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(整理)中考英语作文常见的错误清单.

(整理)中考英语作文常见的错误清单.
(整理)中考英语作文常见的错误清单.

中考英语作文常见的错误清单

1.审题错误

英语书面表达的审题十分重要。审题包括此篇文章要传递给读者什么样的信息,告诫读者什么(即写作目的)。由于英语书面表达的篇幅很有限,所以要求学生在写作时要精心组织材料,紧扣主题。不要产生偏题或者漏掉重要信息等问题。

【例文】:蒙山是山东著名的游览胜地,一年四季都有其独特的景色(scene)。尤其春天的景色更加迷人。每当春天来临,青山滴翠,美丽的景色吸引了许多游客前来踏青观光。可最近几年,游人不注意保护环境,乱扔垃圾,攀折树枝花草, ,点火野餐,致使自然环境遭到破坏。请你写篇报道,说明蒙山旅游环境的变化,号召人们文明旅游,保护生态环境。

【学生习作】:

Mengshan Mountain is a famous place of interest in Shandong Province. It has its special scenes all the year round, especially in spring. When spring comes, the days get longer and longer and the weather get warmer and warmer. Trees are beginning to turn green, and all kinds of beautiful flowers come out. Everything begins to grow. The mountains are covered with a lot of green tall trees and all kinds of colorful wild flowers. It is so beautiful that a lot of visitors come here and enjoy its beauty every day.

But in recent years, some of the visitors paid no attention to protecting the environment. They threw lots of rubbish such as plastic bags, fruit skins and waste paper on the ground. They don’t know that cleaners work from morning till night to sweep away the rubbish and waste things. Sometimes they broke some branches, picked flowers and even killed birds. Some even made fires in the forest to cook food. How dangerous it was! Luckily, the local government has begun to do something to stop polluting the area. Great changes have taken place here. New roads and nice hotels have been built; trees and flowers are planted around them.

I hope all the visitors can keep the idea in mind that we should protect the environment. 【问题分析】:

这就是属于审题不清,文章的中心偏离了主题。文章应围绕蒙山环境状况变化以及环境保护主题展开,与蒙山有关的春天的景色可以略写,但不宜用太多的笔墨去描绘春天的风景,这样就会冲淡主题。所以文章的第一段应该简写。同样在第二段中也没有必要去谈论清洁工是如何清理这些垃圾的,也没有必要谈论新的宾馆的建设及修路等情况,第二段的最后一句也应去掉,与主题无关。

【精彩例文】:

Mengshan Mountain is a famous place of interest in Shandong Province. It has its special scenes all the year round, especially in spring. When spring comes, the mountains are covered with a lot of green tall trees and all kinds of colorful wild flowers. It is so beautiful that a lot of visitors come here and enjoy its beauty every day.

But in recent years, some of the visitors paid no attention to protecting the environment. They threw lots of rubbish such as plastic bags, fruit skins and waste paper on the ground. Sometimes they broke some branches, picked flowers and even killed birds. Some even made fires in the forest to cook food. Luckily, the local government has begun to do something to stop polluting the area. Great changes have taken place here.

I hope all the visitors can keep the idea in mind that we should protect the environment.

在审题时我们要做到:

(1)确定内容。即:认真观察图画、图表或提示语,确切了解所要求表达的内容,即文章

的中心内容。

(2)确定文体。即:明确本篇短文是应用文、记述文还是其它文体。

(3)确定人称。即:用第一人称、第二人称还是第三人称写。

(4)确定文章的主体时态。要特别注意表示时间的词语(一些提示语)或画面。

(5)提炼书面表达的要点。即:确定书面表达提示或图示中所规定的必写的内容。

(6)明确要点之间的关系。即:明确各要点之间的联系和因果关系。

只有这样,写出来的文章才不会跑题,才不会不对文体,才不会遗漏要点,才不会弄错相互关系。

2. 思路问题

很多学生在写作时常常出现思路不清的问题。在做书面表达的过程中,有的考生一拿到考题就慌慌张张开始写,在写作之前没有构思好先写什么后写什么,哪些内容应该详写,哪些内容应该略写,而是一边写一边构思,不能合理地组织所给的材料,东一句,西一句,写得支离破碎,文理不通,从而导致文章逻辑不清,层次感不强,整篇文章不知所云。甚至还出现考生在写完之后才发现有重要的信息遗忘了,于是又在文章中进行添加,这又导致了文章的表达和书面的混乱。有的考生在文章中过多地使用简单句,句段之间缺乏必要的连接过

渡成分,段落主次不分,使整篇文章显得松散、呆板。

【例文】:以“My beloved teacher”为题,介绍你喜欢的一位老师。写一篇80词左右的作文。【学生习作】:

I want to be a teacher when I grow up. I think it is a good job. I will be glad to have many lovely students. I like them. I will work hard to teach the students well, and I will get on well with my students.

Mr. Li is my teacher. I like him. He teaches me English and he is strict with us.

I will learn from him to be a good teacher one day.

【问题分析】:

这篇作文的问题就在于思路不清,表达没有条理。要求写自己喜欢的一位老师,却在文章开头写了自己想成为教师的愿望及自己成为老师时后的一些做法,而后才写到Mr.Li 是自己喜欢的老师。这时本应该重点对Mr. Li进行介绍,说明喜欢他的原因,但是却没有做。写作的思路非常混乱。

【精彩例文】:

My Beloved Teacher

Mr. Li is one of my beloved teachers. He taught us physics when we were in Senior 1.He was old, but he taught very well. He could make his classes lively and interesting. Mr. Li made good preparations for his lessons and was strict with us, too. Whenever we made mistakes in our homework, he would ask us to correct and do it again. I used to be poor in physics. Mr. Li often helped me with my lessons very patiently. Thanks to his help and hard work, I have made good progress and caught up with the class. As a retired teacher, he's still working hard for our educational cause.

3. 语法错误

在英语书面表达中常见的语法错误有:拼写错误、形近异义词混用、主谓不一致,人称时态不一致、修饰语错位等。

①时态错误:一、时态混用。学生对所给以书面表达提示、背景没有很好理解,加之对即将要作文的事情发生的时间、状态没有很好的提前思谋、判断,造成文章前后时态不相衔接或使用的时态不吻合,该用一般现在时的句子,用了一般过去时,而该用将来时的句子,用了完成时。二、时态构成混乱。主要是乱用助动词、乱用动词变化,也就是说学生对各种时

态基本构成规律、特点掌握不好。

错句:He left his hometown for almost ten years.

他离开家乡有十多年了。

We are going to see a movie if it won’t rain tomorrow.

如果明天不下雨我们打算去看一场电影。

改正:He has been away from his hometown for almost ten years.

We are going to see a movie if it doesn’t rain tomorro w.

②单词拼写、使用错误:主要表现两方面。一是单词拼写错误。部分学生平时不注意记忆单词,基础单词掌握不牢固,文章中单词多字母、少字母现象突出。二是单词使用不当,比如代词使用不当,该用some用了any,该用主格用了宾格等;动词使用不当。该用过去式用了现在分词,该用第三人称单数用了原形,该用take用了dring等。冠词使用不当,该用a用了an,该用an用了the等。

错句:He take a lot of photos in the park yesterday.

Don’t worried! They still have five minutes left.

改正:He took a lot of photos in the park yesterday.

Don’t be worried! They still have five minutes left.

③易混词或词组引起的错误:易混词或词组包括词意相同或相近的同义词、近义词,也包括那些外形相似、意义有别的词组。粗心的同学更容易犯错。

错句:At first I knew nothing about football, but now I am very interesting in it.起先我对足球一无所知,但是现在我对它很感兴趣。

改正:At first I knew nothing about football, but now I am very interested in it.

【例文】:请以考试为话题,写一篇题为“An Unforgettable Experience ”的短文。写一下那些发生在考场内外的,你所经历的故事。

【学生习作】:

Among many exam experiences, I still remember what happened in the final exam last term. In the past I always felt nervous at the begin of exams. And because of this, I never gave the best performance. But in the last final exam, when I got the paper, I surprised see some warm words on the paper, “Hi, everyone. Believe in yourself and you will do best. Good luck.” See these words, the feeling of nervousness soon disappeared and I become confident. I did best that time. Since then, whenever I have exams, these simple and warm words always encourage me and make me feel confident.

【问题分析】:

这篇习作的主要问题就是出现了过多的语法错误,其中包括时态,单词拼写,固定搭配,动词使用等方面。过多的语法错误使得整篇文章逊色许多

【精彩例文】:

Among many exam experiences, I still remember what happened in the final exam last term. In the past I always felt nervous at the beginning of the exams. And because of this, I never gave the best performance. But in the last final exam, when I got the paper, I was surprised to see some warm words on the paper, “Hi, everyone. Believe in yourself and you will do best. Good luck.” Seeing these words, the feeling of nervousness soon disappeared and I became confident. I did best at that time. Since then, whenever I have exams, these simple but warm words always encourage me and make me feel confident.

4. 表达问题

常见的问题有句子不完整、不连贯、指代不清等等。

常见错句:①Our go to school time is 8:00. 上学时间是8:00。

②She like it very much and reads it to the class. 她很喜欢它并且读给同学们听。

③Once one has money, he can do what he want to do.人一旦有了钱,他就能想干什么就干什么。

④There are many ways to know the society. For example, by TV radio, newspaper and so on. 有许多方式来了解这个社会,例如通过电视、广播、报纸等等。(本句后半部分For example, by TV, radio, newspaper and so on 不是一个完整的句子,仅仅是一些不连贯的词语,不能独立成句。)

⑤Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid. 玛丽和我姐姐很要好,因为她要她做她的伴娘。(此句让读者无法判断两位姑娘中谁将结婚,谁将当伴娘,指代不清。)

⑥Help yourself to some drink, boys and girls. 孩子们,随便喝些饮料吧。(句中的boys and girls 和反身代词yourself指代不一致。)

改正:We go to school at eight.

She liked it very much and read it to the class.

Once one has money, he can do what he wants to do.

There are many ways to know the society, for example, by TV, radio, and newspaper and so on.

Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid.

Help yourselves to some drink, boys and girls.

5. 语言问题

常见的有写中式英语、受母语干扰,按中文习惯进行逐词翻译的现象等等。主要反映在学生由于受汉语母语的影响,加之部分教师平时只注重学生对英语单词的掌握,忽视了遣词造名、由名到篇的整体教学,学生只生硬地记住单词的个体含义,而忽视了对英语的句型结构、特点和基本规律的掌握,导致学生一方面不能按照英语的语言方式进行思维,另一方面按汉语语序来翻译句子,甚至逐字进行翻译,其书面表达效果可想而知。

例如:In china have different places of interest. 中国有很多风景名胜。

In autumn is best season for traveling. 秋天是旅游的最佳时节。

I very like the gift. 我很喜欢这个礼物。

His father’s body is strong. 他父亲身体很好。

改正:There are many different places of interest in China.

Autumn is best season for traveling.

I like the gift very much.

His father is strong.

为了在写作时尽量避免汉式英语的出现,我们在平时要注意:

(1)养成用英语思维进行写作的习惯,注意中西文化差异所带来的不同表达;(2)平时多归纳总结、纠正汉式英语;

(3)多读原汁原味英语。

6.综合性语言错误

所谓“综合性语言错误”,是指除了上述几种常见错误之外,还有诸如时态、语态、标点符号、大小写等方面的错误。

【例文】金钱能买来幸福吗?不同的人有不同的回答。有的人认为能,有的人则持相反的意

见。请你以此为话题谈谈自己的看法,80词左右。

【学生习作】:

Can Money Buy Happiness?

Can money buy happiness? Different people has different opinion. Some think yes, while others hold the opposite.

It is true that have enough money one can buy all the things one wants, and live a life of comfortable and security. However, it is equally true that lack of money cause great distress. It is a common view that "money is the root of all evil." The pursuit of money drive many people to cheat and steal. In some places there are nothing that cannot buy with money, resulting in corrupt societies where everybody is miserable.

So, money does not necessarily mean happiness. It all depends on how it is used. If we make honest and sensible use of money, it can be a stepping-stone to happiness l Although money cannot buy happiness, but it can make happiness possible if it is employed sensibly.

【问题分析】:

这篇文章最大的问题是出现了太多的语言问题。如主谓一致:

Different people has different opinion. 名词单复数问题,语态问题:In some places there are nothing that cannot buy with money, 等等。

【精彩例文】:

Can Money Buy Happiness?

Can money buy happiness? Different people have different opinions. Some think yes, while others hold the opposite.

It is true that with enough money one can buy all the things one wants, and live a life of comfort and security. However, it is equally true that lack of money causes great distress. It is a common view that "money is the root of all evil." The pursuit of money drives many people to cheat and steal. In some places there is nothing that cannot be bought with money, resulting in corrupt societies where everybody is miserable.

So, money does not necessarily mean happiness. It all depends on how it is used. If we make honest and sensible use of money, it can be a stepping-stone to happiness l Although money cannot buy happiness, it can make happiness possible if it is employed sensibly.

英语写作的常见错误

英语写作常见错误分析 一.不一致(Disagreements) 所谓不一致不光指主谓不一致,它还包括了数的不一致时态不一致及代词不一致等. 例1.When one have money ,he can do what he want to . (人一旦有了钱,他就能想干什么就干什么.) 剖析:one是单数第三人称,因而本句的have应改为has ;同理,want应改为wa nts.本句是典型的主谓不一致. 改为:Once one has money ,he can do what he wants (to do) 二.修饰语错位(Misplaced Modifiers) 英语与汉语不同,同一个修饰语置于句子不同的位置,句子的含义可能引起变化.对于这一点中国学生往往没有引起足够的重视,因而造成了不必要的误解.例1.I believe I can do it well and I will better know the world outside the campus. 剖析:better位置不当,应置于句末. 三.句子不完整(Sentence Fragments) 在口语中,交际双方可借助手势语气上下文等,不完整的句子完全可以被理解.可是书面语就不同了,句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清,这种情况常常发生在主句写完以后,笔者又想加些补充说明时发生. 例1.There are many ways to know the society. For example by TV ,radio ,newspa per and so on . 剖析:本句后半部分"for example by TV ,radio ,newspaper and so on .”不是一个完整的句子,仅为一些不连贯的词语,不能独立成句. 改为:There are many ways to know society ,for example ,by TV ,radio ,and newspap er. 四.悬垂修饰语(Dangling Modifiers) 所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句子的逻辑关系混乱不清.例如:At the a ge of ten, my grandfather died. 这句中"at the age of ten"只点出十岁时,但没有说明”谁”十岁时.按一般推理不可能是my grandfather, 如果我们把这个悬垂修饰语改明确一点,全句就不那么费解了. 改为: When I was ten, my grandfather died.

英语作文常见典型语法错误

英语作文常见典型语法错误 语言是评判作文的一个极其重要的因素。在实际的阅卷过程中,语法错误,尤其是较为严重的错误,是阅卷人员的主要照顾点,有时甚至是惟一的点;当然那样处理是有道理的,大家可以设想一下, 一篇语法上漏洞百出、严重影响表达的作文又会有什么样的好内容呢?如果因为语言上的错误而导 致失分,那将得不偿失。因此,认清各种各样的语法错误,尽可能地避免少犯,对于提高作文分是 有极大的帮助的。 现将我们在阅卷过程中所发现的大量语言错误逐一归类,抽出其中的典型错误,以警示大家, 供参考。 1.句子成分残缺不全 We always working till late at night before taking exams。(误) We are always working /We always work till late at night before taking exams(正) We should read books may be useful to us. (误) We should read books which may be useful to us. (正) 2.句子成分多余 This test is end, but there is another test is waiting for you. (误) One test ends, but another is waiting for you. (正) The driver of the red car was died on the spot. (误) The driver of the red car died on the spot. (正) 3.主谓不一致 Someone/Somebody think that reading should be selective. (误) Some think that reading should be selective. (正) My sister go to the cinema at least once a week. (误) My sister goes to the cinema at least once a week. (正) 4.动词时态、语态的误用 I was walking along the road, and there are not so many cars on the street. (误)

英语作文常见错误(病句)

英语作文常见错误(病句) 一、不一致(Disagreements) 所谓不一致不光指主谓不一致,它还包括了数的不一致时态不一致及代词不一致等。 例1. When one have money ,he can do what he want to . (人一旦有了钱,他就能想干什么就干什么。) 剖析:one是单数第三人称,因而本句的have应改为has ;同理,want应改为wants.本句是典型的主谓不一致。 改为:Once one has money ,he can do what he wants (to do) 二、修饰语错位(Misplaced Modifiers) 英语与汉语不同,同一个修饰语置于句子不同的位置,句子的含义可能引起变化。对于这一点中国学生往往没有引起足够的重视,因而造成了不必要的误解。 例1. I believe I can do it well and I will better know the world outside the campus. 剖析:better位置不当,应置于句末。 三、句子不完整(Sentence Fragments) 在口语中,交际双方可借助手势语气上下文等,不完整的句子完全可以被理解。可是书面语就不同了,句子结构不完整会令

意思表达不清,这种情况常常发生在主句写完以后,笔者又想加些补充说明时发生。 例1. There are many ways to know the society. For example by TV ,radio ,newspaper and so on . 剖析:本句后半部分”for example by TV ,radio ,newspaper and so on .”不是一个完整的句子,仅为一些不连贯的词语,不能独立成句。 改为:There are many ways to know society ,for example ,by TV ,radio ,and newspaper. 四、悬垂修饰语(Dangling Modifiers) 所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句子的逻辑关系混乱不清。例如:At the age of ten,my grandfather died. 这句中”at the age of ten”只点出十岁时,但没有说明” 谁”十岁时。按一般推理不可能是my grandfather,如果我们把这个悬垂修饰语改明确一点,全句就不那么费解了。 改为: When I was ten,my grandfather died. 例1. To do well in college,good grades are essential. 剖析:句中不定式短语“to do well in college” 的逻辑主语不清楚。 改为: To do well in college,a student needs good grades.

英语写作常见错误分析

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