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中考英语书面表达专题训练答案及解析

一、英语书面表达

1．假如你即将在学校英语兴趣小组的活动中发言，请你用英语写一篇发言稿。要点提示如下:（1）几个月前，奶奶晚饭后去跳广场舞（do square dancing）。（2）从那时起，奶奶喜欢上了广场舞。（3）现在，奶奶比以前健康了，有了很多朋友。（4）有些邻居有意见，认为音乐很吵，无法入睡。（5）你认为人们可以跳广场舞，但……

要求：（1）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

（2）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

Boys and girls,

I’m very happy to speak here and I’d like to talk about my grandma.

That’s all. Thank you!

【答案】Boys and girls,

I’m very happy to speak here and I’d like to talk abou t my grandma.

A few months ago, my grandma went to do square dancing after supper. Since then, she has been in love with square dancing. Now, she is much healthier than before. What’smore, she has a lot of friends. However, some neighbors have a complaint against the people who do square dancing. They think that the music is so loud that they can’t fall asleep at night.

In my opinion, people can do square dancing because it is a good way to keep healthy. But they should think about the feelings of others an d they shouldn’t make a lot of noise.

That’s all. Thank you!

【解析】

这是一篇给材料作文，根据要点提示写一篇学校英语兴趣小组的活动中的发言稿。要注意随着文章推进时态的变化，一开始应该选择一般过去时，而后面应该选用一般现在时，最后表达自己观点的时候也应该使用一般现在时。人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致关系，构思文章框架，列举出可能会用到的好词好句，记住千万不能漏写信息要点。参考词汇就是必用词汇，一定要运用到文章当中。在写作中注意运用恰当的连词，使文章更加顺畅，自然。

2．假定你是David，来自美国，你的QQ好友Li Ming想要在今年的暑假去做志愿者，他来信向你了解有关这方面的情况。请认真阅读下面的邮件，并根据信中的内容和实际用英语回复，可以有适当的发挥。

注意：1.词数90左右。回复信的开头和结尾己经写好，不计入总词数;

2.回复中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

Dear Li Ming,

Thanks for your letter. I'm glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer your questions.

I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. Looking forward to your good news.

Best wishes

David 【答案】Dear Li Ming,

Thanks for your letter. I'm glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer your questions.

I volunteer because I enjoy helping others and can learn a lot from others. As students, we can take part in some interesting activities, such as looking after animals and working for sports matches. Also, we can join charity organizations to help protect the environment and so on.

It’s OK to have problems, because volunteering takes much time and energy. Sometimes I can’t balance my study and work. If your parents don’t allow you t o volunteer, you should have a good talk with them. Try to let them understand you.

I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. Looking forward to your good news.

Best wishes

David

【解析】

这是一篇给材料作文，给好友Li Ming回信，介绍暑假做志愿者的情况。。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I'm glad……，we can……，It’s OK to……，If your parents don’t allow you to…….，you should……，I hope……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头为你想要成为一名志愿者而感到高兴，接下来介绍我们可以从事的志愿者工作以及志愿者工作带来的一些问题，最后我希望你喜欢志愿者工作。此处would like to, enjoy doing sth, learn from, take part in, such as, look after, allow sb to do sth, let sb do sth, look forward to 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

3．书面表达

随着电子时代的到来，西方文化如潮水般涌来，中国传统文化的传承面临着巨大的挑战。有人认为学校应当开设传统文化课（set up traditional culture classes），但也有人认为没有必要。假如你是Mike,请你用英语写一封邮件，给你校英文报投稿写一篇短文，词数80左右，谈谈你对开设传统文化课的看法。

Dear editor,

As we all know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development if international technology nowadays. _____________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _____________

Yours,

Mike

【答案】Dear editor,

As we know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development of international technology nowadays. In my opinion, it’s necessary for schools to set up traditional culture classes.

First, traditiona l culture is the root of Chinese. As Chinese, we shouldn’t give up our traditional culture and run after Western culture. Second, traditional culture classes can give students chances to know more about our nation. They can raise their sense of national pride. Last but not least, setting up traditional culture classes can spread and develop our Chinese culture.

All in all, it is of great importance to set up traditional culture classes in schools. Let’s call on more schools to set up traditional culture classes!

Yours,

Mike

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，谈谈我对开设传统文化课的看法。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Chinese traditional culture is facing……，it’s necessary for schools to……，we shouldn’t……，They can raise……，it is of great importance to……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了中国传统文化面对的问题，接下来介绍我认为开设传统文化课的必要性的原因，最后号召更多的学校开设传统文化课。此处because of，in one’s opinion, give up, know about, last but not least, set up, all in all, call on等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

4．近年来雾霾天气在中国许多城市频频发生。雾霾天气引起大家极大的关注。请你用英语写一篇有关雾霾的短文向校刊“英语角”投稿,内容包括：

1. 雾霾的危害

2. 雾霾产生的原因（2个）

3. 应对雾霾的措施（3个）

提示：雾霾 smog poisonous 有毒的

注意：1. 词数110左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头语已为你写好（不计入总词数）。

In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people.

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【答案】In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people.

Smog has a bad effect on people’s he alth. Many people, children and the old in particular, suffer from illnesses caused by smog. Consequently, citizens are warned not to go out without wearing masks.

How does it come about? Scientists have found that it is human activity that has caused this. The poisonous matters in the air mainly come as a result of people’s burning coal, driving cars, industry production and so on.

What should we do to stop the situation from worsening? First, cleaner fuels for cars and stricter emission standards for factories are of vital importance. Second, for us individuals, living a green life like going to work or school by public transport is a good choice. Also planting more trees to increase green areas is necessary. I believe every contribution counts. Only if we work together will smog weather disappear completely.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇作文要求我们根据提示来介绍有关雾霾的情况，题目中给出了写作的内容，我们应将这些内容用正确的英语表达出来。首先应注意在短文中要包括题目中给出的所有信息，不能遗漏要点，并注意表达的层次和条理。其次要注意使用正确的时态和人称，通过分析可知，这篇短文应使用一般现在时态，谓语动词用原形，特别要注意谓语动词形式要变化，这是一个写作的难点。最后要注意英语的表达习惯，英语句式与汉语在语序和词性上的使用是不同的，要注意不能逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。应从句子整体考虑，使用恰当的词汇和句型来表达，语法规范。还应使用一些较好的句型或者短语，增强文章的表现力。

5．中国传统文化源远流长，代代相传。近期各校都在开展学习中国传统文化活动。某网站正在开展以“弘扬中国传统文化”为题征文，请你用英文写一篇报道，介绍你校上周举办的“讲中国成语故事”活动并谈谈你的收获与感受。

提示词语： Chinese idioms, story, collect, share, learn from, acient

提示问题：● What did you do during the activity of "Telling Chinese idioms story"?

● What did you learn from the activity?

● What do you think of it?

【答案】The activity of “Telling Chinese idioms story” was held in our school last week.

In order to take part in this activity, I collected lots of Chinese idiom stories in advance. Many students, including me, actively shared the Chinese idiom stories in the activity. After each story, the teacher explained the meaning of idioms and how to use it correctly. We learned a lot from our teacher.

I did lots of reading in the process of preparation. My reading ability has improved greatly. What’s more, I realized the richness of Chinese acient culture. I really had a good time on the activity.【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：这是一篇提纲类书面表达，只给了一些要点提示，但都不很明确。学生除了

要把所给要点提示都表达出来外，还要进行适当拓展，使文章内容充实。

2.例文点评：例文采用三段式；用第一人称来叙述讲成语故事活动；因为活动已经举办，所以时态采用一般过去时；对参加活动的过程描写完整且条理清晰。

3.高分亮点：

短语：in order to，take part in，lots of，learn from，in the process of，What’s more，have a good time。

句型：被动句型。

6．你是一位九年级的学生李明，你用英语写一封邮件给你的笔友Amy，感谢她对你关心，并告诉她目前你在全力以赴为中考而学习，并与她交流一下目前的学习和生活情况。要点如下：

（1）. 虽然你大部分功课你都学得比较好，但是你对自己不满意。你认为自己学习上还要多花工夫。

（2）. 你的父母对你严格要求，但是也很关心你。（举例说明，适当发挥2—3句）……（3）. 老师很乐意帮助你们。他们希望你们实现自己的理想。他们说（适当发挥2—3句）……

注意：

（1）. 要求语句通顺，意思连贯。

（2）. 第2要点和第3要点要用2—3句话作适当发挥。

（3）. 词数90个左右，邮件开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Hello!

Dear Amy, thank you for caring.

Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination.

How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours

Li Ming

【答案】例文Hello!

Dear Amy, thank you for caring.

Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. I have got good results in most of my subjects, but I am not happy with myself. I think I must spend more time on my studies.

My parents are really strict with me. However, they care for me as well. Once upon a time, I failed in my physics exam and felt stressed and sad. They had a close communication with me and helped me solve my problems and cheer up again.

My teachers are also ready to help us. They hope that we can realize our dreams. They tell us to

try our best and not to give up. Life is always full of ups and downs. It's important not to be afraid of any kind of difficulty.

How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours

Li Ming

【解析】

【详解】

本文属于材料作文，告诉艾米目前你在全力以赴为中考而学习，并与她交流一下目前的学习和生活情况。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如get good results, spend+时间

+on sth, be strict with, however, care for, as well, once upon a time, help sb do, cheer up, be ready to, tell sb to do, try one’s best to do, be full of以及it is adj to do sth等，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

【点睛】

写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：

认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

7．朋友是我们生活的组成部分，他们总是在我们最需要帮助的时候陪伴我们。你最好的朋友是谁？你是怎么看待你们的友谊的？请以“My Best Friend ”为题，根据以下提示写一篇英语短文。

1. 简要介绍你最好的朋友的外貌和性格;

2. 介绍和你朋友之间发生的一件令人难忘的事；

3. 你是怎样看待你们之间的友谊的

要求：

1. 语句连贯通顺，文章衔接紧密

2. 词数80-100

3. 文中不得出现真实校名及姓名

Friends are very important in our life. They always help us when we are in need.

Friends are very important in our life. They always help us when we are in need. Everyone needs friends to talk with and get confidence from.

My best friend is Jenny. She is a quiet girl. She is always friendly and helpful. She is a tall girl with long hair. She does well in all the subjects and gets on well with others at school.

I was weak in maths. One day, I failed in maths exam. I was so sad that I couldn’t help crying. Jenny encouraged me a lot. From then on, she helped me with my maths, With her help, I got an A in the next maths exam. I was really thankful to her.

I think friendship is a necessary part of our lives. I want to keep our friendship forever.

【解析】

【详解】

试题分析：这是一个提纲作文。题目给出了标题及写作要点。根据题目要求可知，人称以第三人称为主。时态为一般现在时和一般过去时。我们要做的就是用正确的英语句子来组织这些材料，在描写外貌和性格时，会用到系表结构，注意主谓一致关系。介绍发生的一件难忘的事情，要用到一般过去时态。另外在写作时可以适当使用一些连词，使之上下连贯，合乎逻辑。

【点睛】

人物介绍是记叙文中常见的一种写作类型。内容可以是介绍自己也可以介绍他人，包括姓名、年龄、外貌特征、兴趣爱好，有时也可以包括日常活动。时态为一般现在时态。在介绍长相时用“be+形容词”来描述人物的身高、体重、身材等；用“have/has +

（straight/curly） hair / （big/small）eyes/nose/mouth”来描述头发或五官。用“wear + 某种衣服”来介绍某人的穿戴。用be good at doing sth.来介绍特长，用like sth./doing sth.best或“My/His/her favorite + 名词+ is …”来介绍某人的最爱。当主语是第三人称单数时，注意主谓一致关系。

8．为了吸引外国游客，杭州旅游网希望对杭州茶文化进行宣传。请你根据表格信息，用英语为其写一篇介绍，词数80左右。

Longjing Tea

【答案】Tea culture is one of the most famous cultures in China. Longjing tea is one of the famous Chinese traditional teas and famous green tea. Why is Longjing Tea famous for? Because it taste good. It is good for people to keep healthy by drinking longjing tea. Longjing tea grows mainly on the sides of mountains. People are very strict about the picking of Longjing tea. Longjing is a famous tea in China, which is related not only to the climate and soil environment of Longjing, but also to the production technology of Longjing. Hangzhou is the resort where Longjing tea is produced. So Hangzhou National Tea Museum is the best place to learn about Hongjing tea.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇材料类介绍型作文，所以我们必须要结合所给材料再适当补充内容。时态以一般现在时为主。

亮点词汇短语：one of．．．，．．．之一；green tea绿茶；be famous for．．．，因…而出名；keep healthy保持健康；be strict in sth对…严格；not only．．．.but also．．．，不仅．．．而且．．．。

亮点句型：

It is good for people to keep healthy by drinking Longjing tea. 喝龙井茶对人们保持健康有好处。It is+adj.（for sb.） to do sth. （对某人来说）做某事是怎样的。

Longjing is a famous tea in China, which is related not only to the climate and soil environment of Longjing, but also to the production technology of Longjing. 龙井是我国著名的茶叶，它不仅与龙井的气候、土壤环境有关，而且与龙井的生产工艺有关。Which引导的限定性定语从句。

Hangzhou is the resort where Longjing tea is produced. 杭州是龙井茶出产的胜地。Where引导的定语从句。

9．近年来，习近平主席提出了实现中华民族伟大复兴的“中国梦”。学校开展了“梦想少年”的主题演讲活动，假如你是张明，请根据以下提供的要点，以“I'm a Dream Teenager”为题，写一篇80－100词的短文，向大家推介自己。（可联系实际，适当发挥）

注意：1．文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。

提示词语：1.be good at 2.help..with 3.follow...rules 4.cheer up 5.be popular with...

6.volunteer to do something

【答案】I'm a Dream Teenager

Good morning， dear teachers and friends， I am Zhang Ming． It's great honor for me to make a speech here．

As a fifteen-year-old boy， my dream is to be a good teacher． To make my dream come true， I study hard at school and I am good at all my subjects． Also， I am an outgoing and healthy boy who likes football very much， and I really enjoy sports． At school， I always follow the school rules， so I am popular with my classmates and teachers． On weekends， I'd like to help people． For example， I volunteer to visit sick children in the hospital and cheer them up．

In a word， I believe that the man who holds his dream will be able to achieve his dream one day． That's all． Thank you!

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇图表作文。学校开展“梦想少年”的主题演讲活动，假如你是张明，要求根据图表提示内容，以“I'm a Dream Teenager”为题，写一篇短文，向大家推介自己。根据所给出的材料提示可知文章时态主要用一般现在时，人称主要为第一、第三人称。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。在写作过程中，要将图表内提示信息用英语正确的表达出来，要涵盖图表中提到的所有要点，注意理顺要点，防止漏写。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

10．书面表达

根据下表用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，内容须包括：对下表中关于（City A和City B）的全部信息进行比较，分析利弊，确定其中一个城市作为你的暑假旅游目的地。

City A City B

In my opinion, is he better place to spend my summer holiday.

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文

In my opinion, City A is the better place to spend my summer holiday. Although the temperature there is higher, the hotel is less comfortable, and even the food is not as delicious as that in City B, I still choose City A. The most important reason is that I can have a lot of things to do in City A . I can enjoy more beautiful scenery and do more activities. Besides, it takes us only two hours to fly there, which saves us a lot of time. I hope the holiday will be an unforgettable experience.

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试题分析：本题给出了两个城市的飞行时常、气温、旅馆情况。食物等相关信息，要求考生对每个信息进行比较，选择自己要去的暑假旅游目的地。虽然字数要求不多，但可以很好地考查考生英语写作的基本功，需要考生对常用的英语句型熟练掌握。熟悉英语的表达方式。避免汉语式英语。句型不要都用简单句。另外，一定要注意题目要求，把每一个信息都进行比较，不要有漏掉。

写作亮点：本篇作文按照题目要求选择了城市A作为自己暑假旅游的目的地。对于城市A 的缺点，作者用了“Although”尽管一词轻轻带过。对于优点则重点突出，因为在城市A可

以做很多事情，作者在这里用了词组“a lot of ”。在比较的时候，作者用了多种方式，使句子不单调，比如在比较温度时，直接用比较级“higher”在说旅馆时用了“less comfortable ”，比较食物时，用了“as…as”等。在说选择城市A的原因时，用了that引导的宾语从句。本文大部分都是复杂句，显示了作者比较熟练的英语写作水平。