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雅思小作文题干改写解析

雅思小作文题干改写解析
雅思小作文题干改写解析

杭州朗阁为您解析雅思小作文题干改写

朗阁海外考试研究中心马真

图表题是备考雅思写作小作文中常见的题型之一。通常小作文要求字数不低于150个单词,并且官方建议写作时间不超过20分钟,分值约占写作部分的三分之一。由于占分比例比大作文低,经常被很多考生所忽略。但事实上,这类题型非常好拿分,因为其描述语言相对大作文来说更为固定,句型和用词上也相对较单一,如果考生能掌握固定的写法,和一些相应的语言搭配,往往更容易掌握这种题型,因此,这类题型其实是短期内提高分数的一个突破口。今天,我们先来学习一下小作文之题干改写的策略。

雅思小作文图表题题型包括线图、饼图、柱状图和表格这四种题型,外加一种组合图,比如考试时同时出现一张线图,和一张柱状图。无论是写哪一种图形,我们在考试时,第一句话永远都是改写题干。这就是小作文的固定套路,也是一个得分点。但是笔者在实际教学时发现,有很多同学不知道如何去改,改哪些地方,那么今天我们就来仔细谈一下如何提高这一部分。要知道,题干改写是文章的开头第一句话,一个良好的开头是高分的一半。我们拿真题来举个例子:

剑3真题:The graph blew shows the unemployment rates in the US and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999.

以上这句话是考试时所给的题干,很多没有经过培训的同学看到这种题干就会照抄,这样做当然会扣分。因此,我们在备考时,大家需要总结这样的题干应该如何去改写,如总结题干中的show我们应该怎么处理,题干中的时间表达between March 1993 and March 1999应该如何去改写。

【高分版】The graph indicates the jobless rates in the US and Japan from March 1993 to March 1999.

大家会发现,高分同学的改法,基本将原来的题干主语,谓语,和宾语部分都做了改写,并同时保持语法正确,语意没有变化,句型精练不罗嗦。将原来的show改成了indicate 并注意加了第三人称‘s’。尤其需注意的是,高分同学需要考虑失业率the unemployment

rates如何去改写更好,让自己的语言尽可能地道。但是,很多同学为了追求华丽用词,反而会越改越错,如果实在吃不准自己的用词,建议不要作太大改动,将能改动的时间和show 尽可能改掉,其余的还是保留,尤其是只需要考5.5分就够了的同学。毕竟让考官看懂你在写什么,才是最重要的。

【保本版】需要考5.5分,基础很差的同学可以参考。

The (line可加也可以不加)graph indicates(这个词大家背一下谁都能会,因此还是改了)the unemployment(这个词不会改,那就放着不要动)rates in the US and Japan from March 1993 to March 1999.(最后时间from…to改写难度不大,因此改掉)

虽然改动得不多,不能加太多分,但是毕竟没有错误,这样可以保住开头第一句不错,至少语法分是不会被扣了。考试时,大家可根据自己的水平,衡量采取哪个版本,但是在平时,我们还是应该多积累高分版本的改法。

【低分版】反面教材,请大家引以为戒,不要犯类似错误。

The graph below show the unemployment rate in the US and Japan during 7 years from March 1993 to March 1999.

不知道细心的同学有没有发现,这个开头存在很多小错误,下面我们来简单分析一下。

常见错误一:below。这个below其实是不用写的,大家想一下,考官出题的时候题干下面放了一张图。但考生在写作文的时候,文章下面有图吗?因此这个below建议去掉。

常见错误二:show。很多语法不好的同学一定要注意,这个词粗看好像没有什么问题,很多同学看到这个词,以为它是错在照抄了题干。其实不然,细心的同学会发现这句话主语是The graph第三人称单数,而谓语动词写的却是show, 犯了最基本的语法错误,应该改为shows。

常见错误三:句子中将年份数错,误以为93年也算一年,因此算成了7年,这个大家一定要小心,其实跨度是6年。另外,时间状语完全可以写得简单一点,不需要添加during … years。可以将这个“在…年间”(during…years)放在第二句话的开头,用来引出第一段第二句话的总趋势(Overview)。例如:

The graph indicates the jobless rates in the US and Japan from March 1993 to March 1999. Over the span of six years(在总的六年间), the US rate experienced a downward trend while Japan saw an opposite trend.

以下笔者再提供一些常见的开头形式:

1. 如果表格的数据较多,我们就可以这样改写:

The table gives information about…

The table provides the details regarding the underground rail way systems in six cities. (注意:这里六个城市没有必要一个一个写出来)

2. 直接描述比例或数量

The chart shows the percentage of British households with a range of consumer durables from 1972 to 1983.

3. 遇到地图题或流程图我们可以这样改:

The diagram illustrates how the village changed from 1970 to 2000

朗阁海外考试研究中心建议考生们在备考时要多总结题干的改写方法,总结相关的用词,在考试时,在尽可能保证不错的基础上,再去追求高分,相信一定能在开头给考官留下一个好印象。

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