考研英语写作部分评分标准详解与样卷参考
全国硕士研究生考试英语作文评分标准与样卷参考
硕士研究生入学的最后一题是短文写作，根据国家教委公布的《全国硕士研究生入学考试英语》的规定，考生应能写不同类型的应用文，包括私人和公务信函、备忘录、摘要、报告等，还应能写一般描述性、叙述性、说明或议论性的文章。短文写作时，考生应能：
1）做到语法、拼写、标点正确，用词恰当；
2）遵循文章的特定文体格式；
3）合理组织文章结构，使其内容统一、连贯；
4）根据写作目的和特定读者，恰当选用语言。
英语短文写作要求考生在40分钟内完成不少于200词的英语短文，短文必须根据考试题目和提纲所规定的范围来写。近年来作文的分数由15分提到了20分，更加突显了写作能力的重要性。
作为阅卷老师，评定短文写作的成绩，首先看内容是否切题，是否符合题意的要求，然后看语言表达是否清楚、连贯、正确，语言基本功是否扎实，根据内容、文字、句子和用词，采用通篇分档计分，计分标准如下：
20－17分：内容切题，包括提纲的全部要点；表达清楚，文字连贯；句式有变化，句子结构和用词正确。文章长度符合要求。
16－13分：内容切题，包括提纲的全部要点；表达比较清楚，文字基本连贯；句式有一定变化，句子结构和用词无重大错误。文章长度符合要求。
12－10分：内容切题，基本包括提纲的要点；表达基本清楚；句子结构和用词有少量错误。文章长度符合要求。
9－5分：内容基本切题，基本包括提纲的要点；语句可以理解，但有较多的句子结构和用词错误。文章长度基本符合要求。
4－1分：基本按题写作，但只有少数句子可以理解。
0分：文不切题，语句混乱，无法理解。
此外，作文的字数也有规定，要求不少于200字，长度的具体计分标准分析：
151－160词：扣1分
141－150词：扣2.5分
131－140词：扣4分
121－130词：扣6分
111－120词：扣8分
101－110词：扣10分
100词以下：扣12分
最后，向大家通报一下“差作文”的种种“劣迹表现”，请大家注意。
1）不通顺，无段落，无结构，无明显主题；
2）笑料多，出现很多基本语法错误，拼写错误；
3）不达意，词汇量很小，词不达意，缺乏英语表达能力；
4）乱堆砌，不像一篇文章，仅是把一些不连贯的词语拼凑到一起。
附：参考样文
大作文
第五档范文19分
As illustrated in the cartoon, each person sits in their own work room. In front of them is a computer. Everyone looks at the screen carefully, and communicate with their colleagues through the net instead of talking face to face. Their work places are placed like a net. And below the cartoon, there is a topic which says: the near and far among the Internet.
From the cartoon, we can conclude that the cartoonist wants to convey such a message: with the popularity of computers, people from all over the world become nearer by using the internet to communicate with each other. Meanwhile, people also become far away from their friends. All of us accept the fact that the development of the internet brings lots of conveniences to our daily life, for instance, we can buy a book on the net instead of going to a bookstore.Besides, we can communicate with our friends on the net without going out of home. But we can't ignore the other side of these: the time we spend with friends or family becomes less. And we hardly see them once in a week. It will make us feel lonely if we continue to use the tool on the net to talk with friends instead of talking with them on the phone or going out with them.
To my best understanding, we should use the net to communicate with each other in a proper way. It is just a tool when we really need it to serve us. If we want to keep our friendship more effectively, we should spend more time with them in our real life. Only in this way can we not only make full use of the communication tool on the net but also make our friendship stronger.
评语：该文很好地完成了试题规定的任务，内容完整，既清楚描述了漫画内容又指出了
其隐含的意思。语言流畅，措辞准确，句型结构有变化，有效使用了连接手段，内容连贯，层次分明，文章易于理解，仅有个别语言错误，字数符合要求。
第四档范文15分
As is vividly depicted in the drawing above, we can see clearly that some people are very near by the computer while some people are much long with each other in the net world.
What is conveyed in the picture is most thought-provoking and worth discussing among people, especially the young people. It is a mirror, reflecting the relationships between the people are altering by the Internet. People's opinions differ greatly on this matter. Some people believe that the Internet is very convenient for people who are living in a longer distance to keep connection with each other. Others argue that the Internet make the people living in near areas meet very little. Still others hold that people's facing to face to communicate is reducing to a low level.
It struck me that if nothing is done to solve the social phenomenon, its effect will be soon shown, which inevitably affects the development of the harmonious society. So we should regard the trend rightly. We also should take it into our accounts strictly. We should use the Net more reasonably. On no account should we make the people longer by the computer. Only in this way can we have a good generation foreseen. And a more harmonious society can be built up.
评语：文章较好地完成了试题规定的任务，内容比较完整，既描述了漫画又揭示了隐含的意思，使用了比较丰富的句型结构和词语，使用了一定的连接手段，语言基本通顺，文章结构完整，层次清晰，易于理解，但是有一定数量的语言错误。
第三档范文11分
As the picture vividly depict that internet like a net connect different people in the world. You can communicate with your friends. No matter where they live in, the distance no longer an obstacle in our communication.
The picture reflect a thought-provoking social phenomenon that people in a mounting numbers use internet shopping, work, study and chatting with friends in order to meet each other face and face. There are somewhat reasonable, but you weighing in mind, you can find that distance between our spirit longer than before. On the Internet we can not know each other very well, because some people don't use their real name, even tell lies on internet. On the conterary, if we meet each other face and face, it's better for communication.
Internet make the obstacle of distance vanished, benefit us a lot, we can chating with our friends who live in a city that far from us. However, we should take that serious internet make the distance of our spirit longer than before, internet is a double-edge sword.
评语：该文包含多数内容要点；语法结构与词汇基本能够满足任务要求；有一些严重语法与用词错误，但不影响理解；内容较连贯，层次较清晰。但是第三部分主要是对第二部分的总结，评论简单。
第二档范文7分
As can be seen from the picture, many people are sitting in the front of a computers, who are basing in typing on the keyboard, but they don't immediate communicate with each other though they live near. It looks like a bit pot, everyone has its space, and the computer is
necessary for them.
It goes without saying that this picture aims at reavling a common phenomenon in our daily life, that is internet brings conviences to us, also brings the distance for each other. Nowadays, we must believe that our development can not leave the using of internet. We do any things through the computer instead of saying "hello" to our families or colleagues face to face.
In my opinion, we must realize the importance of the internet and also pay more attentions to communicate with each other face to face. Do not make the computer make a distant between us.
评语：该文遗漏题目要点，评论不够恰当，语言错误多，有些句子内容表达不清晰，字数不够。
第一档范文3分
Largely through the influence of many people from different points of the world. The old, the young and the student, they use the computers to constant with another body.
Some people use computer to leare new knowledge, such as the students. Some people use the computer to help them to complete their work. Such as the tank workers. While some people use the computer to play games. For example, some old person like to play game on computer.
Many people on computer is on Monday to Friday. But the player people is everyday more or less. So the world is like a family. Since the computer with us is to enable our to share in a common life we cannot help considering whether or not we are forming the powers of the life’s happy.
评语：该文明显遗漏主要内容，不能反映需要表达的观点；语法与用词错误很多，妨碍理解，作者的语言运用能力差；字数不够。
小作文
五档，9分
Dear editor,
I'm a sincere reader of your newspaper and I like your discussion of the social problems. Now I want to give some opinions of myself about the "White Pollution"
As we know, regulation was made to solve the problem in June 1st of 2008. The use of plastic bags was restricted in the supermarket and many other shops freely. At the beginning, it was carried on well, but now I found plastic bags were used in some small shops for free or with no pay.
I am writing to tell you that we should solve this problem soon with the help of your newspaper. You could make some investigators about it and write some reports of it, so as to appeal to all the people’s attentions of our society.
Sin cerely,
Li Ming
本文很好地完成了试题规定的任务，与目标读者完全产生了预期的效果：
1．内容包含了所有的内容要点，该文第一段的内容更吻合题目的要求。
2．所使用的语法结构和词汇比较丰富。
3．语言比较自然流畅，尽管存在个别的语法（例如，时态）和用词错误。
4．有效使用了各种衔接手段，层次清晰，组织也比较严密。
5．格式与语域恰当贴切。
四档，7-8分
Dear Editor Wang,
I am a senior student living in Beijing. Being a citizen in our capital, I care a lot about our environment. But, although the law of not using plastic bags had been enforced since June, the effect is not very good. I am afraid 'White Pollution" will still exist for a long time.
I believe there are ways to improve the situation. Our communities could offer bags free, which will substitute plastic bags. Meanwhile, some education on environment and White pollution should be held to local people. Besides the above two, much more can be done. I hope you would consider it carefully.
Yours truly
Li Ming
较好地完成了试题规定的任务，基本能够对目标读者产生预期的效果：
1. 包含了所有的内容要点，既简要介绍了自己的观点，又提出了具体的建议。
2. 所使用的句子结构和词汇相对比较丰富，例如：Being a citizen in……, I care……等。
3. 语言基本正确，当然也存在着一些语法错误和用词的错误，但是并不会严重影响意义的表达。
4. 采用了适当的衔接手段，例如, but, meanwhile, besides等，层次也比较清晰。
5. 格式和语域比较恰当。
三档，5-6分
To whom it may concern:
As a student of a university, I want to take this opportunity to express some points about "White Pollution".
There is no denying that plastic is destroy our environment is we use it excessively. So the government take some means to deal with it. Restrict to use the plastic bags in whole country. But it didn't get successful as we predict. The "White Pollution" is still around our environment in some regions.
Takes measures is needed. I want to take some recommends. First and formost, more strength restriction is needed by pollution education. Second, media should spread more information concern. Only in this way can we curb the statement. I'm looking forward your reply.
Sincerely yours
Liming
基本完成了试题规定的任务，对目标读者基本产生了预期的效果：
1. 内容包含试题所要求的两个要点，没有跑题。
2. 具有较多的用词与语法错误，但是读者仍然能够大致领会作者想要表达的意思。
3. 采用了一些简单的衔接手段，内容还算连贯，层次也算清楚。
4. 格式和语域基本合理。
二档，3-4分
I am very sorry to trouble with you. But this is a problem annoying with me. It is White Pollution. With the economic growth widely, white pollution become more and more serious. It is harmonious between the men and nature. White pollution destroy some special. More and more similar issue can be read today in newspaper as well as in magazine.
The problem can be solved in some ways. First, attitude is everything. We must make people aware of this issue. Second, we must change with ourself. It's essential that we address our problem before looking to others change. Finally, the acts of pollution must be punishment.
I'm looking forward to your reply!
Yours sincerely
Li Ming
未能按照要求完成试题规定的任务，不能清楚地将信息传达给读者。
1．第一段落的内容离题太远，未能很好地表达题目的第一个内容要点。
2．语法和用词错误太多，表明作者缺乏基本的英语语法知识或者使用语法知识的能力。
3．虽然也使用了一些衔接手段，但是内容上缺乏连贯性。
4．格式和语域不恰当。例如，此信没有抬头。
一档，1-2分
Dear the editor
I'm pleasure to write the letter to you. With the development of the socity, white pollution is more and more bad. Our sky is not blue, our earth is not clean and our river is not fish.
To solve this question, I have some suggestions. First, every one drive their car less a day in a week than before. Second, when we are shopping, we use environment plastic bags. Third, our government do some rules. Do you thing my opinion? Look forward your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Li Ming
未完成试题规定的任务，不能把信息传递给读者：
1．文章内容基本离题，有许多不相关的内容。
2．作者基本不具备英语的语法常识，句子结构简单且不完整。
3．用词错误太多，词不达意。
零档0 分
dear editor:
I am a student of Tianjing University. Recently years our country
所传达的信息或者所用的语言太少，内容与要求也无关系，无法评价
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20. Action enables us to transform our aspirations froma state of latent potentiality into one of manifest reality. 行动能让我们潜在的愿望变成现实; 凯程教育张老师整理了几个节约时间的准则：一是要早做决定，趁早备考;二是要有计划，按计划前进;三是要跟时间赛跑，争分夺秒。总之，考研是一场“时间战”，谁懂得抓紧时间，利用好时间，谁就是最后的胜利者。 1.制定详细周密的学习计划。 这里所说的计划，不仅仅包括总的复习计划，还应该包括月计划、周计划，甚至是日计划。努力做到这一点是十分困难的，但却是非常必要的。我们要把学习计划精确到每一天，这样才能利用好每一天的时间。当然，总复习计划是从备考的第一天就应该指定的;月计划可以在每一轮复习开始之前，制定未来三个月的学习计划。以此类推，具体到周计划就是要在每个月的月初安排一月四周的学习进程。那么，具体到每一天，可以在每周的星期一安排好周一到周五的学习内容，或者是在每一天晚上做好第二天的学习计划。并且，要在每一天睡觉之前检查一下是否完成当日的学习任务，时时刻刻督促自己按时完成计划。 方法一：规划进度。分别制定总计划、月计划、周计划、日计划学习时间表，并把它们贴在最显眼的地方，时刻提醒自己按计划进行。 方法二：互相监督。和身边的同学一起安排计划复习，互相监督，共同进步。 方法三：定期考核。定期对自己复习情况进行考察，灵活运用笔试、背诵等多种形式。 2.分配好各门课程的复习时间。 一天的时间是有限的，同学们应该按照一定的规律安排每天的学习，使时间得到最佳利用。一般来说上午的头脑清醒、状态良好，有利于背诵记忆。除去午休时间，下午的时间相对会少一些，并且下午人的精神状态会相对低落。晚上相对安静的外部环境和较好的大脑记忆状态，将更有利于知识的理解和记忆。据科学证明，晚上特别是九点左右是一个人记忆力最好的时刻，演员们往往利用这段时间来记忆台词。因此，只要掌握了一天当中每个时段的自然规律，再结合个人的生活学习习惯分配好时间，就能让每一分每一秒都得到最佳利用。 方法一：按习惯分配。根据个人生活学习习惯，把专业课和公共课分别安排在一天的不同时段。比如：把英语复习安排在上午，练习听力、培养语感，做英语试题;把政治安排在下午，政治的掌握相对来说利用的时间较少;把专业课安排在晚上，利用最佳时间来理解和记忆。 方法二：按学习进度分配。考生可以根据个人成绩安排学习，把复习时间向比较欠缺的科目上倾斜，有计划地重点复习某一课程。 方法三：交叉分配。在各门课程学习之间可以相互穿插别的科目的学习，因为长时间接受一种知识信息，容易使大脑产生疲劳。另外，也可以把一周每一天的同一时段安排不同的学习内容。 凯程教育： 凯程考研成立于2005年，国内首家全日制集训机构考研，一直从事高端全日制辅导，由李海洋教授、张鑫教授、卢营教授、王洋教授、杨武金教授、张释然教授、索玉柱教授、方浩教授等一批高级考研教研队伍组成，为学员全程高质量授课、答疑、测试、督导、报考指导、方法指导、联系导师、复试等全方位的考研服务。 凯程考研的宗旨：让学习成为一种习惯； 凯程考研的价值观口号：凯旋归来，前程万里； 信念：让每个学员都有好最好的归宿； 使命：完善全新的教育模式，做中国最专业的考研辅导机构； 激情：永不言弃，乐观向上；