group work 表达 express

要求：1．词数：80-100个。

2．开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

作文四：

某英语网站进行了一次中学生健康情况调查，发现很多中学生的健康状况令人担忧。主要原因有：饮食结构不合理；体育锻炼不足；心理压力大，不能与人很好地沟通等等。为此，他们发起了题为How to Keep Fit的征文活动，倡导中学生的健康生活方式。请你写一篇80词左右的英语短文，说明如何保持身体健康。

How to Keep Fit

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作文五：

一说到考试，同学们总有讲不完的故事。在你的记忆中，那些发生在考场内外的故事，一定有使你至今感慨、难忘的吧?请以考试为话题，写一篇题为“An Unforgettable (难忘的) Experience”的短文。

以下提示词语可能对你有帮助 (可根据需要选用)：final exam, mid-term exam, nervous, warm words, relax, confident, give the best performance (do well), fail .....

要求：100词左右

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答案与解析

【答案与解析】I. 书面表达真题演练。

(2014 南京)

Dear Sir/ Madam

I'm writing to ask for information about the robot course for beginners at Starlight School.

Firstly, I'd like to know more about the course arrangement. For example, could you tell me how long the course will last? I prefer to know if there is any class for the weekend. Next, I'm interested in the visits to Friendly Robots Company. Would you tell me whether I need to pay? Finally, I wonder whether I'll be able to design a robot myself at the end of the course.

Thank you for your time and I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully

Daniel

(2014 河北)

Hi, Tony,

Good to hear from you! It's amazing that you're learning Chinese cooking. Why are you interested in it? How are you learning? And what can you cook? Hope to enjoy your dishes next time!

Yes, we really have Mid-Autumn Festival. It's on August 15th of the lunar calendar. It's one of the most important festivals in China. All the family members get together for a big dinner that day. We usually eat moon cakes while watching the moon at night. We believe the full moon is the symbol of reunion.

Bye for now,

Li Hua

(2015 泰安)

We had a discussion about whether we should be sent to school or not. We have two main ideas.

Some students think that it can save the students’ time if parents send them to school. And parents want to make sure the students are safe, especially when the weather is terrible.

However, our city is more and more crowded and polluted, so other students think going to school on foot or by bike is the best way. First of all, walking to school is a wonderful way to exercise and it’s good for our health. What’s more, if we walk, or ride a bike, there will be fewer cars in the city. More walking and less driving help make our city cleaner. The streets won’t be as crowded as they are now.

I hope more and more students will go to school on foot or by bike.

(2015 福州)

Dear Tom,

I’d like to introduce my class rules made by us all. First, we should come to school on time in school uniforms. It’s polite to greet our teachers when we meet them. Second, we must listen carefully in class and be active in thinking. Also, we ought to do our homework carefully and hand it in on time. Third, we need clean

the classroom often and always keep it clean. And we’re required to turn off lights and close windows and doors before we leave. Fourth, being friendly is important. We’re supposed to get along well and help each other to make progress together. It’s our duty to follow all the rules above. What about yours? Please write soon.

Yours,

Li Jie

II. 书面表达综合演练。

作文一：

〔解析〕

本题是命题作文，根据汉语提示，简述乐于助人的好处，号召大家要积极参与乐于助人活动，从而使我们的世界更美好。

One possible version:

Helping Each Other Makes the World Wonderful Hello, everyone. I’m Li Zhi. It’s nice to speak about help here. In our life we often help others and also get help from others. When we help our classmates with their study and other things, we can develop our friendship. If we give a hand to old people, we can understand the meaning of pleasure. As we know, patient in our life. I think we can get much when we help the people around us. As the saying goes, “Giving is much better than receiving.”

作文二：

〔解析〕

本题通过英文图表提示，要考生叙述地球一小时活动的情况，在关灯一小时，人们正在做什么有意义的活动，以后打算做什么活动来节约能源，保护环境，使我们的地球家园更美好。

One possible version:

Thank you for joining CCTV’s Around China show! Now it’s 8:45 p. m. during the famous Earth Hour. People in many cities have turned off their lights and are having a very special time. In shanghai, some people are taking a walk with their family. They feel very relaxed. In Beijing, some people are having a nice talk with their friends. And in Ningbo, some young people are holding a party in the park, singing and dancing. Without lights, people can also enjoy themselves.

Many people share with us their plans. Some say they will spend more time with

their family and friends. Others say they will try their best to protect the environment, like planting more trees, saving water and so on. What’s more, some people tell me that they will use paper both sides (drive less, ride bikes, use plastic bags less…) in their daily life.

Liu Peng

Yours,

Li Ming

作文三：

〔解析〕

本题要求写一封回信，帮Steve解决问题，要根据汉语提示要点去写，层次要清晰，句意不要重复，注意语气诚挚，句式多样。

One possible version:

Dear Steve,

I’ve learned your problem．I think you should be active in group work in class and be brave enough to express your ideas．Try to talk with your classmates at break．If you want to get on well with your classmates, don’t forget to say hello when you meet them．Being friendly and helpful is also very important．You need to take part in all kinds of class activities, such as sports meeting, football games and singing competitions．I’m sure you will soon be among friends.

Best wishes

Diana

作文四：

〔解析〕

本题要求就中学生健康问题进行简单阐述，中学生如何保持健康，具体采取的措施，内容要具体，层次要清晰，要具有可行性。分步措施衔接要自然，通过连接词自然过渡。

One possible version:

How to Keep Fit

As we all know，health is very important．But how to keep fit? Firstly, we should have a good diet．That’s eating more fresh fruit and vegetables, but less junk food. Drink more water instead of coke or other unhealthy drinks. Secondly, it’s good

for us to take more exercise, such as running, walking, ball games and so on. At last, we should learn to relax ourselves. We can listen to some light music, chat with families or friends and have a good sleep. To keep fit is not difficult if you care it a lot.

作文五：

〔解析〕

本题要求写有关你经历的无数次考试中的一次难忘的经历，这次考试经历给你的启示。内容要具体真实，最好是亲身经历的，难忘的记忆。层次要清晰，语句要规范通顺。词数符合要求。

One possible version:

Among many exam experiences, I still remember what happened in the final exam last term.

In the past I always felt nervous at the beginning of exams. And because of this, I never gave the best performance. But in the last final exam, when I got the paper, I was surprised to see some warm words on the paper, “Hi, everyone. Believe in yourself and you will do best. Good luck.” Seeing these words, the feeling of nervousness soon disappeared and I became confident. I did best that time.

Ever since then, whenever I have exams, these simple but warm words always encourage me and make me feel confident.