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建议信、求助信、投诉信写作指导及模板

建议信、求助信、投诉信写作指导及模板
建议信、求助信、投诉信写作指导及模板

建议信(Letter of suggestion)

一、简介

(1) 建议信写作注意事项

写作目的是提出建议或忠告。不是投诉信,观点要合情合理,注意礼貌当先。

(2) 写作方法

①首段:

a.简介自己,不要罗嗦;

b.说明目的,注意语气。

②主体:

a.提出具体建议;

b.首先肯定优点,再写改进内容,否则变成投诉信;

c.经常进行交流,注意对方感受,时时提到你和我,否则容易跑题写成议论文,

因为内容与议论文相似。

③尾段:总结建议,注意礼貌,易于接受。

(3) 写作流程图

二、结构

第一部分:说明写信的目的

套语:

(1) After I read your letter in the newspaper, I am sorry to know that …

(2) I am very glad to hear that you want to…

(3 ) I know you have trouble in…after reading your letter

(4) I am writing to share some advice with you. (5) 来信收到,得知你下个月要对中国进行一次为期十天的访问,我建议……

I have received your letter saying that you plan to have a visit to China for ten days next month. I recommend that……

(6) 写此信是要提出我对饭店管理进一步提高和改进的建议——建立我们自己的网站

来吸引更多的客户。

I am writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as

to establish a website of our own to attract more clients.

(7) You have asked me for my advice with regard to...and I will try to make some useful

suggestions.你来信询问我关于...的意见,我会尽量提出一些有用的建议。

第二部分:介绍详情、提出建议

套语:

我建议……

(1) I’d like to suggest that ……(2) May I suggest that……

(3) In my opinion ……(4) I would like to make a recommendation that …

(5) I am writing to advise you of ……(6) If I were you, I would ……

(7)I feel that it would be beneficial if ... (8) You may consider doing…

第三部分:提出希望采纳建议,盼望回复

套语:

(1) 请仔细考虑我的建议,谢谢。

Please take good consideration of my advice. Thanks.

(2)我希望你会觉得这些意见\提议\建议是有帮助的\实际的\有用的.

I hope you will find these suggestions\proposals\recommendations helpful\practical\useful.

(3) I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.

(4) I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions.

(5) I feel that it would be beneficial if you stick to it.

(6) In the end, I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.

(7). I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration.

建议信模板(一)

Dear ,

①I am very ______ to know that . ①写信的原因

②I'm looking forward to . ②表示欢迎

③I'm afraid that . ③表述建议理由

④I'd like to suggest that first……then _ . ④提出建议

⑤I believe this kind of arrangement will________________ ⑤有说服力

⑥Moreover,if _____________ , ⑥补充建议

⑦It is necessary for you to . ⑦提出建议

⑧With_______________you will . ⑧建议理由

⑨Wish_____________________________ ⑨祝愿

建议信模板(二)

说明写信的目的

介绍详情、说明原因

提出建议

提出希望采纳建议,并表示谢意,盼望回复

Dear _____,

You have asked me for my advice about_____(问题),and I will

try to make some conductive suggestions here.

In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions.First, it is Important to建议一.As you will建议一的理由。Then, it also helps if you

建议二。Because建议二的理由.Besides, it should be a good idea to 建议三。

I am sure that 建议三的理由。

I hope you’ll find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to

Discuss this matter with you about further details.

Good luck with your ____(祝愿).

Yours sincerely,

三、示例Writing (30 minutes)

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a letter. Suppose you are Zhang Ying. Write a letter to Xiao Wang, a schoolmate of yours who is going to visit you during the summer holiday for a week. You should write at least 100 words according to the suggestions given below in Chinese.

1、表示欢迎。

2、提出对度假安排的建议。

3、祝愿

A Letter to a Schoolmate

June 23rd, 2001

Dear Xiao Wang,

I am very glad to know that you are soon

coming to Beijing to join me in the summer holiday. 第一段表示欢迎

I 'm looking forward to your arrival.

If you can stay in Beijing only for a week, 表明建议的原因

I am afraid that you will have a tight schedule语气亲切,符合说话人身份关系

for visiting a number of places of historic interest.

I'd like to suggest that you first visit some famous 叙述词和副词places that you have the greatest interest in,such as一目了然

the Palace Museum, the Summer Place(颐和园), the Great

Wall; then you can visit those places you think less then使文章结构important. I believe this kind of arrangement will make you have enough time to appreciate(欣赏)使自己的安排具有说服力

what you really want to see.

Moreover if you really want to be a good

traveler,It is necessary for you to read some 建议有理有据books about these places before you come to see

them with your own eyes. With more knowledge

about these places, you will have a better

understanding of Chinese history and culture.

I am eager to meet you soon in Beijing.

Wish you in advance a pleasant trip to Beijing.表达良好的祝愿,符合文体要求

Best wishes!

Yours ever

练笔:建议信(1)-----阐释原因;提出建议类

请你代表你班同学给校长写一封信,反映一下你校食堂的几点问题,以引起学校重视,并针对问题提出两条合理建议。问题包括:

1. 菜价昂贵,菜市单一;

2. 排队时间长,浪费午休时间;

3. 味道不佳,浪费现象严重。

注意:1. 词数不少于120; 2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;3. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

参考词汇: 食堂canteen

Dear Principal,

Recently, many students are discussing the problems of the canteen. __________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________

I sincerely hope you can adopt my suggestions. Thank you!

Yours,

Li Hua

作文范文:

Dear Principal,

Recently, many students are discussing the problems of the canteen. The problems are as

follows.

Some students think the prices of the dishes are too high and that the choices are too limited. Another concern is that the time spent in waiting is so long that we have less time to have a rest. Meanwhile, some students think that the taste of the food is awful, which leads to a lot of waste.

As far as I’m concerned, measures are supposed to be taken to improve the conditions of the canteen. First of al l, it’s suggested that the prices be more reasonable and the choices of dishes be more various. In addition, it’s better to open more service windows to reduce waiting time.

I sincerely hope you can adopt my suggestions. Thank you!

需注意的词汇、表达:

1.delicious waiting taste(n.味道) tasty (adj.可口的) cook (n.厨师) cooker (n.炊具)

price 价格

2.lower /bring down the price 降低价格

3.at a lower/reasonable price 以较低的价格

4.varieties of dishes 种类多样的菜品

5.For one thing,……. For another,……

6.make sb (not)do sth

7.wait /stand in line / in a queue for a long time

8.The kinds of food are few.

表达食堂出现的问题:

9.The prices of dishes are so high that many of us can’t afford them.

10.There are so few dishes to choose from, which is far from satisfactory. / which can’t satisfy our

needs.

11.It takes us so much time to stand in line, which decreases our time of rest at noon.

12.The food in the canteen doesn’t taste good./ nice.

The taste of food in the canteen isn’t good.

13.The food in the canteen tastes so bad that a lot of food is left and wasted

14.It’s a waste of time to stand in line for a long time.

15.The food in the canteen tastes so bad, which leads to a severe phenomenon of wasting food.

16.In the long run, it’s bad for our health and study.

17.It goes without saying that it will influence our sleep in the afternoon.

表达提出的建议:

18.Improving the taste of the food is also a good solution to the problems.

19.I think it’s necessary to provide more kinds of food.

20.It’s high time that we took measures to solve the problems.

So it’s high time for us to take measures

21.To solve the problems, I think the canteen should set up a new figure(形象) and improve the

present condition to satisfy the students’ needs.

22.We hope the canteen can provide us with dishes of a high quality at a reasonable price.

23.The canteen should open more windows so that we needn’t wait so long.

24.As far as I’m concerned, the canteen should attach importance to the quality. What’s more,

different kinds of food should be provided.

25.M easures are supposed to be taken to improve the conditions of the canteen.

高考书面表达之求助信

应该遵照英文书信的格式,表达出自己希望得到的急切心理和诚意。

一、求助信的文章框架:

(自我介绍)1.直言目的 2.描述困难3.表达希望得到的帮助(联系方式)

二、常用句式

1.求助信开头的表达句式:

1.I’m writing t o ask for/get some help.

whether you can give me help.

2. I’m sorry that I have to ask a favor of you, with the hope that you will be kind to help me.

3. Sorry to bother you but I really get some problems recently.

4. I make bold to write this letter to ask you to do me a favor.

2.描述困难的经典句式

1. But I have met some difficuties with/in ……

2. But unfortunately, I’m encountering difficulty in…

3. Faced with/Facing so much difficulty, I have to ask you for some help.

4. I face the choice between…and…

5. It’s really hard for me to decide/deal with …

6. I need your help because ……

3.表达希望得到帮助的句型

1.Expecting your writing back soon.

2. Looking forward to/Hoping for your early reply.

3.Your kind early reply will be highly appreciated.

4. I wonder if you can help me with these difficulties. I really appreicate it if you could help me.

5. I believe I will benefit a lot from your valuable and timely advice.

6.I am sure with your help I can make great progress.

7. Can you manage to give me some constructive guidance?

8. I sincerely hope to get your timely reply.

4.过渡性词汇

列举困难时;first, besides, also,what’s more, at the same time, in the meanwhile, in

addition,...

请求系列帮助so, thus, however, but, in order that, so that …

5.情感词汇

sorry, bother, beg, would you like…. unfortunately, u nluckily, especially, sincerely, badly, hopefully,

Dear__________,

My name is ______. I’m _______. I have met much difficulty in__________. First, ___________. What’s worse /Worse still, _________. What’s worst, _______.

Faced with / Facing so much difficulty, I have to turn to you for help. Would you like to ___________ so that / in order that _________? In the meanwhile / Meanwhile, ___________. Also, I would like you to __________ to ________.

I’m sure that I can ________ with your help. / I w ill be much appreciated if you help me to ________.

Thank you for your time.

Yours ________,

(2011课标卷)假定你是李华,正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程,遇到一些困难,希望得到学校辅导中心(Learning Center)的帮助。根据学校规定,你需书面预约,请按下列要点写一封信:

1.本人简介

2.求助内容

3. 约定时间

4. 你的联系方式(Email:lihua@https://www.wendangku.net/doc/d914134321.html,;Phone:12345678) 注意:1. 词数100左右。人称:第一人称;第二人称

时态:一般现在;一般将来

思维发散部分:求助内容:具体困难1具体困难2;...

写信对象;辅导中心教师

Dear Sir/Madam,

I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university. I’m writing to ask for help. I came here last month and found my courses interesting. But I have some difficulties with note-making and I have no idea of how to use the library. I was told the Learning Center Provides help for students and I’m anxious to get help from you. I have no class on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons. Please let me know which day is ok with you. You may email or phone me. Here are my email address and phone number:lihua@https://www.wendangku.net/doc/d914134321.html,; 12345678.

Look forward to your reply .

yours,

Lihua Practise:假如你叫李华,在光明中学读书,在学习英语的过程中你遇到一些问题,想得到老师的帮助。现在你给英语老师写一封求助信,内容如下:

1.学习英语时遇到的问题生词多,记忆有难度

2.课文长,背诵不可能

3.语法难,理解有障碍

4.向英语老师提出帮助

注意:1. 词数100~120; 2. 可适当增加细节。

Dear teacher,

My name is Lihua. I’m writing a letter to you to ask for some help. I have met much difficulty in learning English. First, I find our texts full of new words that are very difficult for me to remember. Besides, the texts are too long for me to recite. What’s more, grammar is also very difficult to learn.

Faced with so much difficulty, I have to ask you for some help. Would you like to introduce to us some good ways to learn new words so that we can remember them more easily? In the meanwhile, I beg you to teach the text more slowly so that the average students can easily follow you. Also, I would like you to introduce some rules and good ways to learn grammar.

I’m sure that I can make great progress in my English study with your help.

Yours Sincerely,

高考书面表达之投诉信

投诉信(letters of complaint)通常是写给厂家、商店、消费者协会、报界或厂家、商店的上级主管部门,揭发产品质量的低劣、服务态度的糟糕,抱怨不应出现的情况或问题等,以求得解决的信件。写投诉信要实事求是地把问题讲清楚,态度要冷静,做到有礼貌,不能恶言伤人。

【篇首句】介绍自己,说明写作目的:投诉。

1. I’m Li Hua. I feel bad to trouble you but I’m afraid that I have to make a comp laint about your restaurant.

我是李华。很不想给你添麻烦。但是,恐怕我不得不对你们餐馆进行投诉。

2. I’m writing to you to complain about...

我写信是投诉......

3. I want to express my dissatisfaction about the woolen scarf I bought from your company. 我想要表达我对从你们公司买的羊毛围巾的不满。

【篇中句】说明投诉问题、后果,并提出合理建议。

1. In the first place, the food is too salty and the water isn't served in time. In addition, the music you broadcast is too noisy. Under these circumstances, I find it hard to sit here having dinner quietly.

首先,食物太咸,水没有及时端上来。而且,你们播放的音乐太吵了。在这样的环境下,我很难安静的坐在这里吃饭。

2. While I was on holiday in Hong Kong about a week ago, I bought a green shirt for 300 HK dollars in your shop, but there seems to be something wrong with it. When it's washed, it fades in colour. Now I can't wear it.

大概一周前我在香港度假的时候,我在你们店里花300港元买了一件绿色衬衫,但是看上去似乎有一些状况。当被洗的时候,它会掉色。现在,我不能穿了。

3. It arrived on time the day before yesterday. But when I checked it, I found a hole in the middle. I was astonished because the hole was obvious and I didn't think you should neglect this deficiency(缺陷).

它是前天按时到的。但是当我检查时,我发现中间有个洞。我很震惊,因为这个洞和明显,我认为你们不应该忽略这个缺陷。

4. I have dialed your service number for several times but it was always busy.

我多次拨打你们的服务电话,但它总是占线。

5. Now this problem keeps worrying me.

现在这个问题一直在困扰我。

6. To improve the situation, you can take the following measures.

为了改善状况,你们可以采取下面的措施。

7. Can you change a new one for me as soon as possible?

你们可以尽快给我换件新的吗?

8. I insist you change a new one for me or give me a refund(退款).

我坚持你们给我换件新的或者给我退款。

9. How shall I send this scarf back to you?

我怎么把这条围巾寄还给你?

【篇尾句】希望给予考虑,并期待对方尽快回复。

1. Thanks for your consideration.

感谢你的考虑。

2. I hope you will give due attention to this matter. 我希望你给予此事应有的重视。

3. I believe you will take my complaint seriously.

我相信你会认真考虑我的投诉。

4. I’ll appreciate it if my demand is met.

如果我的要求被满足,我会非常感激。

5. I’m looking forward to your early reply.期待着你早日答复。

投诉信模板

Dear_______,

I am ______ (自我介绍) .I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make

a complaint about_____.

The reason for my dissatisfaction is _______(总体介绍). In the first place,_______(抱怨的第一个方面). In addition, ___________(抱怨的第二个方面). Under these circumstances, I find it ________ (感觉)_______(抱怨的方面给你带来的后果).

I appreciate it very much if you could _______(提出建议和请求), preferably ______(进一步的要求),and I would like to have this matter settled by ____(设定解决事情最后期限).

Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely

Li Ming

学校受污染

【内容提示】

假如你是市一中的学生,名叫王红。你要向本市一家报刊编辑(editor)写封信,反映你校受污染的问题,呼吁有关部门采取措施,保护环境,防止污染。请你用下面的素材写100词左右的一封信。

你校位于山脚下,一条小河从旁边流过,院内树木四季常青,鲜花争艳,景色美似花园。但两年前,附近建起一家化工厂,排出大量污水、废气,造成校园污染,严重影响了师生健康。请有关部门出面解决这一问题。

【作文示范】

School Polluted

No. 1 Middle School

March 5, 1997

Dear Editor,

Our school lies at the foot of a mountain with a small river passing by. It used to look like a beautiful garden. There used to be green trees and all kinds of flowers in our school yard all year round.

But great changes have taken place since a chemical works was built near our school two years ago. It produces poisonous gases and pours a large amount of waste water into the

river. The terrible pollution has done great harm to us students and teachers as well as to the surroundings.

It's time for us to take steps to protect our surroundings and prevent them from being polluted.

Yours ever,

Wang Hong

例(2002年1月)

Directions : For this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus . You should write at least 120 words , and base your composition on the outline given below in Chinese :

假如你是李明,请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封信,内容应涉及食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境和服务等,可是以表扬,可以是批评建议,也可以兼而有之。

参考范文

A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus

Dec.20 , 2009

Dear President ,

My name is Li Ming . I am a junior from the Civil Engineering School . I venture to write you a letter to make a complaint about the canteen service of our school .

The focus of the complaint is the poor quality and high price of the food . On one hand , the rice is very hard , the steam bread is often cold , and the vegetables are always overcooked . On the other hand , the price of the food is so high that many poor students are burdened heavily . Under these circumstances , I find it impossible for us students to fully concentrate on the study and enjoy the campus life .

I will be very obliged if you can consider my complaint seriously . I do hope the service of the canteen will be much improved as soon as possible . Thank you for your time and kind consideration .

Sincerely yours ,

Li Ming

投诉信范文

投诉信格式范本一: 关于对××涉嫌××(如贪污、受贿、渎职、挪用公款)等问题的举报 举报人:姓名(可匿名、化名,最好署实名举报贪官),住址,联系电话。 被举报人:姓名(向纪检监察机关举报时,被举报对象须是中共党员或国家干部),所在单位,职务。 反映问题的性质:××(如涉嫌贪污、受贿、挪用公款等) 事实与理由[用最简洁的语言写清]:被反映人在什么时间、什么地点,以什么手段实施什么样的行为,造成什么样的后果;违反什么规定第…条。 举报信的关键是在正文部分。 ①要用最简练的语言写正文部分,把要举报的问题写清楚。 ②叙述案件情况要按照时间顺序,逐项写明案件发生的时间、地点、手段、具体情节和后果等。 ③如果掌握有违法(犯罪)违纪证据或者有证明人、知情人的,还要将证据情况,证明人和知情人的姓名、单位、电话及联系办法等写清楚。 ④在举报信的结尾部分,要发表自己对案件的看法,提出具体的要求,并签上自己的姓名,写上联系办法和写信的时间。

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