四级作文批改范例
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic
Reading Selectively or Extensively? You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1．有人认为读书要有选择；
2．有人认为应当博览群书；
3．我的看法。
似乎很经典的作文题目啊，帮忙改一下，打个分吧。第一篇四级作文，不要怕打击我啊。我要开始了
Reading Selectively or Extensively
With people's living standard rising sharply, reading is playing an increasingly important role in our daily life. At the same time, reading selectively or extensively has become a hot topic and heated debates are right on their way.
People's opinions vary from person to person. Some people（后面有people，这里就可以直接用some,避免重复）suggest that people should read selectively, especially classic books. There is an old saying:" A good book is a good friend. (这句引用的好！)" It's the experience real and splendid wisdom of our forefathers（experience这里不生动）. However, it's correct in many cases even today. A good book can make a difference. Besides, a bad book can bow the heart and turn the spirit back to dust.
On the contrary, there are some people in favor of reading extensively, from novel to essay(优秀的文章一定是言之有物，这样会更具体). They say that only in this way can
people have a wide range of knowledge（好！把课上的东西用上了。）.
Everything has the pros and cons, and reading is not an exceptation (书写错误一定要避免)exception. It also has advantages and disadvantages. As far as I'm concerned, reading selectively is advantageous and is helpful to strengthening their language skills and cognitive abilities. (前面一句话是短句，这句就应该用个并列句或复合句调剂一下，这样才有节奏). A good book can make us receive power,beauty,cheer,hope and courage from men, （这个排比不错，但后面from men 从何而来呀？）and a bad book one（注意前面已经出现了good book,这里用个代词替换）can bring large quantities of harms to our life.（这个句子很地道）In a word, only by reading selectively can we benefit a lot from reading books!
写得不错！看得出很用心，句子也很考究，很多都有出处。坚持写下去，前提是必须要找到优秀的范文进行模仿练习，而不是主观创造。希望你能一直坚持下去。四六级的我就不多说了，给你发过去托福作文185篇文章，好好研究，吸取好的东西。希望对你有用。分数就不打了，现在还不到谈论分数的时候。像这样坚持几个月到时候给你的就是满分。
另外，如果有新的资料请发到这里来吧~谢了
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The Most Impressing Course in My College Life During the two years of college life, I have attended many special courses, among which the most impressed one is psychology. I still remembered the days when I was fed up with my major Math, which frustrated me so much. Till I fortunately select one of the most fascinating optional courses lectured by Professor Wang. Time gone back to the first class of Mr. Wang, I found a little old man came in the classroom with a thick book of psychology. Mysteriously, I first unveiled and explored the myth within it by the vivid demonstration of Mr. Wang, and became fascinated with this course. In the following days, it Mr. Wang's lectures give us an insight into psychological phenomenons reflected in ordinary people’s daily lives by illustrating examples in reality. To be frank, it is the psychology class that enlightens my soul of exploring the unknown world and stimulate my desire to learn. Undoubtedly, psychology is the most impressing course for me in college. WeChat, also called Weixin in Chinese, is a social mobile application with voice and text messaging communication services. The app of WeChat is available on Android and iPhone phones covering people from more than 100 countries. WeChat has become increasingly popular among people of all ages, especially in China, because of its instant messaging and multifunctions. WeChat provides some basic functions, including various ways of instant messaging, such as text messages, voice messages, walkie talkies and free stickers. Users can also send pictures, videos, namecards, coupons and lucky money packages to anyone in the contact lists. Besides, WeChat enables group chat, free call, video call, moments sharing and so on. As WeChat supports wifi and 3G network, users can make some free calls or video calls easily by pressing the specified button, which just costs a little. In addition, WeChat holds many other attractive functions. For instance, the user can pay via WeChat. Wechat supports users to register as a public accounts. In China, WeChat public accounts have become a common service or promotion platform for the government, news media and companies. Specific public account subscribers utilize the platforms for different aspects, like hospital preregistration and credit card service, etc. Combining convenient multifunctions and low cost, WeChat seems to seize the chance to get great popularity throughout the world. As it keeps the ability of creativity and updates the functions periodically, more and more people are likely to become WeChat users, and that makes the earth becomes a much smaller world. As a humorous saying goes “Quitting smoke is the easiest thing in the world, I have done it hundreds of times”. It reminds me that a strong will plays a significant role in our life. I firmly believe that “Where there is a will, there is a way”. In terms of the academic performance, a strong will exerts a great influence on student’s academic performances. A strong will of acquiring the knowledge and resisting the temptation of entertainment motivates students to try their best in order to pursue the academic excellence. When it comes to the musical mastery, it is well known that the key to acquiring proficiency in musical instrument is a strong will of repetition. For example, the famous pianist Lang Lang plays the piano from 5am