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初三英语下学期书面表达英语作文汇编单元期末复习提高题检测

一、中考英语书面表达汇编

1．（·江阴初级中学中考模拟）你是一位九年级的学生李明，你用英语写一封邮件给你的笔友Amy，感谢她对你关心，并告诉她目前你在全力以赴为中考而学习，并与她交流一下目前的学习和生活情况。要点如下：

（1）. 虽然你大部分功课你都学得比较好，但是你对自己不满意。你认为自己学习上还要多花工夫。

（2）. 你的父母对你严格要求，但是也很关心你。（举例说明，适当发挥2—3句）……（3）. 老师很乐意帮助你们。他们希望你们实现自己的理想。他们说（适当发挥2—3句）……

注意：

（1）. 要求语句通顺，意思连贯。

（2）. 第2要点和第3要点要用2—3句话作适当发挥。

（3）. 词数90个左右，邮件开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Hello!

Dear Amy, thank you for caring.

Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination.

How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours

Li Ming

【答案】例文Hello!

Dear Amy, thank you for caring.

Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. I have got good results in most of my subjects, but I am not happy with myself. I think I must spend more time on my studies.

My parents are really strict with me. However, they care for me as well. Once upon a time, I failed in my physics exam and felt stressed and sad. They had a close communication with me and helped me solve my problems and cheer up again.

My teachers are also ready to help us. They hope that we can realize our dreams. They tell us to try our best and not to give up. Life is always full of ups and downs. It's important not to be afraid of any kind of difficulty.

How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours

Li Ming

【解析】

【详解】

本文属于材料作文，告诉艾米目前你在全力以赴为中考而学习，并与她交流一下目前的学习和生活情况。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如get good results, spend+时间+on sth, be strict with, however, care for, as well, once upon a time, help sb do, cheer up, be ready to, tell sb to do, try one’s best to do, be full of以及it is adj to do sth等，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

【点睛】

写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：

认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

2．（·北京中考模拟）“书山有路勤为径, 学海无涯苦作舟”, 成功不会从天而降, 美好的未来需要靠不断努力来创造?

某英文网站正在开展以“天道酬勤” 为主题的征文活动?假如你是李华, 请用英文写一篇短文投稿, 讲述你通过勤奋, 取得进步甚至成功的经历, 并谈谈你的感受?

提示词语: diligence （勤奋）, make progress, effort, proud

提示问题: ? What did you achieve by working hard?

? What did you do to make it?

? How did you f eel about it?

【答案】Diligence is a must for us to reach our goals. I never realized it until I tried every effort to win the English speech competition last year.

It was quite a big challenge for me because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public. To give a better performance, I made full use of my spare time to prepare for it. I recorded my lines and asked my foreign teacher to correct my pronunciation. Then I kept practising day and night. Besides, I seized every chance to speak in front of my family or friends. The more I practised, the more confident I became. In the end, I won the competition and got a prize.

It was so great that all my efforts paid off.I felt so proud of myself.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇话题作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下你通过勤奋, 取得进步甚至成功的经历。所提供的材料中列举了“书山有路勤为径, 学海无涯苦作舟”, 成功不会从天而降, 美好的未来需要靠不断努力来创造。主要从：你努力工作取得了什么成绩？?你是怎么做到的？?你觉得怎么样？这几个方面去介绍。时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料和提示词的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】

It was quite a big challenge for me because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public. 这对我来说是一个很大的挑战，因为我对自己的英语口语没有那么自信，在公共场合说话也很害羞。

句子because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public.是由because引导的原因状语从句。

【高分句型二】

The more I practised, the more confident I became. 我练习得越多，就越自信。

这句话用到了“the+比较级，the+比较级”结构。表示“越……，就越……”的意思。

3．（·陕西师大附中中考模拟）书面表达

初中就要毕业了，校报“英语角”栏目向同学们征集毕业晚会的计划。假定你是李明，请根据要点写一封信，说说你的计划。

要求：1.写作要点都必须用上；紧扣主题，适当发挥；

2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；

3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和地名；

4. 词数不少于70词。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）

Dear editor,

I am very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation party.

Li Ming

【答案】Dear editor，

I'm very happy to have the chance to show you my plan for the evening party．It will be held in our school hall at 7 o’clock,on June 22n．I have planned three activities for it．First of a11，we would like to invite our teachers to come．We will give each other gifts and give our best wishes.After that，one of the students will read a thank-you letter to all the people who have helped us．In the end，some pictures will be shown to share the happy times we have had together．

This is what we will do．I hope you will choose my plan．

Yours，

Li Ming

【解析】

【详解】

初中就要毕业了，校报“英语角”栏目向同学们征集毕业晚会的计划。假定你是李明，请根据要点写一封信，说说你的计划。本题是一篇图表作文，信息提示简洁明了，但是必要的补充和想象是必不可少的，切忌照信息翻译句子，必须通过适当的连词保证文章通顺，就本题而言，介绍三项活动时，要有必要的顺序词．

【点睛】

文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少,如：After that，one of the students will read a thank-you letter to all the people who have helped us；In the end，some pictures will be shown to share the happy times we have had together．文章层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

4．（·重庆中考模拟）假如你是李华，你校正举办英语读书节活动,你在参与活动的过程中遇到一些困难。请给你的英国朋友Nick写一封email向他求助。

要求：

1.80—120 词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数;

2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。

参考要点：

1.活动情况简介（时间、内容……）;

2.遇到的困难（如：缺少相关书籍、英语阅读困难……）；

3.请求帮助的事项。

Dear Nick,

How’s everything going?

Yours,

Li Hua 【答案】Dear Nick,

How’s everything going?

Our school is holding an English reading festival this June. I’m very interested in it. There are many different activation in the festival such as reading good English books. sharing good stories and so on. It’s a good chance for us to learn more about western cultures. However, I have some problems. First, I don’t have enough books. For example, I want to get some books about western history. Next, I’m not so good at English, I have trouble in reading. Would you please share some good books with me and give me some advice on reading?

I expect to hear from you soon.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua 【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇书信作文。假如你是李华，你校正举办英语读书节活动,你在参与活动的过程中遇到一些困难。请给你的英国朋友Nick写一封email向他求助。首先要注意书信的书写格式，文章时态主要用一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称。在写作时，要注意理顺要点，防止漏写；注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查字数是否符合要求。

参考要点：

1.活动情况简介（时间、内容……）;

2.遇到的困难（如：缺少相关书籍、英语阅读困难……）；

3.请求帮助的事项。

5．（·长沙市开福区青竹湖湘一外国语学校中考模拟）书面表达

健康的生活习惯是非常重要的。你认为健康的生活习惯应该是怎样的呢？请根据以下的信

息提示，写一篇短文。

内容：1、健康饮食；

2、早睡早起，不熬夜；

3、参加运动，强身健体。

要求：

1、必须包括所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

2、80词左右；

3、文中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名。

_______________________________________________________________________________ __

_________________________________________________________________

【答案】Healthy habit

I think healthy habits are important for us. As we all know, healthy life habits will bring us good health. How can we develop healthy habit?

First of all, we must keep a balanced diet. Eating too much or too little, or choosing wrong food may cause many illness. Moreover, we should take exercise every day. We can walk to school instead of taking a bus. Doing sports for an hour every day is also a way to keep us strong. Last but not least, we’d be tter go to bed early and get up early. The body needs enough sleep to work well. Children at our age should have at least eight hours’ sleep every night.

As long as we have good healthy habits, it will be easy for us to keep healthy and enjoy the health.【解析】

【详解】

本文属于话题作文，阐述你认为健康的生活习惯是什么样的。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如as we know, develop healthy habit, keep a balanced diet, instead of, had better do, at least, as long as, it is adj for sb to do, first of all, moreover以及last but not least。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

【点睛】

写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：

认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意

使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

6．（·河南中考模拟）亲爱的同学，三年的初中学习生活马上就要结束了，请你以“My English Study”为题，请你谈一谈，这三年以来，你学习英语的心得体会。

要求：

1.你在英语学习中所遇到的困难、解决的方法以及学习感悟。

2.词数80左右。

3.行文连贯通顺。条理清晰，表达准确。

4.文中不允许出现真实校名和人名。否则，试卷按零分处理。

【答案】My English Study

How time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.

When I entered the middle school, I had so many difficulties with my English. I was not able to understand the teacher in class, and I couldn’t master the words and phrases. For a time I wanted to give it up. Later, with the help of the teacher and my classmates, I listened to the teacher carefully in class, kept on reading English every day and spoke as much as possible. Step by step I made great progress in English.

In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well.

【解析】

【详解】

短文第一句Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.开门见山回忆学习英语的记忆。接下来叙述自己遇到的各种学习英语的困难：听不懂老师的英语，记忆词汇短语有困难等等。分别列出，行文流畅。用短语give up放弃，表示困难太大，难倒了自己。后来在老师的帮助下，克服了困难。逐步地Step by step，不断取得进步。

最后一句In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well.对学习英语兴趣的重要进行总结，结束全文。

7．（·黑龙江中考模拟）（A）话题作文：现在视力不好的人越来越多，有的孩子很小的时候就戴上了眼镜。从小保护好眼睛很重要。六月六日是“全国爱眼日”。请你结合实际生活写一篇题目为“It’s important to protect our eyes”的英文稿。

内容：（1）眼睛的重要性；

（2）保护眼睛的措施：①不要长时间读书看报；

②不要在太强或太弱的光线下看书；

③坚持做眼保健操。

【答案】It’s important to protect our eyes

The eyes are the window of our mind. We use our eyes to see everything around us. Without eyes, nothing is left beside you but darkness.

How to protect our eyes? It’s not right to keep your eyes working for a long time. You’d better not read in strong or poor light. Don’t read in bed or on a moving bus. Remember to keep your books away from your eyes for about a foot and do eye exercises every day. What’s more, a balanced diet is necessary.

Follow my advice and form a good h abit. It’s time to say goodbye to thick glasses.

【解析】

【详解】

本文属于话题作文，阐述眼睛的重要性以及如何保护眼睛。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如the window of our mind, had better do, remember to do, keep away fr om, what’s more, follow one’s advice, it’s time to do以及it is adj to do。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。【点睛】

写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：

认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

8．（·甘肃中考模拟）发明创造改变了世界。作为一名中学生．假如你梦想当一名发明家，应该怎样做才能实现梦想呢?请根据下面的漫画提示，以“How to Become an Inventor”为题，写一篇短文。

要求：1. 80词左右，可适当发挥。（文章标题和开头已给出不计人总词数）

2．文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称等相关信息。

How to Become an Inventor?

【答案】How to Become an Inventor?

With the development of science and technology, inventions have played an important role in the society and even changed our world. As a student in middle school, I want to be an inventor like Edison. But how can I let my dream come true? In my opinion,First,studying hard is the basic method.It is clear that only when we study hard to acquire the knowledge about the science and technology can we fulfill the need of innovation.Second,interesting is the best teacher.Hardly can we imagine a child without passion of exploring will get progress in innovation Third,we need the spirit of creativity which provides us different thoughts to solve the problem.What's more important,Never give up.Keep our belief.That's the key to success for all scientists,such as Madame Curie and Darwin.

What I have list above is my answer to how to become an inventor,and that is what I'll persist doing in the future with my whole passion.

【解析】

【分析】

这是一篇话题作文，以“How to Become an Inventor”为题，写一篇短文。

【详解】

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I want to be……，studying hard is……，we need……，That's……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

【点睛】

本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我想要成为一个发明家；接下来介绍为了成为一个发明家，应该如何做；最后指出为了成为一个发明家，我要坚持做下去。此处play an

important role in, come true, give up, such as等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

9．（·江苏中考模拟）世界卫生组织的一项研究报告显示，我国青少年近视率居世界第一。年全国两会当中“小眼镜”成关注重点，防控青少年近视迫在眉睫。以下表格是学校针对本校学生近视问题做的调查表，假如你是校报编辑Jack，请根据所提供的信息，用英语写一篇调查报告，陈述学校调查结果，并表明你自己的观点和理由。

参考词汇：近视 nearsighted

注意： 1. 内容须包括所提示的信息，可适当发挥；

2. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称；

3. 词数：80-100，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

According to a survey carried out by WHO, the number of teenagers who are nearsighted is the largest in

China.__________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______

【答案】According to a survey carried out by WHO, the number of teenagers who are nearsighted is the largest in China. As we all know that the eyes are very important for us. So it is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. But do you know how to protect your eyesight？First, don't keep your eyes work for a long time. Don't spend too much time on mobile phones, TV and computers. Secondly, pay attention to the following: Don't read in the sun; don't read in bed or in a moving bus. And when you read you should keep the book away from your eyes for about a foot. And thirdly, do eye-exercises every day. You should eat more carrots and other eye-friendly foods. It will also help you keep good eyesight. I think, you may prevent your eyesight

from becoming nearsighted.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇材料作文，根据表格中的相关信息介绍一下如何保护视力。所提供的表格中列举了近视的原因和建议。主要从原因和建议两个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时。注意作文中必须包含表格上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中要注意使用祈使句，使上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】

So it is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. 所以保持良好的视力对每个人都很重要。

本题运用句型：It is +形容词+for sb. to so sth.

【高分句型二】

And when you read you should keep the book away from your eyes for about a foot. 当你读这本书的时候，你应该把它从你的眼睛里移开一英尺。

when you read是由when引导的时间状语从句。

10．（·甘肃中考模拟）今天手机在我们日常生活中已广泛使用。但中学生在学校是否应该持有手机，一些学生和老师有不同的观点。你们学校的校刊英文版正在就此举行征文活动，请根据下列表格提示的内容，用英语写一篇征文。

要求：

1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；`

2. 必须包含表格所给的提示信息，并作适当发挥；

3. 词数：80-100词左右（征文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）。

Mobile phones have been used widely in our daily life

today.__________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________

【答案】Mobile phones have been used widely in our daily life today. With the development of economy, mobile phones are more and more widely used in our daily life. However, some parents and teachers have different ideas about whether the students should use mobile phones at school.

Some students are for it. They think that it is convenient to contact with parents. Mobile phones will make them more interested in learning so that they can learn more quickly and easily. Some teachers are against it．They think that some students can't control themselves and often play games. What's worse, some students cheat in exams by using mobile phones. Besides, using mobile phones too much does great harm to students' eyes.

In my opinion, I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way. Firstly，students can learn more knowledge using mobile phones. At the same time, parents and teachers should do something to help students. Only in this way can mobile phones be of help to their studies.

【解析】

【详解】

本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏。需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系，上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。如but, so, then等。可以适当使用高分句型。

【点睛】

高分句型：I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way．我认为正确的方式使用手机对学生是有帮助的。

I think+宾语从句。

It is+形容词 for sb to do sth做某事对某人来说是…的。

11．（·天津中考模拟）近日中央电视台报道了一个十四岁小男孩何思汗的事迹，介绍了他卖画筹款医治姑姑的感人故事。请你根据以下内容提示，写一篇短文。

（1）何思汗从小和姑姑生活在一起，他自幼对绘画有很大兴趣。

（2）年姑姑患上重病，何思汗的家境日渐贫寒。

（3）他作画筹款给姑姑治病。

（4）思汗勇于面对困难、主动承担家务且刻苦学习。

（5）你的想法……

参考词汇：严重的serious 疾病disease

要求：

（1）词数：80?100个。

（2）短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。

（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

The Moving Story of He Sihan

Recently, the moving story of He Sihan has been reported on CCTV. The 14-year-old boy is a student in Grade 9. He________________

【答案】Recently, the moving story of He Sihan has been reported on CCTV. The 14-year-old boy is a student in Grade 9. He has lived with his aunt since he was only one year old. When he was a little boy, he showed great interest in painting. At that time, they led a happy life. Unfortunately, his aunt got a serious disease in . Their family became poorer and poorer after that. So he decided to do something for his aunt. By selling the pictures he painted, he raised money for his aunt to treat her disease. You can’t imagine what difficulties he faces, he never gives up. In addition, he of fers to do all the housework. What’s more, though he is busy, he studies hard and gets good grades.

I feel proud of him. Because he never gives up and tries his best to pay back his aunt, no matter how hard the life is.

【解析】

【详解】

本文属于材料作文，介绍何思汗的感人事迹。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如show great interest in, at that time, unfortunately, 比较级and比较级, raise money, give up, in addition, offer to do, what’s more, get good grades, feel proud of, pay back以及try one’s best等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

【点睛】

写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：

认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

12．（·江苏中考模拟）假设你是Beth,前段时间曾向英语校刊投送一篇题为My English Teacher Miss Zhang的短诗。近日，又至毕业季，师生们忙着互致临别赠言。为此，编辑部策划开“A Letter to My Teacher”专栏，邀请你以信件的形式重新投稿。短诗如下：

My English Teacher Miss Zhang

There is a teacher, Miss Zhang,

Who is friendly, patient and helpful.

Always encouraging us to try,

She leads us to a world of "why".

We all respect and admire her.

注意事项：

1.稿件内容须根据短诗展开合理想象，不得抄写短诗原文：

2.要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合情境。

3.词数在70个左右，稿件的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数：

4.稿件必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________

【答案】Dear Editorial Office,

I am writing to recommend as The Most Popular Teacher．She is Miss Zhang.

She is my English teacher． She is in her forties． Her small round glasses make her look smart． She often works to high standards and is willing to work extra hours． She is kind and helpful， too． She always helps us with our study． She loves jogging， so she looks healthy． To my surprise， she has donated blood many times since 2001． She has also decided to donate her body for medical research after her death． I really love her and I want to be a teacher like her in the future． I think Miss Zhang is the most suitable person to be the Most Popular Teacher．

I hope that you agree with me．

Yours sincerely，

Beth,【解析】

【详解】

本文是一篇给材料作文。根据编辑部策划开“A Letter to My Teacher”专栏，邀请你以信件的形式重新投稿。文章时态用一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称。本文所给材料比较详细，考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量

使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

【点睛】

点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

13．（·海南海口实验中学中考模拟）书面表达

安全对于每个人都很重要。中学生年龄较小，学生安全更是人们关注的焦点。请根据以下提示，写一篇关于学生安全的英语作文。

内容提示：

1.交通安全：遵守交通规则，不闯红绿灯等；

2.食品安全：吃健康食物，不吃垃圾食品等；

3.活动安全：进行体育锻炼时，不要弄伤自己，不私自下河游泳等。

提示词语：

study hard, read, healthy food, exercise, help, chores, at home,

Travel Safety is very important to everyone.

_______________________________________________________________

【答案】Safety is very important to everyone. Middle school students are like precious flowers –so their safety is becoming a focus for us all.

First, we must obey the traffic rules when we go out. Don’t cross the street when the light is red. Secondly, we should eat healthy food. Don’t eat junk food. Eat more fruits and vegetables. Eat less meat and eggs. Finally, be careful not to hurt yourself while you are playing outside. It’s dangerous to go s wimming by yourself, so don’t go swimming without permission. These are some important safety tips to remember.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要使用一般现在时，主语是第一人称。写作时注意人称、时态的搭配及主谓一致问题。同时适当使用连接词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【点睛】

这篇短文涵盖了题目要求的所有要点内容，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上很好地使用了简单句和复合句，文章脉络清晰，自然流畅。同时，文章还使用了一些常用的句式和短语，如：祈使句的使用、we must、we should、in a word、It’s +形容词+ to动词不定式结构以及序数词的使用等，这为文章增色不少。在学习中注意积累，牢记一些常用句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条

理。

14．（·广东中考模拟）书面表达

根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。

生活中常常会发生一些意外的事，但每个人处理事情的方式不同。有些人冷静温和地处理，有些人简单粗暴地对待。当你与人发生冲突时，你会如何处理呢？请你写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的经历与看法。内容包括：

1. 请你简单叙述一次与别人发生冲突的经历；

2. 你认为该如何正确处理日常生活中发生的冲突（至少两点建议）；

3. 呼吁大家友好相处。

作文要求：

1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。

2. 语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

Life is full of the unexpected, ___________________________________________

【答案】Life is full of the unexpected. During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, a schoolmate and I hit into each other, trying to catch the ball. Then we started shouting, and it turned into a terrible quarrel. To be honest, it was neither my fault nor the schoolmate’s, only because we both cared too much about winning and losing. That made me feel shameful.

In our daily lives, we should deal with these quarrels properly. Firstly, try to be friendly to each other. Secondly, we should communicate more an d put ourselves in other’s place. Don’t be a selfish person and try to deal with everything calmly and wisely.

It’s very important to get on well with each other. Let’s build a friendly, peaceful and safe society together and make our life better and better.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如full of，during the basketball game，each other，try to do，turn into，to be honest，neither…nor，care about，too much，deal with等。而固定句型It’s very important to get on well with each other.和Don’t be a selfish person and try to deal with everything calmly and wisely.的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】

书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要

尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

15．（·天津中考模拟）书面表达

86.目前有不少历史剧在电视上热播.有人通过看历史剧来了解历史，有人选择读史书来了解历史，你选择哪种方法？理由是什么？请你根据以下内容写一篇英语短文。

要求：

（1）词数：80～100个。

（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。

（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

Many historical plays have been on TV

recently.________________________________________________

【答案】Many historical plays have been on TV recently. Some people like watching historical TV plays to know about history. They think they are interesting and easy 10 understand. Both the old and the young will have a lot of fun watching them.

Some other people think another way to learn about history is to read books on history. They believe books can tell them the true stories. They can learn and think a lot from them while reading.

I like watching historical TV plays because they make me relaxed and save me much time.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇图表，要求介绍人们通过什么方式来了解历史。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

16．（·北京中考模拟）题目①

假如你是李华，你们学校的英国友好校下周将要来访。学校国际部正在招募接待英国学生的志愿者，陪伴他们度过周末。你想成为志愿者。请用英语写一封申请信，在信中说明你申请的理由，以及你打算拿给英国学生安排哪些周末活动。

提示词语：get along with, friendly, places of interest, Chinese dishes

提示问题：1. Why would you like to be a volunteer?

2. What do you plan to do during the weekend?

Dear Sir/Madam，

I would like to be a volunteer to receive the British students.

I'm looking forward to your early reply.

Yours，Li Hiua

【答案】Dear SiraMadam.

I would like to be a volunteer to receive the British students I like making friends andI am outgoing，so it's easy for me to get along well with them.

I have some plans for the weekends.First of all，there are a lot of places of interest in Beijing，so I plan to take them to some places like the Great Wall，the Forbidden City and so on.

I'll also cook some Chinese dishes for them.I am sure they will have a great and unforgettable time in Beijing.

I'm looking forward to your early reply.

Yours，Li lHua

【解析】

【分析】

本篇是材料作文，以书信格式，根据所给材料写申请信；书写时材料要用全，注意紧扣主题，结构严谨。

【详解】

1.本篇是书信格式，以第一人称向学校国际部申请当志愿者；根据材料提示，介绍自己的

情况用一般现在时，计划如何安排周末活动用一般将来时。

2.本例文层次分明，第一层阐述自己申请的理由，介绍自己开朗的性格适合志愿者的工

作；

第二层详细介绍给英国学生安排哪些周末活动；最后表明自己的期待。文体正确，文句通顺，内容完整。

3.本例文恰当地使用了很多的短语和句型，是文章文句精彩。如：用不定式would like to be

a volunteer to receive the British students阐述自己的愿望，make friends、It's easy for me to get along well with等介绍自己合适志愿者的工作；用动词短语have some plans for、介词短语like the Great Wall，the Forbidden City and so on.、宾语从句I am sure they will have a great and unforgettable time in Beijing.详细介绍周末的活动，短语丰富，句型多样。

17．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达

以下是你校校刊YOUTH中YOUR VOICE栏目的征稿内容，请根据提示，用英语写一篇短文，表达你的想法。

Hi,

I’m David, t he editor of YOUTH. We all know the exchange students are going back to the US soon. We would like to give them some traditional Chinese things as gifts, such as Chinese paintings, silk, tea …Today I would like to collect some ideas. In your article, you s hould:

? recommend two traditional Chinese things

? show your reasons why you recommend them

Looking forward to hearing from you.

David

注意事项：

1. 对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥。

2. 要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合情境；

3. 词数在90个左右，感谢信的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；

4. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am glad to share my opinion with you.____________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,

I am glad to share my opinion with you. I would like to recommend Chinese paintings as a gift because Chinese paintin gs have a long history. What’s more, they are quite different from the ones in the US. Foreign friends can learn more about Chinese art from them.

The second gift I want to recommend is silk scarves. Silk is a symbol of our great culture and popular among Chinese people. It feels very soft and comfortable. Why not buy them some silk scarves?

I believe the exchange students will like the two gifts and always remember the moments with us.【解析】

【详解】

本文主要是向别人分享想法，推荐礼物。第一句话点题，随后引出文章的两个主题，一· recommend two traditional Chinese things。例如：I would like to recommend Chinese paintings as a gift because Chinese paintings have a long history. 以及The second gift I want to recommend is silk scarves.二· show your reasons why you recommend them。理由一：because Chinese paintings have a long history. What’s more, they are quite different from the ones in the US. 理由二：Silk is a symbol of our great culture and popular among Chinese people. It feels very soft and comfortable.最后用I believe the exchange students will like the two gifts and always remember the moments with us总结全篇。文章干净利落，层次分明。

18．（·江苏中考模拟）加入你是英国交流学生 Neil，你在南京 Sunshine Middle School 两个月的学习生活即将结束。请你根据以下提示，以 Neil的名义，用英语给 Sunshine Middle School 校长写一封感谢信。

? what you've learned about Chinese culture

? how the teachers and students help you

? what your homestay family do for you

注意：

1. 对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥。

2. 词数 80 左右，感谢信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。

Dear Sir/Madam,

I would like to express my thanks to you. During my two-month stay in Nanjing, I feel really grateful for what you have done for us.

【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,

I would like to express my thanks to you. During my two-month stay in Nanjing. I enjoyed myself

very much.

I took the rich and colourful courses. I have learned Chinse Kungfu from a P.E. teacher.It is really

amazing! I also know something about Chinese paper-cutting in Art lessons.Though I can’t speak

Chinese.I have little difficult talking with the teachers and students here,theyare always ready to

help me.

I felt excited when I spent a weekend with a family. In their family,they taught me how to make

dumplings.We also visited Confucins Temple.We had a good time together. I feel really grateful for

what you have done for us.

【解析】

【详解】

本文是一篇书信作文。根据以下提示，以 Neil的名义，用英语给 Sunshine Middle School 校

长写一封感谢信。文章时态用一般过去时，人称主要为第一人称。本文所给材料比较详

细，考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗

漏要点，并可适当发挥。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，

中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；

尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单

词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，

确保正确无误。

【点睛】

点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每

个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、

段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文

章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检

查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

19．（·辽宁中考模拟）（B）按要求完成大作文（80词左右）

节约资源，保护环境，从我们身边的小事做起。假设你是一个注重“低碳”生活的中学生，

请以“My Green Life”为题写一篇短文，简单谈谈“绿色生活”的重要性，以及你所倡导的“绿

色生活”方式。

写作要求：词数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数，不得透露姓名等个人信息。

【答案】My Green Life

As the environment goes worse and worse, I think living a green life is really important for every

初三英语下学期书面表达英语作文汇编单元 期末复习提高题检测

初三英语下学期书面表达英语作文汇编单元期末复习提高题检测