Unit 12 Life is full of the unexpected.
李仕才
单元主题写作十二
本单元主要谈论过去的事情或经历,要求同学们能够正确使用一般过去时和过去完成时叙述自己的亲身经历,表达自己的感受并发表观点。
本单元常见的作文话题是看图作文,叙述过去的一件事情等。
下面我们就结合实例加以分析。
典型例题
假如你是图片中的人物,请根据图画内容及所给提示,写一篇日记。词数: 80左右。
思路点拨
(一)审题目
要求同学们根据图画内容及所给提示写一篇日记,叙述早晨发生的不开心的事情。
1.写作时,采用第一人称,时态以一般过去时和过去完成时为主。
2.需要注意的是,在写作过程中,必须包含图片中的所有内容,可适当发挥。
(二)列提纲
根据汉语提示完成下面的短文。
June 7th, WednesdaySunny
I got up late this morning because my alarm clock didn't go off.
1.________________(当我醒来的时候), it was already 7:10. So I washed my face quickly and ran to the bus stop without breakfast.
2.________________ (当我到那里时), the school bus had already gone. I missed it.
3.________________ (因此我不得不步行去上学). Finally, when I got to school, it was already 9:10. I was late for class. When the teacher asked for my homework, I found that
4.________________(我把它忘家里了).
5.________________ (多么糟糕的一天) it was!
你经历过糟糕的一天吗?那天发生了什么事情?你是如何度过那一天的呢?请以“My Bad Day”为题,根据内容提示,用英语写一篇短文,向某英语杂志的“Your Voices”专栏投稿。
内容要求:早晨起床迟了,到校才发现忘拿书包了,而且在回家途中经历一次危险。
要求:
1.内容一定要翔实、丰富、流畅、完整。
2.词数:100左右。文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
My Bad Day
We often meet with bad days.
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参考答案
单元主题写作十二
[写作指导]
基础写作
1.When I woke up
2.By the time I got there
3.So I had to walk to school
4.I had left it at home
5.What a bad day
[写作实战]
One possible version:
My Bad Day
We often meet with bad days. I had a bad day on September 1st. It was the first day of this term. When I woke up in the morning, it was nearly 7 o'clock. I had a quick wash and rushed to school without eating breakfast.
When I reached school, I realized I had left my backpack at home. Then I went back home to get it. On the way home I ran as quickly as I could. Suddenly I was knocked down by a bike and my knees were badly hurt. I was sent to hospital. I didn't have any classes that day.
What a bad day I had!