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高考英语书面表达专题语料库(附10年真题作文)

高考英语书面表达专题语料库(附10年真题作文)
高考英语书面表达专题语料库(附10年真题作文)

书面表达专题

?高考\联考作文阅卷:

1.根本不可能严格按照范文标准来改,因为速度极快(平均1分钟10份卷子),尤其是改到最后,教师的

基本评价标准是:书写——首尾——看点(仅看是否说到,具体内容忽略)——打分。说是双阅(±3-4分),但是因为有速度要求,又怕被阅卷组长说,因此大家会以17分作为基础,主要看书写和前几句表现出的所谓“英语水平素养”来打分,甚至出现过联考作文被泄露,老师没有看出来而将和范文一样的作文打了高分。

2.故书写切记要工整,不要有涂改痕迹。

3.答的点一定要写的非常明显,不要让老师去找。如第一、第二、第三。

4.首段看得较为细,以此判断你的整个英语水平素养作为给分主要依据——故要清晰出彩,而且绝对不能

有错。

5.文章格式——称呼→寒暄→正文→结尾→客套→落款,3段式。

书信类10大话题(去模板化)

1. 感谢信

2. 祝贺信

3. 投诉信

4. 邀请信(含通知、告示)

5. 询问信

6. 回复信

7. 求职信

8. 申请信

9. 建议信

10. 道歉信

?固定格式(统一用以下格式,不再删改增添了!)

1.称呼:Dear XX \ Dear Sir or Madam\ To whom it may concern “敬启者”(读者身份不明时)

2.开头:

问候:I hope this letter finds you well.(见字如面)\How’s everything going?

+

开门见山型:(用于不需表达感情色彩的信)如:单纯回复他人的询问,或者是单方面写信给他人说事情(非回信),较为formal。一句话即可。

I am writing in response to … (your advertisement for a temporary position as a waiter\your inquiry

about…) \to do (tell \inform you…)

客套寒暄型:(用于需要表达感情色彩的信)如:如感谢信、祝贺信或者带有情感色彩的回复信,较为casual。

两句话组成:(当时)心情描述或(当前)情况描述+ 写信目的(1.表达感情或2.其他可能的更为具体目的)

How … (delighted\excited\honored\grateful\angry) I was when I … (learnt that…\received your letter of congratulations\invitation\apology). 或I am now back to China safe and sound.

+

I am writing to convey\express my 情感词(gratitude\congratulations\pity\complaint)to you

for…(your kindness\timely help) 如果有其他具体目的的话再加:and 具体目的…(ask if it is

possible for you to give me some information about…)

至于用哪种,全看你是否需要表达(或是否适合表达)情感而定

3.表示几点(句子之间的连接词):

第一:To begin with (First of all\Firstly),

第二以及其他点:Furthermore\ Additionally (In addition\ What’s more\Besides\Secondly)

最后:Last but not least“最后但同样重要的一点是”(Eventually \Lastly\In conclusion\Thirdly)

4.表示观点:From my perspective

5.解释原因:

The reasons are as follows.

This can be explained by the following reasons.

There are generally 3 factors accounting for it.

Several reasons may account for this phenomenon (these phenomena) \trend\change\problem…

6.举例子:For instance, (Take myself as an example)

7.结尾寒暄(选1):

Look forward with hope to doing\your early reply. (较为随意的信)

I would highly appreciate it if you could … and reply at your early convenience. (较为正式的信)

8.落款:yours sincerely, \ sincerely yours,

10个话题语料

(结合近10年高考总结出,几乎涵盖此类话题)

话题1:感谢信

Para1:(选1)

I would like to convey my sincere thanks to you for … (your kindness when I participated in the exchange program in the America.)

I am writing to thank you for … (your timely help)

I am writing to express my gratitude to you for…

I felt extremely grateful that + clause

Para2:(选1)

Your generosity and hospitality made it possible that…

Thank you for setting aside time to help me. I really appreciate your kindness and want to assure you that I am more willing to help you in the future.

Para3:

Please accept my thank you again.

话题2:祝贺信

Para1:

I am writing to convey my warm congratulations on… (your admission to a postgraduate\undergraduate program at Fudan university.)

Para2:

I know this is surely owing to your diligence and intelligence. It is great to know that you have achieved the goal you set for yourself. It is absolutely an award that you richly deserve.

With your ability and talent, I am so sure that you will be a success in whatever you undertake.

Para3:

Congratulations again. I wish you all the best (一切顺利,万事如意)in your future life and study\career.

话题3:投诉信

Para1:

I am writing to make a complaint against … (your bad delivery and disappointing service)

Para2:

I hate to have to say this, but … (your production doesn’t perform very well), which is causing me inconvenience and is more than I can tolerate.

Para3:

I do hope you can take measures to solve my problem and I would highly appreciate it if you could change a new one or get a refund(退款) for me.

I can be reached during the day at 666333. Look forward with hope to your early reply.

话题4:邀请信(通知、通告)

——通知的目的就是要invite or call for people,本质上是邀请信一类

Para1:

On behalf of … (our school\company\family\class), I feel deeply honored to invite (inform) (2词,视具体情况选1)you to … (be present at our charity sale \to join us\ to deliver(传送、发表)us a speech on\to participate in our summer camp as a volunteer\to take part in our opening ceremony)

Some details\information\introduction (be) listed as follows.

Para2:

交代时间、地点,说明活动安排:

The charity sale will be held\scheduled at … (Tianli school), located at No.1 Xianglin road, at 9:00 am on December 27th ,2017, which will last 2 days. (插一个非限制定语从句)

时间、地点的表达:at … (place) at … (time) on… (date)

给被邀请者提供的东西以及酬劳(和对其的具体要求)

During your stay in our university, we will offer you a two-bedroom flat on the campus. In addition, the department will also offer you a sum of 2000 yuan as your lecture fees. And you are expected to do … (give us a speech on Chinese culture)

(呼吁其积极参与)并且请被邀请者给予及时反馈我们好进一步安排

(We do hope you can join us \take an active part in …) Please be assured that you will be able to attend by advising us of your time, so that we can complete our agenda (日程)and arrange for you to be met. advise sb of sth = inform sb of sth = tell sb sth

Para3:

We would appreciate it very much if you could accept our invitation and reply at your early convenience. Your participation will be warmly welcome.

话题5:询问信

Para1:

是具体情况看是否需要简单介绍自己

(I am writing to make a brief self-introduction and) wonder if it is convenient\possible for you to provide me with some information regarding \in regard to\ in reference to… (the campus life in your country) 不用about 了!

Para2:

I would appreciate it if you could give me more detailed information about… as well as… (what I need to pay attention to when I go abroad.)

Para3:

I would be extremely grateful (I would highly appreciate it的同义替换) if you could give me some advice.

话题6:回复信(回复祝贺、邀请、询问、招聘……)

——涵盖最广的一类

Para1:

l不需表达情感:开门见山型(见上)

l需要表达情感:客套寒暄型(见上)

由于涵盖最广,只能将开头固定化,后面只能根据具体话题发挥。

如:

How delighted and honored I was when I received your letter of congratulations. I am writing to express my thanks to you for your nice words on my winning the contest and in response to your inquiry about the skills of translation. They are as follows.

To begin with,

Furthermore,

Last but not least,

话题7:求职信

Para1:

I am applying for the vacancy\post\position\job of… advertised in … (place) on… (date)

I feel I am well qualified (to do… \ for…) for the following reasons.

Para2:

Along with my education, I have had some related working experience in… which contributes to my qualification for this job.

I also have a good command of English and be enthusiastic in doing …, which, I think, will live up to the requirements set by your company.

Para3:

I have enclosed a copy of my resume and will gladly provide any further information you may require.

Any favorable consideration would be highly appreciated.

I would be available during the day at 1234567. Please contact me at your early convenience. Thank you again for your time.

话题8:申请信(类似求职信,但不见得申请职位,可能是其他)

Para1:

I am writing to you in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity to … (further my education)

Para2:

Along with my education, I have had …

I also have a good command of …, which, I think, will live up to the requirements set by your ...

Para3:

I would be extremely grateful if you could give my request favorable consideration.

I would be available during the day at 1234567. Please contact me at your early convenience. Thank you again for your time.

话题9:建议信

Para1:

I am writing to offer my advice\proposals concerning \regarding \in regard to\ in reference to… (school violence\campus bullying )

Para2:

I particularly advise you to do… \ suggest that you (should) do…

Para3:

Thank you for your attention. Please take good consideration of my advice.

话题10:道歉信

Para1:

I am terribly sorry to tell you that I am unable to … (attend your wedding ceremony.)

I must apologize for my … (absent)

Para2:

This is owing to the fact that …

To solve the problem, I would like to …

Para3:

I hope you will accept my sincere apologies.

I hope that this is a satisfactory solution to the problem.

2010 全国I卷

第二节书面表达(满分25分)(注意:在试题卷上作答无效

.........)(通知,本质就是邀请信!)假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华。你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛(speech contest),希望附近某大学的外籍教师Smith女士来做评委。请参照以下比赛通知给她写一封信。

2010 全国II卷

第三节书面表达(满分30分)(Peter之前就表示想来,现在有机会了,故本质是通知(邀请信))假设你是李华,你的美国笔友Peter曾表示希望来中国教书。你校现在需招聘外教,请给他写封信,告知招聘信息。内容主要包括:

1.教授课程:英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日英语等

2.授课对象:高中生(至少三年英语基础)

3.工作量:

—每周12学时,任选三门课

—担任学生英语俱乐部或英语校报顾问(advisor)

2011 全国I卷

第二节书面表达(满分25分)(注意:在试卷上作答无效

........) (申请信)

假定你是李华,正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程,遇到一些困难,希望得到学校辅导中心(Learning Center)的帮助。根据学校规定,你需书面预约,请按下列要点写一封信:

1.本人简介:

2.求助内容;

3.约定时间;

4. 你的联系方式(Email:lihua@1236 com;Phone:12345678)。

2011 全国II卷

第三节书面表达(满分30分)

假定你是李华,你所喜爱的Global Mirror周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见.请你依据以下内容给主编写封信,内容主要包括:(祝贺信)

1.说明你是该报的忠实读者

2.赞赏该报优点:

1)兼顾国内外新闻

2)介绍名人成功故事

3.提出建议:

刊登指导英语学习的文章

2012 全国I卷

第二节书面表达(满分25分)

假定你是李华,从互联网((the Internet)上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore) 举办夏令营,欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。(申请信)

内容主要包括:

1.自我介绍(包括英语能力);

2.参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家);

3.希望获准。

2012 全国II卷(邀请信)

假定你是李华。你班同学决定为小明举办生日聚会。请你写信邀请外教Susan参加,要点包括:

⒈ 时间:周五晚8点至9点

⒉ 地点:学生俱乐部

⒊ 内容:生日歌、蛋糕、游戏等

⒋ 要求:备小礼物

2012 四川卷(建议信)

第一节书面表达(满分35分)

假如你是大学一年级新生李华。开学之初,你的英语老师Ms Li希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况,并征求教学建议。请按以下要点用英语给她写一封信。

1. 对英语学习的认识;

2. 自己目前的英语水平;

3. 自己英语学习存在的主要问题;

4. 对英语教学的两点建议。

2013 全国I卷

第二节书面表达(满分25分)(询问信)

假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信,告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会,带去他想要的那幅中国画,同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明:

李明:高个子,戴眼镜

航班号:CA985

到达:8月6日上午11:30

2013 全国II卷

第二节书面表达(满分25分)(询问信)

假定你是李华,自制一些中国结(Chinese knot)。给开网店的美国朋友Tom写封信,请他代卖,要点包括:

1.外观(尺寸、颜色、材料)

2.象征意义

3.价格

2014 全国I卷

第二节书面表达(满分25分)(询问信)

假定你是李华,计划暑假期间去英国学习英语,为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意,请给该校写封信,询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)

2014 全国II卷

第二节书面表达(25分) (不是信,写想象作文)

一家英语报社向中学生征文,主题是“十年后的我”、请根据下列要求和你的想象完成短文、

1、家庭

2、工作

3、业余生活

2014 四川卷

笫三节书面表达(共35分)(回复信)

假设你是李夏,你的美国笔友Sam来信关心你参加高考的情况,请根据以下要点回信告知。

1. 考试日期与科目;

2. 考试准备情况;

3. 考试吋的状态;

4. 对试题的感受;

5. 可能的考试结果

2015 全国I卷

第二节书面表达(归到询问一类)

假定你是李华,你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿,要点如下:

1. 栏目介绍;

2. 稿件内容;

3. 稿件长度:约400 词;

4. 交稿日期:6 月28 日前。

2015 全国II卷

第二节书面表达(满分25分)(邀请信)

假如你是李华,计划和同学去敬老院(nursing home)陪老人们过重阳节(the Double Ninth Festival)。请给外教露西写封邮件,邀她一同前往,内容包括:

1.出发及返回时间;

2.活动:包饺子、表演节目等。

2016 全国I卷

第二节书面表达(满分25分)(询问信)

假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职,已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教Ms Jenkins 写信,请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。

2016 全国II卷(询问+邀请信)请他提供作品,不是命令他,本质是询问和邀请他提供作品参展。

假定你是李华,你校摄影俱乐部(photography club)将举办国际中学生摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信。请他提供作品。信的内容包括:

1.主题:环境保护;

2.展览时间;

3.投稿邮箱:intlphotoshow@https://www.wendangku.net/doc/d48669740.html,

2016 全国III卷(道歉信)

第二节书面表达(满分25分)

假定你是李华,与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店,因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:1.表示歉意;

2.说明原因;

3.另约时间。

2017 全国I卷(通知)

第二节书面表达(满分25分)

假定你是李华,正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括:1.时间和地点;

2.内容:学习唐诗;

3.课前准备:简要了解唐朝的历史。

2017 全国II卷(邀请信)

第二节书面表达(满分25分)

假定你是李华,想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:

1. 展览时间、地点;

2. 展览内容。

2017 全国III卷(邀请信)

第二节书面表达(满分25分)

假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀请他加入,内容包括:

1. 球队活动;

2. 报名方式及截止日期。

2018 全国I卷(回复信)

第二节书面表达(满分25分)

假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客,发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件,内容包括:

1.到达时间;

2.合适的礼物;

3.餐桌礼仪。

2018 全国II卷(通知)

第二节书面表达(满分25分)

你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知,请大家观看一部英文短片Growing Together, 内容包括:

1. 短片内容:学校的发展;

2. 放映时间、地点;

3. 欢迎对短片提出意见。

2018 全国III卷(回复信)

第二节书面表达(满分25分)

假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信,内容包括:

1. 学校的体育场馆;

2. 主要的运动项目;

3. 你喜欢的项目。

2019 全国I卷(申请信)

第二节书面表达(满分25分)

假定你是李华,暑假在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括:

1.写信目的;

2.个人优势;

3.能做的事情。

2019 全国II卷(通知\邀请信)

第二节书面表达(满分25分)

假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛,内容包括:

1.比赛信息;

2. 赛前准备;

3. 表达期待。

2019 全国III卷(邀请信)

第二节书面表达(满分25分)

假定你是李华,你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加,内容包括:

1. 时间;

2. 活动安排;

3. 欢迎他表演节目。

2018届高考英语书面表达解析及写作技巧

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