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新托福写作注意事项

新托福写作题错误观点

错误方法一：在准备TWE185题库或者准备Barron、delta、longman等辅导材

料的题目。

据了解，这些题目不是说没有价值，而是现在这些材料已经完全被证明与现行

的新托福考试不能完全接轨了，尤其是当我们看到kaplan里面的某些题目，竟然是在讨论诸如爱情之类的问题的时候，

我们只能感叹某些参考书的专业度实在需要极强，那么TWE185就完全没有价值了么当然不是，在新托福刚刚出现的时候，人们就已经发现其实新托福考试之

中的很多口语题目就是出自于原来的TWE的185

题库，因此拿原来老托福的185题库来准备我们现在的口语是非常合适的，但

是如果你仍然在用这些TWE185题目在准备现在的独立作文的话，那么只能说你已经站在起跑线的后面了。

错误方法二：字数越多越好

当我们单纯的看到“字数越多越好”的时候，可以说这是有一定的道理的，因

为如果你的字数越多，那么就越能更好的阐明自己的观点，但是很多考友特别

喜欢将这种思路发挥到极致。要知道其实

托福作文如果能达到350字-450字就已经很好了，只要达到这个范围内基本上

就不会对你的分数产生任何负面的影响了。当然如果你的字数少于300字的话，那么很有可能对你的作文产生负面影响，但是

只要是300字以上就问题不大了。当然还会马上有人问，如果我的作文字数超

过了500字呢说真的，如果你能有写500字的能力，那么为什么不省下来一些

时间，来检查一下自己这篇作文呢

因为当作文达到500字的时候，绝对已经高于托福所要求的字数了，再写多一

点已经不会提升你的分数了，当然也不会使你的分数降低。因此，这个时候不

如好好修改一下已经写过的文章，或者把写

过的文章好好润润色，加入一些强调句式或者倒装句，这样会使自己的文章看上去更有生气，作文就好像是女人，这个世界上没有丑女人，只有懒女人。就像只要女人好好打扮就一定会光彩照人一样，

我们的作文只要好好打扮也一定会让人感觉光彩夺目的。因此，我们只要是能写到350字以上，我们在字数这一点上基本上就完成了任务，完全没有一定让自己的作文字数超过500字，要知道“越多越好

”也是要有个度的。

错误方法三：刚开始写作文，就要限定时间。

当我们刚刚开始准备作文的时候，由于国内英语论坛教育只注重输入而不注重输出的特点决定了，我们现在国内的很多考友们，有可能在真正准备新托福考试的作文之前有可能从来都没有写过几篇

作文，因此当面的托福考试这么多字数的要求的时候，常常会觉得自己无所适从。因此很多人，在准备不充分的情况下就限定自己一定要在规定的30分钟时间之内，完成托福作文。殊不知，任何一个考

试都是要循序渐进的，作文也是如此。当我们刚开始准备作文的时候，首先要追求的是成功率，也就是完成度，而不是时间。换句话说，在准备托福以及SAT作文的前期，首先要做的，是完成作文，也就

是不管花多少时间，一定要让自己的作文达到300字以上，而且如果自己准备考试的时间比较充分的话，最好刚开始的3-5篇作文都是不给自己限定时间，首先追求的是能把作文写完，然后当我们感觉有

话可说的时候，在提升自己的写作速度，换句话说也就是限定自己在30分钟之内完成自己的独立作文。

错误方法四：作文模板会使我的作文产生低分。这里面之所以很多人会认为作文模板会使自己的作文出现低分，那是因为我们有太多的人用到的模板都是要么从网络上，要么从自己的老师那里得到的模板，要知道网络上的模板，很多人是直接拿

过来就用的，哪怕是培训机构的老师给的模板，也不可能是每个班都给你新的模板，也一定是有无数的学生都用过这个模板了。因此，当考官看到再看到同样的模板的时候，一定会给你一个不是特别好

的分数，这是让我们很容易理解。那么模板就不能用了么当然不是，模板可以用，而且也是能够帮助你的高分。关键在于模板一定要是自己原创的，只有这样才能让考官眼前一亮，为自己赢得一个高分

，要知道，高分都是有理由的，要给自己创造一个的高分的理由!

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